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Namaskaar Dosto

guftagu ke silsilley ko aage badatey haiN aur aaj ham jis shayar ko aap sabse ru-b-ru karne ja rhe haiN, wo sdc ke 13 saal purane member hain, unhone bahut khoobsurat gazaloN se sdc ki bazm ko sajaya hai. aaj ham es shayar ko enhi ki jubaani jaanege.

ab jayada intejaar na karvate hue maiN aapko enka naam bata rhi hu.

"raah meiN hi manziloN ka zikr mat chedo Praveen,
manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi"


ji haaN ab to pta chal gya hoga ki maiN kiski baat kar rhi hu

Praveen Saxena ji

ji dosto, es mahine ham enhi se baat kareNge, ham sab enke bare meiN wo sab kuch jaan.na chaheNge jo hame maloom nahi hai, hamne to bas enki shayri padi hai, par yeh asal zindgi meiN kaise haiN ense hi jaanege ab

Praveen ji, aapka SDC ke es guftagu wale silsiley meiN dil se suwagat hai…umeed hai ki aap es gufatagu ko khoob enjoy karogey…aur ham sab bhi aapse baate karke khoob lutf uthaNge.

Praveen ji…es silsiley ko aage badate hue ham chahte hai ki sabse pehle aap apni introduction dijiye.

1. Aap kahan ke rehne wale hai ?
2. kya kaam karte hai
3. aapki family meiN kaun kaun hai…family se bhi thoda introduce karwa dijiye.
4. SDC se kaise judey aap ?
5. kya aapke pariwaar ka koi aur member bhi SDC pariwaar meiN shamil hai ?

filhaal etna hi...aapke intejaar aur suwagat meiN SDC team

SDC team ki taraf se Aik baar phir dil ki gehraiyoN se suwagat hai




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1st August 2015, 10:26 PM

Praveen bhaiyaa

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Shayri pariwaar me liye bahot khushii ki baat hay ki aap se ees mahine sawaal poochhne kaa mauqaa milengaa. .. aap aik behteein shaayar hai ees pariwaar ke. Aur aapse bahot kuchh seekhaa bhee hay... behad khushii ke saath aapka tah-e-dil se swaagat kartaa huun

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Aadab Sunita ji

Doston se mukhatib hone ka ye behud behtareen zariya diya hai aapne. Behud khushi hai mujhe. Abhi bhi kinhi wajoohat se main apne ghar nahin pahunch paaya hun aur apne tab ke zariya iss thread se judne ka silsila shuruu kar raha hun. Chunki tab par type karna mujhe convenient nahin lagta so jawabon ka silsila main kal se shuruu karoonga.

Sunita ji is shaandaar taarruff ke liye main Behud mamnoon hun.
Phir kal mulaqaat hoti hai.

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raah meiN hi manziloN ka zikr mat chedo Praveen
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Namaskaar praveen ji........guftguu ke silsile me aapka dil se swagat hai....bahut khushi ho rahi hai ki yahaan ek baar fir ek behtareen shayar se hamari mulaqat hone ja rahi hai......dua karti hoon...aapka ye safar yaadgar rahe....
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Praveen ji .. khushamdeed interview meiN

Bada achcha lag raha hai ki sdc ki purani shaksiyatoN se roobaru hone ka mauka mil raha hai , aur hum jaise log jo 2/3 saal se jure haiN aap logon se
purane dino ka haal jaan payeinge .

1. Kehte haiN haiN purance zamane ki sdc bahut vibrant hua karti thi ..
apke hisab se iski kya wajah hai ?

Kya tab aur medium of expressions nahiN hote the , jaise ki facebook etc
jinke karan log sirf yahin aya kere the.

Ye phir waqt ke chalte ab bahut si sites bun gayee shayri ki aur log idhar udhar chale gaye ..

2. Aaj ke daur meiN bahut kem log dikhte haiN yahan. pehle zyada dedication thi logon meiN aur Kya ab shayri ka jazba kum ho gaya hai nayi peeri meiN

3. Purance zamane ki shayri aur aaj ki shayri meiN kya farq mehsoos kerte haiN.

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welcome to the shayari interview section Praveen saahab.......

itne zamaane ke baad ab aapke bare me tafseel se jaanne ke mauqe milenge ye hamare liye behad khushnaseebi ki baat hai

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Namaskaar Dosto

guftagu ke silsilley ko aage badatey haiN aur aaj ham jis shayar ko aap sabse ru-b-ru karne ja rhe haiN, wo sdc ke 13 saal purane member hain, unhone bahut khoobsurat gazaloN se sdc ki bazm ko sajaya hai. aaj ham es shayar ko enhi ki jubaani jaanege.

ab jayada intejaar na karvate hue maiN aapko enka naam bata rhi hu.

"raah meiN hi manziloN ka zikr mat chedo Praveen,
manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi"


ji haaN ab to pta chal gya hoga ki maiN kiski baat kar rhi hu

Praveen Saxena ji

ji dosto, es mahine ham enhi se baat kareNge, ham sab enke bare meiN wo sab kuch jaan.na chaheNge jo hame maloom nahi hai, hamne to bas enki shayri padi hai, par yeh asal zindgi meiN kaise haiN ense hi jaanege ab

Praveen ji, aapka SDC ke es guftagu wale silsiley meiN dil se suwagat hai…umeed hai ki aap es gufatagu ko khoob enjoy karogey…aur ham sab bhi aapse baate karke khoob lutf uthaNge.

Praveen ji…es silsiley ko aage badate hue ham chahte hai ki sabse pehle aap apni introduction dijiye.

1. Aap kahan ke rehne wale hai ?
2. kya kaam karte hai
3. aapki family meiN kaun kaun hai…family se bhi thoda introduce karwa dijiye.
4. SDC se kaise judey aap ?
5. kya aapke pariwaar ka koi aur member bhi SDC pariwaar meiN shamil hai ?

filhaal etna hi...aapke intejaar aur suwagat meiN SDC team

SDC team ki taraf se Aik baar phir dil ki gehraiyoN se suwagat hai


DostoN ko Aadab pesh karta huN

SDC par iss tarah ki ye meri doosri mulaqaat hai. Aur mujhe aaj bohat achcha lag raha hai aap sabke beech.

Sunitaji jaisa ke maine pehle bhi kaha aapne bada purjosh ta'arruf karvaya mera. Iss maan ke liye shukrguzar huuN. Jab maiN yahaN aaye tha to yahaN bas 2 hi moderators thhey. Aik Maikash sahab aur doosra Khaaksaar. Aur tab se ab tak ka ye safar bohat hi haseen raha hai. Albatta kaam ki masroofiyat ki wajah se mera yahaN aana kum ho gaya. Khair SDC ko phir ussi andaaz maiN dekhne ki tamanna jaagi hai to insha allah wo zaroor poori hogi.

To aaiye shuru kareN guftagu ka silsila.

Aapne poochha hai ki maiN kahaN ka rehne waala huuN. To isske jawaab meiN maiN yahi kahuuNga ke maiN ab Delhi ka rehne waal huuN. Kyunki yahaN rehte mujhe 30 saal ho gaye haiN. HaaN 30 saal pehle maiN Jaipur ka rehne waala tha, jab maiN yahaN competitions ke liye padhai ke liye aaya tha. Mata-pita se paise na mangwaane padhe issliye kuchh kaam bhi dhooNdne laga. Kaam kya mila mujhe ussmeiN maza aane laga aur maiN phir yahiiN ka hokar reh gaya.

