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Mere pyaare dostoN:

aadaab aur namaskaaR..

" aaj kaafi dinoN baad liKhane kaa man hu'aa.. aur aaj dil ne bhee saath diYaa.. bazm meiN fir sey haaZir huuN maiN apnii aik naYii taazaah Ghazal ko lekar.. ummid kartaa huuN aapko merii yeH chhoTii sii koShiSh pasaNd aaYeNgii.. aapki qeemtee raa'eY aur sujHaav kaa iNtezaar raheNgaa.. mulaa'iizaa farmaaYeN.."



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hum rote nahiN tere jaane kaa Ghum kar ke
baiThe rehte nahiN apnii aaNkhoN ko nam kar ke

naam mi'TaaYeNge teraa dil kii har dhaRkan par sey
tujH sey juRi hu'i yaadoN ko dil sey kam kar ke

bhoolaa duuN tujH ko achchhaa'ii ee'sii meN hay
karuN kyaa guzre laMhoN ko dil meiN faraaham kar ke

faraaham : i'kaTThaa

naa aaYeNge terii raah meiN kabhi bhi sanam ab
door chale jaaYeNge muHabbat yahiN pe Khatam kar ke

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KhuSh ho aaj u.sii ziNdagi ko jahannam kar ke


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dhaval tumhre kadam bahut achee tarah aage badh rahe hain bahut achee tahreer hai

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Pranaam

aap yahaaN aayeN yahi bahot baRii baat hay...! KhuShii hu'ii aapko merii koShiSh par deKh kar..! yuuNhi paRhta rahiYeNgaa aage bhee..!

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Dhaval JSK

sryyyyyyyyyyy bhai bahut dino baad aayi hoon, aapki ghazal par nazaar padhi toh padhe bina raha hi nahi gaya.
bahut achi likhi hai, har baar app itni dil ko choo gaye aisi ghazal likhte ho, ki daad ke liye shabd kan padh jate hain. God bless u yunhi likhte rahnaaaaaaaaa.
aapki
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jSk..!

kaise haiN aap?

apnii Ghazal par aapko deKh kar mujHe be-had KhuShii hu'ii nira didi.. ees Ghazal ki pasaNdagee ke liYe bahot bahot SHuKriyaaH..! bas YuuNhi saath dete rahiYeNgaa aage bhee..!

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Aadab dhaval ji,
kaise hain aap?

dhaval ji,
kya kahe hum?

hamare paas aapki tarif k liye Alfaz nahi hain,
dhaval ji mafi chahte hain,k aapki itni umda,or dil ko chhu jane wali ghazal ko humne itne dino k baad padha.

sach bohot hi khoob likha hai aapne,

khush rahiye,
apna khayal rakhiye,
ALLAH HAFIZ

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aadaab!!

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hum rote nahiN tere jaane kaa Ghum kar ke
baiThe rehte nahiN apnii aaNkhoN ko nam kar ke

naam mi'TaaYeNge teraa dil kii har dhaRkan par sey
tujH sey juRi hu'i yaadoN ko dil sey kam kar ke

Kyaa baat hai... khoob likha hai dost...


bhoolaa duuN tujH ko achchhaa'ii ee'sii meN hay
karuN kyaa guzre laMhoN ko dil meiN faraaham kar ke

naa aaYeNge terii raah meiN kabhi bhi sanam ab
door chale jaaYeNge muHabbat yahiN pe Khatam kar ke

Nice words...


tumne hii banaayi thi ZiNdagi jannat si "Dhaval" kii
KhuSh ho aaj u.sii ziNdagi ko jahannam kar ke

Hmmmmm...

Dear Dhaval,

Humesha ki tarah baht khoob likha hai... ek udaasi dikhi tmhaari ghazal me... mere bhai aajkal zyada emotional hone se kucch nahi milta... Ladkiyan baht chant hoti hain Thou most here won't agree magar yehi sach hai...

Likhte raho khush raho


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namaste!!

Ghazal kii pasaNdagee ke liye maiN aapka ShuKraGuuzaar huuN... aapko jab bhee apnii koShiSh par deKhtaa huuN tou mujhe bahot hi KhuShii hotee hey.. bas Khudaa se duaa yahii hay kii yeh saath YuuNhi banaa raheN..! ShuKriyaaH huZuur..

aur haaN aapki wo chaNT waali baat yaad raKJhuNgaa ..

