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19th December 2007, 10:23 AM
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Pranaam..
aaj fir sey ees koShiSh par naZar paDii,, aaj vidhu kaa janamdin hay.. maiN usskey liYe aaj wahi duaaeN lekar aayaa huuN jo duaaeN maiN haMeShaa donoN ke liYe kartaa aayaa huuN.. Khudaa ziNdagee bhar kii KhuSHiyaaN deN usey. aur wo bahot aage baRheN.. merii bhaaNji ko bahot saaraa pyaar..! ek baar fir sey ees koShiSh par merii taraf sey DheroN saarii daad qabUl keejiYeNgaa..!
apnaa Khayaal raKheN.. KhuSh raheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka chhoTu
~ Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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19th December 2007, 12:42 PM
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Pranaam..
aaj fir sey ees koShiSh par naZar paDii,, aaj vidhu kaa janamdin hay.. maiN usskey liYe aaj wahi duaaeN lekar aayaa huuN jo duaaeN maiN haMeShaa donoN ke liYe kartaa aayaa huuN.. Khudaa ziNdagee bhar kii KhuSHiyaaN deN usey. aur wo bahot aage baRheN.. merii bhaaNji ko bahot saaraa pyaar..! ek baar fir sey ees koShiSh par merii taraf sey DheroN saarii daad qabUl keejiYeNgaa..!
apnaa Khayaal raKheN.. KhuSh raheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka chhoTu
~ Dhaval
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mere pyarey chottu..........accha laga ki tujhe apni bhaanji ka jamamdin yaad rahta hai.....aur maiN tujhe wishes ke liye shukriya bhi nahi kahuNgi.....yeh to tera farz hai....ki aapni bhanji ke janamdin par bin bulaye aaye aur wish kare....
lots of love
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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19th December 2007, 02:59 PM
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Salaam Sunita ji Aapke is kalaam ne to dil chuliya.Betiyon ke liye yeh khayaal aur pyaar bhari nazam bahut acchi lagi sabhi lo ese khayalat samajhle to dunia mein bete aur betiyon ka fark khatam ho gayega................Ek pyari gazal ke liye mubarakbaad kubool kiiye......khush rahiye
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Kashif jee..........bahut bahut shukriya......aur itfaak dekhiye, aaj phir meri beti ka janamdin hai....aur maiN pure saal baad aapko jawaab de rahi hoon....duao.n ke liye shukriya.
god bless u
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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19th December 2007, 03:03 PM
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DEAR SUNITA DI,
aap ki ye nazm padhkar dil khush ho gaya....betiyon ke bareme aap ka ye khayal bahut hi umda hai....behad khubsoorat ehsaas hai aap ke DIDI.....dad kabul farmaye................
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dear lamha ..........main bhi kisi ki beti hoon aur mere paas bhi betiya.n hain....aur dono risto.n ke jazbaat haiN mere paas...
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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22nd December 2007, 04:13 PM
welll riteeen sunita jiiiiiii,
adaaabb kaisi hian aap???bahuttt dino baad ana hua hai yahann aur aate hi aaj aapke is kalaam per nazar padiii.bahut khoob likha hia aapne sunita ji,kya khoob andaaz--e-bayan apnaya hai.sach kaha hai aapne betiyaan hamara hi to ek roop hoti hian per afsos hai ke aaj bhi betiyon ko kitna kamtar samjha jaata hai .
bahut khoob sunita ji,aapki dono betiya hamesha khush rahen kamaaybi unke qadam choomen,dard-o-gham ka saaya bhi unke aas paas kabhi na phatak paaye,bas yehi meri dili dua hai.
likhti rhaen yunhin khush rahen
yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi??