Jahan tak mere kaam ki baat hai to maiN apko batana chaahuuNga ke main peshe se advertising creative writer huuN. Aur ek saal pehle tak maiN ek Ad Company maiN Creative Director thha. Jab ye mehsoos kiya ke ke mujhe ab apni shayri ko zyada neglect nahiiN karna chaahiye to maiNe Freelance writer banne ka faisla kiya aur job chhod diya. Ab maiN alaga alag tarah ke projects karta huuN. Aur mere paas ye choice bhi rehti hai ke achcha na lage to manaa kar duuN. Saath hi ab shayri ko bhi tavajjuh mul rahi hai.

Mere parivaar meiN hum kul 4 log haiN. MaiN, meri patni, meri beti aur aur beta. Meri patni pehle bank meiN kaam karti thiiN par bachchoN par tavajjuh dena unhoN ne zyada zaroori samjha isliye job chhod diya bohat pehle. Ab financial advsor ka kaam karti haiN ghar se hi. Meri beti Journalist hai. Hindustan Times ke saath hai.Bbeta abhi 12th maiN hai.

SDC se judna bhi bada achcha raha. MaiN apni shayri ko saamne laane ke liye platforms talaaash kar raha tha. Kaam ki masroofiyat zyada thhi. Computer par baithe-baithe bas ek din SDC mil gaya aur maine register kar lya. Usske baad se ab tak ye safar jaari hai.

Mere parivaar ka koi member SDC se nahi juda hai dostoN. Meri beti likhti hai par wo English maiN likhti hai.

Filhaan yahaN ijazat diijiye. Agle sawaaloN ke jawaab lekar jald haazir hota huuN.

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welcome Praveen jee guftgu Ki bazm me aapka swagat h. Yeh safar khushnuma rahega shayri ke alawa bhi aapko jaane ko milega


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DostoN ko Aadab pesh karta huN

SDC par iss tarah ki ye meri doosri mulaqaat hai. Aur mujhe aaj bohat achcha lag raha hai aap sabke beech.

Sunitaji jaisa ke maine pehle bhi kaha aapne bada purjosh ta'arruf karvaya mera. Iss maan ke liye shukrguzar huuN. Jab maiN yahaN aaye tha to yahaN bas 2 hi moderators thhey. Aik Maikash sahab aur doosra Khaaksaar. Aur tab se ab tak ka ye safar bohat hi haseen raha hai. Albatta kaam ki masroofiyat ki wajah se mera yahaN aana kum ho gaya. Khair SDC ko phir ussi andaaz maiN dekhne ki tamanna jaagi hai to insha allah wo zaroor poori hogi.

To aaiye shuru kareN guftagu ka silsila.

Aapne poochha hai ki maiN kahaN ka rehne waala huuN. To isske jawaab meiN maiN yahi kahuuNga ke maiN ab Delhi ka rehne waal huuN. Kyunki yahaN rehte mujhe 30 saal ho gaye haiN. HaaN 30 saal pehle maiN Jaipur ka rehne waala tha, jab maiN yahaN competitions ke liye padhai ke liye aaya tha. Mata-pita se paise na mangwaane padhe issliye kuchh kaam bhi dhooNdne laga. Kaam kya mila mujhe ussmeiN maza aane laga aur maiN phir yahiiN ka hokar reh gaya.

Jahan tak mere kaam ki baat hai to maiN apko batana chaahuuNga ke main peshe se advertising creative writer huuN. Aur ek saal pehle tak maiN ek Ad Company maiN Creative Director thha. Jab ye mehsoos kiya ke ke mujhe ab apni shayri ko zyada neglect nahiiN karna chaahiye to maiNe Freelance writer banne ka faisla kiya aur job chhod diya. Ab maiN alaga alag tarah ke projects karta huuN. Aur mere paas ye choice bhi rehti hai ke achcha na lage to manaa kar duuN. Saath hi ab shayri ko bhi tavajjuh mul rahi hai.

Mere parivaar meiN hum kul 4 log haiN. MaiN, meri patni, meri beti aur aur beta. Meri patni pehle bank meiN kaam karti thiiN par bachchoN par tavajjuh dena unhoN ne zyada zaroori samjha isliye job chhod diya bohat pehle. Ab financial advsor ka kaam karti haiN ghar se hi. Meri beti Journalist hai. Hindustan Times ke saath hai.Bbeta abhi 12th maiN hai.

SDC se judna bhi bada achcha raha. MaiN apni shayri ko saamne laane ke liye platforms talaaash kar raha tha. Kaam ki masroofiyat zyada thhi. Computer par baithe-baithe bas ek din SDC mil gaya aur maine register kar lya. Usske baad se ab tak ye safar jaari hai.

Mere parivaar ka koi member SDC se nahi juda hai dostoN. Meri beti likhti hai par wo English maiN likhti hai.

Filhaan yahaN ijazat diijiye. Agle sawaaloN ke jawaab lekar jald haazir hota huuN.

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Praveen ji, aapke bare mein jaan kar accha lga, ham chahte hai ki aap apne parents ke bare mein bhi kuch batayeN aur apne bhai-behno ke bare mein bhi kuch batayeN.

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Praveen ji, aapke bare mein jaan kar accha lga, ham chahte hai ki aap apne parents ke bare mein bhi kuch batayeN aur apne bhai-behno ke bare mein bhi kuch batayeN.

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Aziiz dosto

Aapne jaanna chaha hai mere parents aur bhai-bahan ke baare meiN.

Dosto mere mata-pita 2012-13 mein inteqaal farma gaye. Nov12 meiN pehle Papa aur Jan13 meiN Mummy. Aur achanak humara parivaar tanha reh gaya. BadoN ka saaya sar se Uthh gaya.

Rahi baat baaqi logoN ki to mere 2 bhai aur aur ek behan haiN. Behan sabse chhoti hai aur Jaipur mein rehti hai apne parivaar ke saath.

Mujhse chhota bhai Gwalior mein hai aur wahaN Judicial Registrar hai. Unse chhote bhai Jaipur meiN lawyer haiN.

To ye thhi parivaar ki jaankari. Ab jald hi Hamdam sahab ke sawaloN par aaoNga.

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Praveen ji namaskar

Yun to aapse baat joti rehti jai par di ne aapko yaha laakar shaayad aur qareeb aane ka mauka de diya ho jaise. Sanjay ji ne kaafi dilchasp sawaal pooche hai aur aapke hawaaon ka intezaar rahegaa.

Ek sawaal meri taraf se bhi add kar raha hoon aapki list mein:

1. Aap ek aisi field se taalukaat rakhte hai jaha aap apne passion ko follow kar rahe hai ek tarah se. Kya aapko lagta hai ki jo log aisa nahi kar paate aur shayri mehez ek shauq ke taur par karte hai vo itne pukhta shayar nahi ho sakte? Aapka tajurba aur rai jaanna chahunga yaha par...



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Aziiz dosto

Aapne jaanna chaha hai mere parents aur bhai-bahan ke baare meiN.

Dosto mere mata-pita 2012-13 mein inteqaal farma gaye. Nov12 meiN pehle Papa aur Jan13 meiN Mummy. Aur achanak humara parivaar tanha reh gaya. BadoN ka saaya sar se Uthh gaya.

