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Angry Tera Deewana - 12th July 2005, 12:52 PM

Ghunghat nein tujhe dekha to deewana hua.
Sangeet ka tarana hua,
Shamaa ka parwana hua,
Masti ka Mastana hua,
Jaise hi ghunghat uthaya is duniya se ravaana hua...
   
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12th July 2005, 12:56 PM

lolzzzzzzzzzzz.. bahut sahi likha hai...!


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12th July 2005, 02:04 PM

bahut ahche kafi ahche ehshas hain aur kafi ahchi lines hain aise hi likhte rahiye.


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12th July 2005, 10:00 PM

.. good one... I think the last line should contain the word Gali instead of Duniya .

Ek aur cheez yad rakhiye Duniya ki har ladki khoooooooobsurat hoti hai.... Keep writing off course smmmmmiling


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