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pehle paRhi thee aapki yeh rachna, lekin reply nahin kar saki...

bahut achcha likha hai aapne,

regards
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aarya didi:

kaise haiN aap?

baRe dinoN baad aapko deKhaa apnii koShiSh par.. KhuShii hu'ii... Ghazal kii pasaNdagee ke liye SHuKriyaaH aapka..! YuuNhi paRhte rahiYeNgaa aage bhee.!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

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dhaval saheb!

bahut achhi ghazal likhi hai aapne !

khaas taur pe mukta behad dilchasp laga !

tareef Qabool ki jaye !

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is kadar koi yaad aa rahein hai,

jaise koi apni jaan liye jaa raha hai,

kaise samjavu is pagal dil ko

k vo kisi aur ki amanat hai ye jaan kar

bhi kambakt us ise mohabbat kiye jaa raha hai.

Dinesh bhaa'ii:

namaste!!

maiN aapka be-had ShuKraGuzaar huuN kii ees Ghazal meiN aapka saath milaa.. aapse darKhaast yahee hai kii YuuNhi saath banaaye raKheN aage bhee..!

apnaa Khayaal raKheN.. KhuSh raheN

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Well expressed Mr Dhaval... very touchy..
Daad hazir hai ....kabul kijiyega..
kaShiSh ShiKhaa jee:

namaskaaR!!

aapne merii Ghazal ko pasaNd kiYaa maiN mamnuun huuN ees ke liYe.. aapki daad dil se Qabul haii.. paRhte raheN YuuNhi..!

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Dard ka ehsas janna hai to pyar kar ke dekho

Apni aankhon main kisi ko utar kar dekho

Chot un ko lage gi aansoo tumhein aa jayein ge

Ye ehsas janna ho to dil haar kar dekho

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Pyaar ki aanch se to patthar bhi pighal jata hai,


sache dil se sath de to naseeb bhi badal jata hai,


Pyaar ki rahon par mil jaye sacha hamsafar,


To kitna bhi gira hua insaan bhi sambhal jata hai.
ShuKriyaaH dinesh bhaa'ii..!

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jsk dhaval bhaii,

humesha ki tarah, yeh ghazal b bahut pasand ayyi. lekin janab, itna dard aap laye kahan se? aur har sher mein dard aur mayusshi jalakati hai. hum to yehi dhua karenge k app khush rahein. dil se nikli daad ko kabul kijiye.

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Manish bhaa'ii:

namaste!!

sab se pehle to aapse merii aik Shikaayat haii .. kahaaN gaayab ho bhaa'ii.. aapko bazm meiN deKhe huye aik arsaa ho gayaa.. Ghazal ki pasaNdagee ke liye maiN aapkaa be-Had mamnuun huuN.. aur itanaa dard aayaa kahaaN se mujh meiN ees sawaal kaa jawaab aaj tak maiN DhooNDh rahaa huuN ..Khair.. aap aaye mujhe bahot hi KhuShii hu'ii YuuNhi saath dete raheN aage bhee..! aapki daad dil se qabUl haii..!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

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mere chhotu ko raj ka namaskaar or jai mata di....chha gaye ho tum wah chhotu wah!!!!!kyaa baat hai bhut khub.....samajh nahi pa raha hoon kin lafzon mein tareef karu.......dil ko sakoon mayasar hua tumhari gazal parh kar.....likhte raho.....raj.......
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Pranaam!!

aapko mere ehsaas pasaNd aayeN.. maiN kyaa kahuuN... bahot hi KhuShii ho rahee haii.. Ghazal kii pasaNdagee ke liye maiN aapka be-Had mamnuun huuN... aap ab rozaanaa aa raheN haii site pe baRaa achchhaa lag rahaa haii.. YuuNhi aate raheN!!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

jai mata di..

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Mere pyaare dostoN:

aadaab aur namaskaaR..

" aaj kaafi dinoN baad liKhane kaa man hu'aa.. aur aaj dil ne bhee saath diYaa.. bazm meiN fir sey haaZir huuN maiN apnii aik naYii taazaah Ghazal ko lekar.. ummid kartaa huuN aapko merii yeH chhoTii sii koShiSh pasaNd aaYeNgii.. aapki qeemtee raa'eY aur sujHaav kaa iNtezaar raheNgaa.. mulaa'iizaa farmaaYeN.."



