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2nd February 2012, 08:25 PM
Sabhi se kehdo, na chheDe un ko , huye jo un ke, ghulaam saahib
Magar ye poocheN, zaroor poocheN, woh kaun haiN kya hai naam sahib
Bichhad gaye haiN jo aap mujh se, to lag raha hai, mai mar raha huN
Jo jaa rahe the, to kar hi dete , ye zindagi bhi tamaam sahib
Kabhi na socha tha aisa hoga, safar me woh bhi mukaam aaya
Chalo chale ab, khatam safar hai, kare na mujhko salaam sahib
Tumhe khabar bhi hai kya ganwaaya, hamaare daaman me kya hai baaqi
Lutayee humne, yeh zindagi hai, khushi hai hum pe haraam sahib
Mile jo mujhse to phir woh keh du, kaha tha pehle kabhi jo unse
Rahey wafa phir, meri zaroorat, kare na mujhse kalaam sahib
Yeh zakhm saare to bhar gaye hai, udaas karte magar nishaa.N hai
Jisey ghazal tum, samajh rahe ho, woh meri tanha hai shaam sahib
Sajid Ghayel
Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...
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2nd February 2012, 09:26 PM
Waah, Sajid Bhai...! Kya khoob likhaa hai aapne, bahut khubsurat kalaam hai aapka...! Har sher tareef-e-kaabil hai...!
Daad qubool kareiN
Apna khayaal rakheiN, ok...?
DuaaoN ke saath
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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3rd February 2012, 07:23 AM
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Originally Posted by sajid_ghayel
Sabhi se kehdo, na chheDe un ko , huye jo un ke, ghulaam saahib
Magar ye poocheN, zaroor poocheN, woh kaun haiN kya hai naam sahib
Bichhad gaye haiN jo aap mujh se, to lag raha hai, mai mar raha huN
Jo jaa rahe the, to kar hi dete , ye zindagi bhi tamaam sahib
Kabhi na socha tha aisa hoga, safar me woh bhi mukaam aaya
Chalo chale ab, khatam safar hai, kare na mujhko salaam sahib
Tumhe khabar bhi hai kya ganwaaya, hamaare daaman me kya hai baaqi
Lutayee humne, yeh zindagi hai, khushi hai hum pe haraam sahib
Mile jo mujhse to phir woh keh du, kaha tha pehle kabhi jo unse
Rahey wafa phir, meri zaroorat, kare na mujhse kalaam sahib
Yeh zakhm saare to bhar gaye hai, udaas karte magar nishaa.N hai
Jisey ghazal tum, samajh rahe ho, woh meri tanha hai shaam sahib
Sajid Ghayel
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Saajid saahab ko khaaksaar ka aadaab... uufffff kyaa keh gaye hain aap kalaaam saahib... Matle se Maqte tak khushbu hi khushbu rawaan hai... Har alfaaz apne muqammal hone ka saboot hai... bahot khoob bhai.. bahot hi khoob... kaafi dino ke baad aapka kalaam padhne ko milaa, ummeed hai aage bhi aisee dilfareb ehsaasoN se rubaroo karaane ke mauqe aapse milte rahenge... shukriyaa...
Shaad...
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3rd February 2012, 07:40 AM
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Originally Posted by sajid_ghayel
Sabhi se kehdo, na chheDe un ko , huye jo un ke, ghulaam saahib
Magar ye poocheN, zaroor poocheN, woh kaun haiN kya hai naam sahib
Bichhad gaye haiN jo aap mujh se, to lag raha hai, mai mar raha huN
Jo jaa rahe the, to kar hi dete , ye zindagi bhi tamaam sahib
Kabhi na socha tha aisa hoga, safar me woh bhi mukaam aaya
Chalo chale ab, khatam safar hai, kare na mujhko salaam sahib
Tumhe khabar bhi hai kya ganwaaya, hamaare daaman me kya hai baaqi
Lutayee humne, yeh zindagi hai, khushi hai hum pe haraam sahib
Mile jo mujhse to phir woh keh du, kaha tha pehle kabhi jo unse
Rahey wafa phir, meri zaroorat, kare na mujhse kalaam sahib
Yeh zakhm saare to bhar gaye hai, udaas karte magar nishaa.N hai
Jisey ghazal tum, samajh rahe ho, woh meri tanha hai shaam sahib
Sajid Ghayel
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As Salam Alykom Sajid Bhaee! Sub'hanAllah! Sub'hanAllah!
