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Exclamation TANHA PER Eik ghazal - 3rd May 2011, 11:52 AM

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TANHA PER


sookhi shakha, patte gire
peR baat kis-se kare

havaa se bole baat uRe,
dil meiN rakhe, ruh jale

sach poocHo saavan aaya Tha
lekin barsa pare pare

kabhi pariNdoN ka jamghaT Tha
uRe vo aisa nahi muRe

aaNdhi aaee uRaakar le gayee
bache hue patte jo hare

tanhaee ka “Ashk” aalam aiasa,
waqt ke dono haTh khaRe


"WAQT KI CHAAL SE BEKHABAR HO GAYE
RAAT DIN UMAR KE YOUN BASAR HO GAYE"
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On LONLINESS OF AN OLD MAN



TANHA PER


sookhi shakha, patte gire
peR baat kis-se kare

havaa se bole baat uRe,
dil meiN rakhe, ruh jale

sach poocHo saavan aaya Tha
lekin barsa pare pare

kabhi pariNdoN ka jamghaT Tha
uRe vo aisa nahi muRe

aaNdhi aaee uRaakar le gayee
bache hue patte jo hare

tanhaee ka “Ashk” aalam aiasa,
waqt ke dono haTh khaRe


"WAQT KI CHAAL SE BEKHABAR HO GAYE
RAAT DIN UMAR KE YOUN BASAR HO GAYE"
Hardev Ashk

waah wah......... bahut khoob kaha hai
tanhaee ka “Ashk” aalam aiasa,
waqt ke dono
haTh khaRe


bahut badhiyaa
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sach poocHo saavan aaya Tha
lekin barsa pare pare

kabhi pariNdoN ka jamghaT Tha
uRe vo aisa nahi muRe

tanhaee ka “Ashk” aalam aiasa,
waqt ke dono haTh khaRe


Very Impressive Creation ......... Ashk Ji !

Behad Umdaa Khayaalaat .... Dil Se Daad .... !!!




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


---Naresh Mehra----

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