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Khamosh Muflisi............( Ghayel ) -
19th September 2010, 04:03 PM
Muflisi lafzo me kaha bayaa.N hoti hai Jinko yeh de dikhayee kam aisi nigaah hoti hai Bolti hai koi bhookh kaha apne bare me Kehte tumko hai kamzor badan jo ishare me Paibandh laga kya dekha tumne koi aachal Hai jawani magar nahi aakh me koi kajal Koi dost tumhara bhi aisa hoga Jooni chappal koi joona sa kurta hoga Tumse kehta nahi hoga woh koi dard apna Dekhta hoga magar woh bhi koi sapna Koi chat tumne tapakti hui dekhi hogi Zindagi tumne sisakti hui dekhi hogi Baap koi jo pareshaa.N tumse takraaya hoga Yeh alag baat woh tumse na kuch keh paya hoga Kitni hai behnein nahi jinki hai uth payee doli Kabhi tumne bhi suna hoga lagi hai unki boli Yeh sab sunne na sunane ki batein hai Aur na samajhne na samjhane ki batein hai Jo karo mehsoos to sunaiee de tumko Har aah har dard har bhookh dikhayee de tumko Tum to masroof ho khud me tumhe fursat hi kaha Aur yeh bahana koi humse kuch kehta hai kaha Yeh to achcha hai khamosh hai muflisi jaha me Sun pate nahi warna tum hasi jaha me Sun pate nahi warna tum hasi jaha me
.  Sajid Ghayel Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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20th September 2010, 06:44 PM
bahut acha likha sajid ji aapne.......
Baap koi jo pareshaa.N tumse takraaya hoga Yeh alag baat woh tumse na kuch keh paya hoga Kitni hai behnein nahi jinki hai uth payee doli Kabhi tumne bhi suna hoga lagi hai unki boli ye lines bahut hi umda lgi.... |
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20th September 2010, 08:19 PM
Bhayee ... Font sahi karo
nahi padhi ja rahi 10 hours pc ke samne baitha hun ..... Isliye zara padhne ke liye aasaan font use kiya kare |
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20th September 2010, 09:04 PM
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 Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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20th September 2010, 09:08 PM
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Muflisi lafzo me kaha bayaa.N hoti hai Jinko yeh de dikhayee kam aisi nigaah hoti hai Bolti hai koi bhookh kaha apne bare me Kehte tumko hai kamzor badan jo ishare me Paibandh laga kya dekha tumne koi aachal Hai jawani magar nahi aakh me koi kajal Koi dost tumhara bhi aisa hoga Jooni chappal koi joona sa kurta hoga Tumse kehta nahi hoga woh koi dard apna Dekhta hoga magar woh bhi koi sapna Koi chat tumne tapakti hui dekhi hogi Zindagi tumne sisakti hui dekhi hogi Baap koi jo pareshaa.N tumse takraaya hoga Yeh alag baat woh tumse na kuch keh paya hoga Kitni hai behnein nahi jinki hai uth payee doli Kabhi tumne bhi suna hoga lagi hai unki boli Yeh sab sunne na sunane ki batein hai Aur na samajhne na samjhane ki batein hai Jo karo mehsoos to sunaiee de tumko Har aah har dard har bhookh dikhayee de tumko Tum to masroof ho khud me tumhe fursat hi kaha Aur yeh bahana koi humse kuch kehta hai kaha Yeh to achcha hai khamosh hai muflisi jaha me Sun pate nahi warna tum hasi jaha me Sun pate nahi warna tum hasi jaha me . take care dear. Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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20th September 2010, 09:59 PM
Sach me saajid ji.....mujhe bhi takleef hui padne meiN
....aapki rachna padne meiN lagta hai ke kutchh naya zaroor milega...achhi nazm ko apni siyahi se ukaara hai aapne...bahoot khoob dostharash |
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21st September 2010, 12:23 PM
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sach me jitni tareef ki jaaye kam hai.....!!! bahut hi khubsurati se saare dard byaan kr daale aapne....!!! Aur haan mai bi vikas ji ki trah kehna chaungi font thoda change kiya kare...  kai baar bdi dikkat hoti hai padhne me... meri taraf se dhero daad quboool kijiyega..........!!! Yuhi likhte rahiye.....!!! Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!! Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!! |
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21st September 2010, 03:11 PM
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radhe radhe bahut khoob.............badia likha hai..........likhte rahiye duaon ke saath Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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21st September 2010, 03:20 PM
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sajid bhayee .... ek dam nihsane pe nazm sanvrte sanvrte ... anjaam tak aa gayee .......... aakhir mai woh ho gaya jo hona chahiye well done repss added |
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31st January 2011, 11:05 AM
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Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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31st January 2011, 11:47 PM
originally posted by sajid ghayal
Kitni hai behnein nahi jinki hai uth payee doli Kabhi tumne bhi suna hoga lagi hai unki boli Ghayal ji........kayal huN mein aap ki soch or approach par. bahut khoob. rajinderseep |
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1st February 2011, 02:27 PM
Very Impressive ..... Likhi hai Nazm aapne ... Sajid Bhai ! Very touching ... !
dil se daad hazir hai ... yunhi likhte rahen ... ! khush rahen ... ! duaaon ke saath ....  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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3rd February 2011, 02:05 PM
Bahot khoob kalaam likha gaya hai Sajid bhai, rooh ko taskeen pahuchi hai...
Bolti hai koi bhookh kaha apne bare me Kehte tumko hai kamzor badan jo ishare me Koi chat tumne tapakti hui dekhi hogi Zindagi tumne sisakti hui dekhi hogi daad kubool karen... likhte rahiye. shaad... |
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3rd February 2011, 04:54 PM
Sajid Saaheb...!
Boht Boht KHooob Likha Hai Aap Ne......... Daad Qabool Farmayen....... Khush Rahen Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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11th August 2011, 06:54 AM
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Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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11th August 2011, 07:51 PM
bahot ache sajid bhai..chu gayi aapki yeh nazm aur gehra dard de gayi..maane jaise dard to tha hi mere andar..bas uska ehsaas karaa gayii..
daad hi daad..god bless..khush aur aabaad rahiye.. aapka dost, Pradhyuman gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai? musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai? -------------------------------------------------- |
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