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Love Ae Pari-rukh! Main Tera Parastaar Hua....!! - 6th March 2010, 09:22 AM

Mehfil-e-Dard k sabhi hazireen ko Adaab!

wo meharbaan hai to ikraar kyoon nahin karta
wo badgumaan hai to souu baar aazmaaye mujhe

Qateel Shifai



tum se beech safar mulaqaat huii, pyar hua!
tum ne, aisa dil per jaadu kiya, aitebaar hua!

pari-zaad! teri makhmoor nighaoon ki qasam
main, tere husn k talism meiN giraftaar hua!

pari-zaad = fay, beautiful
talism = magic, mystery

roz shab-e-hijr meiN jaagta rehta hooN!
vasal k chund lamhooN ka talabgaar hua!

shab-e-hijr = night of separation
vasal = meeting
talabgaar = seeker

roz tera roop uroosi joorey meiN sochta hooN!
maiN hi nahi, mera shabistaan bhi beqaraar hua!

uroosi joorey = bridal cloths
shabistaan = bedroom

meri rooh tak betaab hai teri chah mein "HSN"!
ae pari-rukh! maiN teraa "parastaar" hua!


pari-rukh = angel faced
parastaar = lover, adorer


Raaye ka muntazir,,


*hSn* : parStaar

tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN...
("Asad")

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Mehfil-e-Dard k sabhi hazireen ko Adaab!

wo meharbaan hai to ikraar kyoon nahin karta
wo badgumaan hai to souu baar aazmaaye mujhe

Qateel Shifai



tum se beech safar mulaqaat huii, pyar hua!
tum ne, aisa dil per jaadu kiya, aitebaar hua!

pari-zaad! teri makhmoor nighaoon ki qasam
main, tere husn k talism meiN giraftaar hua!

pari-zaad = fay, beautiful
talism = magic, mystery

roz shab-e-hijr meiN jaagta rehta hooN!
vasal k chund lamhooN ka talabgaar hua!

shab-e-hijr = night of separation
vasal = meeting
talabgaar = seeker

roz tera roop uroosi joorey meiN sochta hooN!
maiN hi nahi, mera shabistaan bhi beqaraar hua!

uroosi joorey = bridal cloths
shabistaan = bedroom

meri rooh tak betaab hai teri chah mein "HSN"!
ae pari-rukh! maiN teraa "parastaar" hua!

pari-rukh = angel faced
parastaar = lover, adorer


Raaye ka muntazir,,
hasan bhai
radhe radhe

bahut khoob...badi hi sundar ghazal hai... khaas taur par matla aur makta dono hi khoobsoorat hai...aise hi likhte rahe


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6th March 2010, 11:06 AM

Bahut Khoob......Hassan Ji.... Aapki Romantic Peshkash bahut umdaa lagi mujhe.....harek ashaar pari-zaad ! bana hai........ek beautiful creation....dil se daad hazir hai....yunhi likhte rahen....khush rahen....

apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath.....







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6th March 2010, 01:37 PM

Hasan bhai Salam walekum!

Bahut hi achchi gazal pesh ki hai aapne, per yeh to Ishkiya shayari huyi ise dard section mein kyun dal diye bhai......

Waise puri gazal achchi hai aur sabhi sher pasand aaye,
Younhi likhate rahiye... Daad kabool kijiye....

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Bohat khoobsurat peshkash Hassan Saheb.............


Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil

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Smile Thanks a lot.....IshQ Jii... - 7th March 2010, 01:35 PM

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hasan bhai
radhe radhe

bahut khoob...badi hi sundar ghazal hai... khaas taur par matla aur makta dono hi khoobsoorat hai...aise hi likhte rahe
IshQ Jii,,

Daad is pazeeraayi k liye be-had shukriya.....

Saath dete rahiye ga,,

DuaooN k saath,

Faqat,,


*hSn* : parStaar

tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN...
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Iss khubsurat shayri ke liye aapko daad bhi de chuke hum...!

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=67709

Kuch naye khayaal par zaraa kaam kijiyegaa, ok...? Intazaar hai...!

Duaaon ke saath

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Mehfil-e-Dard k sabhi hazireen ko Adaab!

wo meharbaan hai to ikraar kyoon nahin karta
wo badgumaan hai to souu baar aazmaaye mujhe

Qateel Shifai



tum se beech safar mulaqaat huii, pyar hua!
tum ne, aisa dil per jaadu kiya, aitebaar hua!

pari-zaad! teri makhmoor nighaoon ki qasam
main, tere husn k talism meiN giraftaar hua!

pari-zaad = fay, beautiful
talism = magic, mystery

roz shab-e-hijr meiN jaagta rehta hooN!
vasal k chund lamhooN ka talabgaar hua!

shab-e-hijr = night of separation
vasal = meeting
talabgaar = seeker

roz tera roop uroosi joorey meiN sochta hooN!
maiN hi nahi, mera shabistaan bhi beqaraar hua!

uroosi joorey = bridal cloths
shabistaan = bedroom

meri rooh tak betaab hai teri chah mein "HSN"!
ae pari-rukh! maiN teraa "parastaar" hua!

pari-rukh = angel faced
parastaar = lover, adorer


Raaye ka muntazir,,
hassan bhai...kamaal kar diya...
khoob likha hai aapne...ek ek sheyr dil ke tar chhedta hua chala gaya, shayad aisa hi kuch padhne ko taras raha tha....
bahut bahut badhiya.....
ba's daad hi daad hai....qubuul karte jaiye....

aapka dost...
masttt...


