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intha_e_muhabbat -
18th December 2010, 08:03 PM
Waqt.e.rkhsat khen taary khen jugnu aye
Har pahnany mjhe phool se bazo aye Bus gai ha mery ahsas mn ye kasi mahik Koi khushbo mn lagaon teri khushbo aye Mn ne din rat khuda se ye dua mangi the Koi ahat na ho dar pe mery or tu aye Us ki baten k gul.o.lala pe shabnam barsy Sab ko apnany ka us shokh ko jado aye Us ne cho kar mjhe pather se phir insan kya Mudaton bad meri ankhon mn anso aye... |
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18th December 2010, 08:47 PM
khush aamdeed tanveer saahab..aaapki post padhi humne.. behad ummdaah tahreer rahi hai aapki.. kuch alag sa kuch naya sa.. aate rahen.. likhte rahen..
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andar_ka_musam -
18th December 2010, 09:41 PM
BARISHON ka mosam hey. Rooh ki fizaon mein. Gamzada hwaein hein. Besabab udasi hey. Is ajeeb mosam mein. Beqrar raton ki. Beshumar batein hein. Un ginat afsaney hein. Jo bohat khamoshi sey. Dil pey sehtey phirtey hein. Or ba amr-e-mjboori. Sab sey kehtey phirtey hein. "Aj mosam acha hey"... |
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20th December 2010, 11:27 AM
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wah bahut sundar ehsaas hain daad kkubul karen duaon ke saath Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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20th December 2010, 03:04 PM
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good one.........................................  Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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24th December 2010, 08:11 PM
Bahut khoob lage ehsaas aapke ....... dili daad
 YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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25th December 2010, 04:18 PM
thanx dosto mughe khosi hoi ap sab ki mere lie itni hosla afzai se
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Janaab tanveer sahab,.. Welcome to Sdc... Janaab Sdc ke rules ke mutabiq,kisi aur shayer ki shayri post karte waqt saath me (not mine) likhna zaruri hai... Aur usay "shayri-e-mashhoor "shayer section me post kijiye.. Yeh ghazal janaab Basheer badr sahab ki hai...isi liye saath me shayer ka naam bhi likhna aapka farz hai... Shayed dusri nazm bhi aapki nahi hai...aapse guzarish hai ke aap aagey se kisi aur ki shayri post karte waqt zarur (nm) ya (not mine) likh diya kareiN... Shukriyah Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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28th December 2010, 09:28 PM
Very nice post. Keep it up.
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28th December 2010, 09:34 PM
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wow bahut khoob kaha aapne....accha laga aapko padna, bas kuch spell mistake haiN agar unko nazar-andaaz kar deN to masha-allah..balle balle hai jii. Usne chu kar mujhe pathar se phir insaan kiya Mudato.N baad meri ankhon mein aansu aaye... very nice. god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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28th December 2010, 09:57 PM
Very nice post. Keep it up.
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Intha e muhabbat -
29th December 2010, 12:01 PM
uska rukh_e_mahtaab us k haath choom loon
jo bas chale to us ki har baat choom loon choo jae jo us ki zulf ko barish ki boond wo bond kaya barish kiya mosm_e_barsaat choom loon bhole se kabhi aa jae mere khwab main agar main khwab kaya neend kaya wo raat choom loon mughe kuch ahi chahey bas khali haath par mere rakh de wo apa haath main wo haath choom loon rote houe lag jae kabhi mere seene se agar main uski uske rukhsaar us ki sari zaat choom loon |
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29th December 2010, 02:28 PM
http://www.shayri.com/forums/announcement.php?f=4
Welcome to Shayri.com Tanveer sahab, Aapse guzarish hai ke Shayri.com ke rules follow kareiN.. Jo shayri aapki nahi hai ,uske niche "not mine" likh diya kareiN.. Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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maazrat -
29th December 2010, 02:43 PM
dosto in main se koi bhi ghazal meri nahi he main apni poetry sirf apki shayri main submit karta hoon
thanx to zaniya aapi umeed he aainda ap ko mugh se koi shakiyat nahi ho gi |
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29th December 2010, 02:49 PM
Aap kisi jaane maane shayer ki shayri post karna chahte hain tou shayer ke naam ke saath "shayri-e-mashhoor shayer" section me post kijiye..
