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Ke bahut door aa chuke hai hum.... - 11th March 2006, 08:26 PM
aadaab doston,
kai dinon baad aapki khidmat mei pesh ho raha hun.aasha hai ke yeh rachna aapko bhaayegi.ise kuch is andaaz mei padhiyega jaise koi aashiq apne se judaa mehboob ko door se sarhaata hai.woh jaanta hai ke woh fir nahi mil sakte magar fir bhi door se use sahi salaamat dekh ke khush ho jaata hai.

Maana ke tujhe chaaha hai apni zindagi se zyaada
Magar teri khushi ko chaaha hai tujhse bhi zyaada.

Aaj tu meri baahon mein na sahi
Aaj tu meri baahon mein na sahi
Magar khush hun ke apni chaahi raahon pe tu chal rahi

Shayad aaj in aankhon mein aansu hai
Magar teri aankhon mein jhalakti khushi in aansuon se kahin mehngi hai

Chal chukaa hun nai manzilon ,naye raaston ki talaash mein
Shayad ab mil na paayenge ke bahut door aa chuka hun MAI

Kuch khwaab shayad adhure reh gaye hai
Kuch manzilen shayad hum piche chor aaye hai
Magar ab waapas na aa sakenge hum
Magar ab waapas na aa sakenge hum
Ke bahut door aa chuke hai hum
Ke bahut door aa chuke hai hum...



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11th March 2006, 08:37 PM
hi GKS
well jinko apne mehboob se pyar ho wo to uski khushi ko hi apni khushi maante hai.. hai na.. bas wahi nazar aaya isay padhkar...
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wah - 11th March 2006, 08:40 PM
chahata hoon is rachana par pahala rply mera ho. kyon ke aaj jitnee mujeh ye bhayee hai shayed kal ye asar na milta jo aaj hai. aisa lag raha hai GURU mujhe kahnee thee tum kah gaye kisee bhee din ye kamal lagagee par aaj mujhe ye bemisal lag rahee hai kis kis baat kee taraaf karoon?
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Maana ke tujhe chaaha hai apni zindagi se zyaada
Magar teri khushi ko chaaha hai tujhse bhi zyaada.



Kuch khwaab shayad adhure reh gaye hai
Kuch manzilen shayad hum piche chor aaye hai
Magar ab waapas na aa sakenge hum
Magar ab waapas na aa sakenge hum
Ke bahut door aa chuke hai hum
Ke bahut door aa chuke hai hum...

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ufff - 11th March 2006, 08:41 PM
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11th March 2006, 10:24 PM
anil ji,
aapko yeh rachna itni pasand aai hai isliye pehla salaam aapko likhta hun .aapke dil se nikale har tariff bhare lafz ke liye shukriyaa.
khush rahiye aabaad rahiye.
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12th March 2006, 09:13 AM
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12th March 2006, 03:08 PM
Shrdha dd,
aap yun hi apni saraahana bhari aankhon se mere vichaaroon ko dekhti rahiye .aapka hi intzaar kar raha tha mai ,ke aap aayengi aur likhengi ki aapko kaisi lagi.aapki tariff sar aankhon pe.

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12th March 2006, 04:58 PM
hi gks



bahoot hi sunder tarike se likha hai apne dil ko chu gayi aap isi tarike se aur likhte rahiye daad kabul kijiyega

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12th March 2006, 05:38 PM
aapke is kalaam ko padhke ek sher yaad agaya hai....

tu jisme khush rahe wahi khushi hai meri
phir mud ke na dekh kya zindagi hai meri...

sach hai ki mohabbat ka ek aur naam hai jise qurbani kehte hain....
dil bhale hi taar taar hojata hai..paara paara jal jaate ehsaas magar chehre pe mayoosi nazar nahi aati hai bas isiliye ke jaane wala ka irada badal na jaaye...uski khushi pe hamare aason paani na pher de...
sach kahoon toh yeh kalaam meri zindagi ki bahaut hi badi haqeeqat hai...jo ise padhne ke baad pahaad ki tarah apne seene pe mehsoos karrahi hoon.
aapne accha likkha hai...khush rahiyega.

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12th March 2006, 06:29 PM
bahut accha likha hai tumne yuhi likhte raho

meri har chahat se pehle ek chahat hogi
wo chahat hamesha tum hogi
ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main
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13th March 2006, 09:05 AM
hello Pallavi ji,
aapne daad kubool ki jaati hai ,aur aapne ise pasand kiya banda yeh jaan ke khush hua banda.aap yunhi padhte rahiye aur kabhi aapko koi kami lage to zaroor bataaiye.

khush rahe aabad rahe,
padhte rahiye aur likhte rahiye.

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13th March 2006, 09:14 AM
Aadaab Farhana ji,
sabse pehle to aapko jo sher yaad aaya uski daad kubool kijiye.aapne padha ,aapko acha lagaa aur aapko isne kisi sher (lion waala nahi ) ki yaad dilaai , is se acha aur kya ho sakta hai.aur ab shukriya kehne ka wakt bhi aa gaya hai. aapka shukriya ke aapne ise padha aur apne wakt mein se kuch kimati pal nikaal kar iske baare mein likha.

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13th March 2006, 09:17 AM
Hello Mehul ji,
aapne ek baar fir mujhe padha, pasand kiya aur mere liye tariff se bhare shabdo ko yahan choraa. aapka bahut bahut shukriya.saath hi mai maafi bhi chahoonga ke mai in dino ek acha padhne waala na ban sakaa par yeh galti jaldi hi sudhaar loonga.

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Re: Ke bahut door aa chuke hai hum.... - 13th March 2006, 09:31 AM
Bhai maafi chahunga ki itni badhiya rachna ko padhne mein der ho gayi mujhse

bohat hi umda likha hai aapne...har line mujhe pasand aayi...


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aadaab doston,
kai dinon baad aapki khidmat mei pesh ho raha hun.aasha hai ke yeh rachna aapko bhaayegi.ise kuch is andaaz mei padhiyega jaise koi aashiq apne se judaa mehboob ko door se sarhaata hai.woh jaanta hai ke woh fir nahi mil sakte magar fir bhi door se use sahi salaamat dekh ke khush ho jaata hai.

Maana ke tujhe chaaha hai apni zindagi se zyaada
Magar teri khushi ko chaaha hai tujhse bhi zyaada.

Aaj tu meri baahon mein na sahi
Aaj tu meri baahon mein na sahi
Magar khush hun ke apni chaahi raahon pe tu chal rahi

Shayad aaj in aankhon mein aansu hai
Magar teri aankhon mein jhalakti khushi in aansuon se kahin mehngi hai

Chal chukaa hun nai manzilon ,naye raaston ki talaash mein
Shayad ab mil na paayenge ke bahut door aa chuka hun MAI

Kuch khwaab shayad adhure reh gaye hai
Kuch manzilen shayad hum piche chor aaye hai
Magar ab waapas na aa sakenge hum
Magar ab waapas na aa sakenge hum
Ke bahut door aa chuke hai hum
Ke bahut door aa chuke hai hum...



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14th March 2006, 07:44 PM
hello Dave ji,
aapko pasand aai itna bahut hai , maafi ki koi zaroorat nahi.aapne meri zameen pe kuch tariff ke fool ugaaye itna bahut hai mere liye.
aur collectively mai aap sab ko ek baar THANKS kehta hun kyunki yeh pehli rachna hai jise aap sabhi ne ek saath pasand kiya hai.

Aag ab bhi wahi hai
Dard ab bhi wahi hai
Waqt shayad badal gaya hai
Meri shakhshiyat ab bhi wahi hai.
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