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sunita ji aapka ka word "kaash" mujhe behad acccha laga. meri bhi kai nazm me aata hai ye ,shayed mai bhi yahi pe thahar sa gaya hun ...................."kaash"

bahut khoob hai aapki nazm..likhte rahiye

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bhut khub - 27th April 2008, 08:14 PM
ye gazal maine pehle bhi parhi thii magar reply nahi kiya thaa so aaj kar raha hoon....bhut hii purkashish kalaam hai.....raj......

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Don't have words to say... Yet another replica of my heart!

Great Work Di!!!!

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abb kahan se shuru karun. har taraf is ghazal mein sirf...bebassi....majboori...intezaar aur dard hi nazar aata hai. hum aapke jazbaaton ko samaj sakte hain. lagta hai kaafi dard barra waqt tha jab aapne yeh ghazal likhi hogi. hum to aapko humesha hasta hua dekhna chahte haain. dhua to yehi hai k uppar vala aapki har khwaaish ko purri kare.

rab tuvanu chad-di kala che rakhe

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sunita ji aapka ka word "kaash" mujhe behad acccha laga. meri bhi kai nazm me aata hai ye ,shayed mai bhi yahi pe thahar sa gaya hun ...................."kaash"

bahut khoob hai aapki nazm..likhte rahiye

--aryan
Aryan ji ............yaha koi khawahish adhoori rah jati hai waha kaash saath de jata hai.........aur apni to takriban har baat par kaash hota hai


padne aur pasand karne ke liye dil se shukriya.

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ye gazal maine pehle bhi parhi thii magar reply nahi kiya thaa so aaj kar raha hoon....bhut hii purkashish kalaam hai.....raj......
hmmmmmmmmmmmmm aap .........kaya baat hai....kaise aana hua SDC par...aap to aaj-kal bahut busy ho gaye hain, SDC ko aur SDC par bane dosto.n ko bhool hi gaye ho....accha laga, bahut accha laga aapko apni post par dekh kar....

aate raha kijiye raj ji.....

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Don't have words to say... Yet another replica of my heart!

Great Work Di!!!!

~Priya
thanks priya..............yoon saath deti rahna apni diii ka

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Dosto bahut din phele yeh chand ahsaas maine kagaz par likhey thy, bas en ahsaaso.n ko aapke saath share karne ka mokka hi nahi mil raha tha, dosto yeh ahsaas tab mere zehan meiN aaye jis waqt meri nanhi si jaan (meri bitiya) operation theater meiN thi, us waqt apne ko bahut bebas aur tanha sa mahsoos kar rahi thi main, vaise to sab thy mere paas….par jo shakas mere liye sab kuch hai wahi nahi tha bas mere paas….to unhi ke liye hain yeh mere ahsaas…..


Kaash tum aa jate

Aaj kuch waqt ke liye paas mere, kaash tum aa jate,
Bahut tanha hoon main aaj, kaash tum aa jate,

Kabhi khud ko etna kamjor na hone diya maine,
Par aaj bikhar gaye hoon main, kaash tum aa jate,

Tumhi se milta hai housla harpal mujhe,
Chahiye aaj bahho.n ka sahara, kaash tum aa jate,

Barso.n se jee rahi hoon bin tere “Sajan”,
Aaj nahi guzar raha ek pal, kaash tum aa jate,

Waqt ki raftaar bhi jaise thum se gaye hai,
Thum na jaye “sunita” ki nabaz, kaash tum aa jate.



KASAM se sunita ji dil ko lag gaye ap ke kalam .......khuda kare app ko wo sab kuch mile jo aap chahate ho.......
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KASAM se sunita ji dil ko lag gaye ap ke kalam .......khuda kare app ko wo sab kuch mile jo aap chahate ho.......
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shukriya vicky..........aapne mere ahsaaso.n ko samja aur saraha....


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Dosto bahut din phele yeh chand ahsaas maine kagaz par likhey thy, bas en ahsaaso.n ko aapke saath share karne ka mokka hi nahi mil raha tha, dosto yeh ahsaas tab mere zehan meiN aaye jis waqt meri nanhi si jaan (meri bitiya) operation theater meiN thi, us waqt apne ko bahut bebas aur tanha sa mahsoos kar rahi thi main, vaise to sab thy mere paas….par jo shakas mere liye sab kuch hai wahi nahi tha bas mere paas….to unhi ke liye hain yeh mere ahsaas…..


