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tumhaarii yaad me taDpenge......... -
16th September 2015, 11:53 AM
tumhaare ishq me jaanaa agar kuch kar na paaenge,
tumhaarii yaad me taDpenge aankhoN ko rulaaenge.
muhabbat me agar apne sitaare honge gardish me.n,
chale jaaenge uske dar pe sar apnaa jhukaaeNge,
ye dil ab to tumhaaraa naam sun kar kaaNp Uthtaa hai,
magar is kam bakhat ko ham tumhaaraa hi banaaeNge.
kiyaa thaa saath mil kar ham ne jo vaadaa muhabbat kaa,
chalo tum bhool jaao par, hamee tanahaa nibhaaenge.
tumhe soche binaa kaise muqammal kar deN tahreereN,
jo ab tum yaad aaoge Qalam bhii tab uThaaenge.
koii poochega tumse jo is afsaane ke baare me,
to kah denaa ke khud kirdaar hii kissaa sunaaenge....
Last edited by Madhu 14; 16th September 2015 at 12:05 PM..
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16th September 2015, 01:43 PM
adaab shaad sahab......
dil khush ho gaya aapki ye muhabbat bhari ghazal padhkar...bahut pyare ehsaas..ye bekarari aur dard jo sirf muhabbat bhara dil hee samajh sakta hai.......
sach kahoon...kisko khas kahoon kise rahne doon..har ek sher mujhe bahut bahut pasand aaya...
tadap,samarpan,khwahish..kya kya rang bhar diye hain aapki qalam ne ek tahreer me......
tumhe soche binaa kaise muqammal kar deN tahreereN,
jo ab tum yaad aaoge Qalam bhii tab uThaaenge
........superb.
dil se daad qubool kijiyega............
khush rahein.......
aur yoon qalam chalti rahe...yahi dua hai......
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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16th September 2015, 04:52 PM
Shaad, bahut hi acchi gazal bani hai, hame sabhi ashiyaar bahut pasand aaye, pyar, dard tadap, tanhai...sabhi ko ba-khoobi bayaan kiya hai aapne, yeh aik sher dil ke khaas kareeb rha.
muhabbat me agar apne sitaare honge gardish me.n,
chale jaaenge uske dar pe sar apnaa jhukaaeNge.
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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16th September 2015, 10:23 PM
Shaad ji.....aapko padhkar ek baar bahaut achha laga...bahaut khoob likha hai aapne.
Khaas yeh sher kuch jyada hi dil ko chu gaye...
kiyaa thaa saath mil kar ham ne jo vaadaa muhabbat kaa,
koii poochega tumse jo is afsaane ke baare me,
to kah denaa ke khud kirdaar hii kissaa sunaaenge....
Aise hi likhte rahiye...
Zindagi wahi jise khul ke Jiya jaaye, apne armaanon ko pankh lagaa udhne do...
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17th September 2015, 09:54 AM
Shaad bhai
Namaste
Subha subhaa bazm mein aapki koshish par nazar padii...bahot khoob andaaz e ebahaan rahaa aapka aur ehsaas dil ko chhu gayen
Dil se daad aapko
Aapka
Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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18th September 2015, 11:40 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Madhu 14
adaab shaad sahab......
dil khush ho gaya aapki ye muhabbat bhari ghazal padhkar...bahut pyare ehsaas..ye bekarari aur dard jo sirf muhabbat bhara dil hee samajh sakta hai.......
sach kahoon...kisko khas kahoon kise rahne doon..har ek sher mujhe bahut bahut pasand aaya...
tadap,samarpan,khwahish..kya kya rang bhar diye hain aapki qalam ne ek tahreer me......
tumhe soche binaa kaise muqammal kar deN tahreereN,
jo ab tum yaad aaoge Qalam bhii tab uThaaenge
........superb.
dil se daad qubool kijiyega............
khush rahein.......
aur yoon qalam chalti rahe...yahi dua hai......
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bahut bahut shukriyaa aapka madhu ji......................
aapki inaayaten aur saath yunhi banaa rahe aisi main har dam kaamna karta hoon..
aap logon se bahut kuch seekhne ko milta hai to isiliye aage bhi apni raay aur mashware baantte rahiyega... khush rahiye
Shaad....
