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28th September 2006, 12:04 PM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by rajveeer
[B]6th share
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woh aapni be-waffeai par khoob rokar aaye hai.n
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taumar jeeta raha bass usse apna samajh kar,
haqkit yeh hai ki wo ajj bhee humse praye hai.n.....
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hum sochtey thy ki hum bhool chuke hai.n unko,
aaj kaya hua, phir aansu palko mai.n aaye hain....
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28th September 2006, 01:19 PM
1st sher
kaise kaha den ki khush hai tujhse door rahakar hum,
un to chhup-chhup ke humne bhi zakhanm sehalaye hai....
pooja
2nd sher
tere jane se meri karah se hi mera ab koi rista na raha
mere khud ke aansu meri aankho se hi huye paraye hain
dilip
3rd sher
koi khushi to ho hansil hume bhi aye khuda,
jane kitne khwab humne ab tak dafnaye hai...
pooja
4th share
kabhi thakta nahi tha jo waffa ki kasme khate hue,
dekho dosto, wahi aaj humse huey paraye hai.n
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5th sher
toone maine pyar kiya to kya khoya aur kya paya
mere pas ye saye hain tere pas bhee saye hain
- Anil
6th share
aaj hawa mai.n kuch seelan se lagti hai mujhe,
woh aapni be-waffeai par khoob rokar aaye hai.n
-sunita virender
7th share
taumar jeeta raha bass usse apna samajh kar,
haqkit yeh hai ki wo ajj bhee humse praye hai.n.....
'veer'
8th share
hum sochtey thy ki hum bhool chuke hai.n unko,
aaj kaya hua, phir aansu palko mai.n aaye hain....
-sunita virender
har bar ki tarah ye gazal bhi badi khoobsurati se apne anjam tak pahunch gayi hai...... ab intzar hai agali gazal ka dekhe.n koun shuru karta hai......................
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hi -
28th September 2006, 01:34 PM
nai gazal main urdu tezeeb ke mashoor shayar janaab 'aziz lakhnavi' sahib ke ek share se karne ja raha hoon ......umeed hai app saath doge......raj.......
1st share
hizar ki raat katne wale,
kaya karega gar sehar na huie.....
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28th September 2006, 02:43 PM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by rajveeer
[B]nai gazal main urdu tezeeb ke mashoor shayar janaab 'aziz lakhnavi' sahib ke ek share se karne ja raha hoon ......umeed hai app saath doge......raj.......
1st share
hizar ki raat katne wale,
kaya karega gar sehar na huie.....
'aziz lakhnavi'
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uski judai mai hi mar jauNgi,
yehi hoga gar sahar na hue.....
-sunita virender
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hi -
28th September 2006, 03:40 PM
uski judai mai hi mar jauNgi,
yehi hoga gar sahar na huie.....
-sunita virender
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aankh main tairta ek aansu,
kab gir gaya khabar na huie......
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29th September 2006, 10:00 AM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by rajveeer
[B]uski judai mai hi mar jauNgi,
yehi hoga gar sahar na huie.....
-sunita virender
3rd share
aankh main tairta ek aansu,
kab gir gaya khabar na huie......
'veer'
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mere naam se woh mashoor ho gaya,
aur humey hi khabar na huie...
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hi -
29th September 2006, 11:28 AM
4th share
mere naam se woh mashoor ho gaya,
aur humey hi khabar na huie...
-sunita virender
5th share
hum bhee pyase hai saki,
hum par teri nazar na huie.....
'veer'
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29th September 2006, 11:39 AM
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Originally posted by rajveeer
4th share
mere naam se woh mashoor ho gaya,
aur humey hi khabar na huie...
-sunita virender
5th share
hum bhee pyase hai saki,
hum par teri nazar na huie.....
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6th sher
tere jane aaj bhi beerani hai
akele jindgi humse basar na hui.....
dilip
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29th September 2006, 12:25 PM
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tere jane aaj bhi beerani hai
akele jindgi humse basar na hui.....
dilip
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sabke haal ki khabar hai tuje,
mere hi haal ki khabar na huie...
-sunita virender
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29th September 2006, 12:31 PM
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sabke haal ki khabar hai tuje,
mere hi haal ki khabar na huie...
