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Wo DonoN -
15th July 2004, 12:39 PM
Wo DonoN
Wo donoN juda si haiN ek duje se Per sach hai ke..donoN hi bhati haiN, Ek sanjeeda hai itni ke…jeise saagar kinaare koi chat.taaN Or ek saagar ki lehroN si ..khil-khilaati hai, Ek hai ke jubaaN se kuchh kehti hi nahi… Or ye nazreiN bhi kam hi uthati hai… Ek hai ke sirf jubaaN se hi nahi Apni nigaahoN se bhi batiyaati hai, Ek hai ke uski zulfieN bhi simti rehti haiN Har waqt uski jubaaN ki hi taraah, Ek hai ke uske Bindaas andaaz ki taraah hi ZulfeiN uske chehre pe bikhar jaati hai, Ek hai ke har waqt kuchh sunaana chaahti hai Mujhe apni baatoN me uljhana chaahti hai, Or ek hai ke …jiske paas naye alfaaz nahi Sochti to wo bhi bahut hai..per kehne ko aawaaz nahi, Ek hai ke jiske saath hokar mai apne Saare dard-o-gam bhool jaata hooN, Ek hai ke jiske chand baateiN sun.ne ke khaatir mai Jaane kitni baateiN banaata hooN, Bada ajeeb hai ye dil bhi… Jaane kya kya paana chaahta hai… Kisiki meethi si muskuraahat ka diwaana hai to.. Kisi ki khaamosh aaNhoN me doob jaata hai.. Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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15th July 2004, 12:47 PM
mere chaand,
kya kahu? jab tasveer bolti hai na to aankhe oonhe apni palko maie yunh sama leti hai..... jaise nind maie dil se......koi khwaab lipat jaaye .... le gaya chhin ke koun, aaj tera sabro karaar bekaraari tuje aey dil kabhi aisi to n thhi....... jo soon rahi hu oos ke mutaabik padhh kar meri subah ban gayi.... oonki aankhon ne khuda jaane kiya kya jadoo ke tabiyat meri maail kabhi aisi to n thhi... tumhari meena |
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15th July 2004, 12:50 PM
Wah! Wah! Wah!
Chaand saahab.. Aadaab! Janaab.. In dono ki tasveer seedhe dil me utar gayi! Dono kitni juda juda.. lekin phir bhi kitni pyaari pyaari.. Jaise zindagi.. jiske har roop me, kahin na kahin, khubsoorti chhipi hoti hai.. Rahi baat dil ki.. to ye to uski fitrat hai.. har cheez paana chaahta hai.. aur agar har shay haasil kar bhi le, to bhi tassalli kahaan hoti hai ise.. ye to wo ghaRa hai.. jisme hasratoN ka jitna paani bhara jaaye.. utna kum hai.. hai na? Bohat hi pyaara sa.. masoom sa kalaam hai aapka.. pasand aaya.. ye to aapko pata hi hoga.. aap likhte hi itna achha hain.. Yunhi likhte rahiyega.. aur aisi rang bhari tasveerein banaate rahiyega..  |
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15th July 2004, 06:00 PM
Bahut khoob chaand ji...
Meena didi aur Banno ne bilkul sahi kaha hai ki tasveer seedhe dil mein ja ke chap gayi... Bahut hi pyare andaaz mein aapne un dono ka varnan kiya hai... khaas karke aakhiri ki yeh kuch panktiyan.. Ek hai ke jiske saath hokar mai apne Saare dard-o-gam bhool jaata hooN, Ek hai ke jiske chand baateiN sun.ne ke khaatir mai Jaane kitni baateiN banaata hooN, Bada ajeeb hai ye dil bhi… Jaane kya kya paana chaahta hai… Kisiki meethi si muskuraahat ka diwaana hai to.. Kisi ki khaamosh aaNhoN me doob jaata hai.. Haan yeh dil bhi sab kuch paana chaahta hai.. bahut komal aur chanchal hota hai yeh... sab chaahiye... Aise hi pyari pyari kavitaayein likhte rahiye.. Khush rahiye.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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Shukriya DostoN -
15th July 2004, 09:18 PM
le gaya chhin ke koun, aaj tera sabro karaar
bekaraari tuje aey dil kabhi aisi to n thhi....... Bahut khoob Meena ji...har baat ka reply hai aapke paas.... Tahe dil se shukriya...is naacheez ko ko aaap itna sam.maan or hausla deti haiN. Chaand Ji...Banno ji..aap bilkul sahi kehti hain...ye sab paana chaahta hai..ye bhi or wo bhi...kya kareiN dil hi to hai... Tahe dil se shukriya..aapke is reply ke liye...ek geet...isi tarah ki situation se milta hua...teen deviyaaN film se hai... Kabhi is pari ka kooNcha Kabhi us haseeN ki mehfil Mujhe dar-b-dar firaaya.. Mere dil ki saadgi...ne Kai khawaab dekh daale ..yahaaN meri bekhudi ne..(pura suniyega..achchha lagega) Chaand Shukriya Priya....tahe dil se shukriya...aapne meri is rachna ko parha ...or meri...in feelings ko saraha. Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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17th July 2004, 01:56 PM
saral shabdoin me bhut khub byaan kiya hai dono ko .ye dono hai kun haan ???????
sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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17th July 2004, 02:03 PM
Dear Rakesh... aatii sundaar mishraan kiyaa hai apne dono kaa jassbaton k saath...par yaar ek baat tao batao...gar ye do kii jagah teen hote yaa usse jayad hote tao kyaa karte ap....fhir kyaa likhaa jata...
