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nayi nayi si barsaat -
31st July 2014, 11:04 PM
Vahi hai zindagi vahi main vahi
Mere halaat hain.
Vahi roz har kisi ki fikra me
Guzrate mere din raat hain.
Vahi khushiyaan zara si peeche
Gamo ki lambi baraat hai.
Badla kuch bhi nahi ab bhi
Tu aaj bhi nahi mere sath hai.
Nayi hain muskrahtein phir bhi
Nayi nayi si ye barsaat hai.
Na koi naam hai iska,na koi shakl hai
Nikhare nikhare se ye ankahe zazbaat hain.
Kahi hai aaj dil me kaid thi jo batein hamesha se,
Na jane jeeti hai madhu aaj ya khayi dil se apne maat hai.
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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1st August 2014, 03:22 AM
Wahhh! Madhu jiii,
Boht umdah peshkash hai aap ki...!
DherooN daad qabool kijiye,,
Aise hi likhtay rahiye,
DuaooN k saath,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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1st August 2014, 02:09 PM
Very Impressive...........Gud Work.......................!!!
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1st August 2014, 10:42 PM
nice ! madhu ji
apne se lage aapke haalaat
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shukriya -
2nd August 2014, 02:12 PM
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Wahhh! Madhu jiii,
Boht umdah peshkash hai aap ki...!
DherooN daad qabool kijiye,,
Aise hi likhtay rahiye,
DuaooN k saath,,
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Aapki daad ke liye tah e dil se shukriyaa hasan ji...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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Thanku -
2nd August 2014, 02:13 PM
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Very Impressive...........Gud Work.......................!!!
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Thank u very much..........sudhir ji......
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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2nd August 2014, 02:15 PM
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nice ! madhu ji
apne se lage aapke haalaat
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Thanks madhishu ji.......................
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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18th August 2014, 06:10 PM
very much impressive.....keep it up.......
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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19th August 2014, 10:36 AM
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very much impressive.....keep it up.......
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Thank u aru ji..........................
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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22nd August 2014, 05:00 PM
Madhuji ....it's a very touching poem....keep writing.
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22nd August 2014, 07:25 PM
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Vahi hai zindagi vahi main vahi
Mere halaat hain.
Vahi roz har kisi ki fikra me
Guzrate mere din raat hain.
Vahi khushiyaan zara si peeche
Gamo ki lambi baraat hai.
Badla kuch bhi nahi ab bhi
Tu aaj bhi nahi mere sath hai.
Nayi hain muskrahtein phir bhi
Nayi nayi si ye barsaat hai.
Na koi naam hai iska,na koi shakl hai
Nikhare nikhare se ye ankahe zazbaat hain.
Kahi hai aaj dil me kaid thi jo batein hamesha se,
Na jane jeeti hai madhu aaj ya khayi dil se apne maat hai.
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madhi ji behad khubsurtii se aapne darde dil aur ehsaas ki shiddt pesh ki hai.... meri taraf se bahot bahot mubaarakbaad aapko...
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22nd August 2014, 10:17 PM
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Madhuji ....it's a very touching poem....keep writing.
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Thanks mujib ji..............................
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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22nd August 2014, 10:19 PM
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madhi ji behad khubsurtii se aapne darde dil aur ehsaas ki shiddt pesh ki hai.... meri taraf se bahot bahot mubaarakbaad aapko...
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Thank u very much shaad ji.....aate rahein....................
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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24th August 2014, 09:52 PM
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Vahi hai zindagi vahi main vahi
Mere halaat hain.
Vahi roz har kisi ki fikra me
Guzrate mere din raat hain.
Vahi khushiyaan zara si peeche
Gamo ki lambi baraat hai.
Badla kuch bhi nahi ab bhi
Tu aaj bhi nahi mere sath hai.
Nayi hain muskrahtein phir bhi
Nayi nayi si ye barsaat hai.
Na koi naam hai iska,na koi shakl hai
Nikhare nikhare se ye ankahe zazbaat hain.
Kahi hai aaj dil me kaid thi jo batein hamesha se,
Na jane jeeti hai madhu aaj ya khayi dil se apne maat hai.
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Bohut Simple magar bohut gehra. loved it.
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Sarika
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25th August 2014, 12:15 PM
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Nice and touching poem madhuji.....yunhi likhtey rahiye
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Thank you naraz ji...yoon hi aate rahiye
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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25th August 2014, 02:25 PM
Ups so sorry naaz. ...it was a mistake...sorry
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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25th August 2014, 03:42 PM
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Its ok dear
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अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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25th August 2014, 03:45 PM
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Bohut Simple magar bohut gehra. loved it.
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Thank u so much sarika ji....yoon hi sath dete rahein....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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25th August 2014, 07:51 PM
Thanks Shaad ji,parineeta ji and sarika ji...thanks to all of you for d reputations.
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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