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8th sher
intzar main guzar di sari umar
mere intzar ki fir sahar na huie.....
dilip
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29th September 2006, 12:57 PM
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hizar ki raat katne wale,
kaya karega gar sehar na huie.....
'aziz lakhnavi'
2nd share
uski judai mai hi mar jauNgi,
yehi hoga gar sahar na hue.....
-sunita virender
3rd share
aankh main tairta ek aansu,
kab gir gaya khabar na huie......
'veer'
4th share
mere naam se mashoor hua wo,
aur mujhay hee khabar na huie...
-sunita virender
5th share
hum bhee pyase hai saki,
kyu hum par teri nazar na huie.....
'veer'
6th sher
tere jane ke baad bhi veerani hai
akele zindagi humse basar na huie....
dilip
7th share
sabke haal ki khabar hai tujhe,
mere hee haal ki khabar na huie...
-sunita virender
8th sher
intzar main guzaar di sari umar
mere intzar ki fir sahar na huie.....
dilip
dosto ek bhut achi gazal app sab ki madad se poori huie.......app sabko bhut bhut badhai................
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
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3rd October 2006, 05:19 PM
dosto ajj ek nai gazal shuru karne ja raha hoon umeed hai appka saath milega........
1st share
kiya mohabat ka izhaar mere marne ke baad,
laya wo tera gawah tere mukkar jane ke baad .....
'veer'
dosto umeed karta hoon app isko mukamal karne me mera saath doge.....appka raj.....
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3rd October 2006, 05:36 PM
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1st share
kiya mohabat ka izhaar mere marne ke baad,
laya wo tera gawah tere mukkar jane ke baad .....
'veer'
2nd sher
umar bhar karte rahe intzar hum jis lamhat ka,
aaya wo lamha dosto mere guzar jane ke baad.........
"dilip"
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3rd October 2006, 05:44 PM
[QUOTE] Originally posted by dilip200
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kiya mohabat ka izhaar mere marne ke baad,
laya wo tera gawah tere mukkar jane ke baad .....
'veer'
2nd sher
umar bhar karte rahe intzar hum jis lamhat ka,
aaya wo lamha dosto mere guzar jane ke baad.........
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vo alviida kahane lage, humare chale jane ke baad,
sametane beitthe hum dil ko, biikhar jane ke baad.....
grazie
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3rd October 2006, 05:53 PM
3rd sher
vo alviida kahane lage, humare chale jane ke baad,
sametane beitthe hum dil ko, biikhar jane ke baad.....
'pooja'
4th share
taumar ruk na paya khamosh ashko ka sailaab,
sehra bhe nam ho gaya mere ghar jane ke baad.....
'veer'
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3rd October 2006, 06:29 PM
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3rd sher
vo alviida kahane lage, humare chale jane ke baad,
sametane beitthe hum dil ko, biikhar jane ke baad.....
'pooja'
4th share
taumar ruk na paya khamosh ashko ka sailaab,
sehra bhe nam ho gaya mere ghar jane ke baad.....
'veer'
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safar soona ho gaya, uska sath chhut jane ke baad,
fiir bhi mein chalti rahi, uske tthahar jane ke baad....
grazie
aapki dost
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3rd October 2006, 06:44 PM
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5th sher
safar soona ho gaya, uska sath chhut jane ke baad,
fiir bhi mein chalti rahi, uske tthahar jane ke baad....
grazie
aapki dost
pooja
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6th sher
umar talak ek Ahal-e-chaman talashate rahe,
mila Koo-e-dost chaman ujaar jane ke baad
dilip
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4th October 2006, 09:47 AM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by dilip200
[B]6th sher
umar talak ek Ahal-e-chaman talashate rahe,
mila Koo-e-dost chaman ujaar jane ke baad
dilip
7th share
barso se mai aapni tanheyo se hi ualjti rahi,
saath milla mujhe meri umr beet jane ke baad
-sunita virender
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4th October 2006, 11:21 AM
[B]6th sher
umar talak ek Ahal-e-chaman talashate rahe,
mila Koo-e-dost chaman ujaar jane ke baad
dilip
7th share
barso se mai aapni tanheyo se hi ualjti rahi,
saath milla mujhe meri umr beet jane ke baad
-sunita virender
8th share
barso jise dekhne ki tamana liye hum jeete rahe,
wo mila humme kambakth nazar jane ke baad.......