--akelijaan--
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14th January 2008, 04:31 PM
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welll riteeen sunita jiiiiiii,
adaaabb kaisi hian aap???bahuttt dino baad ana hua hai yahann aur aate hi aaj aapke is kalaam per nazar padiii.bahut khoob likha hia aapne sunita ji,kya khoob andaaz--e-bayan apnaya hai.sach kaha hai aapne betiyaan hamara hi to ek roop hoti hian per afsos hai ke aaj bhi betiyon ko kitna kamtar samjha jaata hai .
bahut khoob sunita ji,aapki dono betiya hamesha khush rahen kamaaybi unke qadam choomen,dard-o-gham ka saaya bhi unke aas paas kabhi na phatak paaye,bas yehi meri dili dua hai.
likhti rhaen yunhin khush rahen
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shukriya dost.....aapne mere ahsaaso.n ko samja.......dil se shukriya
aapki dost
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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15th January 2008, 06:36 AM
hi didi
1st of all sorry didi i might b the last person to read it ...belated b'day wish to her ...aapki yeh kavita bahut pyaarii ... its so true ... betiayaan sab se best hotii hai ... meri dua hai duniya mien kisi betii kabhie b dukhi naa ho ... im sure do ek din aapka naam roshan karengii ... Girls r the BEST
take care
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15th January 2008, 03:11 PM
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You have done a good job.
Much better .... carry on ...
I wish you all the best..
Keep it up .......
Happy Birthday For your Betiya.
From :- Sajan with love
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shukriya sajan ji...........duao.n ke liye tahe-dil se shukriya
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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15th January 2008, 03:22 PM
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dd late aayee hun maaf karna
vidhu ko blated wish dena meri
bahut khub subject chuna hai mera to priy sub hai ye betiyo ke liye kuch liihna
sakhi with love and wish
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deerrrriii se aaye ho tum to kaya hua.....dua to laye ho bitiya ke liye....yoon hi aati rahna..........
love
tumhari didi
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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15th January 2008, 03:23 PM
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Kya Khob Kaha Hai Apne Kya Baat Hai Janab
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shukriya Bilal g.............
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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15th January 2008, 03:24 PM
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hi sunitaji kya khub likha hai bahut achha laga bas aise hi likhti rahena
aansu aate hai aankho me hamari
jab aati hai yaad tumhari
khushiya hi khushiya hamare pass thi
jab tum mere pass hoti thi
hazaro gum mile hume jab
tum mujse dur chali gai
hum ko rahena tha sirf saath tumhare
par chal na sake tum saath hamare
jab jab dekhi hum ne tasveer tumhari
tab tab roye hai yaad me tumhari
jab se dur hui hai chatat tumhari
tab se koi saath nahi hai hamare
bas tumhari yaade kafi hai hamare pass
aur vo yaad karke yu hi gujar jati hai zindagi hamari
rahengi to hamesha dil me tasveer tumhari
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Karnail Paa Ji.............dil se shukriya kabool kijiye.....aur yoon hi saath detey rahiye...........
aapki diiii
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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15th January 2008, 03:26 PM
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Sunita ji
Sab se pahle toh beti saalgirah bahut bahut mujarak ho, dua kariti hoon usse duniya bharki khushiyan mile. har sukh mile. Amen
aapke vichar betiyon ke prati dekh dil khush ko gaya. shabd nahi ki kahoon kya.
aor unke sasuraal jane ka sochkar abhi se ankhe num ho jati hai. aapne bahut acha kalaam pesh kiya hai. yunhi likhti rahiyega.
aapki dost
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dost nira....aapki duaie.n khuda kabool kare........etne pyar se aapne pada aur saraha......dil se shukriya kabool kijiye.....aur yoon hi saath detey rahiyega.
aapki dost
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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15th January 2008, 03:30 PM
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Aadab sunita ji,
kaise hain aap?
sunita ji hamari pyari bitiya kjo hamari taraf se bohot saari duae,or mubarak baad,
maafi chahte hain,mubarak baad dene me kafi der ho gayi,
aaj aapki yeh nazam padh kar ,mehsus hua,,k ab hamari ammi ko bhi yehi dard mehsus hota hoga,
per allah ne yeh dastur banakar,kayi khushiya b to di hain,
hai na?
