Shayri.com  

Go Back   Shayri.com > Shayri > Ghazal Section
Reload this Page Chot muhabat ki.......

Reply
 
Thread Tools Rate Thread Display Modes
Chot muhabat ki.......
Old
  (#1)
rajinderseep
Registered User
rajinderseep has much to be proud ofrajinderseep has much to be proud ofrajinderseep has much to be proud ofrajinderseep has much to be proud ofrajinderseep has much to be proud ofrajinderseep has much to be proud ofrajinderseep has much to be proud ofrajinderseep has much to be proud ofrajinderseep has much to be proud ofrajinderseep has much to be proud of
 
Offline
Posts: 748
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: new york U.S.A.
Rep Power: 28
Chot muhabat ki....... - 4th January 2010, 10:41 PM

SDC par sabhi members ko pyar bhari namaskar,dosto aap sab ki nazar ek choti si koshish,apni nayi gazal le kar hazir huan hoon gor farmana. aap ko yeh koshish kesi lagi jananay k liay besabar rahunga.pesh hai.......


Jab koi chot muhabat ki khata hai
saari dunia mein ik shor sa mach jaata hai.
foonk bhi uthti hai toofan ki tarah
jisme aarzuon ka shahar ujhar jaata hai.
jaljaly aatein hain pralay ban kar
jameen aasman or aasman jameen ban jaata hai.
havain bhi ganay lagti hai tranay dard k
or aav[paani]mein bhi jehar sa ghul jaata hai.
har juban pe hoti hai ek hi daastan
jisay sunanay k liay waqt bhi thehr jaata hai.
seep" jo bhi khata hai jag mein yeh chot
kya pataa bho,jee bhi paata hai ya mar jaata hai.

rajinderseep
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#2)
kishor
Darde Dil Ke Tukde
kishor is a jewel in the roughkishor is a jewel in the roughkishor is a jewel in the rough
 
kishor's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,035
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: NEW PANVEL,NAVI MUMBAI,MAHARASHTRA,INDIA
Rep Power: 25
25th January 2010, 09:17 PM
Hello niceeeeeee ghazal ,,,,,,keep it up....bye take care

******************************
Dil Itna Naazuk Hota Hai Ke,
Isski Tootne Ki Awaaz Bilkul Nahi Aathi,
******************************
MEIN TUJHKO BHOOL JAUN YE KISSS KITAAB MEIN LIKHA HAI.
------------------------------------------------
socha tha woh hame tut kar chahenge
par chaha bhi hami ne aur tute bhi hum

KISHOR R KARKERA
NEW PANVEL
NAVI MUMBAi,410206
PH:-09322764070
  Send a message via Yahoo to kishor  
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#3)
rajinderseep
Registered User
rajinderseep has much to be proud ofrajinderseep has much to be proud ofrajinderseep has much to be proud ofrajinderseep has much to be proud ofrajinderseep has much to be proud ofrajinderseep has much to be proud ofrajinderseep has much to be proud ofrajinderseep has much to be proud ofrajinderseep has much to be proud ofrajinderseep has much to be proud of
 
Offline
Posts: 748
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: new york U.S.A.
Rep Power: 28
1st February 2010, 11:08 PM
kishor ji daad k liay shukria bas isi tarah hosla bratay rehay. thanks.
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#4)
Ek Ehsaas
Couldn't Care Less
Ek Ehsaas has much to be proud ofEk Ehsaas has much to be proud ofEk Ehsaas has much to be proud ofEk Ehsaas has much to be proud ofEk Ehsaas has much to be proud ofEk Ehsaas has much to be proud ofEk Ehsaas has much to be proud ofEk Ehsaas has much to be proud of
 
Ek Ehsaas's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 2,652
Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: Delhi
Rep Power: 30
10th February 2010, 09:29 PM
awesome....

Reps +++ added
Widhani

Who Cares.....
  Send a message via Yahoo to Ek Ehsaas  
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#5)
zainy
Aapki dost
zainy is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comzainy is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comzainy is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comzainy is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comzainy is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comzainy is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comzainy is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comzainy is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comzainy is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comzainy is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comzainy is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.com
 
zainy's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 7,325
Join Date: Feb 2008
Rep Power: 57
10th February 2010, 09:32 PM
SDC par sabhi members ko pyar bhara namaskar,dosto aap sab ki nazar ek choti si koshish,apni nayi ghazal le kar hazir hua hooN ,ghaur farmaiye. aap ko yeh koshish kaisi lagi jannay k liye besabr rahunga.pesh hai.......




Jab koi chot muhabbat ki khaata hai
saari dunia meiN ik shor sa mach jaata hai.

 foonk bhi uthti hai toofan ki tarah
jisme aarzuoN ka shahar ujhaD jaata hai.

 Zalzalay aate haiN pralay ban kar
Zameen aasman or aasman Zameen ban jaata hai.

 havaiN bhi ganay lagti hai taranay dard kay
or aav[paani]meiN bhi Zehar sa ghul jaata hai.

 har Zubaan pe hoti hai ek hi daastan
jisay sunanay k liay waqt bhi thehr jaata hai.

 seep" jo bhi khaata hai jag meiN yeh chot
kya pataa woh,jee bhi paata hai ya mar jaata hai.


Aapki ghazal ke ehsaas acche haiN RAJINDER JI,aapse guzarish hai ke aap isme jo choti moti mistakes maine red colour me mark kiya hai unhe note kijiye,aur aagey se likhte waqt dhyan rakhiye in mistakes per...

ummid hai aapko meri baat buri nahi lagegi,

just wanted to help u...

Aap agar chaho tou post karne se pehle kisise correction karwa lijiye..



Zainy


PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...

Nm
Last edited by zainy; 10th February 2010 at 09:42 PM..
  Send a message via MSN to zainy  
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#6)
rajinderseep
Registered User
rajinderseep has much to be proud ofrajinderseep has much to be proud ofrajinderseep has much to be proud ofrajinderseep has much to be proud ofrajinderseep has much to be proud ofrajinderseep has much to be proud ofrajinderseep has much to be proud ofrajinderseep has much to be proud ofrajinderseep has much to be proud ofrajinderseep has much to be proud of
 
Offline
Posts: 748
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: new york U.S.A.
Rep Power: 28
11th February 2010, 01:05 AM
Zainy ji bahut bahut shukria,daad k liay bhi or corrections k liay bhi.mujhay bura nahi balki ashaa laga. mujhay maloom hai meri galtioN k baray par main chahunga agar aap is kaam mein meri help kareiN or yeh kaisay hoga aap hi bata dein................fir se bahut bahut shukria.
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#7)
rajinderseep
Registered User
rajinderseep has much to be proud ofrajinderseep has much to be proud ofrajinderseep has much to be proud ofrajinderseep has much to be proud ofrajinderseep has much to be proud ofrajinderseep has much to be proud ofrajinderseep has much to be proud ofrajinderseep has much to be proud ofrajinderseep has much to be proud ofrajinderseep has much to be proud of
 
Offline
Posts: 748
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: new york U.S.A.
Rep Power: 28
11th February 2010, 01:13 AM
Ehsaas[AMIT] ji kin shabdoN se aap ka shukria karooN............
aap meray jazbaatoN ko sirf ehsaas hi kar lein.........thanks
   
Reply With Quote
Reply

« Previous Thread | Next Thread »

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts
BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2024, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
vBulletin Skin developed by: vBStyles.com

Contact Us - www.shayri.com - Archive - Top