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Woh chaand aaj bhi... - 25th July 2015, 12:01 AM

Doston,

Bahut arse pehle kucch likha thha maine ek shaks ke liye. Aaj zehan me fir unka khayal aaya to kucch likhne ki koshish ki hai...


Woh chaand aaj bhi adhoora mujhe lagtaa kyun hai
Chaandni se khoobsurat koi dil me bastaa kyun hai

Beasar mere dil ko aaj bhi karti hai saadgi uski
Muskuraane me woh magar kanjoosi kartaa kyun hai

Thham jaati hain meri saansen, naam leta jab mera
Reh reh ke mere dil pe dastak woh detaa kyun hai

Do pal ki mulaakat ban gayi mere jeene ka sabab
Dillagi woh khudaa humse hi magar karta kyun hai

Mera uska saath hai saanson ke bandhan se pare
Door jaane ke khayaal se fir dil dartaa kyun hai

Jab bhi milte hain hum, is tarah se milte hain
Meri har saans me ehsaas usi ka rehtaa kyun hai


Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai

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25th July 2015, 12:06 AM

Pulkit bhaii

Namaste...

Aik achchhi koshish... saadagee hameshaa mujhe khinch laatee hay... aur aapki koshish me wo baat hay... dil se daad

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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25th July 2015, 12:43 PM

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Doston,

Bahut arse pehle kucch likha thha maine ek shaks ke liye. Aaj zehan me fir unka khayal aaya to kucch likhne ki koshish ki hai...


Woh chaand aaj bhi adhoora mujhe lagtaa kyun hai
Chaandni se khoobsurat koi dil me bastaa kyun hai

Beasar mere dil ko aaj bhi karti hai saadgi uski
Muskuraane me woh magar kanjoosi kartaa kyun hai

Thham jaati hain meri saansen, naam leta jab mera
Reh reh ke mere dil pe dastak woh detaa kyun hai

Do pal ki mulaakat ban gayi mere jeene ka sabab
Dillagi woh khudaa humse hi magar karta kyun hai

Mera uska saath hai saanson ke bandhan se pare
Door jaane ke khayaal se fir dil dartaa kyun hai

Jab bhi milte hain hum, is tarah se milte hain
Meri har saans me ehsaas usi ka rehtaa kyun hai


wahhh wahhhh wahhhhhhh................bahut khoobsurat khayal hai....ham duaa kareNge ki aise khayal aate rhe aksar aapko, taaki hame khoobsurat ehsaas padne ka mokka milta rhe.

god bless u


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27th July 2015, 09:47 AM

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Doston,

Bahut arse pehle kucch likha thha maine ek shaks ke liye. Aaj zehan me fir unka khayal aaya to kucch likhne ki koshish ki hai...


Woh chaand aaj bhi adhoora mujhe lagtaa kyun hai
Chaandni se khoobsurat koi dil me bastaa kyun hai

Beasar mere dil ko aaj bhi karti hai saadgi uski
Muskuraane me woh magar kanjoosi kartaa kyun hai

Thham jaati hain meri saansen, naam leta jab mera
Reh reh ke mere dil pe dastak woh detaa kyun hai

Do pal ki mulaakat ban gayi mere jeene ka sabab
Dillagi woh khudaa humse hi magar karta kyun hai

Mera uska saath hai saanson ke bandhan se pare
Door jaane ke khayaal se fir dil dartaa kyun hai

Jab bhi milte hain hum, is tarah se milte hain
Meri har saans me ehsaas usi ka rehtaa kyun hai

waahh bahut khoob andaaze bayaan rahaa aapka pulkit bhai..... muhabbat ayur dard dono ko bakhubii pesh kiyaa hai aapne apni is kavitaa me.... dil ko behad sukoon pahunchaaa hai ise padh kar aage bhi aapke kalaam ka intzaar rahegaa


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Namaste...

Aik achchhi koshish... saadagee hameshaa mujhe khinch laatee hay... aur aapki koshish me wo baat hay... dil se daad

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

Aapka

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wahhh wahhhh wahhhhhhh................bahut khoobsurat khayal hai....ham duaa kareNge ki aise khayal aate rhe aksar aapko, taaki hame khoobsurat ehsaas padne ka mokka milta rhe.

god bless u

Thanks a lot didi Aapko ehsaas pasand aaye aur aapki duaayen mil gayin, aur kya chaahiye yun hi saath deti rahiye, khayal rakhiye apna.


