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17th August 2009, 02:04 PM
Wrote something on my wife's B'day... thought of sharing with you...
------------------------------------------------------------------- On your special day, My Love, I wanna show my heart to you... I wanna show how much I love you I wanna tell why I love you... I wanna speak when do I fall in love with you all over again... I love you... ...more intensely than I love myself... ...more purely than the smell of the flowers... ...and more selflessly than anyone else in this world... I love you... ...for the twinkle in your eyes, which comes when I am home early... ...for the way you miss me when I am not close to you... ...for how you make me feel when I am with you... ...for the way you make me laugh and cry ...and for the intensity of your love for me... I love you... ...when you embrace me in your arms... ...when you become a kid all over again... ...when you ask me to hide you in my arms... ...and when you say "I love you jaanu"... I love you... ...simply because I love you... ... and you love me... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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17th August 2009, 07:40 PM
saahib kyuN ghar meiN jhagra karwaane pe tule hue haiN ...
 aaj raat ka khana to gaya ...saari ki saarii biwiyaN ye post parh kar apne shauhroN ko kosengii ki vo apni shareeQ e hayaat ke liye kuch aisa pyaar bhara kyuN nahi likhte  khaas taur se jinke shauhar shayar hue vo to zaroor ...  khair bhabhi jee ko saalgirah bahut bahut mubaaraQ ho ... behad khuubsurat nagma likha hai tumne jitnii daad dee jaaye utnaa kam ... meri duaeiN aur daad dono haazir haiN ... bas issi tarah mahfil sajaate raho tumhara hii ... |
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18th August 2009, 11:19 AM
Pulkit Jee,
Namaskaar. Behad hee khubsurat andaaz mein aap ne apne Jivan-saathi prati apna pyaar hum sab se share kiya hai. Main Ishwar se duwa karti hoon aap dono ka pyaar yunhi banaye rakhhe. God Bless Both of You!! Purvi  ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~ |
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18th August 2009, 11:36 AM
wow!!...............thats so sweet..................
 khuda aap dono ko sadaa salamat aur khush rakhe......hamesha hamesha ye pyar yuhi banaa rahe.....Ameen... duaon ke saath.. Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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18th August 2009, 08:23 PM
Bahaut khoobsurat ehsaas hain aapke Pulkit Ji. Accha laga parhkar.
aabhaar vipin 
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18th August 2009, 08:30 PM
Dearest Pulkit, Sab se phele bhabhi jii ko birthday ko bahut bahut baadiyaan .. may god bless her with lots of love and happiness ..aur jab bhi tum likhte ho .. u r always awesome!!! Aaj toh mehfil mein char chaand laga diye tumne... aur haan kshitiz bhai ki baat seh bikul sehmat hu ...saach mein sab husbands ki waatt lagne walii hain.hehehehe  yu hi pyaar badhta rahey tum dono pratii .. aur tumharii aur beautiful creations ka intezaar raheta hai .. take care with lots od best wishes n prayers tumharii sis, mandeep Quote:
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18th August 2009, 10:55 PM
kya bat hai
bhaut sunder ahsaas bhaut pyar umda hamari bhi wish de dena शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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19th August 2009, 11:43 AM
Pulkit Bhaiya:
namaste! sab se pehle to Bhaabhee jee ko merii taraf se janamdin kii ShubhakaamnaayeN! aapne bahot hi Khuub liKhaa haii.. har lafz meiN pyaar hi pyaar haii! waah! dilse niklii hu'ii daad ko qabUl keejiyeNgaa! KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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19th August 2009, 07:41 PM
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hi Pulkit padha toh padh kar bahut accha laga...soch rahi thi jab Shweta ko sunaya hoga toh unke face pe kitne acche xpressions aaye hongey ...very nyc creation yaar...or congratulations to Shweta taec kaer jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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19th August 2009, 09:32 PM
Hello Bhaiya,
Bhabhi ko wish karne me main late ho gayi..... Anyways! Wishing a Very Beautiful and prosperous year to her! You've expressed yourself extremely beautifully. But Bhaiya, this is an English Creation which has to be in English Section, So I'm moving it to the right place, hope u don't mind. Aur vaise bhi khushi ki baatein yahan dard me kahan discuss kar rahe ho aap Congratulations Once again! Will be waiting anxiously for your next creation! Take Care.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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21st August 2009, 04:01 PM
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Aur kisi shauhar ko joote padhen naa padhen, tumhe nahin padh sakte... Bhai ek to tumhaara bolne ka andaazaisa ke sunne waale yun hi dher ho jaayen...aur oopar se shayri ka hunar jo tumhaare rom rom me hai... isliye tum to aisi baat naa hi karo Tumhe ehsaas pasand aaye jaankar bahut khsuhi hui... bhaabi ko aap shubhkaana khud bhi de sakte hain...aapse zyaada to yahaan se koi bhi nahin mila hai unse yun hi saath dete rehna... apna khayal rakhna.. Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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22nd August 2009, 02:58 PM
