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1st July 2014, 02:20 PM
Agla matla isi thread per dena hai ya alag thread banega?
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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1st July 2014, 03:27 PM
Ok my Matla for new Sdc ghazal:
Ek tarahi ghazal ka matla hai..
Beh'r 122/122/122/122
Hua'a Bekhudi ka asar dheere dheere
Idhar dheere dheere udhar dheere dheere
Kafiya:Asar, Udhar.....
Radeef :dheere dheere
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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1st July 2014, 06:58 PM
i reserve zehar & aksar.....................
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1st July 2014, 07:18 PM
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i reserve zehar & aksar.....................
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both cannot be used in this ghazal.
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1st July 2014, 08:07 PM
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both cannot be used in this ghazal.
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Also let her know why????????????????
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1st July 2014, 08:08 PM
Hamari bhi dhadkan badhi ja rahi hai
Uthi jaati hai wo nazar dheere dheere
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1st July 2014, 09:05 PM
Magar poori tarah bahr meN hai Nazneen sahiba.
Qaafiye ka break up i..dhar, u..dhar aise hoga. El chhoti aawaaz phir ek lambi aawaaz.
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1st July 2014, 09:58 PM
Sumit bhai..wah...agla sher pesh-e-kidhmat hai..
Khudaai khud zameen par aa gayi hai
uff teri nazar ka zehar dheere dheere
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1st July 2014, 10:37 PM
Waah ! Zainy ji ! Behad khoobsurat matla diya hai aapne !!
Aur Anjaan ji aur Mast ji ne bhi khoob sher kahe !!
Meri or se ye shikastah koshish ...
adoo hai zamaana unheiN dil ki baateiN
kaho jaldi jaldi magar dheere dheere
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maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
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2nd July 2014, 10:06 AM
Zainyji,
bahot hi khubsurat matla pesh kiya hai..
Sumeetji, Anuji, Zarraaji, aapke sher bhii behad khubsurat haiN...
lijiye, Mera sher....
naqaab-e-shu.aa-e-husan yu.n uTha hai
ki jaise huii ho sahar dheere dheere
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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2nd July 2014, 05:33 PM
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Hamari bhi dhadkan badhi ja rahi hai
Uthi jaati hai wo nazar dheere dheere
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Sumit bhai..wah...agla sher pesh-e-kidhmat hai..
Khudaai khud zameen par aa gayi hai
uff teri nazar ka zehar dheere dheere
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Waah ! Zainy ji ! Behad khoobsurat matla diya hai aapne !!
Aur Anjaan ji aur Mast ji ne bhi khoob sher kahe !!
Meri or se ye shikastah koshish ...
adoo hai zamaana unheiN dil ki baateiN
kaho jaldi jaldi magar dheere dheere
zarraa
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Zainyji,
bahot hi khubsurat matla pesh kiya hai..
Sumeetji, Anuji, Zarraaji, aapke sher bhii behad khubsurat haiN...
lijiye, Mera sher....
naqaab-e-shu.aa-e-husan yu.n uTha hai
ki jaise huii ho sahar dheere dheere
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Masha Allah bohat khoob dostoN. ..superb
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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2nd July 2014, 07:57 PM
Sheri silsile ko aage badhaate hue meri jaanib se bhi ek sher arz hai...
khabar hai ke tum bin nahee jee sakenge,
kiye jaa rahe haiN basar dheere dheere...
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3rd July 2014, 12:17 PM
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Masha Allah bohat khoob dostoN. ..superb
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Zainyji,
aapka bahot bahot shukriya..... bas yuN hi hamaaraa hausla badhate raheN...
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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3rd July 2014, 12:25 PM
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Sumit bhai..wah...agla sher pesh-e-kidhmat hai..
Khudaai khud zameen par aa gayi hai
uff teri nazar ka zehar dheere dheere
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Anuji,
shaayad 'zehar' kaafiye meN nahi baith rahaa hai.. beher ke hisaab se nahiN.. 'asar', 'udhar', 'nazar', 'magar', 'sahar', 'basar' isee dhun meN honaa chaahiye..
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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3rd July 2014, 12:53 PM
Aik Sher Meri Jaanib Se Bhi Pesh hai...