Kaash tum aa jate

Aaj kuch waqt ke liye paas mere, kaash tum aa jate,
Bahut tanha hoon main aaj, kaash tum aa jate,

Kabhi khud ko etna kamjor na hone diya maine,
Par aaj bikhar gaye hoon main, kaash tum aa jate,

Tumhi se milta hai housla harpal mujhe,
Chahiye aaj bahho.n ka sahara, kaash tum aa jate,

Barso.n se jee rahi hoon bin tere “Sajan”,
Aaj nahi guzar raha ek pal, kaash tum aa jate,

Waqt ki raftaar bhi jaise thum se gaye hai,
Thum na jaye “sunita” ki nabaz, kaash tum aa jate.
great sunita jee.... bahut khoob ..lagta hai jaise dil utaar diya hai aapne ... aur shabd nahin hia mere paas tareef karne ko........


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Shaam Hote Hi Chiragon Ko Bujha Deta Hoon
Yeh Dil Hi Kaafi Hai Teri Yaad Main Jalne Ke Liye

Yeh Teri Bhi Aankhon Ka Qusur Hai
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suntia jee !

lafz nahi mil rahe apne juzbaatoN ko bayaN karne ke liye waise bhi juzbaatoN ki shakal nahi hoti juzbaatoN se insaan ki shakal zaroor banti bigadti hai !

Barso.n se jee rahi hoon bin tere “Sajan”,
Aaj nahi guzar raha ek pal, kaash tum aa jate,

Waqt ki raftaar bhi jaise thum se gaye hai,
Thum na jaye “sunita” ki nabaz, kaash tum aa jate.

ye ashaar tareef ki had se bahar the !
issi tarah likhti rahiye !

apna khyaal rakhiye!

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great sunita jee.... bahut khoob ..lagta hai jaise dil utaar diya hai aapne ... aur shabd nahin hia mere paas tareef karne ko........
arvind ji arse baad aapko SDC par dekha....accha laga
aapne mere ahsaaso.n ko pada saraha...shukriya..aate raha kijiye

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Shaam Hote Hi Chiragon Ko Bujha Deta Hoon
Yeh Dil Hi Kaafi Hai Teri Yaad Main Jalne Ke Liye

Yeh Teri Bhi Aankhon Ka Qusur Hai
Main Tanha Gunahgar To Nahi

Tu Is Tarah Se Mere Dil Main Shamil Hai
Jahan Bhi Jaoon Lagta Hai Teri Mahfil Hai
aapka SDC par dil se suwagat hai.....

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suntia jee !

lafz nahi mil rahe apne juzbaatoN ko bayaN karne ke liye waise bhi juzbaatoN ki shakal nahi hoti juzbaatoN se insaan ki shakal zaroor banti bigadti hai !

Barso.n se jee rahi hoon bin tere “Sajan”,
Aaj nahi guzar raha ek pal, kaash tum aa jate,

Waqt ki raftaar bhi jaise thum se gaye hai,
Thum na jaye “sunita” ki nabaz, kaash tum aa jate.

ye ashaar tareef ki had se bahar the !
issi tarah likhti rahiye !

apna khyaal rakhiye!
shitiz ji.......aapne etne gaur se pada aur mere jazbaato.n ko samja...dil se shukriya shitiz ji....aapki baatey bilkul sahi haiN....!

take care
god bless u

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me apke liye ak shar bhej raha hu I hope that you like it.Phir chand khila phir rat thami
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Shaam Hote Hi Chiragon Ko Bujha Deta Hoon
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Yeh Teri Bhi Aankhon Ka Qusur Hai
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Love U R Gineussss - 16th July 2008, 01:30 PM
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Adaab Sunita Jee !!!

Mai nhi janta k appk sajan , app k hubby ka kya haal ho ga wahan per , who kya feel ker rahy hoon gay , but aik choooti se gustakhi ker rha hon un ki teref se jawab deny ki .... i know yeh unki feeling k zara bher bhi baraber nhi ho ga , lakin mulahiza fermaiye ...


