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Sazaa - 27th October 2004, 12:58 AM

Sazaa

*Mein ek dehekte sholey ko lekar
apne in honthon ko jalaa loungi.
Aur apne jism ke har ek wo jagah
jahan par tere haanth pare the,
ounki bhi yahi sazaa hongi.
Kiounki
Mujhe tere oungliyon ke nishaanon
ko mitaane ki tamanna hai.*


Hum tum ko chahte hein,
Ye sab jaante hein…
Tum ko kitna chahte hein,
Sirf Rab jaante hein


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27th October 2004, 11:18 AM

Hi Amisha Ji,

God, itni khaufnak sazaa woh bhi kisi aur ke jurm ki khud ko??

Khud ko u na de to sazaa,
Akeli tu gunahgaar to nahi,
Jalaana hi hai to usse jala,
Jisne hai teri yeh halat ki.


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27th October 2004, 02:02 PM

Jo dil se utar gaya...samjho sab tarah se utar gaya....

Phir khudko sazaa kis baat ki....

Aapne bahut achchha likha hai...

llikhte rahi yooNhi...or khus rahiye.

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30th October 2004, 12:42 AM

Salim ji aur Chaand ji

Thanks so much for reading & appreciating.

Weisse Sazaa kavita ek ladki ke aatma ki cheekh
bhi ho sakti hai.A girl who has been sexually abused
by her close relative.(Meri ek saheli ka ek khaufnaak
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30th October 2004, 11:35 AM

Hi Amrita Ji,

Bohot afsos hua yeh sun kar. Humari duaein aapki us saheli ke saath hai. Lekin jaise ke maine kaha tha, kisi aur ki galti ki khud ko kyu de sazaa??? Jale to woh jale jis ne aapki saheli ki yeh haalat ki.


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30th October 2004, 03:01 PM


Mein ek dehekte sholey ko lekar
apne in honthon ko jalaa loungi.
Aur apne jism ke har ek wo jagah
jahan par tere haanth pare the,
ounki bhi yahi sazaa hongi.
Kiounki
Mujhe tere oungliyon ke nishaanon
ko mitaane ki tamanna hai.*


Hi Amrita!

Kaisi ho?

Well... once again a beautiful post... I like ur style... Very well written... Dard hai... fir bhi accha hai...

So...Do keep up the good work and do keep posting.. U know ur name brings a smile on my face

TC.. hav a nice time


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