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Bahut dino se aankheen kuch num hai -
9th March 2005, 12:40 PM
Bahut dino se aankheen kuch num hai
Tumse talluq aur adawat ka gum ha [talluq – relation; adawat – enemosity] Dhoondh rahe hain aaj phir tanhaeyon ko Tumharee mehfil ka intezaar aab kum hai Ishart-e-mayassar main nikal hi jaate hain ansoon Nishat-e-umeed ka nazraana kuch kum hai [Ishart-e-mayassar - possibility of Joy/delight Nishat-e-umeed – expectation of happiness] Mehfil-e-Raqeeb main bikheer rahe ho chandani Humari mehfil se dafangaah ka fasla kum hai [Raqeeb – Dushman] Aaj phir tum se dil lagaane ki chachat hai “Vaaiz” Apni hasratoon se humain beniyaazi ki umeed kum hai. [Beniyaazi – Independence] |
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12th March 2005, 03:04 PM
~~~Tanhaa~~~
Ye lafz bhi kitne be-imaan hote hain, ya to kuchh hi lafzon mein dil ki saari daastaan bataa dete hain ya lafzon ka dariyaa bhi kuchh keh nahi pata. kabhi ye lafz bina kuchh soche hi zehn mein ghoomte rehte hain, kabhi waqt par yaad hi nahi aate. kabhi unke aane se pehle zor zor se haste hain, aur kabhi unke aane pas palkon ke peechhe chhup kar aansoo bahaate hain. Aapne badi khoobsoorti se apne khayaalaat ko lafzon mein dhaal diya... achha laga... Likhte rahiye.... aapka dost ~~~Tanhaa~~~ . wo chubtey hai aur zakhm dete hai imaandaari se, phool to bewafa hotey hai...dhoka dete hai wafadaari se DARD KO BHI AB DARD HONE LAGA, DARD KHUD HI GAAV BARANE LAGA, DARD KE MAARE HUM NA ROYE KABHI, DARD HUM KO CHUKAR KHUD HI RONE LAGA.............. |
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Nice one -
12th March 2005, 05:13 PM
Namaskar Vaaiz Ji
Bahut khoobsurat qalam hay.......hamare daad kabul kijega.... This line touched the heart........ Ishart-e-mayassar main nikal hi jaate hain ansoon Nishat-e-umeed ka nazraana kuch kum hai Nice one.... Sada kush rahein  |
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12th March 2005, 08:28 PM
bahut accha likha hain..reaaly nice...
mausam, Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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13th March 2005, 08:37 AM
Hi Vaaiz Ji,
Bohot khoob likha hai dost. Behud pasand aaya parh ke. Humari daad qabool kare aur aise hi zabardast kalaamo se hume nawaazte rahe. Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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13th March 2005, 11:49 AM
Hi Vaaiz,
Really very nice. Is all I can say. Too good thanks Rohin |
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