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23rd November 2010, 08:54 PM
Hai nahi maaloom maujhko bazm me hai kiyaa huwaa
Haan magar maahaol lagtaa hai zaraa badlaa huwaa Main tasaadum ka kabhi haamee nahi par haq to hai Apnee baton ko sunaane ka barabar haq to hai Kuchh dinon se dekhtaa hun log kuchh aate nahi Merey dil ki khwaahishon ko aah bar late nahi Merey dil ki anjuman pe os hai ab chha rahee Khwaahishon ki har kali har aan hai mur jhaa rahee Is qadar ab chhaa gayi zehnon pe hai uftaado khez Na hi ghazlen bhejte hain tabserah se bhi gurez Ham sabhi insaan hain ghalati hamaari hai sarasht Ik khoda hai hast hast baaqee sabhi fasle nahast Merey abbu ne kaha thaa hai yahee fikre saleem Maaf kar de doosron ko hai wahi insaaN azeem Aap ki ye bazm hai ye aap ka parivaar hai Aap iske rukn hain ye aapkaa ghar baar hai Bhool jaayen baat saaree chhod den fikree jadal Waapsee se aap ki khushyaan milen gee be badal Dil ki merey dast bastah hai doaa rabbe naseer Laot aayen khaas kar is bazm me ASLAM QADEER |
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24th November 2010, 03:15 AM
Masood bhai Assalam o aalaikum sabse pehle to bazm mai ghairhaazri ke liyN aapse aur tamaam haazreen se maazrat wajh aapko pata hi hai ke tabiyat phichle kaafi dino se bhut hi nasaaz chal rahi thi jiski bina par kuch bhi acha nahi lag raha tha sdc par bhi nahi aa sakta magr aaj jab aapki nazm daikhi to khud ko rok nahi paaya aur aa hi gaya
 umeed hai is gustaakhi ko dar guzar farma dainge aapki nazm ke baare mai kya kahuN Masood bhai asl mai poocheiN to mere pass lafz nahi haiN kuch bhi kehne ko haan khaana purti hi karunga jo kuch bhi kahunga jaisa ke meiN pehle bhi keh chuka huN ke jo maharat aap rakhte haiN lafzoN ko baratne ki uske kya hi kehne haiN, kabhi kabhi socha huN ke hume ye sifat kab ata hogi to jawaab mil hi jaaya karta hai khud se, ke sohbat mai rahoge to been bajana bhi seekh hi jaaoge aapki adaaygi mai ek zindagi hai jo bal kaathi huii nadia ke jaise door tak apne aap mai nazr ko baand kar lai jaaya karti hai aur us moR tak bhi peecha nahi choRti ke jab uska wajood un pahaadiyoN ke beech mai kahiN gum ho jaata hai jahaN se wo na to dikhaainhi padti hai aur na hi uski rawaani ka shor sunaaii daita hai magr phir bhi usko sochne usko mehsoos karne usko padne ki khaahish dil mai tishnagi ka ehsaas dilaati raha karti hai, aapki is bakaamaal nazm ke naam daad behad o behisaab mohabbatoN aur shfqatoN ke saath qubool keejiye dost rep added aslam behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho |
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24th November 2010, 05:40 PM
masood bhai aadab ,,
apki nazm pe nazr parhi to mujhe khud pe taras aa giya ...bhai ghair hazri ki gustaqi ke liye mazrat khaw hun ,, ap jaise ahle ilm ki nazm me is tifle makhtab ka naam ,,faqr ka baais hai mere liye .. apke kya hi kahene hain sahab ..nazm ho ke nacr ho ke ghazal ho ke geet ho ...jawab nahi hai apka ..tareef karna suraj ko diye dikhane jaisi baat hai ...allah apko mazid barkaton se nawaze .. bhai meri ghair hazri waqt meri apni zaati masrofiyat thi.N ...apne kami mahesos ki ye apki mahubbat o faraq dili hai ... na jane kyun log ilteja ko bhi tanz ka pather samajh lete hain to zara si kashvish hoti hai ...bela shuba apki shirkat ne bazm ki tajjaliyat me mazeed izafa kiya hai ...jaise ke aslam sahab ne arz kar hi diya hai ke sahubat hunar pe asar andaz hoti hai ..aur mai bhi bela shuba in se ittefaq rakhta hun ...apki rahenumai naseeb rahe to khuch adab se waqifiyat ho jaye .. apki nazm go ke adab ki inteha hai sahab ..ap jaisi khush mizaj o khush akhlaq shaqsiyat se yahi umid ki jaa sakti hai ... allah hi apko iska ajr de sakta hai mai bus duaen kar sakta hun ..allah apko hamesh khush rakhe .... talib e ilm qadeertoopchi |
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24th November 2010, 06:03 PM
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aadaab mere peyaare dosto aslam and qadeer saahbaan aap donon ne zarre ko aasmaan baane me koi kasar nahi chhoree hai aap hazraat ne jis lagaao se meree taareef ke pul baandhe hain us se koi bhi ghalat fahmee me mujhe ustaad ka darjah de saktaa hai jabki main kiyaa hun ye sirf main hi jaantaa hun taaham aap donon ke dilee jazbaat sun kar mosarrat ki lahron me doob gayaa peshe khidmat hai aaphazraat ke liye ( shukranah ) merey ghoroor ne bakhshaa bahot nikhaar mujhe tumhe jo dekhaa yahaan aa gayaa qaraar mujhe ajeeb baat hai pal pal me rooth jaate ho magar ye sach hai ki jaldi see maan jaate ho ye bazm aap ki ik dost hai sahelee bhi yahaan gulaab hai champaa bhi hai chameli bhi khodaa ke waaste peyaasee umang mat rakhnaa jo aa gaye ho to daman ko tang mat rakhnaa karo ye waada ki ab chhor ke na jaao ge karee hai dostee to oumr bhar nibhao ge doan ke saath masood hassaas |
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