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18th September 2015, 11:42 AM
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Originally Posted by sunita virender
Shaad, bahut hi acchi gazal bani hai, hame sabhi ashiyaar bahut pasand aaye, pyar, dard tadap, tanhai...sabhi ko ba-khoobi bayaan kiya hai aapne, yeh aik sher dil ke khaas kareeb rha.
muhabbat me agar apne sitaare honge gardish me.n,
chale jaaenge uske dar pe sar apnaa jhukaaeNge.
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bahut bahut shukriyaa aapka Sunita dee..... jo aapko pasand aaya ye kalaam...
aati rahiyegaa aur apna khayala rakhiyega...
Shaad....
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20th September 2015, 04:18 PM
Shad bhai ....bayane mohabaat meiN aap ki apne mehboob
se shikve shikayat ka andaz bahut achcha laga ..
Sanjay Sehgal
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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20th September 2015, 08:34 PM
shaad ji bohat bohat acha likha hai aap ney
har shair khub hai
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
tumhaare ishq me jaanaa agar kuch kar na paaenge,
tumhaarii yaad me taDpenge aankhoN ko rulaaenge.
muhabbat me agar apne sitaare honge gardish me.n,
chale jaaenge uske dar pe sar apnaa jhukaaeNge,
ye dil ab to tumhaaraa naam sun kar kaaNp Uthtaa hai,
magar is kam bakhat ko ham tumhaaraa hi banaaeNge.
kiyaa thaa saath mil kar ham ne jo vaadaa muhabbat kaa,
chalo tum bhool jaao par, hamee tanahaa nibhaaenge.
tumhe soche binaa kaise muqammal kar deN tahreereN,
jo ab tum yaad aaoge Qalam bhii tab uThaaenge.
koii poochega tumse jo is afsaane ke baare me,
to kah denaa ke khud kirdaar hii kissaa sunaaenge....
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21st September 2015, 01:03 PM
Wah !
Bas wah wah hee nikal rahi hai iss ko paDh kar.
Bohot khuub. Daad qubuul kijiyega.
Likhte rahiye.
Sagar Aashna
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Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota
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21st September 2015, 01:12 PM
Masha Allah bohat khoob shaad sahab
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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22nd September 2015, 10:14 PM
bahut umda likha hai shaad bhai aapne............................
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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26th September 2015, 10:40 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
tumhaare ishq me jaanaa agar kuch kar na paaenge,
tumhaarii yaad me taDpenge aankhoN ko rulaaenge.
muhabbat me agar apne sitaare honge gardish me.n,
chale jaaenge uske dar pe sar apnaa jhukaaeNge,
ye dil ab to tumhaaraa naam sun kar kaaNp Uthtaa hai,
magar is kam bakhat ko ham tumhaaraa hi banaaeNge.
kiyaa thaa saath mil kar ham ne jo vaadaa muhabbat kaa,
chalo tum bhool jaao par, hamee tanahaa nibhaaenge.
tumhe soche binaa kaise muqammal kar deN tahreereN,
jo ab tum yaad aaoge Qalam bhii tab uThaaenge.
koii poochega tumse jo is afsaane ke baare me,
to kah denaa ke khud kirdaar hii kissaa sunaaenge....
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kiyaa thaa saath mil kar ham ne jo vaadaa muhabbat kaa,
chalo tum bhool jaao par, hamee tanahaa nibhaaenge.
Muqarrar Janaab - Kya rawaangi, kya qaatilaana andaaz aur kya bayaangi hai Shaad bhai yunhi thodi hum aapke kaayal hai. Khaaksaar ki daad qubool farmiYeGaa..Aapki har ghazal har nazm yunhi pur asar ho Dua Go...
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28th September 2015, 10:55 AM
pasandeedgee ke liye sabhii doston ka tahe dil se shukriyaa pesh karta hoon.....
apna kahayal rakhieey aap sab aur aate raha kijiye.............
Shaad........
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29th September 2015, 03:02 AM
bhai miyaaN Shaoib ab tum to yooN karo ke.....khaNjar hi utaar do!
ab is se zyada aur kuch kehne ki himmat na hai mujh meiN!
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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai
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