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perfect friend - 29th November 2005, 09:30 PM

u were a perfect friend to me
and i wanted the whole world to see
how fortunate i was to get a friend like u
who was loyal and could be trusted all the way through

in u i confined my dreams so true
coz i knew u would be there when i felt blue
trust was the word once had bound us together
and kept us united even in rough weather

alas how wrong was i to think like this
and consider our friendship with joy and bliss
the trust which once had bound us together
has shown its colour in darkest of weather

the pain u have inflicted on me will pehaphs remain
wheather in sunsine or in rain
but one thing is evident in the end
.......that u were not my"perfect friend"

my friends never to expect a lot from friends,or else u will always be let down as i was........


chand ho pari ho ya koi afshara
pyar kare jo hume sone sa khara
jiski ankhon me ho pyar hi pyar bhara
me uska "veer" wo meri "zarra"

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29th November 2005, 10:39 PM

well sirf friends se hi nahi but one shud never expect from anyone..as expectation brings dissappointments...
very nicely written.take care.bye


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hi - 30th November 2005, 12:02 AM

indeed its true farhana,but i was ignorant,and carried away by emotions,or should i say lost my senses.
ur point taken.
i will remember this.
i guess it was a lesson for me which i learned in a bitter way.
hope this never happens with anybody.


chand ho pari ho ya koi afshara
pyar kare jo hume sone sa khara
jiski ankhon me ho pyar hi pyar bhara
me uska "veer" wo meri "zarra"

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30th November 2005, 09:18 AM

very good man just liked it like anything keep writing (atleast for me) byee


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2nd December 2005, 09:54 AM

Brijesh,

I can understad... as farhana said "never expect anything from anyone"... just do your best... take care & keep writting!

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7th December 2005, 11:48 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by mehul jain
very good man just liked it like anything keep writing (atleast for me) byee
thank u mehul brother,i like ur writting too....


chand ho pari ho ya koi afshara
pyar kare jo hume sone sa khara
jiski ankhon me ho pyar hi pyar bhara
me uska "veer" wo meri "zarra"

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