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Love Tum Hote Ho Jab Pass Mere - 15th January 2007, 08:59 PM
Jab raastey jaane pehchaane ho to..manzil kareeb lagtee hai..
tum hotey ho jab paas mere har saans khushnaseeb lagtee hai..

Saagar kinare pade in berang patharron mein..ek seepi badi ajeeb dikhti hai
tum hotey ho jab paas mere har saans khushnaseeb lagtee hai..


Utar Chadao, Khushi Gham, pana khona har rang mein zindagi habib lagtee hai..
tum hotey ho jab paas mere har saans khushnaseeb lagtee hai..


Haath se choothey palon ko dekhkar bhi jawaani uthkar 'Zehnaseeb'kehtee hai..
tum hotey ho jab paas mere har saans khushnaseeb lagtee hai..

Gam ki dukaan kholkar baitha hua hai "Saifee"
Aansoo nikal pade hai kharidaar dekhkar...
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15th January 2007, 09:42 PM
zainab ji adaab aur namskaar,

aapka pehle to is parivaar meiN sawaagat hai tah-e-dil se, mere dost aapko paRh ke achha laga ummid karta huN ke aap aage bhi is mehfil ko apni likhi hui peshkas ke zariye sajate raheNge

khus raheN aur apna khayal rakheN

welcome again

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16th January 2007, 08:07 PM
Hello Dhavalji,
Thanx aapne hamari likh rachna ki daad ki.Hum koshish karenge ke aise hi likhte rahe

Gam ki dukaan kholkar baitha hua hai "Saifee"
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17th January 2007, 12:41 PM
hi saifee ji
kese ho
jihuzur aapne bahut hi khub likha hai

Jab raastey jaane pehchaane ho to..manzil kareeb lagtee hai..
tum hotey ho jab paas mere har saans khushnaseeb lagtee hai..

ya ye line hamein bahut hi pasand aayi.

Kaate nahi kat te hai lamhe intezaar ke,
Nazrein jama ke bethe hai raste pe yaar ke,
Dil ne kaha dekhe jo jalwe husn-e-yaar ke,
Laya hai kaun inhe phalak se utar ke.

ese hi likhte rehna
aur milte rehna
aapka dost
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Jab raastey jaane pehchaane ho to..manzil kareeb lagtee hai..
tum hotey ho jab paas mere har saans khushnaseeb lagtee hai..

Saagar kinare pade in berang patharron mein..ek seepi badi ajeeb dikhti hai
tum hotey ho jab paas mere har saans khushnaseeb lagtee hai..


Utar Chadao, Khushi Gham, pana khona har rang mein zindagi habib lagtee hai..
tum hotey ho jab paas mere har saans khushnaseeb lagtee hai..


Haath se choothey palon ko dekhkar bhi jawaani uthkar 'Zehnaseeb'kehtee hai..
tum hotey ho jab paas mere har saans khushnaseeb lagtee hai..

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!





Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe,
Tab dil se me naraz tha,
Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du,
Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha.


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6th February 2007, 08:49 PM
hello dhavalji,

Shaayad aap confuse hai mera naam Zainab nahi Saifee hai.Aur Kya aap meri help kar sate hai.Feb 13th ko meri zainab ka birthday hai.Mujhe kuch soojh nahi raha kya likhu.Agar aapke paas kuch acchi nazm ho toh plz forward kijiega.

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31st May 2008, 03:51 AM
hi!!!! zainab im glad to read ur "SHAYRIYAN"...they really outstanding.....i wanna to know one thing from you that are you bhohri????? coz i don't think bhohris know such a good urdu, do they???
   
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