Rahi baat baaqi logoN ki to mere 2 bhai aur aur ek behan haiN. Behan sabse chhoti hai aur Jaipur mein rehti hai apne parivaar ke saath.

Mujhse chhota bhai Gwalior mein hai aur wahaN Judicial Registrar hai. Unse chhote bhai Jaipur meiN lawyer haiN.

To ye thhi parivaar ki jaankari. Ab jald hi Hamdam sahab ke sawaloN par aaoNga.

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Praveen ji...aapki family ke bare meiN jaan kar accha lga.

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1. aapka bachpan Jaipur meiN beeta hai...to hame jaipur se judi koi aisi baat batayeN jo aapko reh reh kar Jaipur ki yaad dilati hai aaj bhi.

2. aap school meiN kaise student thy ? padaku ya shararti agar padaku thy to padai se judii koi khaas baat batayeN aur agar shararti thy to koi khaas shararat school time ki hamse share kijiye


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baht acchaa lag rahaa hai praveen ji aapko padhnaa.... aur bahut khushi ki baat hai ke ek baar fir aap ham sab ke beeech apni SDC me maujood hain......
mujhe khushi hai ke aap life ko itnaa positively lete hain, asaa aapki baatn padh kar mujhe prateet hotaa hai.....

aapse chand sawaalaata mian bhi karnaa chahungaa....

1) aapki kyaa raay hai ke aaj insaan ko insaan nahi bhaate..

2) kyuun aaj itnaa busy ho kar bhi ham sab bahut akele hain..

3) kyaa technology ham insaano ke liye faaydemand hai ya nuksaan..

4) agar shaayar na hote to kyaa hote...

5) shaayri dil se hotee hai ya dimaag se..

6) ek acche shaayar me kya kya khoobiyaan honi chaiye.....

7) chandd lines "SDC aapki nazar me"

filhaal itne hi swaal yaad aa rahe hain.. aage fir se haazir hota hoon.....


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Praveen ji .. khushamdeed interview meiN

Bada achcha lag raha hai ki sdc ki purani shaksiyatoN se roobaru hone ka mauka mil raha hai , aur hum jaise log jo 2/3 saal se jure haiN aap logon se
purane dino ka haal jaan payeinge .

1. Kehte haiN haiN purance zamane ki sdc bahut vibrant hua karti thi ..
apke hisab se iski kya wajah hai ?

Kya tab aur medium of expressions nahiN hote the , jaise ki facebook etc
jinke karan log sirf yahin aya kere the.

Ye phir waqt ke chalte ab bahut si sites bun gayee shayri ki aur log idhar udhar chale gaye ..

2. Aaj ke daur meiN bahut kem log dikhte haiN yahan. pehle zyada dedication thi logon meiN aur Kya ab shayri ka jazba kum ho gaya hai nayi peeri meiN

3. Purance zamane ki shayri aur aaj ki shayri meiN kya farq mehsoos kerte haiN.

Sanjay Sehgal ( Hamdam)
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Bade kathin sawaal haiN aapke. Aur sahi sawaal bhi kiye haiN aapne. Sach poochha jaaye to unke jawaaboN se main aapko kitna mutmain kar paaoNga ye bhi dekhne waali baat hogi. Khair ye sawaal SDC ka purana member hone ke naate mere liye bohat aham haiN aur iss silsile ke dauran hum sab milkar iss par apne tassurat rakheNge.

1 Jee haan aapne sahi suna ke SDC pehle ek bohat vibrant jagah thi. Aur ye hamari Khushqismati rahi hai ke yahaN Sarwar Raz, Dashmesh Feroz sahab jaise behtareen shayar tashreef laaya karte they. Hamen guide kiya karte they aur apni shayri bataur-e-misaal hamare saamne rakha karte they. UnheiN padh kar sabhi log achcha likhne aur kehne ke liye inspire hua karte thehy. Aur yahaN ka mahole bada shayraana hua karta tha. Ab wo log yahaN nahiiN aate shayad logoN ka interest kum hua aur sab apni-apni zindagi meiN masroof ho gaye. MaiN khud yahaN roz nazar aata thha lekin giraft-e-rozgaar ne mujhe yahaN se almost ghayab kar diya tha. Ab ussi jazbe ke saath lauta huuN. DostoN ka saath raha to insha allah SDC waisa hi banega phir.

Aur bhi senior aur purane membaran yahaN maujood haiN. MaiN chahuuNga ke wo bhi issmeiN apne tassurat rakheN.

Facebook waghairah aaana to shayroN ke liye mere Khayal se achcha hi hua hai. LogoN ko naye naye platform mil rahe haiN.

2 NahiN Sanjay Bhai nayee peedhi meiN shayri ka jazba kum to nahiiN hua hai par nayee peedhi meiN shayri chun ne waale log kum ho rahe haiN. MaiN aise yuva shayroN se mila huuN jo ghazab ka sochte aur likhte haiN. Ek shayar haiN Vipul Kumar aap Youtube par search karke unheiN suniye to aapko apne sawaal ka jawaab aur achche se mil jayega. Unki umr mahaz 23 baras hai. Rahi baat shayri ki to aap hi bataiye aajkal kahaN nikalte haiN GhazloN ke naye album? LogoN ki shayri meiN bhi dilchaspi kum ho rahi hai. Par aisa bilkul na samjheN ke ke shayri aur shayar khatm ho rahe haiN. Wo to raheN ge, jab tak jahaN rahega.

3 Pehele aur ab meiN farq ye hai ke zaban aur lehja pehle se simple hote jaa raha haiN. Ye to har daur ki kahani hai. Ghalib aur Meer jis lehje aur zaban meiN likhte thhey ussse juda Sahir aur Firaq jaise shayar rahe. Shayri meiN soch aur kHayalaat bho bohat aham hote haiN. Khushi ki baat hai ke nayee peedhi naye soch aur naye Khayalaat lekar aa rahi hai. Rahat Indori, Munavvar Ran, Bashir Badr, Gilzar, Javed Akhtar aur Dushaynt kumar isski misaal haiN. To meri nazar maiN farq zabaan aur lehje ka hai. Khayalaat ka nahiN.

Ummed hai ke kissi hudd tak meiN aapko mutmain kar paaya. Agar ab bhi koi baat hai to farma diijiyega. Doosre membaraN se bhi guzarish hai ki khul kar apne Khayalaat rakheN. Akhir sawaal shayri aur SDC ka hai.


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Bade kathin sawaal haiN aapke. Aur sahi sawaal bhi kiye haiN aapne. Sach poochha jaaye to unke jawaaboN se main aapko kitna mutmain kar paaoNga ye bhi dekhne waali baat hogi. Khair ye sawaal SDC ka purana member hone ke naate mere liye bohat aham haiN aur iss silsile ke dauran hum sab milkar iss par apne tassurat rakheNge.

1 Jee haan aapne sahi suna ke SDC pehle ek bohat vibrant jagah thi. Aur ye hamari Khushqismati rahi hai ke yahaN Sarwar Raz, Dashmesh Feroz sahab jaise behtareen shayar tashreef laaya karte they. Hamen guide kiya karte they aur apni shayri bataur-e-misaal hamare saamne rakha karte they. UnheiN padh kar sabhi log achcha likhne aur kehne ke liye inspire hua karte thehy. Aur yahaN ka mahole bada shayraana hua karta tha. Ab wo log yahaN nahiiN aate shayad logoN ka interest kum hua aur sab apni-apni zindagi meiN masroof ho gaye. MaiN khud yahaN roz nazar aata thha lekin giraft-e-rozgaar ne mujhe yahaN se almost ghayab kar diya tha. Ab ussi jazbe ke saath lauta huuN. DostoN ka saath raha to insha allah SDC waisa hi banega phir.

