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khusi thi ya gam koi, nahi jaanta…..<<<Khan Bhi ke naam>>> -
4th March 2005, 06:48 PM
Khan bhai....
is naacheez ka ye chota sa tohfa kabool karen...... Doston dil ka haal yun tha ki ek khushi ka lamha aaya aur saath mein judaai ka gam laaya....meri har khushi mein vo mere saath rehti thi.....aur us din main akela....kya koi khushi thi....ya phir gam.... bus haal-e-dil is kamakash ka aapke saamne rakh raha hoon.... khusi thi ya gam koi, nahi jaanta….. kyun aakhir aaj pee maine, nahi jaanta….. pyar mein dekha na kabhi jaddon ko ….. bachaate rahe teri saakh apni wafa ko…. ladte rahe duniya se tujhe paane ko…. kyun koshishen ki itni maine, nahi jaanta….. khushi thi ya gam koi….. kisi ke aane ki aas lagaye baithe the….. rahoon mein ye dil bichaye baithe the…. phoolon se aashiyana sajaye baithe the….. kyun ye shame phir bujhayi maine, nahi jaanta….. khushi thi ya gam koi….. tujhe khushi ke saahare chood aaye hain….. dard--o-gam sandg apne le aaye hain….. laute armaano ko dafn kar aaye hain….. kyun phir laash ^AMAN^ uthaye phirte hain,nahi jaanta….. khusi thi ya gam koi, nahi jaanta….. kyun aakhir aaj pee maine, nahi jaanta….. **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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4th March 2005, 07:48 PM
Kyo phir laash uthaye phirte hai.. nahi jaanta...
Waaaaaaaahhhh bhi kya baat kahi hai. you are too good yu really wrote a nice nazm. Dekh laila tere maznu ka kaleja kya hai, Khaak me milkar bhi kehta hai ki bigda kya hai, Leke aya na karo ye suraahi sa badan, Mai sharabi hu sharabi ka bharosa kya hai, Ek baar honto pe hont to rakh lene do, Do chaar bundo se botal ka bigadta kya hai. |
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4th March 2005, 08:49 PM
aman shayad kade kade sahnu sachi pata ni hunda ek khushi hai ye gum, asi ki kitta te kyu, things jus happen ....i cud feel ur emotions in every word of yours:
kisi ke aane ki aas lagaye baithe the….. rahoon mein ye dil bichaye baithe the…. phoolon se aashiyana sajaye baithe the….. kyun ye shame phir bujhayi maine, nahi jaanta….. ---> kyu ye shaame phir bhujayi maine me nahi jaanta!! pyar di galla pyar wale hi samajh sakde ne, na hi explain kitte samajh aandiya ney, na hi samjhan di himmat hundi hai, pyar feeling hi iddan di hai, feel karo ta sab kuch, explain karo ta shayad kuch nahi, kyu kiw ords milde nahi explain karna hu, kadar kardi aw me tuhade pyar di te immandari di rishteya which. some words for you: tere aane ka intzaar tha aankho mein dharakta ehsaas tha saanso mein kya sochta tha mein un barsato mein me nahi jaanta, phir badla mausam, phir badli kayenaat bhi, same ke saath badle tere jasbaat bhi? jaane me kyu tere saath mausam ke saath badal na payya? Me nahi jaanta.............. Feelings unknown Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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5th March 2005, 12:24 AM
tumhara tohfa sar ankhon par bhai
ehasan mand rhaon ga kashmakash wakaye hay bhai... jane kya paigham hay ... dil khsuh hay maloom nahi hota k ane wala khushi ka koi lamha hay..yah andhi se pahle ki khamoshi ... acha likha hay bhai apni kashmakash ko byane karne ka ache lafzon ka inthkhab kiya hay bhai...tareef kabool kijiye ga khan agar mohabbat hay to judai kiyon or judai main mohabbat kasi???? |
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5th March 2005, 11:33 AM
Doston....
kutch galtiyaan ho gayi thi.....theek kar ke doobara aapke liye likh raha hoon.... muafi ka talabgaar..... khusi thi ya gam koi, nahi jaanta….. kyun aakhir aaj pee maine, nahi jaanta….. pyar mein dekha na kabhi haddon ko ….. bachaate rahe teri saakh apni wafa ko…. ladte rahe duniya se tujhe paane ko…. kyun koshishen ki itni maine, nahi jaanta….. khushi thi ya gam koi….. kisi ke aane ki aas lagaye baithe the….. rahoon mein ye dil bichaye baithe the…. phoolon se aashiyana sajaye baithe the….. kyun ye shaamein phir bujhayi maine, nahi jaanta….. khushi thi ya gam koi….. tujhe khushi ke saahare chood aaye hain….. dard--o-gam sang apne le aaye hain….. lute armaano ko dafn kar aaye hain….. kyun phir laash ^AMAN^ uthaye phirte hain,nahi jaanta….. khusi thi ya gam koi, nahi jaanta….. kyun aakhir aaj pee maine, nahi jaanta….. *Saakh=izzat isme Shaamein lafz Priya ne diya hai...... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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5th March 2005, 11:52 AM
khusi thi ya gam koi, nahi jaanta…..
