kyu ban ke parwaana????

[jasdeephere]

Hai itni si khwahish ke khud ko pa loo main
Hai itni si hasrat ke khud mein hi jee loo main
Na rahegi jagah is dil mein baaki kisi gair ke liye
To haste hue zehar ghamon ka bhi pee loo main

Na ho waqt mere paas duniya ke zhamelo ka
Na mile fursat kabhi khud ke hi ikhtiyaar se mujhe
Aisa ek sapna in aankhon mein sajo loo main

Na zaroorat ho kisi saathi ki na kisi sahare ki
Khud hi chalun chal ke giru phir gir ke uth jaoo
Aisi ho zindagi ki raah jis par chalun main

Kehta hai dil ae “Jasdeep” kiska hai intezaar tujhe
Hai bewafa sab yeh jaante bhi hai sabse pyaar tujhe
Jab shama ko hi nahi afsos parwaane ke jal jaane ka
To kyu ban ke parwaana uss shama ke liye jaloo main

To kyu ban ke parwaana uss shama ke liye jaloo main

[loveforgudia]

Originally Posted by jasdeephere

Hai itni si khwahish ke khud ko pa loo main
Hai itni si hasrat ke khud mein hi jee loo main
Na rahegi jagah is dil mein baaki kisi gair ke liye
To haste hue zehar ghamon ka bhi pee loo main

Na ho waqt mere paas duniya ke zhamelo ka
Na mile fursat kabhi khud ke hi ikhtiyaar se mujhe
Aisa ek sapna in aankhon mein sajo loo main

Na zaroorat ho kisi saathi ki na kisi sahare ki
Khud hi chalun chal ke giru phir gir ke uth jaoo
Aisi ho zindagi ki raah jis par chalun main

Kehta hai dil ae “Jasdeep” kiska hai intezaar tujhe
Hai bewafa sab yeh jaante bhi hai sabse pyaar tujhe
Jab shama ko hi nahi afsos parwaane ke jal jaane ka
To kyu ban ke parwaana uss shama ke liye jaloo main

To kyu ban ke parwaana uss shama ke liye jaloo main

Hello Jasdeep ji, aapne bahot hi achhchha likha hai aur aapka likha hua padhke humaare dil ne jo bhi socha kaha humane uasi ko bayaan karti ek koshish forum mai post ki hai
"Parwaane ke kaaran shama sadiyon se badnaam hai"
i hope you wont mind. agar humane kuchh galat likha ho to hume maaf kardena. par humaare dil me kuchh aaya aur humne uase lafzon mai bayaan kar diya galti ho gai ho to maaf karna.

Aapki dost : Gudia


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