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Kasam -
19th June 2006, 04:29 PM
"Mai peeta tha bahut, par
usne chudda the appni kasam dekar,
Mahfil mai betha to yarron ne pilla di,
uski kasam dekar"
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27th June 2006, 06:46 AM
its very detailed in small words so good work whos ever it is
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25th August 2006, 07:22 PM
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yeh bahut puraana sher hai.. haan writer to mujhe bhi nahi pata.. par yeh mujhe bhi pasand hai..
thanx for sharing this one here..
~Priya
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Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
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26th August 2006, 12:10 PM
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its very detailed in small words so good work whos ever it is
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thanks dost, yeh share mera nahi hai par mujhe pasand bahut hai, so likh diya. appne pasand kiya, thanks alot.
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26th August 2006, 12:11 PM
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di..
yeh bahut puraana sher hai.. haan writer to mujhe bhi nahi pata.. par yeh mujhe bhi pasand hai..
thanx for sharing this one here..
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priya kaise ho tum !
lagta hai hum dono ki pasand bhi kuch kuch milti hai.
hai na,........!
take care and keep smiling..............!
tumari didi
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26th August 2006, 12:37 PM
hi sunita bahot achha sher hai aur is me sachchai ka ehsas bhi hota hai.................................bahot khub......................dhaval
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26th August 2006, 02:07 PM
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hi sunita bahot achha sher hai aur is me sachchai ka ehsas bhi hota hai.................................bahot khub......................dhaval
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dhaval meri post par aane ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.
appki dost
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Re: Kasam -
26th August 2006, 08:17 PM
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Originally posted by sunita virender
"Mai peeta tha bahut, par
usne chudda the appni kasam dekar,
Mahfil mai betha to yarron ne pilla di,
uski kasam dekar"
Not mine
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peene wale peene ka bahana dondte hai.
pilane wale pilane ka bahana doodte hai.
ek hum hain jo na peete hain na pilate hain
ek tum ho ki bin piye koi baat hi nahi karte.
aadab arz hai.
" Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab
Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai
mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya
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Re: Re: Kasam -
1st September 2006, 04:13 PM
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Originally posted by dilip200
peene wale peene ka bahana dondte hai.
pilane wale pilane ka bahana doodte hai.
ek hum hain jo na peete hain na pilate hain
ek tum ho ki bin piye koi baat hi nahi karte.
aadab arz hai.
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pee kar to 'eh dost' har koi bahak jaata hai,
bin peeye bhakna hai to meri mahfil mai aa,
waha jaam se jaam takrakar bahakety ho tum,
mere se ek baar aakar jarra nazrey to milla......
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Re: Re: Re: Kasam -
1st September 2006, 05:42 PM
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Originally posted by sunita virender
pee kar to 'eh dost' har koi bahak jaata hai,
bin peeye bhakna hai to meri mahfil mai aa,
waha jaam se jaam takrakar bahakety ho tum,
mere se ek baar aakar jarra nazrey to milla......
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hi didi
wah kya jawab diya hai.....
aapke is sher ka jawab hazir hai
nazro se pilane ki baat na kar e saki
nazro main har koi ko jata hai........
nazro ka nasha sharab se gahra hai.
jo ek baar dooba .ubharna mushkil hai.
dilip
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Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Kasam -
2nd September 2006, 10:32 AM
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Originally posted by dilip200
hi didi
wah kya jawab diya hai.....
aapke is sher ka jawab hazir hai
nazro se pilane ki baat na kar e saki
nazro main har koi ko jata hai........
nazro ka nasha sharab se gahra hai.
jo ek baar dooba .ubharna mushkil hai.
dilip
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tum to dar gaye nazrey milaney se hi,
yeh hunar to bas husan ko hasil hai,
hum himmat rakh kar nazar milatey hai,
aur jab tak ashiq be-hosh na ho jaye,
tab tak yeh jaam pilatey hai...........
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Kasam -
2nd September 2006, 10:45 AM
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Originally posted by sunita virender
tum to dar gaye nazrey milaney se hi,
yeh hunar to bas husan ko hasil hai,
hum himmat rakh kar nazar milatey hai,
aur jab tak ashiq be-hosh na ho jaye,
tab tak yeh jaam pilatey hai...........
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didi aap to bus khamosh kar deti hain...... esa likhti hain ki bus aage kuch likha hi na jaye.....
per hum bhi shagird hain aapke jawab hazir hai
gour farmaiye...
bahon me jo samhalegi tu ye wada kar
hosh kho jaunga main haste haste
nazro se peene ki to baat hi kya hai saki
inse zahar bhi pilaogi to pee jaunga.
dilip
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Kasam -
2nd September 2006, 11:51 AM
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Originally posted by dilip200
didi aap to bus khamosh kar deti hain...... esa likhti hain ki bus aage kuch likha hi na jaye.....
per hum bhi shagird hain aapke jawab hazir hai
gour farmaiye...
bahon me jo samhalegi tu ye wada kar
hosh kho jaunga main haste haste
nazro se peene ki to baat hi kya hai saki
inse zahar bhi pilaogi to pee jaunga.
dilip
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kisi ki bahhon mai sambhal jatey to mahkhane mai aatey hi kyu,
nazro se hi kisi ki bahak jatey to phir nazro se girtey hi kyu,
mohabat mai gar hote tum vaffadaar to be-waffa kahlatey kyu,
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Kasam -
3rd September 2006, 08:16 AM
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Originally posted by sunita virender
kisi ki bahhon mai sambhal jatey to mahkhane mai aatey hi kyu,
nazro se hi kisi ki bahak jatey to phir nazro se girtey hi kyu,
mohabat mai gar hote tum vaffadaar to be-waffa kahlatey kyu,
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meri wafa ka daman beshak tumhe dagdar lage
peene pilane ka chalan bhi tumhe nagbaar lage
tamam jakham chupa rakhe hain seene main apne
ho jate hain jab dard se choor
tumhari chubhati baten bhi hame apni dildar lage...
dilip
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Kasam -
18th September 2006, 10:24 AM
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meri wafa ka daman beshak tumhe dagdar lage
peene pilane ka chalan bhi tumhe nagbaar lage
tamam jakham chupa rakhe hain seene main apne
ho jate hain jab dard se choor
tumhari chubhati baten bhi hame apni dildar lage...
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tumharey daman ko hum waffa ka naam detey hain,
dard se choor piney walo ko hum dua detey hain,
par eh dost peeney plianey se dil nahi juda karety,
kisi ka dil na kabhi tooty hum yehi dua detey hain.
tumhari didi
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