Aur bhi senior aur purane membaran yahaN maujood haiN. MaiN chahuuNga ke wo bhi issmeiN apne tassurat rakheN.

Facebook waghairah aaana to shayroN ke liye mere Khayal se achcha hi hua hai. LogoN ko naye naye platform mil rahe haiN.

2 NahiN Sanjay Bhai nayee peedhi meiN shayri ka jazba kum to nahiiN hua hai par nayee peedhi meiN shayri chun ne waale log kum ho rahe haiN. MaiN aise yuva shayroN se mila huuN jo ghazab ka sochte aur likhte haiN. Ek shayar haiN Vipul Kumar aap Youtube par search karke unheiN suniye to aapko apne sawaal ka jawaab aur achche se mil jayega. Unki umr mahaz 23 baras hai. Rahi baat shayri ki to aap hi bataiye aajkal kahaN nikalte haiN GhazloN ke naye album? LogoN ki shayri meiN bhi dilchaspi kum ho rahi hai. Par aisa bilkul na samjheN ke ke shayri aur shayar khatm ho rahe haiN. Wo to raheN ge, jab tak jahaN rahega.

3 Pehele aur ab meiN farq ye hai ke zaban aur lehja pehle se simple hote jaa raha haiN. Ye to har daur ki kahani hai. Ghalib aur Meer jis lehje aur zaban meiN likhte thhey ussse juda Sahir aur Firaq jaise shayar rahe. Shayri meiN soch aur kHayalaat bho bohat aham hote haiN. Khushi ki baat hai ke nayee peedhi naye soch aur naye Khayalaat lekar aa rahi hai. Rahat Indori, Munavvar Ran, Bashir Badr, Gilzar, Javed Akhtar aur Dushaynt kumar isski misaal haiN. To meri nazar maiN farq zabaan aur lehje ka hai. Khayalaat ka nahiN.

Ummed hai ke kissi hudd tak meiN aapko mutmain kar paaya. Agar ab bhi koi baat hai to farma diijiyega. Doosre membaraN se bhi guzarish hai ki khul kar apne Khayalaat rakheN. Akhir sawaal shayri aur SDC ka hai.


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Praveen ji, jo bhi senior member jo aaj-kal sdc par kisi bhi vajha se nahi aa rhe, agar aise members aapke contact meiN haiN to unse bhi SDC par vapis aane ko kahiye na...taaki ham bhi wahi purana kuloos dekh sakeN SDC par.



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Are sach me 10 saal baad bhi main inhe nahi jaanta hun jyada. Bahut hi behtareen choice hai, mubaraq ho mods team.


Praveen saahib ab mere sawaal v le lijiye aap:

1)- Khud ki sabsa pasandeeda naz ya ghazal share karen.

2)- Aapka sabse pasandeeda shayar kaun hai aur kyun...??

3)- Ghazal kya hai aapke liye...??

4)- Koi ik hidden desire bataiye apna, jise abhi tak achieve na kar paayen hon...

Waise ahcha lag raha hai saahib aapke bare me aur jyada jaan kar. Aur main sanjay ji ke sawaalon ka aap kya jawaab denge isme v interested hooN...



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lo, ab aaya ooNth pahaaRh ke neeche

Praveen bhai, khush-am-ded

yahaaN aise do-chaar hi aise membraan haiN jinke liye mere zehan meiN kuch sawaal haiN, aap un meiN se ek haiN

ab, waqt agar ijaazat dega "to" maiN apne sawaalaat aapke shubh charnoN meiN zaroor haazir haazir karooNga




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Bade kathin sawaal haiN aapke. Aur sahi sawaal bhi kiye haiN aapne. Sach poochha jaaye to unke jawaaboN se main aapko kitna mutmain kar paaoNga ye bhi dekhne waali baat hogi. Khair ye sawaal SDC ka purana member hone ke naate mere liye bohat aham haiN aur iss silsile ke dauran hum sab milkar iss par apne tassurat rakheNge.

1 Jee haan aapne sahi suna ke SDC pehle ek bohat vibrant jagah thi. Aur ye hamari Khushqismati rahi hai ke yahaN Sarwar Raz, Dashmesh Feroz sahab jaise behtareen shayar tashreef laaya karte they. Hamen guide kiya karte they aur apni shayri bataur-e-misaal hamare saamne rakha karte they. UnheiN padh kar sabhi log achcha likhne aur kehne ke liye inspire hua karte thehy. Aur yahaN ka mahole bada shayraana hua karta tha. Ab wo log yahaN nahiiN aate shayad logoN ka interest kum hua aur sab apni-apni zindagi meiN masroof ho gaye. MaiN khud yahaN roz nazar aata thha lekin giraft-e-rozgaar ne mujhe yahaN se almost ghayab kar diya tha. Ab ussi jazbe ke saath lauta huuN. DostoN ka saath raha to insha allah SDC waisa hi banega phir.

Aur bhi senior aur purane membaran yahaN maujood haiN. MaiN chahuuNga ke wo bhi issmeiN apne tassurat rakheN.

Facebook waghairah aaana to shayroN ke liye mere Khayal se achcha hi hua hai. LogoN ko naye naye platform mil rahe haiN.

2 NahiN Sanjay Bhai nayee peedhi meiN shayri ka jazba kum to nahiiN hua hai par nayee peedhi meiN shayri chun ne waale log kum ho rahe haiN. MaiN aise yuva shayroN se mila huuN jo ghazab ka sochte aur likhte haiN. Ek shayar haiN Vipul Kumar aap Youtube par search karke unheiN suniye to aapko apne sawaal ka jawaab aur achche se mil jayega. Unki umr mahaz 23 baras hai. Rahi baat shayri ki to aap hi bataiye aajkal kahaN nikalte haiN GhazloN ke naye album? LogoN ki shayri meiN bhi dilchaspi kum ho rahi hai. Par aisa bilkul na samjheN ke ke shayri aur shayar khatm ho rahe haiN. Wo to raheN ge, jab tak jahaN rahega.

3 Pehele aur ab meiN farq ye hai ke zaban aur lehja pehle se simple hote jaa raha haiN. Ye to har daur ki kahani hai. Ghalib aur Meer jis lehje aur zaban meiN likhte thhey ussse juda Sahir aur Firaq jaise shayar rahe. Shayri meiN soch aur kHayalaat bho bohat aham hote haiN. Khushi ki baat hai ke nayee peedhi naye soch aur naye Khayalaat lekar aa rahi hai. Rahat Indori, Munavvar Ran, Bashir Badr, Gilzar, Javed Akhtar aur Dushaynt kumar isski misaal haiN. To meri nazar maiN farq zabaan aur lehje ka hai. Khayalaat ka nahiN.

Ummed hai ke kissi hudd tak meiN aapko mutmain kar paaya. Agar ab bhi koi baat hai to farma diijiyega. Doosre membaraN se bhi guzarish hai ki khul kar apne Khayalaat rakheN. Akhir sawaal shayri aur SDC ka hai.