to ab aap b muskuraye,,
hamari bitiya ko bohot bohot pyaar,
khush rahiye,
apna or bitiya ka khayal rakhiye,
ALLAH HAFIZ
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Dear Sony........sahi kaha aapne ki aapki ammi ko bhi yehi dard mahsoos hota hoga........yakeen.nan hota hoga....maa jo hai woh....aur maa ki tadap ek maa hi samaj sakti hai....dua ke liye shukriya....aur lijiye mohtarma hum muskura diye ..........ab kush ho aap.....
god bless u
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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15th January 2008, 03:31 PM
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DEAR SUNITA DI,
aap ki ye nazm padhkar dil khush ho gaya....betiyon ke bareme aap ka ye khayal bahut hi umda hai....behad khubsoorat ehsaas hai aap ke DIDI.....dad kabul farmaye................
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Rafik ji.........aapne hamare ahsaaso.n ko padda aur samja.....dil se shukriya aur aapki daad bhi humey dil se kabool hai
aapki diiiii
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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15th January 2008, 03:44 PM
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main to bohat hi late hogai hoon didi humesha ki tarah kia likha hai aapne didi aik aik word main sachai aur aapki betiyon ke liye aapka pyar chalak raha hai bohat khoob di meridua hai aapki donon betiyan humesha khush rahain aur aapki umeedon per pooriutrain ameeen sum ameen ye ashaar bohatttt gehraye liye howe hain di..........
Ghar aangan mai.n cha-chahati hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Chidiyo jaise edhar udhar udti firti hai.n pyari betiya.n….
Ek aah ke saath janam leti hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Ek aah dekar hi phir chorr jatti hai.n pyari betiya.n…....
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late...aur tu....hehehe....yeh bata to waqt par aati kab hai....
dear mani ahsaaso.n ko samjne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya........!
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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15th January 2008, 03:49 PM
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hi didi
1st of all sorry didi i might b the last person to read it ...belated b'day wish to her ...aapki yeh kavita bahut pyaarii ... its so true ... betiayaan sab se best hotii hai ... meri dua hai duniya mien kisi betii kabhie b dukhi naa ho ... im sure do ek din aapka naam roshan karengii ... Girls r the BEST
take care
aapkii
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Dear Mandeep.....main tumse 100% sahmat hoon ki girls r d best... ahsaaso.n ko samjne aur housla afjaei ke liye dil se shukriya...!
aapki didi
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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17th January 2008, 04:02 AM
Sunita, bahut hi sachcha aur pyara likhkha hai aapne...
mujhe yeh rachna behad pasand aayi kyunki is rachna mai mujhe apni aur apni beti ki jhalak nazar aati hai,
thanks for sharing it..
regards
aarya
khwaabo.n ke par kabhii kaTne na denaa
inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii
lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste
un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii
ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa
inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii
regards aarya
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17th January 2008, 08:57 PM
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Dosto kal meri bitiya ne 10 saal purey kiya hai.n, uske janamdin par mai.n bahut kush bhi thi par dil ke kisi kone mai.n ek ajeeb se dard bhi tha, bas usi dard ko kagaz par likh diya hai…yakeenan yeh dard har maa ka hoga, aap sab ke saath share kar rahi hoon……!
Pyari Betiya.n
Ghar aangan mai.n cha-chahati hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Chidiyo jaise edhar udhar udti firti hai.n pyari betiya.n….
Ek aah ke saath janam leti hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Ek aah dekar hi phir chorr jatti hai.n pyari betiya.n…....
Ek maa hoon, mere paas bhi hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Zamane ki har kushi se pyari hoti hai.n pyari betiya.n….
