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Love khwaab tumhara dekhoon.. - 4th September 2009, 09:30 PM

Doston ko aadab bado ko salaam , aap ki mehafil main fir say aana hua hai

ise umeed per ki aap mera housla afzai karoge.................
mera ek kawaab hai .........................pura hai yaa adhura hai faisla aapka ?


Kaash is zindagi mein ye bhi nazaara dekhoon.
Aankh meri ho magar khwaab tumhara dekhoon..
Mere hi dil mein nahin ishq ki shamaa roshan.
Teri ankhon mein bhi chaahat ka sharaara dekhoon."

Tujh se milne ki duaa lab se nikal jaati hai.
Aasmaan pe jo koi toot-ta taara dekhoon..
Teri aankhon ke samander mein is tarah dooboon.
Ta-qayaamat na kabhi koi kinaara dekhoon..
Ab mujhe koi zuroorat nahin bahaaron ki.
Main to khilne ke liye tera ishaara dekhoon..
Tere haathon ki laqeeron mein hai kismat meri.
Arsh per kyon main muqadder ka sitaara dekhoon..
Jo maseeha tha wohi ban gaya dushman mera.
Ab main jeene ke liye kiska sahaara dekhoon..


   
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4th September 2009, 10:12 PM

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Doston ko aadab bado ko salaam , aap ki mehafil main fir say aana hua hai

ise umeed per ki aap mera housla afzai karoge.................
mera ek kawaab hai .........................pura hai yaa adhura hai faisla aapka ?


Kaash is zindagi mein ye bhi nazaara dekhoon.
Aankh meri ho magar khwaab tumhara dekhoon..
Mere hi dil mein nahin ishq ki shamaa roshan.
Teri ankhon mein bhi chaahat ka sharaara dekhoon."
Tujh se milne ki duaa lab se nikal jaati hai.
Aasmaan pe jo koi toot-ta taara dekhoon..
Teri aankhon ke samander mein is tarah dooboon.
Ta-qayaamat na kabhi koi kinaara dekhoon..
Ab mujhe koi zuroorat nahin bahaaron ki.
Main to khilne ke liye tera ishaara dekhoon..
Tere haathon ki laqeeron mein hai kismat meri.
Arsh per kyon main muqadder ka sitaara dekhoon..
Jo maseeha tha wohi ban gaya dushman mera.
Ab main jeene ke liye kiska sahaara dekhoon..
विचत्रा भाई
अपने अच्छा लिखा है पर मेरी सम्झ में नही आया के आपका सब्जेक्ट क्या है और आप अपने र्य्दम से बिल्कुल ही अलग हट गये है इस कविता मैं. आपका संदेश तो मैं समझा हूँ पर कोई और समझेगा के नही ये तो पड़ने वाले ही बताएँगे.


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अपने अच्छा लिखा है पर मेरी सम्झ में नही आया के आपका सब्जेक्ट क्या है और आप अपने र्य्दम से बिल्कुल ही अलग हट गये है इस कविता मैं. आपका संदेश तो मैं समझा हूँ पर कोई और समझेगा के नही ये तो पड़ने वाले ही बताएँगे.
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are sorry apne lika bhot acha hai apne space nai diye hai isliye meri samjh me nai aya tha acha lkha hai apne main ek nazar mein samj nai paya tha sorry.


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are sorry apne lika bhot acha hai apne space nai diye hai isliye meri samjh me nai aya tha acha lkha hai apne main ek nazar mein samj nai paya tha sorry.
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Yeh manjilen yeh rastay mushkilo bhari yeh dager.....
Tu nahin hai mere sath to mushkilo ka hai safer......
Tham lay tu mera daman meri khushiyan nahi hai koi.....
Na meri manjil na mera karwaan na humsafer hai koi............
   