Tujhy kaisy samjhaon , mai kis bhais mein hon
saton smander paar , tanha pardes mein hon

kuch khaber mily mujhy k sab theek hai
atkaey howy jaan , her aik sandes pe hon

Ro ro k tuny dil apna halka to ker liya
main ro bhi nhi sakta , mai pardes mein hon

Tum ho preshan wahan to khush yahan main bhi nhi
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Dosto bahut din phele yeh chand ahsaas maine kagaz par likhey thy, bas en ahsaaso.n ko aapke saath share karne ka mokka hi nahi mil raha tha, dosto yeh ahsaas tab mere zehan meiN aaye jis waqt meri nanhi si jaan (meri bitiya) operation theater meiN thi, us waqt apne ko bahut bebas aur tanha sa mahsoos kar rahi thi main, vaise to sab thy mere paas….par jo shakas mere liye sab kuch hai wahi nahi tha bas mere paas….to unhi ke liye hain yeh mere ahsaas…..


Kaash tum aa jate

Aaj kuch waqt ke liye paas mere, kaash tum aa jate,
Bahut tanha hoon main aaj, kaash tum aa jate,

Kabhi khud ko etna kamjor na hone diya maine,
Par aaj bikhar gaye hoon main, kaash tum aa jate,

Tumhi se milta hai housla harpal mujhe,
Chahiye aaj bahho.n ka sahara, kaash tum aa jate,

Barso.n se jee rahi hoon bin tere “Sajan”,
Aaj nahi guzar raha ek pal, kaash tum aa jate,

Waqt ki raftaar bhi jaise thum se gaye hai,
Thum na jaye “sunita” ki nabaz, kaash tum aa jate.


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Very Nice, Boht Khoob likha hai apne. Mein Dua karoon ga. Woh aa jayae apki zindagi mein.

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Hello Di,

Bahut hi khoobsurat Ehsaas hai di. Padh ke bahut achha laga. Aapke alfaaz hamesha hi dil ko chu lete hain. Aisa lagta hai jaise, meri apni soch aapne apne shabdon mein likh di ho.. Padhkar bas itna kehne ka dil hua...

Kyu rote ho kyu hote ho udas, kyu dil chhota karte ho
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Jisse dhoondhte ho aaj zamane mein, woh to kahin gaya hi nahin
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sunita jee !

kaisi haiN aap ? ummeed karta huN ishwar ki kripaa se sab behtar hogaa !

maine aapka ye Qalaam kayii baar padhaa aur har baar padhne ke baad dil hil dil meiN khoob daad bhi dii !

aaj jab iss par nazar gayi to maine payaa ki dil me to khoob daad dii hai par usse zahir nahi kiyaa abhi tak !

kaafi achha likha hai !

gustaakhi muaaf ho magar aisa laga jaise isse likhte waQt aap kaafi dard meiN thiN !

malik aapko hara tarah ke dard o ghum se door rakhe aur aapki zindagi meiN khushiyaN bikhere !

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Bahut hi khoobsurat Ehsaas hai di. Padh ke bahut achha laga. Aapke alfaaz hamesha hi dil ko chu lete hain. Aisa lagta hai jaise, meri apni soch aapne apne shabdon mein likh di ho.. Padhkar bas itna kehne ka dil hua...

Kyu rote ho kyu hote ho udas, kyu dil chhota karte ho
Ek waqt beet gaya toh kyu, khud ko tanha samajhte ho
Jisse dhoondhte ho aaj zamane mein, woh to kahin gaya hi nahin
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Sweet Na...

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sunita jee !

kaisi haiN aap ? ummeed karta huN ishwar ki kripaa se sab behtar hogaa !

maine aapka ye Qalaam kayii baar padhaa aur har baar padhne ke baad dil hil dil meiN khoob daad bhi dii !

aaj jab iss par nazar gayi to maine payaa ki dil me to khoob daad dii hai par usse zahir nahi kiyaa abhi tak !

kaafi achha likha hai !

gustaakhi muaaf ho magar aisa laga jaise isse likhte waQt aap kaafi dard meiN thiN !

malik aapko hara tarah ke dard o ghum se door rakhe aur aapki zindagi meiN khushiyaN bikhere !

abhi ijaazat di jiye

apnaa khyaal rakhiye !

janaab, shayad aap bhool rahe haiN, aapne es thread par mujhe 2 baar daad di hai bahut accha laga mujhe 2 baar aapki likhi tareef pad kar meri shayri es kabil hai ki aap baar esko padte ho....bahut kushi hue mujhe....aap jaise padne wale hoN to bhalla kaun na likhega
ji aapne sahi samaj, yeh ahsaas us waqt ke haiN jab meri bitiya ka operation ho raha tha...yeh maine gazal likhne se phele mention bhi kiya hai...shayad aapne pada nahi.
yoon hi hume padtey rahiye....hum likhtey rahenge.