agar shayer ka naam pata nahi hai tou"anjuman-e-shayri" section me post kijiye.. "aapki shayri " section islaah/tabsire ke liye hai.. aur haan mera naam zainy hai....sirf zainy kafi hai.. Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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sorry -
29th December 2010, 06:08 PM
oh 1 martba phir sorry
main ne naam par ghoor nahi kiya tha g theek he samgh gaya or han wo meri apni shayri jo main ap ki shayri main poct karta hoon wo wahan se phir ghaiyb ho jati he is ki koi waja |
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december ki yad main |
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december ki yad main -
29th December 2010, 06:41 PM
ya meri apni shairy he par ya ap ki shaery main post nahi ho saki ap ki nazar jahan jaga mile bataey ga zaror kesi lagi ap k rae ka muntazir
is dafa december main tere aane ka sun kar dil ki dharkno ko bhi khayal tera na aya be yaqeni qayam thi lehje par asar na tha khayal bhi to yakja the hont bhi to sakit the hathon ki wo be cheni unglion ka chathkhana kush bhi na tha ab ki bar ham ne to ye samjha tha k jo ham ne socha tha ham kamyab hain us main k tujh ko bhol jane ki har nishani qayam thi is dafa december main is dafa december main tere ane ka sun kar kuch bhi na kiya ham ne na hi tere tuhfon ko ab ki bar khola he na hi tera khat koi aansuon se dhoya he tere sab kitaben bhi bar bar parhne ki pahle thi jo aadat si wo bhi na rahi ab k yani k zabat mera kamyab he ab k tujh ko bhol jane ki har nishni qayam thi is dafa december main is dafa december main tere ane ka sun kar kuch bhi na tha pahle sa pahle ki tarah ab k bagh ki tarf jana ache ache sare phol tere khatir chun lena kamre ki wo har khirki pholon se wo bhar dena kamre ki sajawat main ghar ki sab araish main hamara mashwre dena kam pora hone par sare kam ka phir se khud se jaiza lena tere har pasand ka wo zahan main mere hona kuch bhi na tha ab ki bar shayad k ham sache the tujh ko bhol jane ki har nishani qayam thi is dafa december main is dafa december main tujh ko bhol jane ki har nishani qayam thi par hamin pata na tha tujh ko bhol jane ki is sari koshish main ham kamyab the kitne tujh ko bhol jane ki har naishani k hote tujh ko yad rakhne ki ik nishani qayam thi har nishani se barh kar ya nishani dayam thi jis ko ham na samjhe the wo to chalte chalte hi jab aaene talk puhanche aks apna dekha to chalakte hue aanso dekh kar laga ham ko jase ham se goya hon lahja bhi sawali ho or ham se kahte hain is dafa december main us ko bhol jane main tum tum kamyab ho kitne tum kamyab ho kitne is dafa december main or ham ya sochte hain k is dafa december main us ko bhol jane ki har nishani qayam thi phir us ka zikar aane par ashkon ka ya beh perna gar us ko bhol jane ki har nishani qayam he phir us ka zikar aane par ye serabi kesi he maloom ye hi hota he k us ko bhol jane ki har nishani jhoti he har dafa december main us ka zikar aane par hamare aadtain sari agar che badal jain zabat ye mera sara gar che sath mera de par jo ashk hain mere usi ko yad karte hain ye faryad karte hain k is dafa december main loot kar jo aao tum phir kahin na jao tum kash kahin na jao tum is dafa . . . . |
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29th December 2010, 07:26 PM
is dafa december main
tere aane ka sun kar dil ki dharkno ko bhi khayal tera na aya be yaqeni qayam thi lehje par asar na tha khayal bhi to yakja the hont bhi to sakit the hathon ki wo be cheni unglion ka chathkhana kush bhi na tha ab ki bar ham ne to ye samjha tha k jo ham ne socha tha ham kamyab hain us main k tujh ko bhol jane ki har nishani qayam thi is dafa december main is dafa december main tere ane ka sun kar kuch bhi na kiya ham ne na hi tere tuhfon ko ab ki bar khola he na hi tera khat koi aansuon se dhoya he tere sab kitaben bhi bar bar parhne ki pahle thi jo aadat si wo bhi na rahi ab k yani k zabat mera kamyab he ab k tujh ko bhol jane ki har nishni qayam thi is dafa december main is dafa december main tere ane ka sun kar kuch bhi na tha pahle sa pahle ki tarah ab k bagh ki tarf jana ache ache sare phol tere khatir chun lena kamre ki wo har khirki pholon se wo bhar dena kamre ki sajawat main ghar ki sab araish main hamara mashwre dena kam pora hone par sare kam ka phir se khud se jaiza lena tere har pasand ka wo zahan main mere hona kuch bhi na tha ab ki bar shayad k ham sache the tujh ko bhol jane ki har nishani qayam thi is dafa december main is dafa december main tujh ko bhol jane ki har nishani qayam thi par hamin pata na tha tujh ko bhol jane ki is sari koshish main ham kamyab the kitne tujh ko bhol jane ki har naishani k hote tujh ko yad rakhne ki ik nishani qayam thi har nishani se barh kar ya nishani dayam thi jis ko ham na samjhe the wo to chalte chalte hi jab aaene talk puhanche aks apna dekha to chalakte hue aanso dekh kar laga ham ko jase ham se goya hon lahja bhi sawali ho or ham se kahte hain is dafa december main us ko bhol jane main tum tum kamyab ho kitne tum kamyab ho kitne is dafa december main or ham ya sochte hain k is dafa december main us ko bhol jane ki har nishani qayam thi phir us ka zikar aane par ashkon ka ya beh perna gar us ko bhol jane ki har nishani qayam he phir us ka zikar aane par ye serabi kesi he maloom ye hi hota he k us ko bhol jane ki har nishani jhoti he har dafa december main us ka zikar aane par hamare aadtain sari agar che badal jain zabat ye mera sara gar che sath mera de par jo ashk hain mere usi ko yad karte hain ye faryad karte hain k is dafa december main loot kar jo aao tum phir kahin na jao tum kash kahin na jao tum is dafa . . . . |
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mosam ki yadain -
31st December 2010, 05:39 PM
Kal halki halki barish thi,
Kal sard hwa ka raqs b tha, Kal phol b nikhry nikhry thy, Kal un par tara akas b tha, Kal badal kaly gahry thy, Kal chand par lakhon pahry thy, Kuch tukry tari yadon k,bri dair sy dil par tahry thy, Kal yadain uljhi uljhi then, Ab tak jo na suljhi then, Kal yad bohat tum aya thy, Kal yad bohat tum aya thy... |
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