Mere bachpan ki parchai hai.n meri pyari betiya.n,
Ghar mahak jata hai jab muskurati hai.n pyari betiya.n…
Mere adhoorey khaab purey karengi meri pyari betiya.n,
Mere dukh-sukh ki humdard hai.n meri pyari betiya.n...…
Bahut sapne sajate hai.n har maa-baap betiyo ke liye,
Dua karti hoon sadha kush rahey sabki pyari betiya.n...…
Doli mai.n beth jab sasuraal chali jayengi pyari betiya.n,
“Sunita” ko bahut tanha kar jayengi pyari betiya.n..…..
aapki dost
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R. Sunita Ji,
Eh tuhadi poem mein Sare Parivar nu padh ke sunai... Sab ne bahot pasand kiti... Kiha ke vadhia poem lai madam nu vadhai likho... So, Sare parivar da hukam mere sir mathe te Uhna di vadhai tuhade vehre...
Mein vi ik poem likhi si idhr udhr to Lafaz ikathe karke... Tanisha (Vadi Beti) ne eh poem school vich pari si te uss nu First Prize milia si... Aap di nazar hai...
Pyari Pyari hoti hein betian...
Foolon jaisi Niari hoti hain betian...
Zara sa danto to roti hein betian...
Heera agar beta to Moti hein betian...
Aoron ke raste par chalti rahe.n gi...
Khushio.n se daman bhigoti hein betian...
Pyari Pyari hoti hein betian...
Foolon jaisi Niari hoti hain betian...
Rishi
Aasha ka Deep Jalaye Baitha HooN
Mann mein tujhe Basae Baitha HooN
Aana hai to jaldi aa E DosT,
Zindgi apni to kiyA,
Udhaar ki bhi Khaye Baitha HooN.
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12th February 2008, 04:54 PM
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Sunita, bahut hi sachcha aur pyara likhkha hai aapne...
mujhe yeh rachna behad pasand aayi kyunki is rachna mai mujhe apni aur apni beti ki jhalak nazar aati hai,
thanks for sharing it..
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hello aarya........accha laga aapko yaha dekh kar.....aur us se bhi accha yeh laga ki aapne mere ahsaaso.n ko apne rishtey mein mahsoos kiya, yeh rishta hi aisa hai.....!
kush rahiye aur aati raha kijiye
god bless u
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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12th February 2008, 04:58 PM
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R. Sunita Ji,
Eh tuhadi poem mein Sare Parivar nu padh ke sunai... Sab ne bahot pasand kiti... Kiha ke vadhia poem lai madam nu vadhai likho... So, Sare parivar da hukam mere sir mathe te Uhna di vadhai tuhade vehre...
Mein vi ik poem likhi si idhr udhr to Lafaz ikathe karke... Tanisha (Vadi Beti) ne eh poem school vich pari si te uss nu First Prize milia si... Aap di nazar hai...
Pyari Pyari hoti hein betian...
Foolon jaisi Niari hoti hain betian...
Zara sa danto to roti hein betian...
Heera agar beta to Moti hein betian...
Aoron ke raste par chalti rahe.n gi...
Khushio.n se daman bhigoti hein betian...
Pyari Pyari hoti hein betian...
Foolon jaisi Niari hoti hain betian...
Rishi
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rishi jee....tusi menu aina sanmaan dita, jis da shukriya karan laye mere koi lafaz nahi hai, mere vallo.n sare pariwaar nu namastey kahna...te kahna ki meiN dil to unha di shukarguzar haan jo mere ahsaas.n di una aine kadar kiti....tuhade likhe ahsaas menu bahut pasand aaye.....es rishtey vich mithaas hi aine hai ki har lafaz shahad vaang meetha lagda hai esda....!
kush raho te aida hi saath dende raho
tuhadi dost
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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19th December 2010, 12:40 PM
Dosto aaj meri Bitiya ne 14 saal poore kiye haiN, SDC par aaye to socha kyuN na ek baar apni es post ko pada jaaye jo maine uske 10th Bday par likhi thi, ahsaas kaise haiN dil meiN shayad batana mushkil nahi na-mumkin hai....!
