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Question satate kyon ho??? - 25th February 2008, 08:52 PM

Ab zindagi ko yoon hi meetatey kyon ho
Sehara mein deewar uthatey kyun ho
Teri raahon mein Phool sajaa rakhey hain
Hataa-hataa ke inhey raah banatey kyun ho
Mainey seeney mein toofaan utha rakhaa hai
Nigaaheyn pher ke inhe aur barhatey kyun ho
Bari muddatt ke baad aaj need aaii hai
Merey khwabon mein aa aa key jagatey kyun ho
Koi ummid nahin phir bhi jalayaa hai diyaa
Bujha bujha ke andheron ko barhatey kyo ho
Hum baithey hain khaamosh wadiyon ki tarah
Sard hawaaon ki raftaar barhatey kyon

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Ab zindagi ko yoon hi meetatey kyon ho
Sehara mein deewar uthatey kyun ho
Teri raahon mein Phool sajaa rakhey hain
Hataa-hataa ke inhey raah banatey kyun ho
Mainey seeney mein toofaan utha rakhaa hai
Nigaaheyn pher ke inhe aur barhatey kyun ho
Bari muddatt ke baad aaj need aaii hai
Merey khwabon mein aa aa key jagatey kyun ho
Koi ummid nahin phir bhi jalayaa hai diyaa
Bujha bujha ke andheron ko barhatey kyo ho
Hum baithey hain khaamosh wadiyon ki tarah
Sard hawaaon ki raftaar barhatey kyon

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thanks sanaji,..collection ji and eyesflickers ji.......




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Ab zindagi ko yoon hi meetatey kyon ho
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Ab zindagi ko yoon hi meetatey kyon ho
Sehara mein deewar uthatey kyun ho
Teri raahon mein Phool sajaa rakhey hain
Hataa-hataa ke inhey raah banatey kyun ho
Mainey seeney mein toofaan utha rakhaa hai
Nigaaheyn pher ke inhe aur barhatey kyun ho
Bari muddatt ke baad aaj need aaii hai
Merey khwabon mein aa aa key jagatey kyun ho
Koi ummid nahin phir bhi jalayaa hai diyaa
Bujha bujha ke andheron ko barhatey kyo ho
Hum baithey hain khaamosh wadiyon ki tarah
Sard hawaaon ki raftaar barhatey kyon
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Love satate kyon ho - 27th June 2008, 01:46 AM

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21st July 2008, 06:33 PM

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Ab zindagi ko yoon hi meetatey kyon ho
Sehara mein deewar uthatey kyun ho
Teri raahon mein Phool sajaa rakhey hain
Hataa-hataa ke inhey raah banatey kyun ho
Mainey seeney mein toofaan utha rakhaa hai
Nigaaheyn pher ke inhe aur barhatey kyun ho
Bari muddatt ke baad aaj need aaii hai
Merey khwabon mein aa aa key jagatey kyun ho
Koi ummid nahin phir bhi jalayaa hai diyaa
Bujha bujha ke andheron ko barhatey kyo ho
Hum baithey hain khaamosh wadiyon ki tarah
Sard hawaaon ki raftaar barhatey kyon
wow.....bahut khoob....

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tum yoon baar baar humey bulati kyuN ho,
agar kuch hai ahsaas hamare liye,
to housla rakho yoon beqaraar hoti kyuN ho"

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Di... ye ghazal hamari nahi hai...

jis din hamne sdc join kiya tha shayed usi din humne ye ghazal post kiya tha,tab ham sdc ke rules nahi jaante the,ke doosre ke kalam ke neeche (nm) mention karna hai...

lekin jabse hamne rules ko jana hai tabse honestly sab ko follow kiya hai,di hamari ye request hai apse ke ise aap edit karein aur ghazal ke neeche(nm) likh dein...

infact hum to is ghazal ke bare me almost bhool hi gaye the...lekin aj jab apne isko front page per laya to hame yaad aaya ... aur laga apko inform kar dena chahiye...

di...hum ye msg apko PM bhi kar sakte the...lekin ham ye chahte the ke ye msg zyada se zyada log padhe...aur jisne hamari tarah anjane me ghalti ki ho...ya kar raha ho..to usay wo...hamri tarah sudhare...

doston hame koi haq nahi banta ,kisi aur ki mehnat ka sehra hum apne sar per pehne..

anjane me ki gayi bhool to bhool hai,...per jo log ise jaan boojh kar rahe hai, unse kehdu ye gunah(crime) hai..

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dear zainy..........humey bahut accha laga ki aapne apni galati ko samja hai aur khuley dil se sabke saamne yeh baat sawikaar ki hai ki yeh poetry aapki nahi hai aur jab aapne post ki tab aapko es baat ki jaankari nahi thi ki jo aapki poetry na ho uske neeche "NOT MINE" ya poet ka naam likhna jaroori hai...ab aapko pata hai to aapne us galati ko bahut acchi tarah se sabke saamne pesh kiya hai taaki koi aur aise galati na kare....good


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