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mujhe to lag raha hai ki maiN waQt se pehle hi buddha ho gaya huN !

kuch yaad hi nahi rahtaa ! aur jo yaad rahta hai bas dhundhlaa saa rahtaa hai !

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Dil ke lahu se likha ye paigaam mera hai.
Mohbbat ki hai tune ye ehsaan mera hai.
Is tadpte dil ko kia tum gale lagaoge.
Kahin aisa to nahi ki tum bhi tadpte chhod jaoge.
Bahut dhukh uthaye hai jindgi main pyar milta nahi.
Mohbbat ki aag lga ke dil mein,
Kahin meri chita to na jalao ge.
Pyar nibhane ka dava to karte hai sabhi,
Par sabhi ki tarah kahin bhul to naa jaaoge.......

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mujhe to lag raha hai ki maiN waQt se pehle hi buddha ho gaya huN !

kuch yaad hi nahi rahtaa ! aur jo yaad rahta hai bas dhundhlaa saa rahtaa hai !

abhi aapki bitiyaa ki tabiyat kaisi hai ?

aur kyaa naam hai uska ?
hehehe..........lagta to kuch kuch aise hi hai
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Bahut dhukh uthaye hai jindgi main pyar milta nahi.
Mohbbat ki aag lga ke dil mein,
Kahin meri chita to na jalao ge.
Pyar nibhane ka dava to karte hai sabhi,
Par sabhi ki tarah kahin bhul to naa jaaoge.......
shayri acchi lagi aapki......................................

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  • HI SUNITA JI,
  • AAPNE TO JAISE YE SUB LIKH KER MERI DUKHTI RUG PER HAATH RAKH DIYA HO, KASH TUM AA JATE TITLE BAHOOT HI SUITABLE HAI, HUM AAPKE IS AHSAAS KA APNE DIL PER BHI MAHSOOS KARTE HAI.
  • REALY AAPNE YE BAAT LIKH KER YE SUB KO BATA DIYA KI JISE HUM APNE JINDGI KA SUBSE AHAM HISSA MANTE HAI AGAR WO WAQT PER NAHI HO TO POORI DUNIA SIMTATI NAZAR AATI HAI.
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Dosto bahut din phele yeh chand ahsaas maine kagaz par likhey thy, bas en ahsaaso.n ko aapke saath share karne ka mokka hi nahi mil raha tha, dosto yeh ahsaas tab mere zehan meiN aaye jis waqt meri nanhi si jaan (meri bitiya) operation theater meiN thi, us waqt apne ko bahut bebas aur tanha sa mahsoos kar rahi thi main, vaise to sab thy mere paas….par jo shakas mere liye sab kuch hai wahi nahi tha bas mere paas….to unhi ke liye hain yeh mere ahsaas…..


Kaash tum aa jate

Aaj kuch waqt ke liye paas mere, kaash tum aa jate,
Bahut tanha hoon main aaj, kaash tum aa jate,

Kabhi khud ko etna kamjor na hone diya maine,
Par aaj bikhar gaye hoon main, kaash tum aa jate,

Tumhi se milta hai housla harpal mujhe,
Chahiye aaj bahho.n ka sahara, kaash tum aa jate,

Barso.n se jee rahi hoon bin tere “Sajan”,
Aaj nahi guzar raha ek pal, kaash tum aa jate,

Waqt ki raftaar bhi jaise thum se gaye hai,
Thum na jaye “sunita” ki nabaz, kaash tum aa jate.
Arse baad aa payaa hoon aur yeh behad umdaa ehsaas padhne ko mile - Bahut acche sunita di !!


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Good one I must say..!!!