may god bless her
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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19th December 2010, 01:33 PM
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Dosto kal meri bitiya ne 10 saal purey kiya hai.n, uske janamdin par mai.n bahut kush bhi thi par dil ke kisi kone mai.n ek ajeeb se dard bhi tha, bas usi dard ko kagaz par likh diya hai…yakeenan yeh dard har maa ka hoga, aap sab ke saath share kar rahi hoon……!
Pyari Betiya.n
Ghar aangan mai.n cha-chahati hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Chidiyo jaise edhar udhar udti firti hai.n pyari betiya.n….
Ek aah ke saath janam leti hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Ek aah dekar hi phir chorr jatti hai.n pyari betiya.n…....
Ek maa hoon, mere paas bhi hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Zamane ki har kushi se pyari hoti hai.n pyari betiya.n….
Mere bachpan ki parchai hai.n meri pyari betiya.n,
Ghar mahak jata hai jab muskurati hai.n pyari betiya.n…
Mere adhoorey khaab purey karengi meri pyari betiya.n,
Mere dukh-sukh ki humdard hai.n meri pyari betiya.n...…
Bahut sapne sajate hai.n har maa-baap betiyo ke liye,
Dua karti hoon sadha kush rahey sabki pyari betiya.n...…
Doli mai.n beth jab sasuraal chali jayengi pyari betiya.n,
“Sunita” ko bahut tanha kar jayengi pyari betiya.n..…..
aapki dost
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Hi Dost
kaisi ho
very very touchi ng dear God bless her
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Dil jalaa ke poochhte haiN badii masoomiyat se woh.
Shamaa ka hi kyuN muqaddar hai raat bhar jalnaa.
Dr. Imtiaz Nazish
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19th December 2010, 03:22 PM
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Dosto kal meri bitiya ne 10 saal purey kiya hai.n, uske janamdin par mai.n bahut kush bhi thi par dil ke kisi kone mai.n ek ajeeb se dard bhi tha, bas usi dard ko kagaz par likh diya hai…yakeenan yeh dard har maa ka hoga, aap sab ke saath share kar rahi hoon……!
Pyari Betiya.n
Ghar aangan mai.n cha-chahati hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Chidiyo jaise edhar udhar udti firti hai.n pyari betiya.n….
Ek aah ke saath janam leti hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Ek aah dekar hi phir chorr jatti hai.n pyari betiya.n…....
Ek maa hoon, mere paas bhi hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Zamane ki har kushi se pyari hoti hai.n pyari betiya.n….
Mere bachpan ki parchai hai.n meri pyari betiya.n,
Ghar mahak jata hai jab muskurati hai.n pyari betiya.n…
Mere adhoorey khaab purey karengi meri pyari betiya.n,
Mere dukh-sukh ki humdard hai.n meri pyari betiya.n...…
Bahut sapne sajate hai.n har maa-baap betiyo ke liye,
Dua karti hoon sadha kush rahey sabki pyari betiya.n...…
Doli mai.n beth jab sasuraal chali jayengi pyari betiya.n,
“Sunita” ko bahut tanha kar jayengi pyari betiya.n..…..
aapki dost
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bahut sahi aur sundar likha hai sunita jee aapne
daad
duaon ke saath
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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19th December 2010, 05:58 PM
sunita ji sach me.n bahut pyaari hoti hai.n ye betia.n
ma ki rajdulaari hoti hain ye betia.n
2 gharo.n ki hoti aan hai.n ye
aapne maa baap ki hoti shaan hain ye
har rishte pe hoti kurbaan hai.n ye
fir bhi,naa jaane kitne darad Doti hain ye betia.n
sach main bahut pyaari hoti hain ye betia.n
many many happy returns of the day to your loving daughter
Rashmi Sharma
path par kaante bahut hain tere
par manjil par jaana too.ne
dar na jatilata se jeewan ki
isko saral banana too.ne
pasat na hone paye honsle
khud ka sahas khud hi juta le
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19th December 2010, 06:33 PM
Bahenaa Ji ... Aapki rachna ... har maa ke jazbaat hai ... dil ko chhuute hai ... sabhi ashaar ... bahut hi touching likha hai aapne aur ek superB creation ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... qubuul farmaayeN ... !
