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AankheN ... (Ehsaas) - 6th February 2012, 09:53 AM
Dil Kaa Aaiinaa Hoti Hai AankheN
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Dil Ki Zubaa Hoti Hai Yeh AankheN

Naa Chhipaa Paaye Yeh AankheN
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Naa Samjhe AchChhaa Buraa Bas Ro De Yeh AankheN
Dil Kaa Aaiinaa Hoti Hai Yeh AankheN
Dil Kaa Sab Raaz Khol De Yeh AankheN

Sab Sukh-Dukh Kii Bol De Yeh AankheN
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Naa Chhipaa Paaye Yeh AankheN
Sneh Mamtaa Dekh Ro De Yeh AankheN

Naa Samjhe AchChhaa Buraa Bas Ro De Yeh AankheN
Dil Kaa Aaiinaa Hoti Hai Yeh AankheN
Dil Kaa Sab Raaz Khol De Yeh AankheN

Sab Sukh-Dukh Kii Bol De Yeh AankheN
GhamoN MeN Bhii Chhalaktii HaiN Yeh AankheN
Khushi MeN Bhii Bhar Aaii Yeh AankheN
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26th February 2012, 01:56 PM
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Dil Kaa Aaiinaa Hoti Hai AankheN
Dil Kii Sab Baate Khol De AankheN
Dil Ki Zubaa Hoti Hai Yeh AankheN

Naa Chhipaa Paaye Yeh AankheN
Sneh Mamtaa Dekh Ro De Yeh AankheN

Naa Samjhe AchChhaa Buraa Bas Ro De Yeh AankheN
Dil Kaa Aaiinaa Hoti Hai Yeh AankheN
Dil Kaa Sab Raaz Khol De Yeh AankheN

Sab Sukh-Dukh Kii Bol De Yeh AankheN
GhamoN MeN Bhii Chhalaktii HaiN Yeh AankheN
Khushi MeN Bhii Bhar Aaii Yeh AankheN
Mansha ji..aapko pehli baar padh rahaa hun..bahot hi saral aur ache shabdoeN ka prayog kiya hai aur ehsaas bhi ache hai.. magar thought repeat ho raha hai.. bahot saari jagah pe.. aaina..raaz kholna...rona etc etc..thoda ise compact karo.. baaki meri raey hai.. zyaada suno mat kuch na sahi laga ho to ignore karo.. likhte raho.. khush raho

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gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai?
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Very good work Manshaa jee.....please keep writing.

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Mansha ji..aapko pehli baar padh rahaa hun..bahot hi saral aur ache shabdoeN ka prayog kiya hai aur ehsaas bhi ache hai.. magar thought repeat ho raha hai.. bahot saari jagah pe.. aaina..raaz kholna...rona etc etc..thoda ise compact karo.. baaki meri raey hai.. zyaada suno mat kuch na sahi laga ho to ignore karo.. likhte raho.. khush raho

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mansha jee , ehsaas acche lage mujhe, par repitition dikha kai jagah mujhe, acchi koshish hai, keep writing
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Dil Kaa Aaiinaa Hoti Hai AankheN
Dil Kii Sab Baate Khol De AankheN
Dil Ki Zubaa Hoti Hai Yeh AankheN

Naa Chhipaa Paaye Yeh AankheN
Sneh Mamtaa Dekh Ro De Yeh AankheN

Naa Samjhe AchChhaa Buraa Bas Ro De Yeh AankheN
Dil Kaa Aaiinaa Hoti Hai Yeh AankheN
Dil Kaa Sab Raaz Khol De Yeh AankheN

Sab Sukh-Dukh Kii Bol De Yeh AankheN
GhamoN MeN Bhii Chhalaktii HaiN Yeh AankheN
Khushi MeN Bhii Bhar Aaii Yeh AankheN
Bohat khoob Mansha ji....bohat hi seedhi saadhi aur sachi baat kahi hai aapne..



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