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Praveen ji....kahan busy ho gye hai aap ? ham to sawaal lekar baithe hai, ki aap kab aakar pehle wale sawaaloN ka jawaab deN, to hame naye sawaal kareN

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Main YahinN huN - 6th August 2015, 08:15 PM

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Yun to aapse baat joti rehti jai par di ne aapko yaha laakar shaayad aur qareeb aane ka mauka de diya ho jaise. Sanjay ji ne kaafi dilchasp sawaal pooche hai aur aapke hawaaon ka intezaar rahegaa.

Ek sawaal meri taraf se bhi add kar raha hoon aapki list mein:

1. Aap ek aisi field se taalukaat rakhte hai jaha aap apne passion ko follow kar rahe hai ek tarah se. Kya aapko lagta hai ki jo log aisa nahi kar paate aur shayri mehez ek shauq ke taur par karte hai vo itne pukhta shayar nahi ho sakte? Aapka tajurba aur rai jaanna chahunga yaha par...

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NahiiN mujhe aisa nahiiN lagta ke log khud ko ek shayar ke taur par aage nahin le jaa sakte. Isske junoon ko aap kis hudd tak qayam rakhte haiN ye iss baat par nirbhar karta hai. Aur aksar log isse peechhe chhod kar apni zindagi ki priorities meiN ulajh jaate haiN. Aur phir shayri mahaz aik shauq bankar reh jaati hai.

Mast bhai likhna mere liye shuruaat se junoon raha hai. MaiN to bataur ek shayar hi khud ko aage le jaana chahta thha. Lekin jab maiN Delhi aaya to mujhe Advertising Writer ke taur par ek company meiN mauqa mila. Wahan maine apni writing ke commercial pehlu ko pursue kiya. Afsos ye raha ke shayri kahiN peechhe chhoot gayi. Ab maiN ye shiddat se mehsoos karta huuN ke mujhe apni shayri ke saath insaaf karna chaahiye isliye maiN job chhod kar iss koshish meiN laga huuN. Par ye baat hamesha rahi ke job ke duraan bhi shayri jaari rahi. Wo choot jaati to shayad mera koi wajood hi nahiiN reh jaata.

Ummed karta huuN ke maiN aapko mutmain kar paya huuN. Agar koi kasar reh gayi ho ya koi aur baat aapke zehn meiN hai to bila shaq hukm kareN.

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Praveen ji

1. aapka bachpan Jaipur meiN beeta hai...to hame jaipur se judi koi aisi baat batayeN jo aapko reh reh kar Jaipur ki yaad dilati hai aaj bhi.

2. aap school meiN kaise student thy ? padaku ya shararti agar padaku thy to padai se judii koi khaas baat batayeN aur agar shararti thy to koi khaas shararat school time ki hamse share kijiye
Aadab Sunita ji

Aapne Jaipur se judi baat poochi hai. To maiN aapko bataauN ke maiN Rajasthani Khaane ka bada shauq rakhta huN. Jaise Daal-baati, Baajre ki roti, gatte ki sabzi. Aur har saal Nov meiN yahaN jo trade-fare lagta hai usmeiN hum log Rajasthan pavillion jaakar Rajasthani thhali khate haiN khaas kar. Aur pehla niwala khaate hi maiN jaise Jaipur ki galiyoN meiN pahuNch jaata huuN. Ye baat har saal mere dil meiN jaipur ko taaza rakhti hai.

MaiN shararti student to bilkul nahiiN tha. HaaN bohat zyada padhaku bhi nahiiN tha. Cricket khelne ke liye hamesha waqt nikal leta thha.

Ummed hai aapko bhi maine mutmain kiya hoga. Kuchh aur baat ho to zaroor bataiye.

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Ab aagey - 6th August 2015, 09:16 PM

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Are sach me 10 saal baad bhi main inhe nahi jaanta hun jyada. Bahut hi behtareen choice hai, mubaraq ho mods team.


Praveen saahib ab mere sawaal v le lijiye aap:

1)- Khud ki sabsa pasandeeda naz ya ghazal share karen.

2)- Aapka sabse pasandeeda shayar kaun hai aur kyun...??

3)- Ghazal kya hai aapke liye...??

4)- Koi ik hidden desire bataiye apna, jise abhi tak achieve na kar paayen hon...

Waise ahcha lag raha hai saahib aapke bare me aur jyada jaan kar. Aur main sanjay ji ke sawaalon ka aap kya jawaab denge isme v interested hooN...
Taish Bhai

Aapke sawaal bade dilchasp haiN aur mushkil bhi. KyuNke maine itne shayroN ki nafees shayri ko padha aur suna hai ke umeiN se kissi eka ka inteKhaab kar paana thoda mushkil hoga. Phir bhi koshish karuuN ga ke aapko mutmain kar sakuuN.

1. Meri pasandeeda gazal ya nazm - meri pasandeeda nazm Sahir Ludhiyanvi ki Nazm Taaj Mahal hai. Aur Faiz sahab ki nazm , "mujhse pehli si muhobbat mere mehboob na maaNg. Aur Sahir sahab ki filmi nazm "chalo ik baar phir se..." mujhe bohat pasand hai.

2. Mere pasandeeda shayar Sahir Ludhiyanvi sahab haiN. Aur issliye ke unhoNne aam istemaal ki zabaan meiN shayri ki aur kya Khoob shayri ki. Saath hi film industry se bhi wo jude rahe aaur kayee yaadgaar naghme unhone hameN diye. Unka kamaal ye thha ke filmi writing meiN bhi unhoNne apni shayri ke meyar ko neecha nahiiN hone diya. Aur har tarah ke gaane likhe. Lekin shayri ka meyaar wahi aaala. Aur aapko batata chaluuN ke wo mere ideal shayar haiN. MaiN unheiN padh kar hamesha achcha mehsoos karta huuN. Aur inspire hota huuN. Unki shyari meiN jo rawaani hai uska maiN qayal huuN.

3. Taish Bhai Ghazal mere liye zindagi hai. Ghazal meiN falsafa hai, roomaniyat hai, dard hai aur ek alag qism ki kashish hai, Ghazal ek nihayat khoobsoorat ehsaas hai.

4. Bohat chhoti si hidden desire hai meri. Aur wo ye ki maiN kuchh aisa kar sakuuN ke achcha likhne aur kehne waaloN ko shayri chhod kar apni priorities badalni na padeN. MaiN kuchh aisa karuN ke unko unke junooN ka peecha karne meiN unke kaam aa sakuuN. Zindagi ke safar meiN meri shayri secondary ho gayi thhi isska mujhe kabhi-kabhi bada malal hota hai. MaiN chahta huuN ke aise kisi ko bhi mehsoos na ho.

Aur jahaN tak Vipul ki baat hai to Taish Bhai wo to bohat aage jaayega. Urdu zabaan par iss umr meiN uski pakad waqaai qaabil-e-tareef hai. Ye aur bhi khushi ki baat hai ke wo aapka dost hai.

Ummed hai aapko apne sawaaloN ke jawaboN se mutmaiN honge. Aapke jawaab ka intezaar karuN ga.

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baht acchaa lag rahaa hai praveen ji aapko padhnaa.... aur bahut khushi ki baat hai ke ek baar fir aap ham sab ke beeech apni SDC me maujood hain......
mujhe khushi hai ke aap life ko itnaa positively lete hain, asaa aapki baatn padh kar mujhe prateet hotaa hai.....

aapse chand sawaalaata mian bhi karnaa chahungaa....