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5th September 2009, 12:27 AM

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Kaash is zindagi mein ye bhi nazaara dekhoon.
Aankh meri ho magar khwaab tumhara dekhoon..
Mere hi dil mein nahin ishq ki shamaa roshan.
Teri ankhon mein bhi chaahat ka sharaara dekhoon."
Tujh se milne ki duaa lab se nikal jaati hai.
Aasmaan pe jo koi toot-ta taara dekhoon..
Teri aankhon ke samander mein is tarah dooboon.
Ta-qayaamat na kabhi koi kinaara dekhoon..
Ab mujhe koi zuroorat nahin bahaaron ki.
Main to khilne ke liye tera ishaara dekhoon..
Tere haathon ki laqeeron mein hai kismat meri.
Arsh per kyon main muqadder ka sitaara dekhoon..
Jo maseeha tha wohi ban gaya dushman mera.
Ab main jeene ke liye kiska sahaara dekhoon..
vichiter ji.....bahut khub....badi umda aur khubsurat ghazal kahi hai aapne....sabhi sher mohabbat ki kahani ka dukh sukh khud hi bayaan kar rahe hai....mujhe padh kar acha laga......very nice creation.....superB........aise hi likhte rahiye.....khush rahiye.......




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vichiter ji.....bahut khub....badi umda aur khubsurat ghazal kahi hai aapne....sabhi sher mohabbat ki kahani ka dukh sukh khud hi bayaan kar rahe hai....mujhe padh kar acha laga......very nice creation.....superB........aise hi likhte rahiye.....khush rahiye.......
dhanyavaad naresh ji
bas aap jaise kadardaan ki zarorat hai jo sabka housla afzai kartay hai
aapka
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Yeh manjilen yeh rastay mushkilo bhari yeh dager.....
Tu nahin hai mere sath to mushkilo ka hai safer......
Tham lay tu mera daman meri khushiyan nahi hai koi.....
Na meri manjil na mera karwaan na humsafer hai koi............
   
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Doston ko aadab bado ko salaam , aap ki mehafil main fir say aana hua hai

ise umeed per ki aap mera housla afzai karoge.................
mera ek kawaab hai .........................pura hai yaa adhura hai faisla aapka ?


Kaash is zindagi mein ye bhi nazaara dekhoon.
Aankh meri ho magar khwaab tumhara dekhoon..
Mere hi dil mein nahin ishq ki shamaa roshan.
Teri ankhon mein bhi chaahat ka sharaara dekhoon."

Tujh se milne ki duaa lab se nikal jaati hai.
Aasmaan pe jo koi toot-ta taara dekhoon..
Teri aankhon ke samander mein is tarah dooboon.
Ta-qayaamat na kabhi koi kinaara dekhoon..
Ab mujhe koi zuroorat nahin bahaaron ki.
Main to khilne ke liye tera ishaara dekhoon..
Tere haathon ki laqeeron mein hai kismat meri.
Arsh per kyon main muqadder ka sitaara dekhoon..
Jo maseeha tha wohi ban gaya dushman mera.
Ab main jeene ke liye kiska sahaara dekhoon..

Bohat hi khoob...

maiN humesha kaha karta huN takneek se jyada mujhe nayapan lubhata hai .. kyuNki khyaal to wahi hai ... par hum use kitne naye alfaazon maiN piro ke khoobsoorat aur gehra bana paaye wahi shayri maiN noor aa jaata hai ,, mujhe behad pasand aaye aapke ye alfaaz .. inme naya pan to hai hi .. bebaak bayani bhi hai ..

aise hi likhte rahiye

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Bohat hi khoob...

maiN humesha kaha karta huN takneek se jyada mujhe nayapan lubhata hai .. kyuNki khyaal to wahi hai ... par hum use kitne naye alfaazon maiN piro ke khoobsoorat aur gehra bana paaye wahi shayri maiN noor aa jaata hai ,, mujhe behad pasand aaye aapke ye alfaaz .. inme naya pan to hai hi .. bebaak bayani bhi hai ..

aise hi likhte rahiye

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aapnay mujhay jo protsahit kiya hai uska dhanya vaad
aapka vichitra


Yeh manjilen yeh rastay mushkilo bhari yeh dager.....
Tu nahin hai mere sath to mushkilo ka hai safer......
Tham lay tu mera daman meri khushiyan nahi hai koi.....
Na meri manjil na mera karwaan na humsafer hai koi............
   