aapki laadlii bitiya ke janamdin par ... humari aor se bahut bahut shubhkaamnaayeN ... unhe di jiyega ... humesha khush rahen aur swasth rahen ... jeevan me aage aur aage BaDhti rahen ... khoob paDhe ... !
Duaaon ke saath ... !
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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pyari Betiya -
20th December 2010, 08:19 AM
Aslaamaleikuum, Namaste aur Sat Sri A Kal
Sab seh pehele beti koh janam deen kee khaas vadhaiyaa, dua harhamesha yehi raheghee woh kamiyabee kee sidiyaa chadtee rahein aur apne maa-baap kah naam roshan kareh, aap keh jazbaat padkeh daad denha ucheet nahee samajhtaa kiyu keh eik achee tasveer jho aapne kheenchee hain betiya peh kuuch jazbaat likh rahaa hoon didi, gar ijjajat hoh aapkee;
betiya kiya hotee hain????
jaishe eik mehaktee suwaash hoh
jaishe eik jeeneh kee aash hoh
jaishe barsaat mein nachteh huweh maur kee mehak
jaishe hoh phooloh kee khushboodaar mehak
jaishe pa pa kadam bhartaa huwah angan
jaishe saareh ghar mein khushiyoh kaa aaghman
jaishe basant keh aaneh kah aheshash
jaishe hoh doh parivaroh mein felaataa huwah prakash
jaishe hoh eik naazook shaa bandhan
jaishe janmo-janam kah hoh eik sagpan
jaishe far far udtee huweeh eik pankhee
jaishe hoh maabaap keh budhapeh kee ankhdee
jaishe hoh zindagee bhar kaa saath
jaishe hoh angan mein tulsi kaa sangaath
jaishe hoh sambandho kee eik khiltee huwee kalee
jaishe hoh eik thand bharee subah kee chaadar makhmalee
Betia kiya sachee aishee hotee hain????
dil toh sirf deewaana hain
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27th December 2010, 11:02 AM
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Hi Dost
kaisi ho
very very touching dear God bless her
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shukriya Nazish sahiib, aapko ahsaas pasand aaye
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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27th December 2010, 11:03 AM
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bahut sahi aur sundar likha hai sunita jee aapne
daad
duaon ke saath
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Rajinder jii.....................dil se shukriya
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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27th December 2010, 11:13 AM
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sunita ji sach me.n bahut pyaari hoti hai.n ye betia.n
ma ki rajdulaari hoti hain ye betia.n
2 gharo.n ki hoti aan hai.n ye
aapne maa baap ki hoti shaan hain ye
har rishte pe hoti kurbaan hai.n ye
fir bhi,naa jaane kitne darad Doti hain ye betia.n
sach main bahut pyaari hoti hain ye betia.n
many many happy returns of the day to your loving daughter
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Rashmi jii, mai aapke ahsaaoN ki kadar karti hoon, sach kaha hai aapne ki 2 gharo.n ki aan hoti hai yeh betiyaN, bahgwaaN sabko 1 beti to jaroor deN, koi es sukh se door na rahe....ameeN
aapne apne ahsaas bhi share kiye....shukriya
god bless u
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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29th December 2010, 02:21 AM
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Dosto kal meri bitiya ne 10 saal purey kiya hai.n, uske janamdin par mai.n bahut kush bhi thi par dil ke kisi kone mai.n ek ajeeb se dard bhi tha, bas usi dard ko kagaz par likh diya hai…yakeenan yeh dard har maa ka hoga, aap sab ke saath share kar rahi hoon……!