Dilkash buhat dilkash! Qaayil ho chukay hayn aapkay fun kay! Bayhad ehsaasaon wa dard say labrayz ayk dum rawaan dawaan ghazal! Daad aapki paysh e nazar kerna chaahoongaa qaboul farmayayn!
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3rd February 2012, 08:52 AM
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Originally Posted by sajid_ghayel
Sabhi se kehdo, na chheDe un ko , huye jo un ke, ghulaam saahib
Magar ye poocheN, zaroor poocheN, woh kaun haiN kya hai naam sahib
Bichhad gaye haiN jo aap mujh se, to lag raha hai, mai mar raha huN
Jo jaa rahe the, to kar hi dete , ye zindagi bhi tamaam sahib
Kabhi na socha tha aisa hoga, safar me woh bhi mukaam aaya
Chalo chale ab, khatam safar hai, kare na mujhko salaam sahib
Tumhe khabar bhi hai kya ganwaaya, hamaare daaman me kya hai baaqi
Lutayee humne, yeh zindagi hai, khushi hai hum pe haraam sahib
Mile jo mujhse to phir woh keh du, kaha tha pehle kabhi jo unse
Rahey wafa phir, meri zaroorat, kare na mujhse kalaam sahib
Yeh zakhm saare to bhar gaye hai, udaas karte magar nishaa.N hai
Jisey ghazal tum, samajh rahe ho, woh meri tanha hai shaam sahib
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Yeh zakhm saare to bhar gaye hai, udaas karte magar nishaa.N hai
Jisey ghazal tum, samajh rahe ho, woh meri tanha hai shaam sahib
Bahut Khoob..!!!
Kaun Kambakhat Kehta hai,
Ke Sirf Ghaalib ko hai pata,
Radeef, Kafiya, Matla, Maktaa....!!
Yeh Teer-E-Ishq kyaa 'Zindagi' se Ziyada,
Kya Ghaalib ko hai Chubhata....!!!!!
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3rd February 2012, 10:10 AM
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Originally Posted by sajid_ghayel
Sabhi se kehdo, na chheDe un ko , huye jo un ke, ghulaam saahib
Magar ye poocheN, zaroor poocheN, woh kaun haiN kya hai naam sahib
Bichhad gaye haiN jo aap mujh se, to lag raha hai, mai mar raha huN
Jo jaa rahe the, to kar hi dete , ye zindagi bhi tamaam sahib
Kabhi na socha tha aisa hoga, safar me woh bhi mukaam aaya
Chalo chale ab, khatam safar hai, kare na mujhko salaam sahib
Tumhe khabar bhi hai kya ganwaaya, hamaare daaman me kya hai baaqi
Lutayee humne, yeh zindagi hai, khushi hai hum pe haraam sahib
Mile jo mujhse to phir woh keh du, kaha tha pehle kabhi jo unse
Rahey wafa phir, meri zaroorat, kare na mujhse kalaam sahib
Yeh zakhm saare to bhar gaye hai, udaas karte magar nishaa.N hai
Jisey ghazal tum, samajh rahe ho, woh meri tanha hai shaam sahib
Sajid Ghayel
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sajid miyaan khoob hai.... khoob gahzal hai...
ye comma jydaa na use karo... padhne mai atak jate haiN ...
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3rd February 2012, 10:17 AM
sajid sahab ko mera salaam, aur haaN ahche khayal aur alfaaz rahe, par fikr miyaaN ki baat se main sehmat huN, ye comma kayi baar atka gaya aur pankti ko galat jagah p todd gaya, bas aage v aap yuNhi likhte raheN aur mehfil roshan karte raheN...