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5th September 2009, 03:58 PM

Kaash is zindagi mein ye bhi nazaara dekhoon.
Aankh meri ho magar khwaab tumhara dekhoon..

Mere hi dil mein nahin ishq ki shamaa roshan.
Teri ankhon mein bhi chaahat ka sharaara dekhoon.

Tujh se milne ki duaa lab se nikal jaati hai.
Aasmaan pe jo koi toot-ta taara dekhoon..

Teri aankhon ke samander mein is tarah dooboon.
Ta-qayaamat na kabhi koi kinaara dekhoon..

Ab mujhe koi zuroorat nahin bahaaron ki.
Main to khilne ke liye tera ishaara dekhoon..

Tere haathon ki laqeeron mein hai kismat meri.
Arsh per kyon main muqadder ka sitaara dekhoon..

Jo maseeha tha wohi ban gaya dushman mera.
Ab main jeene ke liye kiska sahaara dekhoon..




Vichiter ji namaskaar

bahut hi umda likha hai aapne, aapki likhi hue gazal pheli baar padi hai, sabhi ahsaas bahut umda haiN, aur khaas baat ki poori gazal ka flow bahut badiya hai......daad hazir hai dil se.

god bless u


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Kaash is zindagi mein ye bhi nazaara dekhoon.
Aankh meri ho magar khwaab tumhara dekhoon..

Mere hi dil mein nahin ishq ki shamaa roshan.
Teri ankhon mein bhi chaahat ka sharaara dekhoon.

Tujh se milne ki duaa lab se nikal jaati hai.
Aasmaan pe jo koi toot-ta taara dekhoon..

Teri aankhon ke samander mein is tarah dooboon.
Ta-qayaamat na kabhi koi kinaara dekhoon..

Ab mujhe koi zuroorat nahin bahaaron ki.
Main to khilne ke liye tera ishaara dekhoon..

Tere haathon ki laqeeron mein hai kismat meri.
Arsh per kyon main muqadder ka sitaara dekhoon..

Jo maseeha tha wohi ban gaya dushman mera.
Ab main jeene ke liye kiska sahaara dekhoon..




Vichiter ji namaskaar

bahut hi umda likha hai aapne, aapki likhi hue gazal pheli baar padi hai, sabhi ahsaas bahut umda haiN, aur khaas baat ki poori gazal ka flow bahut badiya hai......daad hazir hai dil se.

god bless u
sunita ji namaskar
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aise hi protsahit kijeyega
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Yeh manjilen yeh rastay mushkilo bhari yeh dager.....
Tu nahin hai mere sath to mushkilo ka hai safer......
Tham lay tu mera daman meri khushiyan nahi hai koi.....
Na meri manjil na mera karwaan na humsafer hai koi............
   
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Kaash is zindagi mein ye bhi nazaara dekhoon.
Aankh meri ho magar khwaab tumhara dekhoon..

Mere hi dil mein nahin ishq ki shamaa roshan.
Teri ankhon mein bhi chaahat ka sharaara dekhoon.

Tujh se milne ki duaa lab se nikal jaati hai.
Aasmaan pe jo koi toot-ta taara dekhoon..

Teri aankhon ke samander mein is tarah dooboon.
Ta-qayaamat na kabhi koi kinaara dekhoon..

Ab mujhe koi zuroorat nahin bahaaron ki.
Main to khilne ke liye tera ishaara dekhoon..

Tere haathon ki laqeeron mein hai kismat meri.
Arsh per kyon main muqadder ka sitaara dekhoon..

Jo maseeha tha wohi ban gaya dushman mera.
Ab main jeene ke liye kiska sahaara dekhoon..