'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....



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Smile Thanks a lot.....Sir! - 8th March 2010, 09:34 AM

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Bahut Khoob......Hassan Ji.... Aapki Romantic Peshkash bahut umdaa lagi mujhe.....harek ashaar pari-zaad ! bana hai........ek beautiful creation....dil se daad hazir hai....yunhi likhte rahen....khush rahen....

apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath.....
Naresh Jii,,

Is qadar pasandeed'gi k liye be-had shukriya...
Hur dafa, hur baar, hur moqa per aap ka saath milta hai,
to boht hi ziyaada khushi hoti hai......

Apna khiyaal rakhiye ga,,

DuaooN k saath,

Aap ka,,


*hSn* : parStaar

tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN...
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Smile Boht boht shukriyaa... Bhai! - 9th March 2010, 09:40 AM

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Hasan bhai Salam walekum!

Bahut hi achchi gazal pesh ki hai aapne, per yeh to Ishkiya shayari huyi ise dard section mein kyun dal diye bhai......

Waise puri gazal achchi hai aur sabhi sher pasand aaye,
Younhi likhate rahiye... Daad kabool kijiye....

Khuda Hafez
Sameer Bhai,,

Pehle to ghazal ko pasand karne k liye boht boht shukriya...
Aur dard meiN is liye post kiya k yeh ishq-aur-dard mix
shayri thi.... bas dard hi meiN daal diya....

Saath dete rahiye ga,,

DuaooN k saath,

Aap ka Bhai,,


*hSn* : parStaar

tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
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pari-zaad! teri makhmoor nighaoon ki qasam
main, tere husn k talism meiN giraftaar hua!

roz shab-e-hijr meiN jaagta rehta hooN!
vasal k chund lamhooN ka talabgaar hua!


meri rooh tak betaab hai teri chah mein "HSN"!
ae pari-rukh! maiN teraa "parastaar" hua!



ji bhaut khubsoorat ehsaas hai.............................



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9th March 2010, 12:08 PM

roz shab-e-hijr meiN jaagta rehta hooN!
vasal k chund lamhooN ka talabgaar hua!


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Smile Boht boht shukriyaa... - 10th March 2010, 01:17 PM

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Bohat khoobsurat peshkash Hassan Saheb.............
Sajid Sahib,,

Khaak lafzooN ki tareef k liye boht boht shukriya....

Saath dete rahiye ga,,

DuaooN k saath,,

Faqat,,


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Smile Shukriyaa.. Boss! - 11th March 2010, 12:57 PM

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Iss khubsurat shayri ke liye aapko daad bhi de chuke hum...!

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=67709

Kuch naye khayaal par zaraa kaam kijiyegaa, ok...? Intazaar hai...!

Duaaon ke saath

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Dobara is liye post kii, jin nazrooN ne yeh composition
nahi phad'hii thi, woh phad lieN.....

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Smile Mashkoor hooN bhai... - 12th March 2010, 08:50 AM

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hassan bhai...kamaal kar diya...
khoob likha hai aapne...ek ek sheyr dil ke tar chhedta hua chala gaya, shayad aisa hi kuch padhne ko taras raha tha....
bahut bahut badhiya.....
ba's daad hi daad hai....qubuul karte jaiye....

aapka dost...
masttt...
Vikram Bhai,,

Mere likhay ko itni izzat bakh'shne k liye boht boht shukriyaa,
aap ki daad sir aankhooN per.....

Aise hi saath dete rahiye ga,,

DuaooN k saath,

Aap ka,,


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Smile Boht boht shukriyaa... - 13th March 2010, 08:49 AM

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bahot khoob hassan bhai... aashaar dil ko chu gaye aur bahot apne lage..
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Smile Shukriyaa... - 15th March 2010, 09:58 AM

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vasal k chund lamhooN ka talabgaar hua!


kya baat h hasan ji, very nice.....
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Smile Boht shukriya bhai,, - 17th March 2010, 09:08 AM

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bahot khoob hassan bhai... aashaar dil ko chu gaye aur bahot apne lage..
likhte rahen.
shaad...
Shaad Bhaii,,

Likhay ko pasand karne aur housla afzaai k liye be-hadd
mamnooN hooN.....

Saath dete rahiye ga,,

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Bahot khoob hassan........tumhara ye rumanii andaz dil ko chu gaya har ek sher impressive........is behtareen ghazal keliye dheron daad
Naaz!

Seems like its been years we know each other!

Keep coming, keep appreciating!

Take care,

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