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Kash main beti benkar hi ji pati…. - 27th March 2014, 01:26 PM

Kash main beti benkar hi ji pati….
Duniya ke rashmo riwajo main naa gheri jati…..
Tere chote se aagan main khulkar saas le pati…..
Kash main beti bankar hi ji pati….

Kash main ek patni, bahu aur Maa banker bhi…
Teri hi beti reh pati…..
Apne khyalo wa khawabo ko beparah pura kar pati…
Kash main beti bankar hi ji pati….

Kash main aaj b tere godi main sir rakhkar so pati….
Jo dil main ho, wo her baat tujh se keh pati…..
Sukh-dukh tera-mere baant pati….
Kash main beti bankar hi ji pati
….


Mudattein hui… Mulakat hue….
Suno… Aie… Zindagi…..
Is bar jate jate….
Jara milti jana……

   
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27th March 2014, 01:35 PM

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Kash main beti benkar hi ji pati….
Duniya ke rashmo riwajo main naa gheri jati…..
Tere chote se aagan main khulkar saas le pati…..
Kash main beti bankar hi ji pati….

Kash main ek patni, bahu aur Maa banker bhi…
Teri hi beti reh pati…..
Apne khyalo wa khawabo ko beparah pura kar pati…
Kash main beti bankar hi ji pati….

Kash main aaj b tere godi main sir rakhkar so pati….
Jo dil main ho, wo her baat tujh se keh pati…..
Sukh-dukh tera-mere baant pati….
Kash main beti bankar hi ji pati
….


Ruchikaa ji ... kaisi hain aap.. ek zamaane ke baad aaj aapko padhaa to behad khushi haasil huiii... aapki kalam me waaqai koi jaadu hai,, itne gahre ehsaason ko kitni aasaani se aapne alfaazon me dhaalaa hai..... bahot bahot khoob peshkash.... likhti raheN... khush raheN...

Shaad...


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28th March 2014, 12:46 PM

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Kash main beti benkar hi ji pati….
Duniya ke rashmo riwajo main naa gheri jati…..
Tere chote se aagan main khulkar saas le pati…..
Kash main beti bankar hi ji pati….

Kash main ek patni, bahu aur Maa banker bhi…
Teri hi beti reh pati…..
Apne khyalo wa khawabo ko beparah pura kar pati…
Kash main beti bankar hi ji pati….

Kash main aaj b tere godi main sir rakhkar so pati….
Jo dil main ho, wo her baat tujh se keh pati…..
Sukh-dukh tera-mere baant pati….
Kash main beti bankar hi ji pati
….
bahot hi sundar rachna hai, Ruchikaji..........
bas yun hi apnee rachnaoN se ees bazm ko roshan rakhiye....
namaskaar....



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bahot Khub.....ruchika ji................................................ ....................!!!
   
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3rd April 2014, 11:15 AM

Thank u so much for appreciation.... kuch alfaaz hi jazbaaton ko tabdeel karne ke liye .... agar ache lage to dhynayabad....


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22nd April 2014, 05:03 PM

ruchika jee......a very wonderful creation..... full of emotions......keep it up



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