Ajab Qehar Dhaata Raha Dil Pe Koi
Bana Kar Aseer-e-Nazar Dheere Dheere
Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar
Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi
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3rd July 2014, 08:51 PM
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Sumit bhai..wah...agla sher pesh-e-kidhmat hai..
Khudaai khud zameen par aa gayi hai
uff teri nazar ka zehar dheere dheere
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ijaazat ho toh sujhav dene kii gustakhee karta hoo.n
Zamee.n pe khud aane lagee ab khudaii
zeher iss nazar ka jidhar dheere dheere
aap apna sujhav bhii de sakte hai.n. Koshish rahee hai ki aapke sher se rabt hi ho..
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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7th July 2014, 04:14 PM
Nighaho ki raftaar hai qatilana
Utar mere dil me magar dheere dheere
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8th July 2014, 04:18 AM
Aab-e-haayaat-e-mohabbat ko peekar
Honay lagay ham amar dheere dheere!
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Sheri silsile ko aage badhaate hue meri jaanib se bhi ek sher arz hai...
khabar hai ke tum bin nahee jee sakenge,
kiye jaa rahe haiN basar dheere dheere...
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Aik Sher Meri Jaanib Se Bhi Pesh hai...
Ajab Qehar Dhaata Raha Dil Pe Koi
Bana Kar Aseer-e-Nazar Dheere Dheere
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Quote:
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Nighaho ki raftaar hai qatilana
Utar mere dil me magar dheere dheere
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Ahmad Hyderabadi
Aab-e-haayaat-e-mohabbat ko peekar
Honay lagay ham amar dheere dheere!
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Masha Allah Masha Allah. ..bohat khoob. ..
ek se badhker ek sher ban rahe hain...
Lagta hai bohat khoob surat ghazal banne waali hai...
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8th July 2014, 04:44 PM
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Aab-e-haayaat-e-mohabbat ko peekar
Honay lagay ham amar dheere dheere!
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Ahmedbhai,
behad khubsurat sher pesh kiya hai... mere khayaal meN shuruaat meN ek ek taktee kam hai.. dono ula aur saani meN
agar koii galti huii ho toh muaafii chahungaa
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
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11th July 2014, 12:16 AM
Zidd sahab maine thread separate kar diya hai. ..just to avoid confusion. ...
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11th July 2014, 10:08 PM
bohat khoobsurat nazam ban rahi hai Maine bhi cahaha kuch arz karu kuch ban nahi raha tha dimag pe zor dene k bad ek do line bani hai jo pesh karna chahta hu Pata nahi kaisi hai ummeed hai aap sab ko pasand aaye
pilaa do mujhe ishq ka jaam lab se
behak jaay ham tum magar dheere dheere.....
safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara
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dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara
ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana
ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana
I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my
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11th July 2014, 11:05 PM
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bohat khoobsurat nazam ban rahi hai Maine bhi cahaha kuch arz karu kuch ban nahi raha tha dimag pe zor dene k bad ek do line bani hai jo pesh karna chahta hu Pata nahi kaisi hai ummeed hai aap sab ko pasand aaye
pilaa do mujhe ishq ka jaam lab se
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bahut accha sher kaha hai furqann bhai....bilkul beherband.
ek aur koshish ho jaaye kisi dusre qafiye me?...ye qafiya ho gaya hai
once more furqann bhai.
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11th July 2014, 11:41 PM
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bahut accha sher kaha hai furqann bhai....bilkul beherband.
ek aur koshish ho jaaye kisi dusre qafiye me?...ye qafiya ho gaya hai
once more furqann bhai.
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shukriya zidd sahab aur ek baat batana chahta hu mujhe urdo aati hai bt itni ziyada nahi aati aap sabka saath rahe to Insha Allah zarur Sikh jayege qafiya k meaning nahi Pata hai mujhe
safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara
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dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara
ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana
ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana
I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my
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12th July 2014, 11:53 AM
bahut accha matla pesh kiya hai zainy g.........main bhi try kar raha hoon......
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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12th July 2014, 02:55 PM
shukriya naaz bich me koodne k liye :P zidd saahab Pata nahi kab reply karne waale the waise mujhe shayri karna nahi aata Sikh raha hu itne mushkil se ye do line socha tha ab phir se dimag pe zor daalna padega
safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara
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dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara
ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana
ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana
I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my
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My smile is fake.......