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Shaam Hote Hi Chiragon Ko Bujha Deta Hoon
Yeh Dil Hi Kaafi Hai Teri Yaad Main Jalne Ke Liye

Yeh Teri Bhi Aankhon Ka Qusur Hai
Main Tanha Gunahgar To Nahi

Tu Is Tarah Se Mere Dil Main Shamil Hai
Jahan Bhi Jaoon Lagta Hai Teri Mahfil Hai

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"Shaam Hote Hi Chiragon Ko Bujha Deta Hoon
Yeh Dil Hi Kaafi Hai Teri Yaad Main Jalne Ke Liye"

Kaun Kambakhat Kehta hai,
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hiii Mast bhai...kaise hai aap ????
yeh ahsaas jab likhey thy tab dil mein jo dard tha, wahi dard ab mahsoos hota hai jab bhi en ahsaason ko phir se padti hu :-(

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Hii,

Good one I must say..!!!

Mujhe Ek Geet yaad aaya..

"Hum bhool Gaye re har baat, Magar tera pyaar nahi bhule,
Kyaa Kyaa Hua Dil ke Saath, Magar tera Pyaar Nahi bhule.."


ahsaasoN ko samjane ke liye shukriya....!!

god bless u

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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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12th May 2012, 07:20 PM
Very well written!

Sometimes people come back too late in life: -
Ab tum lauto ge itne salo me
dhoop utri hogi balon me
phool hi phool khil uthe dil me
aaye ho tum jo tum mere khayalon me.

This one is amaging as well: -
"यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया,
के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए........!"
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लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein
   
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Uffff..!!! - 12th May 2012, 11:22 PM
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Very well written!

Sometimes people come back too late in life: -
Ab tum lauto ge itne salo me
dhoop utri hogi balon me
phool hi phool khil uthe dil me
aaye ho tum jo tum mere khayalon me.

This one is amaging as well: -
"यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया,
के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए........!"
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Hey Bhagwaan..!!! What Have you written Dude.


Ab tum lauto ge itne salo me
dhoop utri hogi balon me

It may sound lil idiotic, just that wanted to convey.. (Though Highly apologizing to convey)

Kuchh Dard Naa Likkhe Jaayein, To hi Acchaa hai,
Kamse Kam, Padhne mein hi Jii Lene Dijiye Sahaab..!!

Kaun Kambakhat Kehta hai,
Ke Sirf Ghaalib ko hai pata,
Radeef, Kafiya, Matla, Maktaa....!!
Yeh Teer-E-Ishq kyaa 'Zindagi' se Ziyada,
Kya Ghaalib ko hai Chubhata....!!!!!
   
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Very well written!

Sometimes people come back too late in life: -
Ab tum lauto ge itne salo me
dhoop utri hogi balon me
phool hi phool khil uthe dil me
aaye ho tum jo tum mere khayalon me.

This one is amaging as well: -
"यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया,
के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए........!"
Regards
Sushil
Sushil ji namaskaar....muaafi chahti hu, maine aaj hi aapka reply dekha...dil se shukriya.

aapne jo chand lines share ki hai...behad khoobsurat lgi aur bahut achhi bhi lgi.

regards

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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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Dosto bahut din phele yeh chand ahsaas maine kagaz par likhey thy, bas en ahsaaso.n ko aapke saath share karne ka mokka hi nahi mil raha tha, dosto yeh ahsaas tab mere zehan meiN aaye jis waqt meri nanhi si jaan (meri bitiya) operation theater meiN thi, us waqt apne ko bahut bebas aur tanha sa mahsoos kar rahi thi main, vaise to sab thy mere paas….par jo shakas mere liye sab kuch hai wahi nahi tha bas mere paas….to unhi ke liye hain yeh mere ahsaas…..


Kaash tum aa jate

Aaj kuch waqt ke liye paas mere, kaash tum aa jate,
Bahut tanha hoon main aaj, kaash tum aa jate,

Kabhi khud ko etna kamjor na hone diya maine,
Par aaj bikhar gaye hoon main, kaash tum aa jate,

Tumhi se milta hai housla harpal mujhe,
Chahiye aaj bahho.n ka sahara, kaash tum aa jate,

Barso.n se jee rahi hoon bin tere “Sajan”,
Aaj nahi guzar raha ek pal, kaash tum aa jate,

Waqt ki raftaar bhi jaise thum se gaye hai,
Thum na jaye “sunita” ki nabaz, kaash tum aa jate.

bht touchy creation hai ye aapki sunita ji....

Aaj fir dil shayar hona chahta hai..
Dard lafzon me pirona chahta hai..
   
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