Pyari Betiya.n
Ghar aangan mai.n cha-chahati hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Chidiyo jaise edhar udhar udti firti hai.n pyari betiya.n….
Ek aah ke saath janam leti hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Ek aah dekar hi phir chorr jatti hai.n pyari betiya.n…....
Ek maa hoon, mere paas bhi hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Zamane ki har kushi se pyari hoti hai.n pyari betiya.n….
Mere bachpan ki parchai hai.n meri pyari betiya.n,
Ghar mahak jata hai jab muskurati hai.n pyari betiya.n…
Mere adhoorey khaab purey karengi meri pyari betiya.n,
Mere dukh-sukh ki humdard hai.n meri pyari betiya.n...…
Bahut sapne sajate hai.n har maa-baap betiyo ke liye,
Dua karti hoon sadha kush rahey sabki pyari betiya.n...…
Doli mai.n beth jab sasuraal chali jayengi pyari betiya.n,
“Sunita” ko bahut tanha kar jayengi pyari betiya.n..…..
aapki dost
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sunita ji .... aapke kalaam mein is qadar mamta ka samundar samaayaa huwa hai ki bina aankh nam kiye ise padhna namumkn hai. main bhi isse pooree tarah ittefaaq rakhta hoon, par aap to ma hain aur aapke ehsaason ki ek alag hi oonchaayee hai. aapke jazbaaton ko daad dena suraj ko diya dikhaanaa hai, to sirf itna hi arz karta hoon .....
aankh zaraa ki bhi chhalke betiyon ke pyaar se
har khushee paayein sunita ji ki pyaaree betiyaan
apnee sabhee duaein deta huwa .... zarraa
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19th December 2014, 10:29 AM
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sunita ji .... aapke kalaam mein is qadar mamta ka samundar samaayaa huwa hai ki bina aankh nam kiye ise padhna namumkn hai. main bhi isse pooree tarah ittefaaq rakhta hoon, par aap to ma hain aur aapke ehsaason ki ek alag hi oonchaayee hai. aapke jazbaaton ko daad dena suraj ko diya dikhaanaa hai, to sirf itna hi arz karta hoon .....
aankh zaraa ki bhi chhalke betiyon ke pyaar se
har khushee paayein sunita ji ki pyaaree betiyaan
apnee sabhee duaein deta huwa .... zarraa
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Namaskaar zarra ji...shukriya aapki pyari si duaoN ke liye....aaj phir meri beti ka janamdiN hai aur aaj meri beti 18 saal ki ho gye hai...waqt ka pta hi nahi chala...kal ki hi baat lagti hai, jab maine maa ban.ne ka khoobsurat ehsaas pehli baar mehsoos kiya tha...palat kar dekhti hu to yakeen hi nahi hota ki 18 saal ho gye hai...aaj meri badi ho gye hai, samajdaar ho gye hai, aap sab ki duaoN se bhagwaan ne usko nek-dil aur sahi raah par chalne ki tofeek bakhshi hai...yu hi sab dostoN ki duaeN rang laati rhe aur har maa ke beti zindgi meiN kaamyaab aur safal rhe.
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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22nd December 2014, 08:49 PM
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Dosto kal meri bitiya ne 10 saal purey kiya hai.n, uske janamdin par mai.n bahut kush bhi thi par dil ke kisi kone mai.n ek ajeeb se dard bhi tha, bas usi dard ko kagaz par likh diya hai…yakeenan yeh dard har maa ka hoga, aap sab ke saath share kar rahi hoon……!
Pyari Betiya.n
Ghar aangan mai.n cha-chahati hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Chidiyo jaise edhar udhar udti firti hai.n pyari betiya.n….