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3rd February 2012, 10:19 AM
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Originally Posted by sajid_ghayel
Sabhi se kehdo, na chheDe un ko , huye jo un ke, ghulaam saahib
Magar ye poocheN, zaroor poocheN, woh kaun haiN kya hai naam sahib
Bichhad gaye haiN jo aap mujh se, to lag raha hai, mai mar raha huN
Jo jaa rahe the, to kar hi dete , ye zindagi bhi tamaam sahib
Kabhi na socha tha aisa hoga, safar me woh bhi mukaam aaya
Chalo chale ab, khatam safar hai, kare na mujhko salaam sahib
Tumhe khabar bhi hai kya ganwaaya, hamaare daaman me kya hai baaqi
Lutayee humne, yeh zindagi hai, khushi hai hum pe haraam sahib
Mile jo mujhse to phir woh keh du, kaha tha pehle kabhi jo unse
Rahey wafa phir, meri zaroorat, kare na mujhse kalaam sahib
Yeh zakhm saare to bhar gaye hai, udaas karte magar nishaa.N hai
Jisey ghazal tum, samajh rahe ho, woh meri tanha hai shaam sahib
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sajid bhai kaise haiN aap?
arse baad aapko padh raha huN, padhte padhte padh to gaya lekin soch raha huN ki aapki is ghazal ki tareef kaise ki jaaye....kyuNki mere paas alfaaz hi nahi haiN iski tareef ke liye...bahut kam dekhne padhne ko milta hai ki jab koi shayar apne dil ke ahsaasoN ko alfaazoN ka aisa jaama pahna de ki padhne wala ghazal padhta nahi balki alfaazoN ki ek painting dekhta hai...aur aap padhte padhte bas padhte hi jayeN aur kho jayeN likhne wale ke ahsaasoN meN...kisi bhi ek sher ko chun nahi sakta....saare ke saare sher alla darze ke hue haiN...ye khaaksaar aapko faqat daad hi de sakta hai...jo ki haazir hai qubuul kijiyega....
aapne kahiN likha hai ki maiN aap ko bhool gaya...mujhe nahi maloom aapko aisa kyuN laga...aap mere kuchh khaas dostoN meN shamil haiN...aur hamesha raheNge...vaise bhi achhi baatoN ko bhool jaana meri fitrat meN shaamil nahi hai...aap dil ke behad qareeb haiN aur sada hi raheNge...mujhe nahi maloom ki aapki galatfehmi ko door kar paaya huN ya nahi...lekin maine jo kaha hai vo harf-ba-harf sach hai...
ijaazat chaahunga...
khush rahiye, bazm ki raunak badhaate rahiye...
dua go,
vikram 'mast'
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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3rd February 2012, 10:59 AM
Sabhi se kehdo, na chheDe un ko , huye jo un ke, ghulaam saahib
Magar ye poocheN, zaroor poocheN, woh kaun haiN kya hai naam sahib
Wah Wah Wah…… Sajid Sb…. Kamal Ka Matla Hai… Dheron Daad
Bichhad gaye haiN jo aap mujh se, to lag raha hai, mai mar raha huN
Jo jaa rahe the, to kar hi dete , ye zindagi bhi tamaam sahib
Wah… Kia Kehnay… Umdah.. Rawan Lahja… Behtreen Takhayyul….Daad
Kabhi na socha tha aisa hoga, safar me woh bhi mukaam aaya
Chalo chale ab, khatam safar hai, kare na mujhko salaam sahib
Wahhh…. Ye Bhi Khooob Raha
Tumhe khabar bhi hai kya ganwaaya, hamaare daaman me kya hai baaqi
Lutayee humne, yeh zindagi hai, khushi hai hum pe haraam sahib
Wah Wah Wah Behtreeeen.. Kia Kehnay…. KHushi Hai Hum Pe Haraam Sahib… Wahhh Dheron Daad
Mile jo mujhse to phir woh keh du, kaha tha pehle kabhi jo unse
Rahey wafa phir, meri zaroorat, kare na mujhse kalaam sahib
Wahhhhh… Acha Hai….
Yeh zakhm saare to bhar gaye hai, udaas karte magar nishaa.N hai
Jisey ghazal tum, samajh rahe ho, woh meri tanha hai shaam sahib
Umdahhhhh…. Kamaal
Janab SAJID GHAYEL Sb……….!
Aap Ko Daubara S D C Pr Dekh kr Be-had Khushi Hui……….
Aap Ne Jis Kalaam Ko Bazm Ki Zeenat Banaya Hai… Wo Waqae Hr Pehlu Se Umdah Or Aik Mukammal GHazal Hai……
Is Ghazal ki Fikr , Alfaaz Ka Chunaao… Or Aap ka Rawaan Andaz-e-Bayaan, In Sb Ne Mil Kr Is Ghazal Ko Chaar Chaand Laga Diye….