1) aapki kyaa raay hai ke aaj insaan ko insaan nahi bhaate..

2) kyuun aaj itnaa busy ho kar bhi ham sab bahut akele hain..

3) kyaa technology ham insaano ke liye faaydemand hai ya nuksaan..

4) agar shaayar na hote to kyaa hote...

5) shaayri dil se hotee hai ya dimaag se..

6) ek acche shaayar me kya kya khoobiyaan honi chaiye.....

7) chandd lines "SDC aapki nazar me"

filhaal itne hi swaal yaad aa rahe hain.. aage fir se haazir hota hoon.....
Janab Shaad Sahab

Aapke sawaaloN ke jawaab lekar haazir huuN ummeed karta huuN ke aap unse mutmaiN honge.

1. Dekhiye aajkal iss duniya maiN haivaaniyat, matlab parasti, Khudgarzi, haavi hoti jaa rahi hai. Insaaniyat se insaan dooar hota jaa raha hai, kehne ko insaan hai. Aaj kal to inssaniyat meiN yaqeen karne waaloN se log darte haiN ke koi alien to nahiN. Issi taasur par maine ek sher kaha thha ek ghazal mein -

"Aisi haivaanoN ki iss duniya meiN.
Aadmi ban ke darataa hai koi"

2. Hum sab apne apne ivory towers mein rehte haiN. Hum apne stress aur pressures se itne bandh gaye haiN ke apne aaspaas ki duniya se hamara koi vaata hi nahiiN reh gaya hai jaise. Facebook par hamare itne dost hote haiN par sahi manoN meiN kitne? Baqual Nida faazli sahab ke -

"Har taraf har jagah beshumaar aadmi
Phir bhi tanhaaiyoN ka shikaar aadmi"

3. Technology ko aap kis tarah apni zindagi se jodte haiN ussse tai hota hai ke faaydemand hai ya nuqsaandeh. Aap uske ghulam na baneN yahi koshish rehni chahiye.

4. Agar shayar na hota to shayad maiN kuchh na hota. Shayad kisi college meiN lecturer hota.

5. Shayri to dilse hoti hai shaad sahab. Dil meiN khayaloN ke toofaan nahiN aayeNge to ashaar bhi bah kar kinaare par nahiiN aayeNge.

6. Ek achche shayar mein 2 badi khhoobiyaN hoti haiN mere hisaab se. Pehli ye ke uska observation achcha hota hai. Apne aaspas hone waali batoN se mutassir hota hai. Doosri ye ke wo wo achche khayaloN ka maalik ho. Yani obsevation ya taassurat ko wo achche khayaloN waale ashaar meiN dhaal sake.

7. SDC meri nazar mera apna ghar hai. JahaN mujhe khuloos milta hai apanpan milta aur jahaN mere khayalaat ki qadr karne waale haiN. Meri koshish hai ke SDC phir se wahi pehle sa ghar bane jisse maiN shuru maiN juda tha. Aur insha allah aisa hoga. Zaruur.

Ummeed hai ye jawaab kaafi rahe hoN ge. Aur Deegar sawaalat hoN to hukm kiijiyega.

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Hmmmm is sasde aur sadhe hie lehje me jawaabon ka shukriya saahib. Fir haazir hunga kuch aur sawalon ke saath after the break...



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Aapke sawaaloN ke jawaab lekar haazir huuN ummeed karta huuN ke aap unse mutmaiN honge.

1. Dekhiye aajkal iss duniya maiN haivaaniyat, matlab parasti, Khudgarzi, haavi hoti jaa rahi hai. Insaaniyat se insaan dooar hota jaa raha hai, kehne ko insaan hai. Aaj kal to inssaniyat meiN yaqeen karne waaloN se log darte haiN ke koi alien to nahiN. Issi taasur par maine ek sher kaha thha ek ghazal mein -

"Aisi haivaanoN ki iss duniya meiN.
Aadmi ban ke darataa hai koi"

2. Hum sab apne apne ivory towers mein rehte haiN. Hum apne stress aur pressures se itne bandh gaye haiN ke apne aaspaas ki duniya se hamara koi vaata hi nahiiN reh gaya hai jaise. Facebook par hamare itne dost hote haiN par sahi manoN meiN kitne? Baqual Nida faazli sahab ke -

"Har taraf har jagah beshumaar aadmi
Phir bhi tanhaaiyoN ka shikaar aadmi"

3. Technology ko aap kis tarah apni zindagi se jodte haiN ussse tai hota hai ke faaydemand hai ya nuqsaandeh. Aap uske ghulam na baneN yahi koshish rehni chahiye.

4. Agar shayar na hota to shayad maiN kuchh na hota. Shayad kisi college meiN lecturer hota.

5. Shayri to dilse hoti hai shaad sahab. Dil meiN khayaloN ke toofaan nahiN aayeNge to ashaar bhi bah kar kinaare par nahiiN aayeNge.

6. Ek achche shayar mein 2 badi khhoobiyaN hoti haiN mere hisaab se. Pehli ye ke uska observation achcha hota hai. Apne aaspas hone waali batoN se mutassir hota hai. Doosri ye ke wo wo achche khayaloN ka maalik ho. Yani obsevation ya taassurat ko wo achche khayaloN waale ashaar meiN dhaal sake.

7. SDC meri nazar mera apna ghar hai. JahaN mujhe khuloos milta hai apanpan milta aur jahaN mere khayalaat ki qadr karne waale haiN. Meri koshish hai ke SDC phir se wahi pehle sa ghar bane jisse maiN shuru maiN juda tha. Aur insha allah aisa hoga. Zaruur.

Ummeed hai ye jawaab kaafi rahe hoN ge. Aur Deegar sawaalat hoN to hukm kiijiyega.

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behad mashkoor hoon praveen saahab jo aapne adnaa se swaalat ke liye apnaa waqt diyaa aur hampe inaayat farmaai...

yaqeen maniye apke jawabon ko padh kar main behad mutaassir aur behad zyaada mutmaeen huaa hoon.... aapka ek ek lafz jaise merii zubaan se bayaan ho rahe hon aur jaise dil ko yahii sunne ki hi tamannaa rahi ho.....

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Praveen ji.....behad khushi ho rahi hai..mujhe aapko padhkar..sabhi doston ke sawalon ke jawaab aapne jis ghahrai aur saralta se diye hain...bahut kuch janne ko mil raha hai aapke baare me......

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Praveen bhaiyaa

Pranaam

Bahot achchha lag rahaa hai aapke jawaab padh kar.. aapke baare mein jaan kar..

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1. SDC par aapke pasandida shayar kauN hai ? unke naam bhi mention kijiye

2. aapki pasannd / na-pasand kya hai ?

3. aapke daur ke aur aaj ke daur ke bacchon meiN kya fark mesoos karte hai aap ?

4. kya aapki dharam-patni ji bhi shuank rakhti hai shayri ka ?



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Praveen ji

1. SDC par aapke pasandida shayar kauN hai ? unke naam bhi mention kijiye

2. aapki pasannd / na-pasand kya hai ?

3. aapke daur ke aur aaj ke daur ke bacchon meiN kya fark mesoos karte hai aap ?