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hum rote nahiN tere jaane kaa Ghum kar ke
baiThe rehte nahiN apnii aaNkhoN ko nam kar ke

naam mi'TaaYeNge teraa dil kii har dhaRkan par sey
tujH sey juRi hu'i yaadoN ko dil sey kam kar ke

bhoolaa duuN tujH ko achchhaa'ii ee'sii meN hay
karuN kyaa guzre laMhoN ko dil meiN faraaham kar ke

faraaham : i'kaTThaa

naa aaYeNge terii raah meiN kabhi bhi sanam ab
door chale jaaYeNge muHabbat yahiN pe Khatam kar ke

tumne hii banaayi thi ZiNdagi jannat si "Dhaval" kii
KhuSh ho aaj u.sii ziNdagi ko jahannam kar ke


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dhaval sahab,
bahut achchi ghazal hai ... teesra aur chautha sher badhiya raha ...!
ek baat kahuNgi ...

4th sher me wo lafz 'Khatm' hoga ...na ki 'Khatam' ....mujhe yaad hai arse pehle ek ghazal likhi thi maine ...jisme yahi lafz aaya tha... kaafiye me hi use kiya tha maine ...mujhe kisi ne bataayi thi ye baat ...tabse yaad hai ..

mashq jaari rakhiyega ...
duaaoN ke sath ijaazat,
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bhaiya namaskaar

aapko bahut padha hai but sabse jya daa dar laga muje isme....aapne bahu aahchi tarah se pesh kiye he aapne ehsaso ko....aise hi likhete rahna....aage bhi aapki post ka intzar rahe ga...dilse nilki daad kubul kijiye

aapki choti behan
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kaisi hoN?


sagA'ii ke baad to gaayab hi ho gayiiN ho bazm se.. tum yahaaN par aayiiN aur Ghazal ko pasaNd kiya be-Had KhuShii hu'ii.. tumhaaree daad sar'aaNkhoN par.! YuuNhi paRhtee rehna aage bhee!

KhuSh raho! apnaa Khayaal raKhanaa!

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Mere pyaare dostoN:

aadaab aur namaskaaR..

" aaj kaafi dinoN baad liKhane kaa man hu'aa.. aur aaj dil ne bhee saath diYaa.. bazm meiN fir sey haaZir huuN maiN apnii aik naYii taazaah Ghazal ko lekar.. ummid kartaa huuN aapko merii yeH chhoTii sii koShiSh pasaNd aaYeNgii.. aapki qeemtee raa'eY aur sujHaav kaa iNtezaar raheNgaa.. mulaa'iizaa farmaaYeN.."



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bhoolaa duuN tujH ko achchhaa'ii ee'sii meN hay
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faraaham : i'kaTThaa

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Aaj bahut din baat mujhe aane ka waqt mila or aapke khubsurat andaaz ne mujhe padhne ko majboor kiya.. Aap ki post per har baar daad dene ko dil karta hai. bas aap yu hi likhte rahe.
Hamesha haste or muskurate rahe.....

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Shaan bhaa'ii:

W'salaam!

kaise hai.n aap? aik arsaa ho gayaa aapse baat kiye huye! aaj aapka Khat deKhaa to dil ko baRii KhuShnuudee hu'ii... Zarra-nawaazeee ke liye maiN aapka be-Had mamnuun huuN! aapke yeh lafz dil meiN Ghar kar gaye.. bas YuuNhi saath dete rahiYeNgaa aage bhee! ShuKriyaa'h!

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very nice awasome.
Kabhi mukurake roye, kabhi mukura ke roye,
Teri yaad jab bhi aye, tujhe bhula bhula ke roye.
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namaste!

ees ChhoTii sii koShiSh ko pasaNd karne ke liye maiN aapka be-had ShuKr-Guzaar huuN .. yuuNhi saath dete raheN aage bhee ..!

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Tum Routh Jao Mujhse~*~
~*~Aisa Kabhi Na Kerna~*~
~*~Main Ek Nazar Ko Tarsoon~*~
~*~Aisa Kabhi Na Kerna~*~


~*~Main Pooch Pooch Haroon~*~
~*~So So Sawal Kar K~*~

~*~Tum Kuch Jawab Na Do~*~
~*~Aisa Kabhi Na Kerna~*~

~*~Mujhse Hi Mil K Hansna~*~
~*~Mujhse Hi Mil K Rona~*~

~*~Mujhse Bicher K Jee Lo~*~
~*~Aisa Kabhi Na Kerna~*~

~*~Tum Chand Ban K Rehna~*~
~*~Main Dekhta Rahoon Ga~*~

~*~Kisi Roz Tum Na Niklo~*~
~*~Aisa Kabhi Na Kerna~*~

~*~Tum Chalay Jao Jab Bhi~*~
~*~Tu Dekhoon Tumhara Rasta~*~
~*~Tum Loat K Na Aao~*~
~*~Aisa Kabhi Na Karna
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namaste!