Vichiter ji namaskaar

bahut hi umda likha hai aapne, aapki likhi hue gazal pheli baar padi hai, sabhi ahsaas bahut umda haiN, aur khaas baat ki poori gazal ka flow bahut badiya hai......daad hazir hai dil se.

god bless u
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AAP SABHI KA HOUSLA AFFZAI KARTI HAIN.........AISE HI KIJYEGA .....KHUSH RAHIYE

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Yeh manjilen yeh rastay mushkilo bhari yeh dager.....
Tu nahin hai mere sath to mushkilo ka hai safer......
Tham lay tu mera daman meri khushiyan nahi hai koi.....
Na meri manjil na mera karwaan na humsafer hai koi............
   
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vichiter ji.....bahut khub....badi umda aur khubsurat ghazal kahi hai aapne....sabhi sher mohabbat ki kahani ka dukh sukh khud hi bayaan kar rahe hai....mujhe padh kar acha laga......very nice creation.....superB........aise hi likhte rahiye.....khush rahiye.......
EK SHAYR KO JAB TAK ..............DAAD NA MILAY TO KUCH ADHURA HI LAGATA HAI AUR JAB AAP JAISE .........SHOKEEN MILAY TO DIL MAIN AGHAY LIKHNAY KI TAMMANA JAGTI HAI.........
AAP SABHI KA HOUSLA AFFZAI KARTI HAIN.........AISE HI KIJYEGA .....KHUSH RAHIYE

APPKA VICHITRA


Yeh manjilen yeh rastay mushkilo bhari yeh dager.....
Tu nahin hai mere sath to mushkilo ka hai safer......
Tham lay tu mera daman meri khushiyan nahi hai koi.....
Na meri manjil na mera karwaan na humsafer hai koi............
   
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DIL SE''''''
HUM HAIN NACHEEZ TUM HO NAZNEEN MERE..
HUM HAIN WFA-E-HUSN TUM HO DIL K SHEHZADE MERE....
TUMHARE BINA DIL CHADTA NHI SURAJ DHALTA NHI MERA..
TUM HI BS TUM HI HO DILNASHEEN MERE...........
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DIL SE''''''
HUM HAIN NACHEEZ TUM HO NAZNEEN MERE..
HUM HAIN WFA-E-HUSN TUM HO DIL K SHEHZADE MERE....
TUMHARE BINA DIL CHADTA NHI SURAJ DHALTA NHI MERA..
TUM HI BS TUM HI HO DILNASHEEN MERE...........
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Yeh manjilen yeh rastay mushkilo bhari yeh dager.....
Tu nahin hai mere sath to mushkilo ka hai safer......
Tham lay tu mera daman meri khushiyan nahi hai koi.....
Na meri manjil na mera karwaan na humsafer hai koi............
   
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Doston ko aadab bado ko salaam , aap ki mehafil main fir say aana hua hai

ise umeed per ki aap mera housla afzai karoge.................
mera ek kawaab hai .........................pura hai yaa adhura hai faisla aapka ?


Kaash is zindagi mein ye bhi nazaara dekhoon.
Aankh meri ho magar khwaab tumhara dekhoon..
Mere hi dil mein nahin ishq ki shamaa roshan.
Teri ankhon mein bhi chaahat ka sharaara dekhoon."
Tujh se milne ki duaa lab se nikal jaati hai.
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Ab main jeene ke liye kiska sahaara dekhoon..
Amit sahab aadaab......
Bhai aapki kalam mein to kafi nikhhar aa gaya hai achche khayal hai aur adaygii bhi achchi hai but kuch sher aapne mazmoom se hat ker bayan kiye hai...

High lighted sher achche lage..
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Amit sahab aadaab......
Bhai aapki kalam mein to kafi nikhhar aa gaya hai achche khayal hai aur adaygii bhi achchi hai but kuch sher aapne mazmoom se hat ker bayan kiye hai...