4. kya aapki dharam-patni ji bhi shuank rakhti hai shayri ka ?

Aadab Sunita ji

1.Ye bada pechidah sawaal kiya hai aapne Sunita ji.
SDC par mere pasandida shayar bohat haiN aur kisi ek ka naam lena mere hisaab se sahi nahiiN hoga. Purane dostoN meiN bhi bohat achcha likhne waale haiN aur abhi haal hi meiN jinko maine padha hai wo log bohat achcha likhte haiN.

2. Pasand napasand se aapki kya muraad hai? Dar asl iska daayra kaafi bada hai. Agar aap khusuusan batayeNgi to jawaab dena mere liye aasan hoga. Waise Shayri mein maiN bahr-band kalam zyada pasand karta huuN. Jo kalam bahr maiN hote haiN unmeiN ek qism ki rawaani hoti hai.

3. Dono duaroN ke bachchN meiN exposure ka farq hai Sunita ji. Humne jab aankh kholi to hamre saamne siwaye radio ke kuchh na tha. Bachpan gaaoN meiN beeta hai to wahaN sarkari van aati thi aur kapde ke parde par cinema dikhati thi. Aajkal ke bachche Computer, internet aur mobile ke daur ke haiN. Mera beta jab 3 baras ka tha to wo computer par apni manchaahi file tak aasani se pahuNch jaata tha jabki usse padhna nahiiN aata tha. Aaj ke bachche humse zyada hoshiyaar aur aware haiN. Haan waqt ke saath wo shayad un baatoN ko zyada value nahiiN dete jinheiN hum diya karte thhe.

4. Ji meri patni ko shayri sunne aur padhne ka shauq hai. Wo khud bhi kabhi kabhi likhti haiN.

To ye rahe aapke jawab. Aur koi hoN to bataiyega.

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1.Ye bada pechidah sawaal kiya hai aapne Sunita ji.
SDC par mere pasandida shayar bohat haiN aur kisi ek ka naam lena mere hisaab se sahi nahiiN hoga. Purane dostoN meiN bhi bohat achcha likhne waale haiN aur abhi haal hi meiN jinko maine padha hai wo log bohat achcha likhte haiN.



4. Ji meri patni ko shayri sunne aur padhne ka shauq hai. Wo khud bhi kabhi kabhi likhti haiN.

To ye rahe aapke jawab. Aur koi hoN to bataiyega.

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Praveen ji, aapne mere pehle sawaal ka jawaab gol.mol karke diya hai main santusht nahi hu aapke jawaab se plssss jara tafseel se batayeN


accha lga jaan kar ki aapki dharam patni bhi shunk rakhti hai shayri ka...agar possible hai to unki koi aik rachna hamare saath share kijiye


aapki apni likhi hue poetry se koi 5 rachnaye jo aapko behad pasand hai, hamare saath share kijiye


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Praveen ji, aapne mere pehle sawaal ka jawaab gol.mol karke diya hai main santusht nahi hu aapke jawaab se plssss jara tafseel se batayeN


accha lga jaan kar ki aapki dharam patni bhi shunk rakhti hai shayri ka...agar possible hai to unki koi aik rachna hamare saath share kijiye


aapki apni likhi hue poetry se koi 5 rachnaye jo aapko behad pasand hai, hamare saath share kijiye
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Aap santusht nahiiN huiN isska bada afasos hai mujhe. Aap hi batayeN kya karuuN. Main un dinoN ki baat bata sakta huuN jab maiN yahaN bohat active tha. Us waqt aur aaj bhi mujhe maikash sahab ki shayri behuud pasand hai. Isske alava Feroz sahab, Sarwar Raz sahab ki shayri mujhe badi achchi lagti hai. Haal ke dinoN maiN SDC par maine abhi logoN ko padhna shuru kiya hai. To haaliya shayroN par koi raae banane se pehle maiN unheiN kaafi padh luuN tab kuchh kehne layaq banuuNga. Ummed hai ye jawaab aapko santusht kar paayega.

Dharm patni abhi share karne ke liye kuchh nahiiN de rahiiN. Kehti haiN ke waqt aane par zaroor share kareNgi khuud.

Aapne 5 ghazleN share karne ko kaha hai to maiN aapko batauN ke yahaN aur internet par log shayri chuura bhi lete haiN. MaiN khudd SDC par isska shikar ho chuka huuN. Ek pakistani mohtarma ne meri ek Ghazal chura kar uske gender badal kar SDC par hi post kar di. Sharabi bhai ne mujhe ye bataya. Usske baad bada ghamasaan huua. Baat ye saamne aayi ke wo bade bade shayroN ki ghazleN bhi apne naam se post kar rahi thiiN. Ye maine us waqt SDC par prove kiya. Warna meri Ghazal ke baare meiN unka kehna thha ke wo to unhoN ne 10th Std meiN hi likh di thi. Aakhir humeN un mohtarma ko ban karna pada. Mujhe thoda waqt dijiye Meri GhazloN ka collection jald hi publish hone waala hai. Usske baad maiN khulkar dostoN ke saath apni shayri share karuuNga. Iss baat ke liye ma'azrat chaahta huuN.

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Aap santusht nahiiN huiN isska bada afasos hai mujhe. Aap hi batayeN kya karuuN. Main un dinoN ki baat bata sakta huuN jab maiN yahaN bohat active tha. Us waqt aur aaj bhi mujhe maikash sahab ki shayri behuud pasand hai. Isske alava Feroz sahab, Sarwar Raz sahab ki shayri mujhe badi achchi lagti hai. Haal ke dinoN maiN SDC par maine abhi logoN ko padhna shuru kiya hai. To haaliya shayroN par koi raae banane se pehle maiN unheiN kaafi padh luuN tab kuchh kehne layaq banuuNga. Ummed hai ye jawaab aapko santusht kar paayega.

Dharm patni abhi share karne ke liye kuchh nahiiN de rahiiN. Kehti haiN ke waqt aane par zaroor share kareNgi khuud.

Aapne 5 ghazleN share karne ko kaha hai to maiN aapko batauN ke yahaN aur internet par log shayri chuura bhi lete haiN. MaiN khudd SDC par isska shikar ho chuka huuN. Ek pakistani mohtarma ne meri ek Ghazal chura kar uske gender badal kar SDC par hi post kar di. Sharabi bhai ne mujhe ye bataya. Usske baad bada ghamasaan huua. Baat ye saamne aayi ke wo bade bade shayroN ki ghazleN bhi apne naam se post kar rahi thiiN. Ye maine us waqt SDC par prove kiya. Warna meri Ghazal ke baare meiN unka kehna thha ke wo to unhoN ne 10th Std meiN hi likh di thi. Aakhir humeN un mohtarma ko ban karna pada. Mujhe thoda waqt dijiye Meri GhazloN ka collection jald hi publish hone waala hai. Usske baad maiN khulkar dostoN ke saath apni shayri share karuuNga. Iss baat ke liye ma'azrat chaahta huuN.

Aur koi baat ho to zaruur kahiya.

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Are poochne aaya tha sawaal aur vo to hadbadi mein reh hi gaya....Mera agla sawaal ye hai ki kabhi aapke saamne ye situation aayi hai ki aap ghazal likhne baithe ho aur bahut sochne ke baad bhi baat ban nahi rahi ho, ghazal mein wah waali baat nahi aa rahi ho, aise mein aap kya karte hai?