kyun aakhir aaj pee maine, nahi jaanta….. pyar mein dekha na kabhi jaddon ko ….. bachaate rahe teri saakh apni wafa ko…. ladte rahe duniya se tujhe paane ko…. kyun koshishen ki itni maine, nahi jaanta….. Waaah Aman Bhai...Khoobsurat ashaar!! kisi ke aane ki aas lagaye baithe the….. rahoon mein ye dil bichaye baithe the…. phoolon se aashiyana sajaye baithe the….. kyun ye shame phir bujhayi maine, nahi jaanta….. WaaaaaH.... Yeh to ghazab hi hain!! Aman Bhai! Behad Accha likha hai aapne, humesha ki tarah...MEri daad kubool karlo.. lekin sirf us part ke liye jo maine oopar likha hai.. baaki ke baare me no comments... Sacchai likhi hia.. par mujhe pasand nahi aayee...So jop pasand aaya uspe daad diye deta hoon.... Khaan bhai ke naam yeh tohfa behtreen raha... Likhte rehna.. Apna khayal rakhna  Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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5th March 2005, 06:13 PM
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ek to likha achha ho aur oos par khan ko arpan ho ........ taarif hi taarif................ di |
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5th March 2005, 07:03 PM
Namaskar Aman ji
Dard bhara ek aur nagma pesh kiya hay aapne.....bahut accha likha hay par phir wahi laash Aman aisa likha hay aapne......bahut dukh hota hay aise baat sunkar.....Rachna kay liye daad kabul karein tujhe khushi ke saahare chood aaye hain….. dard--o-gam sandg apne le aaye hain….. laute armaano ko dafn kar aaye hain….. kyun phir laash ^AMAN^ uthaye phirte hain,nahi jaanta….. Sada kush rahein |
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Re: khusi thi ya gam koi, nahi jaanta…..<<<Khan Bhi ke naam>>> |
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Re: khusi thi ya gam koi, nahi jaanta…..<<<Khan Bhi ke naam>>> -
5th March 2005, 09:56 PM
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kya kahuN aapke is kalaam pe ... sach aapka likha ab tak tak sabse accha kalaam lag raha hai mujhe ... par pasand maiN doosra .. pehla to wahi rahega ... mere bhai teri yaad bohat aayi ...  .. par aapke is kalaam pe maiN kis alfaaz ko aapke roobroo rakhuN samajh nahi aa raha .. lab sil se gaye hai .. meri daad teh dil se kabool kareN ... aapka bhai kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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Harshh bhai..... shukriya aur jawab mein jo sher likha hai uske baare mein to kya kahoon.....lajawab.... saath dete rehna..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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vekh lao thuvada dita lafz apne kalam vich jod laya......sochya taan kugjh hor hi si....galti naal akhar poora na hoya.....lekin thuvada dita lafz taan sach mere kalam nu chaar chan la gaya hai.... te thuvada reply jiven is kalam no poora kar rehya hove.... ehdaan hi naal rehna..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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apne is bhai ko muaf karna.....kalam likhne ke baad uske shabdon mein galtiaan nahi dekhi.... apne bhai ke thofe ko itni badi inayat.... shukriya bhai........ **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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koi baat nahi.....chalo tum aaye to sahi.,......varna mera kya hota.... aur in ashaaron mein bhi to dard hai....bus maut nahi hai.... khush rahoo..... tumhara bhai **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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shukriya..... aapke aate hi dil khil uthta hai..... aap yunhi saath dete rehna.....varna ye dono to mere saath bagawat pe utar aayen hai..... aapka baccha..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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Sukanya ji..... dil ka haal bayan kar deta hoon aur aap sabke saath baant ke kutch der ke liye ye dard kum ho jaata hai.... aap aayin...shukriya..... khush rahiye.....duwaaon ke saath..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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shukriya.....aur vo post to meri bhi ab tak ki sabse aachi post hai.... tumhara bhai.....- **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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