High lighted sher achche lage..
Likhate rahiye
Khush rahiye
EK SHAYR KO JAB TAK ..............DAAD NA MILAY TO KUCH ADHURA HI LAGATA HAI AUR JAB AAP JAISE .........SHOKEEN MILAY TO DIL MAIN AGHAY LIKHNAY KI TAMMANA JAGTI HAI.........
AAP SABHI KA HOUSLA AFFZAI KARTI HAIN.........AISE HI KIJYEGA .....KHUSH RAHIYE

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Adarniya vichiter JI

daad kabul kijiyega
wakai me aapne alfajo ke maydhaym se apne
bhawana ko bahut khub shabdo se bayaan
kiya hai. sach me tareef ke kabil hai.

bahut aacha .. aise hi koshish karte rahiyega.
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Vichitr ji..

eshaason ko badi hi sanjeedgi se lafzon ka roop diya hai aapne... vohi dard...har dafa naya aur taaza sa lagta hai...

Rabb raakha........



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Adarniya vichiter JI

daad kabul kijiyega
wakai me aapne alfajo ke maydhaym se apne
bhawana ko bahut khub shabdo se bayaan
kiya hai. sach me tareef ke kabil hai.

bahut aacha .. aise hi koshish karte rahiyega.
khus rahe kaamyaab hote rahe........

Ajay nidaan
bhai AJAY JI
aadaab
aur aapnay jo meri rachna ko saraha hai uskay liye aapka bhout bhout shukriya.........
bas aap aisay hi apna pyaar banaye rakhiyega ....
main aap ki seva main aur kuch bhi likhta rahounga............

aapka

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Tu nahin hai mere sath to mushkilo ka hai safer......
Tham lay tu mera daman meri khushiyan nahi hai koi.....
Na meri manjil na mera karwaan na humsafer hai koi............
   
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Vichitr ji..

eshaason ko badi hi sanjeedgi se lafzon ka roop diya hai aapne... vohi dard...har dafa naya aur taaza sa lagta hai...

Rabb raakha........

Aap sabhi gazal kay shokeeno ka dhanyavaad

aapka vichitra


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Tu nahin hai mere sath to mushkilo ka hai safer......
Tham lay tu mera daman meri khushiyan nahi hai koi.....
Na meri manjil na mera karwaan na humsafer hai koi............
   
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HELLOOO...
JI KAISE HAIN AAP?

ARZ KIYA HAI..

BAN SAHARAA BE SAHARON K LIYE.
BAN KINARA BE-KINARON K LIYE..!
JO JIYE APNE LIYE TO KYA JIYE.
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Doston ko aadab bado ko salaam , aap ki mehafil main fir say aana hua hai

ise umeed per ki aap mera housla afzai karoge.................
mera ek kawaab hai .........................pura hai yaa adhura hai faisla aapka ?


Kaash is zindagi mein ye bhi nazaara dekhoon.
Aankh meri ho magar khwaab tumhara dekhoon..
Mere hi dil mein nahin ishq ki shamaa roshan.
Teri ankhon mein bhi chaahat ka sharaara dekhoon."

Tujh se milne ki duaa lab se nikal jaati hai.
Aasmaan pe jo koi toot-ta taara dekhoon..
Teri aankhon ke samander mein is tarah dooboon.
Ta-qayaamat na kabhi koi kinaara dekhoon..
Ab mujhe koi zuroorat nahin bahaaron ki.
Main to khilne ke liye tera ishaara dekhoon..
Tere haathon ki laqeeron mein hai kismat meri.
Arsh per kyon main muqadder ka sitaara dekhoon..
Jo maseeha tha wohi ban gaya dushman mera.
Ab main jeene ke liye kiska sahaara dekhoon..

KYA BAAT HAI JI

MAIN AAPSE POOCHTI HU YE KHWAAB
KISKE LIYE HAI............


YE ISHQ NHI AASAAN YARO...
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Doston ko aadab bado ko salaam , aap ki mehafil main fir say aana hua hai

ise umeed per ki aap mera housla afzai karoge.................
mera ek kawaab hai .........................pura hai yaa adhura hai faisla aapka ?


Kaash is zindagi mein ye bhi nazaara dekhoon.
Aankh meri ho magar khwaab tumhara dekhoon..
Mere hi dil mein nahin ishq ki shamaa roshan.
Teri ankhon mein bhi chaahat ka sharaara dekhoon."