 ......jhanjhaat hoo jatii naa...par kabhii kabhi yuu bhii ho jata hai....lolkhair yar thodaa sa mzaak kar liye umida hai....ap bhii iss baat ko mazaak mai lenge......humesha kii tarhaa.....soch ko jhanjhoD kuch sabdh joo kavita k ruup mai bhikhar jate hai apse padhne mai bada sukuun milta hai....dost yuu hii likhte rahna.....tumhara dost Sanju!~*~ muddato mout ne bhi tarsaaya hame.. ..... |
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18th July 2004, 05:02 AM
Wo donoN juda si haiN ek duje se
Per sach hai ke..donoN hi bhati haiN, Ek sanjeeda hai itni ke…jeise saagar kinaare koi chat.taaN Or ek saagar ki lehroN si ..khil-khilaati hai, Chaand Sahab... kya meethi see uljhan pesh kee apne...padh kar bahut hee mazaa aaya...sochti hoon kaash yeh dono ek hee package mein maujood hotin...tau uljhan hee khatm...hai na? Ek hai ke jubaaN se kuchh kehti hi nahi… magar kyun? Ek hai ke sirf jubaaN se hi nahi Apni nigaahoN se bhi batiyaati hai, Bahut chanchal jaan padhti hai... Ek hai ke uske Bindaas andaaz ki taraah hi ZulfeiN uske chehre pe bikhar jaati hai, Bahut khoob! Ek hai ke jiske saath hokar mai apne Saare dard-o-gam bhool jaata hooN, Ek hai ke jiske chand baateiN sun.ne ke khaatir mai Jaane kitni baateiN banaata hooN, Wahi meethi see uljhan... Kisiki meethi si muskuraahat ka diwaana hai to.. Kisi ki khaamosh aaNhoN me doob jaata hai... janaab apki nazar ek sher Sudarshan Faakir sahib ka fal-safe ishq me.n pesh aaye savaalo.n kii tarah ham pareshaa.N hii rahe apane Khayaalo.n kii tarah paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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Shukriya DostoN -
19th July 2004, 02:36 PM
Sakhi ji....shukriya aapke is reply ke liye...ye donoN...
ji ye donoN haiN....'mai or meri tanhaai'. Chaand Sanjoo mere dost.....shukriya tumaare is chutki bhare reply ke liye....sawaal mazaak me hi sahi per achchha puchha hai tumne.... yaheeN shayri.com per kisi ne post kiya tha ye sher.....shaayad mera jawaab bhi kuchh yooN hi hai... TAMAAM UMR TERA INTZAAR HAMNE KIYA TAMAAM UMR TERA INTZAAR HAMNE KIYA is intzaar me kis kis se pyar hamne kiya Dost bada jigar chaahiye sachchi baat batane ke liye...or sach...kitni saadgi se is shaayar ne ye baat keh di...tumhaara sawaal bahut pasand aaya dost...viese eisa aksar hota hi rehta...hai...wo baat alag hai ke ham eise khayaalat daba jaate haiN. Tumhaara dost Chaand Paras ji.... dil ki baat keh di aapne...ke kaash ye donoN ek hi pakage me maujood hote... per Ghalib saahab ka wo kalaam hai na... hazaaroN khwaaisheiN eise ke har khwaaish pe dam nikle... bahut nikle mere armaan lekin phir bhi kam nikle... per ye sach hai ke...dil to sabhi kuchh chaahta hai..so sab to use nahi milega na...aapne meri is uljhan or khayalooN ko samjha iske liye tahe dil se shukrgujaar hai ye Chaand. Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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Chaand ji, behad khoobsurat ehsaas...aaj na jaane kaise aik-dum se aapki yeh rachna saamne aa gye aur ham padey bina reh na sake...bahut accha lga aapko padna...thoda sa waqt nikaal kar aate rha kijiye sdc par aik khaas baat...aapke es thread par Sanjoo ji ka reply pada aur unke signature meiN likha sher bhi pada "kai baar ensaan kuch aisi baate keh jata/likh jata hai, jo zindgi ke bahut kareeb hoti hai aur sach bhi ho jaati hai" ...... .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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26th December 2015, 10:08 PM
Waah ..kya baat hai....lutf aa gaya ...chaand jee...bahut hee sundar lkha hai aapne...
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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27th December 2015, 05:56 PM
bahut haseen kalaam bazm ko nazar kiyaa hai aapne janaab...
behad mubaarakbaad aapko.. aate raha karen... shaad... |
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28th December 2015, 04:30 PM
wah bahut khoob rahi aapki yeh rachna chaand jee.....................
Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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29th December 2015, 04:09 PM
waaah chaand ji.....
Bahut achcha laga mujhe aapka ye andaaz...badi khoobsoorati se bayaan huyi hai dono alag alag shakhshiyat..ankhon ke aage tasweer si ban gayi ho jaise.. Aapke naye kalaam ka intzaar rahega.. Likhte rahein... Aate rahein.... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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29th December 2015, 07:51 PM
Chaand bhai,
Jaane yeh heera nazron se itne saal kaise chhupa raha. Bahut khoobsurat ehsaas, humesha ki tarah saadgi se bayaan kiya hain aapne. Yun hi likhte rahiye, apna khayal rakhiye Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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