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12th July 2014, 03:29 PM
maine abhi qadam rakha hai shayri ki dunya me us liye dimaag pe zorr daalna padta hai aap to purane ho to kyu????
koshish karuga 15th July se pehle nahi hua to phir dusri gazal pe try kar lege
safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara
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dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara
ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana
ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana
I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my
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My smile is fake.......
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12th July 2014, 05:41 PM
tumhare paas hai dimag sun k acha laga dont mind
aap sabka saath yun hi bane rahe to Insha Allah ham bhi zarur Sikh jayge aur rahi baat ronaq ki to jaha aap sabka saath ho waha ronaq na ho ye mumkin nahi
aap itne bhi aam nahi k ham aapko
bhool jayen.....
Zehan hil jata hai jab aap yaad Aate hai.....
safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara
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dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara
ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana
ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana
I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my
tears bcz
My smile is fake.......
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13th July 2014, 11:46 AM
aapne kahaa Furqaan bhai aapko qaafiye ka matlab nahi maloom.....
bas tajjub ye hotaa hai ke aapne apne signature ke itnaa meyaari shher daala hai jo poori tarah beharband hai aur khayaalon ki parwaaz kisii meyaari shaayar jaisee hai....
Qalam hai haath me khanjar ki kya zarurat hai....
parha likha hu saliqe se khoon karta hu........
kyaa ye sher aapka hai...????
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aapne kahaa Furqaan bhai aapko qaafiye ka matlab nahi maloom.....
bas tajjub ye hotaa hai ke aapne apne signature ke itnaa meyaari shher daala hai jo poori tarah beharband hai aur khayaalon ki parwaaz kisii meyaari shaayar jaisee hai....
Qalam hai haath me khanjar ki kya zarurat hai....
parha likha hu saliqe se khoon karta hu........
kyaa ye sher aapka hai...????
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shaad sahab mujhe shayri ka bohat shoq hai aksar do line sher 4line sher jo waqt k hisaab se zubaan pe Aa jate hai wo kabhi kahi sune hue hote hai aur kai baar khud kahe hue lafz sher ban jaate hai
rahi baat qafiye to ye Urdu word hai mujhe Urdu likhna padhna Aata hai lekin bohat se Urdu word aise hai jiska matlab nahi Pata hota aise moqe pe main puch liya karta hu aur kisi se Pata nahi chalta to andaza lagata hu k uska kya meanings hoge jaise k beharband is word ka matlab to samajh Aa bt explain karna mere liye thoda mushkil hai ummeed hai aapko meri baat samajh rahi ho bcz mera explain kabhi kabhi khud main nahi samajh paata
safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara
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dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara
ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana
ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana
I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my
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My smile is fake.......
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13th July 2014, 02:49 PM
Aur shaad sahab waise to lafzo se khelne k liye kai cizo ko jaanna hota hai samajhna hota hai lekin meri samajh se sher likhne ko bs dil ka dard zubaan pe laana hota hai jab dil me dard bhara ho to zubaan pe sher laana koi mushkil nahi hota ye meri soch hai jo bata raha hu baqi aap mujhse ziyada jaante ho k ek shayar ko sher kehne k liye kya zaruri hota hai kuch bol diya ho to nadaan samajh k maaf kar Dena naraaz mat hona
safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara
sa
dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara
ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana
ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana
I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my
tears bcz
My smile is fake.......
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13th July 2014, 04:54 PM
Aapki har baat jaayaz hai magar mera sawaal wahi ka wahii hai...
Kyaa above mentioned sher aapka hai...jawaab zaroor dijiyega..
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Aapki har baat jaayaz hai magar mera sawaal wahi ka wahii hai...
Kyaa above mentioned sher aapka hai...jawaab zaroor dijiyega..
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maafi chahta hu shaad bhai in sab baat me aapki baat ka jawaab reh gaya aur mujhe khayaal bhi nahi hua
ji Nahi ye mera nahi hai kafi pehle kahi padha tha Mujhe ye bhi thk se nahi Pata k jo main typ kiya hu Singh me wohi pada tha ya kuch kuch lafz Cheng hai
safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara
sa
dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara
ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana
ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana
I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my
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My smile is fake.......