Tujh se milne ki duaa lab se nikal jaati hai.
Aasmaan pe jo koi toot-ta taara dekhoon..
Teri aankhon ke samander mein is tarah dooboon.
Ta-qayaamat na kabhi koi kinaara dekhoon..
Ab mujhe koi zuroorat nahin bahaaron ki.
Main to khilne ke liye tera ishaara dekhoon..
Tere haathon ki laqeeron mein hai kismat meri.
Arsh per kyon main muqadder ka sitaara dekhoon..
Jo maseeha tha wohi ban gaya dushman mera.
Ab main jeene ke liye kiska sahaara dekhoon..

vichiter sahab.........
badi badnaseebi hai meri ke itne der baad maine apko dekha..........

itni acchi ghazal sunai hai apne....tarif ke liye shabd kum pad jaaye.........
bahut saaf aur rawani wali likhawat hai apki............

har sher accha hai.........

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HELLOOO...
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ARZ KIYA HAI..

BAN SAHARAA BE SAHARON K LIYE.
BAN KINARA BE-KINARON K LIYE..!
JO JIYE APNE LIYE TO KYA JIYE.
JEE SKE TO JEE HZARON K LIYE..!


hi .........i m good u say ...how r u

kya baat hai ji
bhout hi achcha likha hai aapnay ..........

aapka vichitra


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waH KYA LIKHA H AAPNE BUS AISE LIKHTE REHNA

TALAAB ME BHARA PAANI SAMAYA NAHI JAATA,
DIL MEIN PYAR ITNA BATAYA NAHI JAATA


PYAR KAB HOTA HAI PURA
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KYA BAAT HAI JI

MAIN AAPSE POOCHTI HU YE KHWAAB
KISKE LIYE HAI............

main to bas itna hi kehna chahounga ki

koi to hai ..............jiskay liye yeh khwaab dekha hai maine ..............

ab wo koun hai ...........yeh nahin bata sakta hoon main.........

aapka vichitra


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Tham lay tu mera daman meri khushiyan nahi hai koi.....
Na meri manjil na mera karwaan na humsafer hai koi............
   
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KOI BAAT NHI
NAA BTAIYE........

AAP KHUSH RAHIYE TO
HUM BHI KHUSH HAIN........


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RUB SE DUA KARTI HU MAIN... RUB KRE AAPKA YE KHWAAB .............
JALD SE JALD ........... POORAAA HO....

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vichiter ji.......kya yeh ghazal aapne khud likhi hai.....................??




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KOI BAAT NHI
NAA BTAIYE........

AAP KHUSH RAHIYE TO
HUM BHI KHUSH HAIN........
AAPKO KYA KAHOON MAIN AAPKA NAAM BHI NAHIN JAANTA HOON BAS ITNA HI KEHNA CHAHATA HOON KI WAQT SAY PEHLAY KABHI KISI KO KUCH NAHIN MILTA HAI...........AUR AAPNAY JO PUCHA HAI WO SABKO BATANAY WALI BAAT NAHIN HAI ...........

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vichiter ji.......kya yeh ghazal aapne khud likhi hai.....................??
Zainy ji ko aadaab
...................yeh gazal meri hi hai aur maine hi likhi hai

kyoun kya baat hai ....kaaran jaan sakta hoon kya ....

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Na meri manjil na mera karwaan na humsafer hai koi............
   