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waahh bahut khoob andaaze bayaan rahaa aapka pulkit bhai..... muhabbat ayur dard dono ko bakhubii pesh kiyaa hai aapne apni is kavitaa me.... dil ko behad sukoon pahunchaaa hai ise padh kar aage bhi aapke kalaam ka intzaar rahegaa


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Tumhe yeh koshish dil ke paas lagi, jaankar bahut khushi huwi kyunki yeh mere bhi dil ke kareeb hai Apna khayal rakho aur saath banaaye rakho.


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27th July 2015, 03:46 PM

Bahut khoobsoorti se piroya hai ehsason ko..bahut khoob bayangi....likhte rahiye pulkit ji..aur aise hee hamare sath bantte rahiye...



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Doston,

Bahut arse pehle kucch likha thha maine ek shaks ke liye. Aaj zehan me fir unka khayal aaya to kucch likhne ki koshish ki hai...


Woh chaand aaj bhi adhoora mujhe lagtaa kyun hai
Chaandni se khoobsurat koi dil me bastaa kyun hai
Wah


Beasar mere dil ko aaj bhi karti hai saadgi uski
Muskuraane me woh magar kanjoosi kartaa kyun hai
beautiful

Thham jaati hain meri saansen, naam leta jab mera
Reh reh ke mere dil pe dastak woh detaa kyun hai
mesmerizing
Do pal ki mulaakat ban gayi mere jeene ka sabab
Dillagi woh khudaa humse hi magar karta kyun hai

Mera uska saath hai saanson ke bandhan se pare
Door jaane ke khayaal se fir dil dartaa kyun hai
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Jab bhi milte hain hum, is tarah se milte hain
Meri har saans me ehsaas usi ka rehtaa kyun hai
wah wah wah

Bohut khoob devarji

Jaane kyun pyar se labrez ghazlon ko aap dard mein daal dete hain?
Ye ishq se bhari hain inki jagah yahan nahi ishq section mein hai. Humare dil mein hai.

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Bahut khoobsoorti se piroya hai ehsason ko..bahut khoob bayangi....likhte rahiye pulkit ji..aur aise hee hamare sath bantte rahiye...

Shukriya Madhu ji. Aap yunhi hausla badhati rshiye, koshish zaari rahegi


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wah wah wah

Bohut khoob devarji

Jaane kyun pyar se labrez ghazlon ko aap dard mein daal dete hain?
Ye ishq se bhari hain inki jagah yahan nahi ishq section mein hai. Humare dil mein hai.

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Woh kehte hain naa ishq pe peeche bhi dard hota hai, bas isiliye dard ne daal deta hoon but the next romantic one will definitely post in Ishq.

Aapne itne acche se saraaha ke mujhe dobara padhna padha ke maine aisa kya likh diya :

Yunhi saath deti rahiye, apna khayal rakhiye.


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Doston,

Bahut arse pehle kucch likha thha maine ek shaks ke liye. Aaj zehan me fir unka khayal aaya to kucch likhne ki koshish ki hai...


Woh chaand aaj bhi adhoora mujhe lagtaa kyun hai
Chaandni se khoobsurat koi dil me bastaa kyun hai

Beasar mere dil ko aaj bhi karti hai saadgi uski
Muskuraane me woh magar kanjoosi kartaa kyun hai

Thham jaati hain meri saansen, naam leta jab mera
Reh reh ke mere dil pe dastak woh detaa kyun hai

Do pal ki mulaakat ban gayi mere jeene ka sabab
Dillagi woh khudaa humse hi magar karta kyun hai

Mera uska saath hai saanson ke bandhan se pare
Door jaane ke khayaal se fir dil dartaa kyun hai

Jab bhi milte hain hum, is tarah se milte hain
Meri har saans me ehsaas usi ka rehtaa kyun hai

bahut sunder likha hai pulkit bhai..................................


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