'veer'
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
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5th October 2006, 09:39 AM
dosto mai aaj es post par ek mashoor film ki gazal ke mukhdey se shuruyaat kar rahi hu, pls saath dijiyega.
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karogey yaad to har baat yaad aayegi,
gujratey waqt ki har mauoj thahar jayegi...
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5th October 2006, 10:39 AM
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karogey yaad to har baat yaad aayegi,
gujratey waqt ki har mauoj thahar jayegi...
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Sunita Virender Singh
2nd share
mujhe tu jeene ki duaa na de mere sanam,
tere bagair na ye ummar guzar payegi.......
'veer'
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5th October 2006, 10:41 AM
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karogey yaad to har baat yaad aayegi,
gujratey waqt ki har mauoj thahar jayegi...
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Sunita Virender Singh
2nd share
mujhe tu jeene ki duaa na de mere sanam,
tere bagair na ye ummar guzar payegi.......
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3rd sher
tanhai main guzri hai ab talak jindgi apni,
you.n mafilo.n ki dawat hame kya raas aayegi......
dilip
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5th October 2006, 05:14 PM
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3rd sher
tanhai main guzri hai ab talak jindgi apni,
you.n mafilo.n ki dawat hame kya raas aayegi......
dilip
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4th sher
ya khuda bas, maut de-de ab to tu mujhe,
warna meri hi zindagi mujhpe sitam dhayegi....
grazie
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4th sher
ya khuda bas, maut de-de ab to tu mujhe,
warna meri hi zindagi mujhpe sitam dhayegi....
'pooja'
5th share
aftaab ke maathe pe hoga paseena us din,
jis din mehnatkash ki taqdeer chamak jayegi.....
'veer'
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5th October 2006, 05:44 PM
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4th sher
ya khuda bas, maut de-de ab to tu mujhe,
warna meri hi zindagi mujhpe sitam dhayegi....
'pooja'
5th share
aftaab ke maathe pe hoga paseena us din,
jis din mehnatkash ki taqdeer chamak jayegi.....
'veer'
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6th sher
tere ashko.n ko kareene se samhalloo.n main jara
ye to moti hain, meri bhi kismat sanwar jayegi......
dilip
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6th October 2006, 04:53 PM
6th sher
tere ashko.n ko kareene se samhalloo.n main jara
ye to moti hain, meri bhi kismat sanwar jayegi......
dilip
bass issi umeed par jinda hoon main zindagi,
kabhi to hoga ujjala kabhi to tanhai simat jayegi.....
'veer'
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
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6th sher
tere ashko.n ko kareene se samhalloo.n main jara
ye to moti hain, meri bhi kismat sanwar jayegi......
dilip
7th
bass issi umeed par jinda hoon main zindagi,
kabhi to hoga ujjala kabhi to tanhai simat jayegi.....
'veer'
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8th sher
zikr jab bhi chhidegaa unki mahfil main 'dilip' ka
wafadari ki unko meri her ek baat yaad aayegi..
dilip
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mat pooch tu mujhe sanso se bhi pyara hai.....
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mat pooch tu mujhe sanso se bhi pyara hai.....
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meri kashti ka tu hi sahiil hai aur tu hi kiinara hai,
koi gum nahi dubne ka, tujhpe to jiivan vara hai....
grazie
di apki matko rani
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24th October 2006, 10:35 AM
2nd sher
meri kashti ka tu hi sahiil hai aur tu hi kiinara hai,
koi gum nahi dubne ka, tujhpe to jiivan vara hai....
di apki matko rani
pooja
3rd share
dunia ki rangeen mahfillo aur ronko se humey kaya,
humney to yeh sarra jivan tanha hi gujara hai......
-sunita virender
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th October 2006, 10:48 AM
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dunia ki rangeen mahfillo aur ronko se humey kaya,
humney to yeh sarra jivan tanha hi gujara hai......
-sunita virender
4th share
tanhai ko bhee tu gungunate huye sunegi ab,
gham na kar tere saath mere pyar ka sahara hai....