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Kaash is zindagi mein ye bhi nazaara dekhoon.
Aankh meri ho magar khwaab tumhara dekhoon..
Mere hi dil mein nahin ishq ki shamaa roshan.
Teri ankhon mein bhi chaahat ka sharaara dekhoon."
Tujh se milne ki duaa lab se nikal jaati hai.
Aasmaan pe jo koi toot-ta taara dekhoon..
Teri aankhon ke samander mein is tarah dooboon.
Ta-qayaamat na kabhi koi kinaara dekhoon..
Ab mujhe koi zuroorat nahin bahaaron ki.
Main to khilne ke liye tera ishaara dekhoon..
Tere haathon ki laqeeron mein hai kismat meri.
Arsh per kyon main muqadder ka sitaara dekhoon..
Jo maseeha tha wohi ban gaya dushman mera.
Ab main jeene ke liye kiska sahaara dekhoon..
vichitra saahab,

namaskaar,

aap kii Ghazal achchhi lagiii, meri aur se daad qubool keejiyegaa.... yuu.n to sabhii sher achche hai.n, par yeh sher zyaadah asardaar hai.n...

Tujh se milne ki duaa lab se nikal jaati hai.
Aasmaan pe jo koi toot-ta taara dekhoon..

Teri aankhon ke samander mein is tarah dooboon.
Ta-qayaamat na kabhi koi kinaara dekhoon..


Jo maseeha tha wohi ban gaya dushman mera.
Ab main jeene ke liye kiska sahaara dekhoon..


bohat khuub.... yuu.n hii likhte rahe.n..

Mayank

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aadaab arz,. agar aap ke paas valid links hai.n jo kii yeh prove kare ki, Ghazal vichitra shaab ki likhii huii nahii hai, to aap yahaa.n par pesh kar sakte hai.n yaa phir kisii mod kii madad le sakte hai.n, yeh to aap dekh hi chuke hai.n ki, aap ke diye huye links koii kaam ke nahii.n hai.. ummeed hai aap is baat ka khayaal rakhe.nge... shukriyah!

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vichitra saahab,

namaskaar,

aap kii Ghazal achchhi lagiii, meri aur se daad qubool keejiyegaa.... yuu.n to sabhii sher achche hai.n, par yeh sher zyaadah asardaar hai.n...

Tujh se milne ki duaa lab se nikal jaati hai.
Aasmaan pe jo koi toot-ta taara dekhoon..

Teri aankhon ke samander mein is tarah dooboon.
Ta-qayaamat na kabhi koi kinaara dekhoon..


Jo maseeha tha wohi ban gaya dushman mera.
Ab main jeene ke liye kiska sahaara dekhoon..


bohat khuub.... yuu.n hii likhte rahe.n..

Mayank

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aadaab arz,. agar aap ke paas valid links hai.n jo kii yeh prove kare ki, Ghazal vichitra shaab ki likhii huii nahii hai, to aap yahaa.n par pesh kar sakte hai.n yaa phir kisii mod kii madad le sakte hai.n, yeh to aap dekh hi chuke hai.n ki, aap ke diye huye links koii kaam ke nahii.n hai.. ummeed hai aap is baat ka khayaal rakhe.nge... shukriyah!

Mayank
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aapnay jo mujhko protsahit kiya hai aapka bhout bhout dhanyavaad........
aapka

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Tu nahin hai mere sath to mushkilo ka hai safer......
Tham lay tu mera daman meri khushiyan nahi hai koi.....
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aapnay jo mujhko protsahit kiya hai aapka bhout bhout dhanyavaad........
aapka

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jab aap ne kuch Ghalat nahii.n kiyaa hai, shayri.com ko chhoRne ki baat kyu.n kar rahe hai.n.. aap kii poetry kuchh member ko itni achchhi lagii ki unhe yaqeen hii nahii huaa, aur ek Ghaltfehmi ho gayee, waise, jo Ghalatfehmi thii, jo duur huiii... mai.n to aap se yahii kahuu.ngaa ki site chhoRh kar na jaaye.n..

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Vichitra whats this Bhai haan, aapne jo bhi kaha mujhe achcha nahi laga... Aur site chorne ki baat na kare Plz.... Baqs mera dost hai woh just mujhse mazak kiya and don't think about it more... Agar uski mazak ka aapko bura laga hai to main uski taraf se sorry kehta huN.... And haan site chorne ki baat na karna...

Warna Itni pyari pyare ahsaas se hum ruberu kaise ho payenge...