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Are poochne aaya tha sawaal aur vo to hadbadi mein reh hi gaya....Mera agla sawaal ye hai ki kabhi aapke saamne ye situation aayi hai ki aap ghazal likhne baithe ho aur bahut sochne ke baad bhi baat ban nahi rahi ho, ghazal mein wah waali baat nahi aa rahi ho, aise mein aap kya karte hai?

Dheere dheere hum aapke saare raaz khulwaane waale hai.

Bada achcha sawaal kiya hai anu ji...being a beginner mujhe bhi is sawaal ke jawaab ka intzaar hai praveen ji......

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Bade kathin sawaal haiN aapke. Aur sahi sawaal bhi kiye haiN aapne. Sach poochha jaaye to unke jawaaboN se main aapko kitna mutmain kar paaoNga ye bhi dekhne waali baat hogi. Khair ye sawaal SDC ka purana member hone ke naate mere liye bohat aham haiN aur iss silsile ke dauran hum sab milkar iss par apne tassurat rakheNge.

1 Jee haan aapne sahi suna ke SDC pehle ek bohat vibrant jagah thi. Aur ye hamari Khushqismati rahi hai ke yahaN Sarwar Raz, Dashmesh Feroz sahab jaise behtareen shayar tashreef laaya karte they. Hamen guide kiya karte they aur apni shayri bataur-e-misaal hamare saamne rakha karte they. UnheiN padh kar sabhi log achcha likhne aur kehne ke liye inspire hua karte thehy. Aur yahaN ka mahole bada shayraana hua karta tha. Ab wo log yahaN nahiiN aate shayad logoN ka interest kum hua aur sab apni-apni zindagi meiN masroof ho gaye. MaiN khud yahaN roz nazar aata thha lekin giraft-e-rozgaar ne mujhe yahaN se almost ghayab kar diya tha. Ab ussi jazbe ke saath lauta huuN. DostoN ka saath raha to insha allah SDC waisa hi banega phir.

Aur bhi senior aur purane membaran yahaN maujood haiN. MaiN chahuuNga ke wo bhi issmeiN apne tassurat rakheN.

Facebook waghairah aaana to shayroN ke liye mere Khayal se achcha hi hua hai. LogoN ko naye naye platform mil rahe haiN.

2 NahiN Sanjay Bhai nayee peedhi meiN shayri ka jazba kum to nahiiN hua hai par nayee peedhi meiN shayri chun ne waale log kum ho rahe haiN. MaiN aise yuva shayroN se mila huuN jo ghazab ka sochte aur likhte haiN. Ek shayar haiN Vipul Kumar aap Youtube par search karke unheiN suniye to aapko apne sawaal ka jawaab aur achche se mil jayega. Unki umr mahaz 23 baras hai. Rahi baat shayri ki to aap hi bataiye aajkal kahaN nikalte haiN GhazloN ke naye album? LogoN ki shayri meiN bhi dilchaspi kum ho rahi hai. Par aisa bilkul na samjheN ke ke shayri aur shayar khatm ho rahe haiN. Wo to raheN ge, jab tak jahaN rahega.

3 Pehele aur ab meiN farq ye hai ke zaban aur lehja pehle se simple hote jaa raha haiN. Ye to har daur ki kahani hai. Ghalib aur Meer jis lehje aur zaban meiN likhte thhey ussse juda Sahir aur Firaq jaise shayar rahe. Shayri meiN soch aur kHayalaat bho bohat aham hote haiN. Khushi ki baat hai ke nayee peedhi naye soch aur naye Khayalaat lekar aa rahi hai. Rahat Indori, Munavvar Ran, Bashir Badr, Gilzar, Javed Akhtar aur Dushaynt kumar isski misaal haiN. To meri nazar maiN farq zabaan aur lehje ka hai. Khayalaat ka nahiN.

Ummed hai ke kissi hudd tak meiN aapko mutmain kar paaya. Agar ab bhi koi baat hai to farma diijiyega. Doosre membaraN se bhi guzarish hai ki khul kar apne Khayalaat rakheN. Akhir sawaal shayri aur SDC ka hai.


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Praveen ji ,
Shukriya jo aapne mere sawalon ka jawab baree tafseel se diya , aap ke jawab per ke achcha laga .

Mujhe SDC se jure approx 3 years ho jayenge , isse pehle main kabhi 10/15 saal pehle English meiN poetry kerta tha .. Yahan shuru meiN meiN tau smajh hi nahiN thi ki badishon meiN kaise likhna hai ..

Meri ek uljhan hai ...mujhe abhi behr meiN likhna nahiN aata ,
aur agar jor jabardasti kerta hun tau ander se nikle ehsaas bikher jaate hain.
Is karan kabhi kabhi man pareshan ho jata hai ..

Aap ke hisaab se mujhe kya kerna chahiye ki mere ehsaas bhi berkerar raheiN aur maiN behr ko bhi follow ker paaoN.

Yahan members se poochne per jawab milta hai ki Zidd sahib ka behr wala thread paro aur taktee ki practice karo shabdon ko torna seekho ?? etc
Per ye kerne per bhi mujhe confiedence nahiN aa raha behr seekhne ke liye.

Aap ki guidance aur sujhav ka mujhe intezar rahega..

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Sunita ji

Aap santusht nahiiN huiN isska bada afasos hai mujhe. Aap hi batayeN kya karuuN. Main un dinoN ki baat bata sakta huuN jab maiN yahaN bohat active tha. Us waqt aur aaj bhi mujhe maikash sahab ki shayri behuud pasand hai. Isske alava Feroz sahab, Sarwar Raz sahab ki shayri mujhe badi achchi lagti hai. Haal ke dinoN maiN SDC par maine abhi logoN ko padhna shuru kiya hai. To haaliya shayroN par koi raae banane se pehle maiN unheiN kaafi padh luuN tab kuchh kehne layaq banuuNga. Ummed hai ye jawaab aapko santusht kar paayega.

Dharm patni abhi share karne ke liye kuchh nahiiN de rahiiN. Kehti haiN ke waqt aane par zaroor share kareNgi khuud.

Aapne 5 ghazleN share karne ko kaha hai to maiN aapko batauN ke yahaN aur internet par log shayri chuura bhi lete haiN. MaiN khudd SDC par isska shikar ho chuka huuN. Ek pakistani mohtarma ne meri ek Ghazal chura kar uske gender badal kar SDC par hi post kar di. Sharabi bhai ne mujhe ye bataya. Usske baad bada ghamasaan huua. Baat ye saamne aayi ke wo bade bade shayroN ki ghazleN bhi apne naam se post kar rahi thiiN. Ye maine us waqt SDC par prove kiya. Warna meri Ghazal ke baare meiN unka kehna thha ke wo to unhoN ne 10th Std meiN hi likh di thi. Aakhir humeN un mohtarma ko ban karna pada. Mujhe thoda waqt dijiye Meri GhazloN ka collection jald hi publish hone waala hai. Usske baad maiN khulkar dostoN ke saath apni shayri share karuuNga. Iss baat ke liye ma'azrat chaahta huuN.

Aur koi baat ho to zaruur kahiya.

Khaaksaar
Praveen

ji abhi maiN aapke dono jawaaboN se santusht hu

hame intejaar rhega jab aapki book publish hokar hamare haathoN meiN hogi


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.....Sunita Thakur.....

यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...


   
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