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14th July 2014, 03:55 PM
safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara
sa
dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara
ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana
ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana
I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my
tears bcz
My smile is fake.......
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maafi chahta hu shaad bhai in sab baat me aapki baat ka jawaab reh gaya aur mujhe khayaal bhi nahi hua
ji Nahi ye mera nahi hai kafi pehle kahi padha tha Mujhe ye bhi thk se nahi Pata k jo main typ kiya hu Singh me wohi pada tha ya kuch kuch lafz Cheng hai
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Furqan ji bahot shukriya jo aapne is baat ko khudd qubool kiyaa.... mujhe pata hai e sher aapne khud nahi likhaa hai ... na hi wo dusre sher
Apne Haalaat ka khud ehsaas nahi hai mujhko...
Maine logo se suna hai k pareshan hu main....
mere kahne ka sabab yahii thaa ke ham kissiii doosre shaayar ke sher ko apnaa nahi kah sakte ... kisii aur ki mehnat ko ham apnaa haq nahi maaan sakte na hi uskaa credit khud le sakte hain.... we have to give proper judgement with the related shaayr.... aapko agar us shaayar na naam nahi maloom hai to aap not mine ya unknown likh sakte hain bajaae chuppchaap use apne signature me post kaarne ke....
SDc mee ye rule ham strictly follow karte hain and as you are new here we are here to help you to understand the basic guidelines.. so please try to not do these acts again...
thanks...
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15th July 2014, 10:58 PM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
Furqan ji bahot shukriya jo aapne is baat ko khudd qubool kiyaa.... mujhe pata hai e sher aapne khud nahi likhaa hai ... na hi wo dusre sher
Apne Haalaat ka khud ehsaas nahi hai mujhko...
Maine logo se suna hai k pareshan hu main....
mere kahne ka sabab yahii thaa ke ham kissiii doosre shaayar ke sher ko apnaa nahi kah sakte ... kisii aur ki mehnat ko ham apnaa haq nahi maaan sakte na hi uskaa credit khud le sakte hain.... we have to give proper judgement with the related shaayr.... aapko agar us shaayar na naam nahi maloom hai to aap not mine ya unknown likh sakte hain bajaae chuppchaap use apne signature me post kaarne ke....
SDc mee ye rule ham strictly follow karte hain and as you are new here we are here to help you to understand the basic guidelines.. so please try to not do these acts again...
thanks...
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shaad bhai main ye baat pehle bhi kai baar bol chuka hu aur ek baar phir bol raha hu Maine kisi bhi shayri ko apna name nahi diya hai hmm yaha k rules Pata na hone ki wajhe se galti zarur ki thi Maine bt ah us galti ko sudhaar bhi liya hai aur rahi baat quboolne ki to aap mujhe kahi ek comnt Aisa bata do jaha maine is baat se mana kiya ho aur ek baat aapko batana chahuga main yaha wah wai k liye post nahi karta mujhe shoq hai shayri padne ka likhne ka bs is liye karta hu aur ek baat ye bhi hai k main kabhi shayri copy pest nahi karta is jo meri read Kari hui hai zehan me ho to typ karta hu is wajhe se mujhe shayar ka name pata nahi hota main jis tarha fb pe post karta tha waise hi yaha bhi karne laga bt rules na maaloom hone k wajhe se ye misunderstand hui thi ab maloom ho agya hai so aainda khayaal rakhuga ummeed hai aap meri baat ko samajh rahe ho aur rahi mere khud sher likhne to wo bhi Insha jaldi pesh karuga aur ye baat aapko abhi bata du us nazam k sur churaye hai Maine kisi nazam se
safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara
sa
dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara
ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana
ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana
I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my
tears bcz
My smile is fake.......
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18th July 2014, 02:49 PM
shergoyi ke fatique (lol) ki wajah se ye activity pause mode par rakh raha hu...
august 1 ko final sdc ghazal no1 aur ghazal no 2 post karunga.
plus mai thoda busy bhi rahunga agle 10 din.
but u may carry on with additional shers
bahut saare thread sher goyi par chal rahe hai isliye this thread is temporarily paused till july 30.
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