Take care don't get tension, Be happy Happy diwali


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Vichitra whats this Bhai haan, aapne jo bhi kaha mujhe achcha nahi laga... Aur site chorne ki baat na kare Plz.... Baqs mera dost hai woh just mujhse mazak kiya and don't think about it more... Agar uski mazak ka aapko bura laga hai to main uski taraf se sorry kehta huN.... And haan site chorne ki baat na karna...

Warna Itni pyari pyare ahsaas se hum ruberu kaise ho payenge...

Take care don't get tension, Be happy Happy diwali
Sameer bhai ko aadaab

theek hai bhai jaan ..........ager maine kuch keha to aapsay

mafi chahata hoon ........aaghay say koi aise baat nahin hogi

...............aapko aur aapkay parivaar ko meri aur say diwali ki

shubhkamna.....

aapka

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Doston ko aadab bado ko salaam , aap ki mehafil main fir say aana hua hai

ise umeed per ki aap mera housla afzai karoge.................
mera ek kawaab hai .........................pura hai yaa adhura hai faisla aapka ?


Kaash is zindagi mein ye bhi nazaara dekhoon.
Aankh meri ho magar khwaab tumhara dekhoon..
Mere hi dil mein nahin ishq ki shamaa roshan.
Teri ankhon mein bhi chaahat ka sharaara dekhoon."

Tujh se milne ki duaa lab se nikal jaati hai.
Aasmaan pe jo koi toot-ta taara dekhoon..
Teri aankhon ke samander mein is tarah dooboon.
Ta-qayaamat na kabhi koi kinaara dekhoon..
Ab mujhe koi zuroorat nahin bahaaron ki.
Main to khilne ke liye tera ishaara dekhoon..
Tere haathon ki laqeeron mein hai kismat meri.
Arsh per kyon main muqadder ka sitaara dekhoon..
Jo maseeha tha wohi ban gaya dushman mera.
Ab main jeene ke liye kiska sahaara dekhoon..


Aadaab jannaab,

pehli baar mukhatib hua huN aapki kalam se aur ek mukkamal ghazal padhne ko mili,is baat ki khushi hai,

Jis gali, jis ghar ko dekhuN bas chehra tumhara dekhuN,
Jab neend ki godd me khwab aaye,to bita waqt humara dekhuN....

kuch lamhaat se yaad aa gaye aapki ghazal ko padh ke to bas ye kuch alfaaz nikal pade, umeed karta hun ki aage v aapko padhne ka mauka milta rahega, bas yuNhi likhte rahiye....!!

Aapka GHAYAL...!!



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vichiter ji


aapne in shabdo ko saadagi aur khoobsurat ke sath pesh -e- nazar kiya hai vo apane aap me ek kamaal ki koshish hai, wakai me insaan me sirf vichaar hi hote hai aur kuch nahi jis vo kis tarah se present karata hai ye baat uske shabdo ke gyan pa nibhar karti hai kyoki jitna zyada shabdo ka gyan hoga utna hi ham apni soch ke aache se pesh kar paayege.

kabile tareef hai ....

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Aadaab jannaab,

pehli baar mukhatib hua huN aapki kalam se aur ek mukkamal ghazal padhne ko mili,is baat ki khushi hai,

Jis gali, jis ghar ko dekhuN bas chehra tumhara dekhuN,
Jab neend ki godd me khwab aaye,to bita waqt humara dekhuN....

kuch lamhaat se yaad aa gaye aapki ghazal ko padh ke to bas ye kuch alfaaz nikal pade, umeed karta hun ki aage v aapko padhne ka mauka milta rahega, bas yuNhi likhte rahiye....!!

Aapka GHAYAL...!!
aadaab huzoor

ji aghay bhi aapka pyaar aisay hi milta rahayga aisi kaamna karta hoon main

aapka

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Yeh manjilen yeh rastay mushkilo bhari yeh dager.....
Tu nahin hai mere sath to mushkilo ka hai safer......
Tham lay tu mera daman meri khushiyan nahi hai koi.....
Na meri manjil na mera karwaan na humsafer hai koi............
   
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