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Aapko ehsaas-o-andaaz pasand aaye, jaankar bahut accha laga... aapki duaayen sar aankhon par... yun hi saath deti rahiyega... apna kahyal rakhiye... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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22nd August 2009, 03:00 PM
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Thanks a ot for the lovely wishes.. keep lifting the spirits like this... take care Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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24th August 2009, 05:53 PM
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aapko pasand aye ehsaas, yeh jaankar accha laga... aise hi saath dete rahiye... ================================================== == Dearest Mandy, Thanks for all the lovely wishes... Tumhe to main kucch bhi likh doon accha lagta hi hai I will pass on your wishes to Shweta....================================================== == Dear Sakhi, Good tpo see you here... thanks for the lovely wishes... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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7th September 2009, 10:57 PM
Dear Dhaval,
Thanks for the wishes... glad that you liked the feelings ================================== Hi Shweta, Thanks for the wishes....Biwiyan itni jaldi satisfied nahin hotin naa so I keep trying ================================= Dear Priya, Thanks for your lovely wishes...take good care... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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23rd September 2009, 08:05 PM
Jus' one word 'WONDERFUL'
VIKRAM |
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30th September 2009, 08:23 AM
Glad you liked it Vikram, keep coming...
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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3rd October 2009, 01:28 AM
Purity and sincerity are filled up to the brim in this poetry, Chote Bhaiya...! I can feel it...!
Puura vishwaas hai meri Bahu ko iss tohfe par baDaa naaz houa hoga...! I would like to read more like this one...! My blessings are always with you Love you, Chote Bhaiya Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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8th November 2009, 12:52 PM
very nice
purity of purpose purity of discourse very well done and conceived ...indeed cheers |
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17th February 2010, 08:14 AM
If life , according to my funda, is spent in moments rather than days and nites......life become worthliving................
trivial moments dipped in warmth n granished wid romance hve the power to transform one s hardships to no bounds I strongly believe in it... ur poem had all the essence required to make life beautiful.............. just luved the feel of it... In one of ur replies once u hadd said u d luv to read my writings.. I want to share these two trivial creations of mine with a sensetive man like u... http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=66732 http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=57792 Dur respects......... keep feeling the same way...........keep writing it wid same ease and keep creating beauty. kisii jazbe ka ab mumkin nahi bedaar ho jana _____________________________________ eik lamha e visaal tha vaapis na aaska vo waqt ki micaal tha vaapis na aasaka mujh ko mere vajud se jo kar gaya judaa kaisa vo baakamal tha vaapis na asaka |
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18th February 2010, 10:30 PM
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Kaise hain aap...Ummeed hai acche se honge... Aapki bahu ko yeh ehsaas kaafi pasand aaye thhe... unko aksar yeh shikaayat rehti hai ke ab yeh ehsaas lafzon me khaas maukon par hi aate hain Aap mujh se keh rahe hain ke aap aise expressions aur padhna chaahenge... Actually, I would love to read more verses from you so that I can get inspired and then take pieces out of it to write my own  Aapka saath mere liye bahut maayne rakhta hai...banaaye rakhiyega...apna khayal rakhiye... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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18th February 2010, 10:31 PM
Hi Tahir,
I am glad that you liked the expression... keep coming... take care... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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18th February 2010, 10:42 PM
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Just like you I also feel its these moments that make the life worth living.... but alas not many feel that way Aapne kucch zyada hi taareef kar di meri...It is just that I am a simple person and try kep the expression simple... I very well remember that I said I would love to read you... The reason was that you could actually read the feelings behind the expressions which is a very rare thing and when you can read so well...your expressions are going to be beautiful as well.... Thanks for sharing the links with me...I'd love to read them Keep coming and encoutaging me... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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