KHaaksaar Ki Taraf Se Tah-e-Dil Se Dheron Daad Qabool Farmaiye Is Khubsurat Kalaam Pr….
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Sada Khush Rahiye Or Yunhi Bazm Ki Raunaq Barhatay Rahen….
Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar
Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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3rd February 2012, 02:29 PM
Saajid Bhaa'ii:
salaam!
baDe dinoN baad aapki koii Ghazal paDhii ..mazaa aa gayaa !! waah waah ! bahot hi Khoob andaaz-e-bayaan
yuuNhi bazm ki Shaan baDhaate raheN... KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~Dhaval
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3rd February 2012, 07:17 PM
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Sabhi se kehdo, na chheDe un ko , huye jo un ke, ghulaam saahib
Magar ye poocheN, zaroor poocheN, woh kaun haiN kya hai naam sahib
Bichhad gaye haiN jo aap mujh se, to lag raha hai, mai mar raha huN
Jo jaa rahe the, to kar hi dete , ye zindagi bhi tamaam sahib
Kabhi na socha tha aisa hoga, safar me woh bhi mukaam aaya
Chalo chale ab, khatam safar hai, kare na mujhko salaam sahib
Tumhe khabar bhi hai kya ganwaaya, hamaare daaman me kya hai baaqi
Lutayee humne, yeh zindagi hai, khushi hai hum pe haraam sahib
Mile jo mujhse to phir woh keh du, kaha tha pehle kabhi jo unse
Rahey wafa phir, meri zaroorat, kare na mujhse kalaam sahib
Yeh zakhm saare to bhar gaye hai, udaas karte magar nishaa.N hai
Jisey ghazal tum, samajh rahe ho, woh meri tanha hai shaam sahib
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Sajid Bhai ... FB (Shair Club ) MeN Iss Tarahi Ghazal Ko Pahle PaDh Chukaa Hoon ....Tab Bhi Khoobsurat Lagi Thii .. Ab Yahaa PaDhaa Toh Bhi Khoob Luft Aayaa ... !
Aalaa ... Qaabile Daad Ghazal Huii Hai Janaab ... Sar Se Paa Talak ! Umdaa ... Purkash ... Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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3rd February 2012, 10:29 PM
wah wah wah kya baat hai janaab. wah , aapka qalaam pada to aisaa lagaa jaise kisee ne dard kee puree syaahee kagaz par udel dee ho.
kya bemisaal ghazal likhee hai aapne.......................
aapko is beshqeemtee peshqash par hazarro - lakho mubaraqbad.
reps++++++++++++++++++++++++++
khush rahiye , likhte rahiye.
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3rd February 2012, 11:23 PM
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Sabhi se kehdo, na chheDe un ko , huye jo un ke, ghulaam saahib
Magar ye poocheN, zaroor poocheN, woh kaun haiN kya hai naam sahib
Bichhad gaye haiN jo aap mujh se, to lag raha hai, mai mar raha huN
Jo jaa rahe the, to kar hi dete , ye zindagi bhi tamaam sahib
Kabhi na socha tha aisa hoga, safar me woh bhi mukaam aaya
Chalo chale ab, khatam safar hai, kare na mujhko salaam sahib
Tumhe khabar bhi hai kya ganwaaya, hamaare daaman me kya hai baaqi
Lutayee humne, yeh zindagi hai, khushi hai hum pe haraam sahib
Mile jo mujhse to phir woh keh du, kaha tha pehle kabhi jo unse
Rahey wafa phir, meri zaroorat, kare na mujhse kalaam sahib
Yeh zakhm saare to bhar gaye hai, udaas karte magar nishaa.N hai
Jisey ghazal tum, samajh rahe ho, woh meri tanha hai shaam sahib
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Saajid bhai, ek behad umdaa ghazal se rubaroo karaayaa hai aapne aaj. Lambe arse se aapki kami khal rahi thi. Aaj aapko waapis is mehfil mein paakar behad khushi ho rahi hai aur us se bhi jyada khushi ye qalaam dekhkar ho rahi hai.....
Aate rahiye bhai aur hamaari dua qabool kariye
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5th February 2012, 03:03 PM
Wah Sajid sahab ... Lajawab raha apka kalam. Bayaan ki rawangee to kamaal thi hi, ehsaas bhi theek dil mein chot karnewaale se the. Bahaut bahaut daad apko.
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