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Rula gaya koi....( Ghayel ) - 31st March 2010, 06:33 PM
Is ghazal ka maqsad sirf mere pyaare dost Naresh Jee ki hausla afzaiee karna tha.....unke ek khoobsurat kalam ki zameen par chend sher kahe the unki thread me aur unhi ki guzarish par unhi shero me thoda izafa karke aapke samne pesh kar raha hu.....makhte me thodi si editing ki hai.......neeche us khoobsurat thread ka link bhi de raha hu.

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=68932


Rote rote hasaa gaya koi
Haste haste rulaa gaya koi

Kaha khud me raha main baki
Shayed mujhme sama gaya koi

Kaise keh du nam qatil ka
Nam jo tera bata gaya koi

Mujhse samjhi gayee bas utni
Mohabbat jitni samjha gaya koi

Uth na paya kabhi woh dobara
Jo nazro me apni giraa gaya koi

Q na matam kare chaman us par
Bin khile phool jo murjha gaya koi

Shukr unka ada kare Ghayel
Kisi bahane jo rula gaya koi


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31st March 2010, 07:20 PM
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Is ghazal ka maqsad sirf mere pyaare dost Naresh Jee ki hausla afzaiee karna tha.....unke ek khoobsurat kalam ki zameen par chend sher kahe the unki thread me aur unhi ki guzarish par unhi shero me thoda izafa karke aapke samne pesh kar raha hu.....makhte me thodi si editing ki hai.......neeche us khoobsurat thread ka link bhi de raha hu.

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=68932


Rote rote hasaa gaya koi
Haste haste rulaa gaya koi

Kaha khud me raha main baki
Shayed mujhme sama gaya koi

Kaise keh du nam qatil ka
Nam jo tera bata gaya koi

Mujhse samjhi gayee bas utni
Mohabbat jitni samjha gaya koi

Uth na paya kabhi woh dobara
Jo nazro me apni giraa gaya koi

Q na matam kare chaman us par
Bin khile phool jo murjha gaya koi

Shukr unka ada kare Ghayel
Kisi bahane jo rula gaya koi



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meri khwaish ko pura karne ka .........sajid bhai.... bahut bahut shukriya.....aur jo khushi is waqt mujhe mehsus ho rahi hai.....usse bayaan karna mushkil hai......

aapki ghazal ke har ashaar ko tahe dil daad hazir hai......qabuul farmaayen...

aur aapki zarra nawazii ka bhi shukriya....

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31st March 2010, 07:37 PM
sajid ji,
bahut khub likha hai apne khas kar ke

Kaha khud me raha main baki
Shayed mujhme sama gaya koi

accha laga pad kar...............aage bhi likhte rahiye.......


ishq dua hai ya jehar bata de koi
mehboob se ek baar mila de koi

apka.

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Kaha khud me raha main baki
Shayed mujhme sama gaya koi


Mujhse samjhi gayee bas utni
Mohabbat jitni samjha gaya koi


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31st March 2010, 08:31 PM
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Is ghazal ka maqsad sirf mere pyaare dost Naresh Jee ki hausla afzaiee karna tha.....unke ek khoobsurat kalam ki zameen par chend sher kahe the unki thread me aur unhi ki guzarish par unhi shero me thoda izafa karke aapke samne pesh kar raha hu.....makhte me thodi si editing ki hai.......neeche us khoobsurat thread ka link bhi de raha hu.

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=68932


Rote rote hasaa gaya koi
Haste haste rulaa gaya koi

Kaha khud me raha main baki
Shayed mujhme sama gaya koi

Kaise keh du nam qatil ka
Nam jo tera bata gaya koi

Mujhse samjhi gayee bas utni
Mohabbat jitni samjha gaya koi

kamaal hai bhai ye to................................................ ..........

Uth na paya kabhi woh dobara
Jo nazro me apni giraa gaya koi

lajawab,laaajawab................................. ...........................

Q na matam kare chaman us par
Bin khile phool jo murjha gaya koi

Shukr unka ada kare Ghayel
Kisi bahane jo rula gaya koi



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bhai kya baat hai yaar maja aa gaya,bahut khoob..........likhte rahen dear.