aap yahaaN aayeN aur mujhe paRhaa bahot hi KhuShii hu'ii.. ShuKriyaa'h

yuuNhi paRhte raheN aage bhee

KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN

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dhaval jii,
bahut pyari rachna hai
bahut dard hai isme..
aise hii likhte rahiyega..
aapki dost
saloni


saloni jee:

namaste!

kaisii hain aap?

baDe dinoN se aapko bazm meiN nahiiN deKhaa.. aapne meri rachanaa ko pasaNd kiyaa mujhe bahot hi Khushi hu'ii... yuuNhi saath dete rahiyengaa aage bhee! paRhte raheN aise hi!

Khush raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

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Dhaval Ji...Namaste ! bahut khubsurat likha hai aapne....kuch der se nazar mai aai aapki yeh ghazal....

aakhir ke do sher... khaas dil ke kareeb rahe....

naa aaYeNge terii raah meiN kabhi bhi sanam ab
door chale jaaYeNge muHabbat yahiN pe Khatam kar ke

tumne hii banaayi thi ZiNdagi jannat si "Dhaval" kii
KhuSh ho aaj u.sii ziNdagi ko jahannam kar ke

dil se daad hazir hai...kabul farmaaye....

yuhi likhte rahiye...
duaaon ke saath



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
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dhaval saheb!

bahut achhi ghazal likhi hai aapne !

khaas taur pe mukta behad dilchasp laga !

tareef Qabool ki jaye !
KShitiz bhaa'ii:

Aadaab!

koShiSh ko pasaNd karne ke liye bahot bahot ShuKriyaaH.. aapki daad sar'aaNKhoN par.. aise hi paRhte raheN..!

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dhaval sahab,
bahut achchi ghazal hai ... teesra aur chautha sher badhiya raha ...!
ek baat kahuNgi ...

4th sher me wo lafz 'Khatm' hoga ...na ki 'Khatam' ....mujhe yaad hai arse pehle ek ghazal likhi thi maine ...jisme yahi lafz aaya tha... kaafiye me hi use kiya tha maine ...mujhe kisi ne bataayi thi ye baat ...tabse yaad hai ..

mashq jaari rakhiyega ...
duaaoN ke sath ijaazat,
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namaste!

kaise haiN aap? aik arsaa ho gayaa aapko bazm mei.n deKhe huye.. ummid kartaa huuN ba-Khairyat honge

aapki raa'ey ke liye mai.n aapka be_Had ShuKraGuzaar huuN.. apni GhaltiyoN ko door karne ki koShiSh karuu.ngaa!

ShuKriyaah

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dhaval ji
nice n heart touching feelings..keep it up
san jee:

namaste!

aapne apnaa qeemtee waQt merii koShiSh ko diyaa mai.n aapka tah-e-dil se ShuKraGuzaar huuN.. !

KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n

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hum rote nahiN tere jaane kaa Ghum kar ke
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naam mi'TaaYeNge teraa dil kii har dhaRkan par sey
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bhoolaa duuN tujH ko achchhaa'ii ee'sii meN hay
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ji bhaut khoob................


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Mere pyaare dostoN:

aadaab aur namaskaaR..

" aaj kaafi dinoN baad liKhane kaa man hu'aa.. aur aaj dil ne bhee saath diYaa.. bazm meiN fir sey haaZir huuN maiN apnii aik naYii taazaah Ghazal ko lekar.. ummid kartaa huuN aapko merii yeH chhoTii sii koShiSh pasaNd aaYeNgii.. aapki qeemtee raa'eY aur sujHaav kaa iNtezaar raheNgaa.. mulaa'iizaa farmaaYeN.."



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hum rote nahiN tere jaane kaa Ghum kar ke
baiThe rehte nahiN apnii aaNkhoN ko nam kar ke

naam mi'TaaYeNge teraa dil kii har dhaRkan par sey
tujH sey juRi hu'i yaadoN ko dil sey kam kar ke

bhoolaa duuN tujH ko achchhaa'ii ee'sii meN hay
karuN kyaa guzre laMhoN ko dil meiN faraaham kar ke

faraaham : i'kaTThaa

naa aaYeNge terii raah meiN kabhi bhi sanam ab
door chale jaaYeNge muHabbat yahiN pe Khatam kar ke

tumne hii banaayi thi ZiNdagi jannat si "Dhaval" kii
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well written dhavalji.....
didnt know you write in meter.....
nicely written.....

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