'veer'
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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25th October 2006, 11:49 AM
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Originally Posted by rajveeer
3rd share
dunia ki rangeen mahfillo aur ronko se humey kaya,
humney to yeh sarra jivan tanha hi gujara hai......
-sunita virender
4th share
tanhai ko bhee tu gungunate huye sunegi ab,
gham na kar tere saath mere pyar ka sahara hai....
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mujhe maaloom nahi ki kya to ab hamara hai
par tujhe dekh ke ye jeevan maine sawaara hai...
sakhi
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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25th October 2006, 12:17 PM
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mujhe maaloom nahi ki kya to ab hamara hai
par tujhe dekh ke ye jeevan maine sawaara hai...
sakhi
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hulchal huie muddaton baad meri kabar main,
sannato main kisne mujhe pyar se pukara hai....
'veer'
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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25th October 2006, 12:18 PM
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mujhe maaloom nahi ki kya to ab hamara hai
par tujhe dekh ke ye jeevan maine sawaara hai...
-sakhi
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hulchal huie meri kabar main muddaton baad,
sannato main kisne mujhe pyar se pukara hai....
'veer'
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tumne tanhayeo mai.n diya mujhe sahara hai,
tu paraya lakh sahi phir bhi mujhe pyara hai...
-sunita virender
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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25th October 2006, 01:07 PM
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tumne tanhayeo mai.n diya mujhe sahara hai,
tu paraya lakh sahi phir bhi mujhe pyara hai...
-sunita virender
wah sunita ji appne to kamaal kar diya bhut acha share kaha hai dil khush ho gaya......
8th share
matlabi dunia main sab ko aazma kar dekh liya,
sukh main sab apne hai dukh main tu hamara hai.....
'veer'
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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26th October 2006, 03:34 PM
dosto mai.n soch rahi hu ki kyu na naye gazal ki shuruyaat mai.n ek mashoor hindi film ke geet se kar du, aap saath dena mera.
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aapki nazro ne samja pyar ke kabil mujhe,
dil ki eh dhadkan thahar ja mil gaye manzil mujhe...
"not mine" - sunita virender
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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26th October 2006, 04:30 PM
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dosto mai.n soch rahi hu ki kyu na naye gazal ki shuruyaat mai.n ek mashoor hindi film ke geet se kar du, aap saath dena mera.
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aapki nazro ne samja pyar ke kabil mujhe,
dil ki eh dhadkan thahar ja mil gaye manzil mujhe...
"not mine" - sunita virender
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Kab Se Khaffaa Hoke Bhiii Intazaarr Kar Rahiii Huu Tera,
Aa Jao Ab,Kahin Baha Na Le Jaye Ashqo Ka Sahil Mujhe....
grazie
aapki dost
pooja
===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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26th October 2006, 05:11 PM
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aapki nazro ne samja pyar ke kabil mujhe,
dil ki eh dhadkan thahar ja mil gaye manzil mujhe...
"not mine" - sunita virender
2nd sher
Kab Se Khaffaa Hoke Bhiii Intazaarr Kar Rahiii Huu Tera,
Aa Jao Ab,Kahin Baha Na Le Jaye Ashqo Ka Sahil Mujhe....
-pooja
3rd share
kushiya tere saath hi ruth kar chali gaye hai door mujse,
gahmo ne aapni mahfil mai.n kar liya hai shamil mujhe
-sunita virender
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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26th October 2006, 05:35 PM
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Ujala To Tere Ane Se Tha Mehaffil Me Meri,
Biiina Tere Siirff Tariikii Hai Hansil Mujhe....
grazie
aapki dost
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26th October 2006, 05:48 PM
तीसरा शेएर
ख़ुशिया तेरे साथ ही रूठ कर चली गई है दूर मुझसे,
गमों ने आपनी महफ़िल में कर लिया है शामिल मुझे ......
-सुनीता वीरेंदेर
चौथा शेएर
तेरी सांसो को देता हूँ मैं अपनी सांसो की ज़िंदगी,
बता कहाँ जाऊंगा गर तू भी समझेगी क़ातिल मुझे ......
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un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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