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Is ghazal ka maqsad sirf mere pyaare dost Naresh Jee ki hausla afzaiee karna tha.....unke ek khoobsurat kalam ki zameen par chend sher kahe the unki thread me aur unhi ki guzarish par unhi shero me thoda izafa karke aapke samne pesh kar raha hu.....makhte me thodi si editing ki hai.......neeche us khoobsurat thread ka link bhi de raha hu.

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=68932


Rote rote hasaa gaya koi
Haste haste rulaa gaya koi

Kaha khud me raha main baki
Shayed mujhme sama gaya koi

Kaise keh du nam qatil ka
Nam jo tera bata gaya koi

Mujhse samjhi gayee bas utni
Mohabbat jitni samjha gaya koi

Uth na paya kabhi woh dobara
Jo nazro me apni giraa gaya koi

Q na matam kare chaman us par
Bin khile phool jo murjha gaya koi

Shukr unka ada kare Ghayel
Kisi bahane jo rula gaya koi


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duaon ke saath

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31st March 2010, 08:50 PM
Good one Ghayel,

saree ghazal achchee banee hai aur yeh bahot hi achchaa rahaa

Kaha khud me raha main baki
Shayed mujhme sama gaya koi

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Is ghazal ka maqsad sirf mere pyaare dost Naresh Jee ki hausla afzaiee karna tha.....unke ek khoobsurat kalam ki zameen par chend sher kahe the unki thread me aur unhi ki guzarish par unhi shero me thoda izafa karke aapke samne pesh kar raha hu.....makhte me thodi si editing ki hai.......neeche us khoobsurat thread ka link bhi de raha hu.

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=68932


Rote rote hasaa gaya koi
Haste haste rulaa gaya koi

Kaha khud me raha main baki
Shayed mujhme sama gaya koi

Kaise keh du nam qatil ka
Nam jo tera bata gaya koi

Mujhse samjhi gayee bas utni
Mohabbat jitni samjha gaya koi

Uth na paya kabhi woh dobara
Jo nazro me apni giraa gaya koi

Q na matam kare chaman us par
Bin khile phool jo murjha gaya koi

Shukr unka ada kare Ghayel
Kisi bahane jo rula gaya koi


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kya kahuN ghayal saheb.....aapne phir se ghayal kar diya....
bahut hi khoobsoorat peshkash....kuchh sheyr to naresh saheb ke thread par padhe the, aaj muqammal ghazal padh kar maza aa gaya....daad hi daad hai janaab....qubuul kijiyega...

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Sajid Bhaai......Aadaab ! mujh khaaksaar ko itni ijazat baqshnaa........aapka badhapan hai......nawazish hai......mujhe khushi hai........zameen koi bhi rahi......aapne jo iss ghazal ko naye maayne diye....alfaazon ko naye libaas pehnaaye ......naye khayal aur adaayegi pesh ki......woh nishchye hi qaabile taarif hai.........aapka likha har lafz....har sheyr umdaa laga mujhe.....very very nice creation.......superB creation....

meri khwaish ko pura karne ka .........sajid bhai.... bahut bahut shukriya.....aur jo khushi is waqt mujhe mehsus ho rahi hai.....usse bayaan karna mushkil hai......

aapki ghazal ke har ashaar ko tahe dil daad hazir hai......qabuul farmaayen...

aur aapki zarra nawazii ka bhi shukriya....

khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....
Bas mere bhai dosto ki khushi me zindagi guzre isse achche aur kya bahana ho sakta hai zindagi jeene ka............jis jazbe aur josh ke sath aap aur members ki hausla afzaiee karte ho SDC par uski shayed hi koi dusri misaal ho............maine hamesha kaha hai aur kahuga ke aap ek bohat bohat pyaare insaan ho aur yeh meri khushnasibi hai ke aap jaisa insaan mujhe apna dost manta hai...

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sajid ji,
bahut khub likha hai apne khas kar ke

Kaha khud me raha main baki
Shayed mujhme sama gaya koi

accha laga pad kar...............aage bhi likhte rahiye.......


ishq dua hai ya jehar bata de koi
mehboob se ek baar mila de koi

apka.
Thanks SA for giving time to my work.......and also thanks for the beautiful addition.

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Nawazish Karam Lamha Jee.....

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