Ek aah ke saath janam leti hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Ek aah dekar hi phir chorr jatti hai.n pyari betiya.n…....
Ek maa hoon, mere paas bhi hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Zamane ki har kushi se pyari hoti hai.n pyari betiya.n….
Mere bachpan ki parchai hai.n meri pyari betiya.n,
Ghar mahak jata hai jab muskurati hai.n pyari betiya.n…
Mere adhoorey khaab purey karengi meri pyari betiya.n,
Mere dukh-sukh ki humdard hai.n meri pyari betiya.n...…
Bahut sapne sajate hai.n har maa-baap betiyo ke liye,
Dua karti hoon sadha kush rahey sabki pyari betiya.n...…
Doli mai.n beth jab sasuraal chali jayengi pyari betiya.n,
“Sunita” ko bahut tanha kar jayengi pyari betiya.n..…..
aapki dost
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Di,sabse pahle pyari bitiya ko meri dher sari blessings..aur janmdin ki bahut bahut badhai...
Bahut pyari rachna hai aapki betiyon ke upar...meri bhi ek beti hai main aapki rachna me chhipe aapke jazbaat achchi tarah samajh sakti hoon....
Yahi dua hai ki sabki betiyan hamesha khush rahein..aur chahe kitni bhi door chali jayein dil ke hamesha kareeb rahein.....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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13th May 2015, 03:19 PM
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Di,sabse pahle pyari bitiya ko meri dher sari blessings..aur janmdin ki bahut bahut badhai...
Bahut pyari rachna hai aapki betiyon ke upar...meri bhi ek beti hai main aapki rachna me chhipe aapke jazbaat achchi tarah samajh sakti hoon....
Yahi dua hai ki sabki betiyan hamesha khush rahein..aur chahe kitni bhi door chali jayein dil ke hamesha kareeb rahein.....
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Shukriya Madhu...maa ka dil maa hi samaj sakti hai...meri ehsaasoN ko samjne ke liye ek baar phir shukriya
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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13th May 2015, 03:49 PM
waahh sunita deee kya baat hai.... baho din bbaad padha aapko magar bahot acchaa laga aapko padhna.. hamesha ki tarah..... likhte rahiye
shaad....
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14th May 2015, 11:19 AM
Ek maa hoon, mere paas bhi hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Zamane ki har kushi se pyari hoti hai.n pyari betiya.n….
Bahut sapne sajate hai.n har maa-baap betiyo ke liye,
Dua karti hoon sadha kush rahey sabki pyari betiya.n...…
Doli mai.n beth jab sasuraal chali jayengi pyari betiya.n,
“Sunita” ko bahut tanha kar jayengi pyari betiya.n..…..
Baaji ... betiyoN ke liye yeh ehsaas waqai hii bohat khaas haiN...
dil ko chuu lene walay ..... pur-soz o dil-doz....
khush rahen..
salamat rahen...
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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19th December 2015, 02:21 PM
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waahh sunita deee kya baat hai.... baho din bbaad padha aapko magar bahot acchaa laga aapko padhna.. hamesha ki tarah..... likhte rahiye
shaad....
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Shukriya Shaad bhai...muaaf kijiyega bahut dino baad reply kar rhi hu aapko...darasal maine aapka reply aaj hi pada...aaj meri Bitiya ka 19sva janamdin hai, to main es rachna ko pad rhi thi to dekha aapka reply
aik baar phir dil se shukirya
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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19th December 2015, 02:23 PM
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Originally Posted by Hassan
Ek maa hoon, mere paas bhi hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Zamane ki har kushi se pyari hoti hai.n pyari betiya.n….
Bahut sapne sajate hai.n har maa-baap betiyo ke liye,
Dua karti hoon sadha kush rahey sabki pyari betiya.n...…
Doli mai.n beth jab sasuraal chali jayengi pyari betiya.n,
“Sunita” ko bahut tanha kar jayengi pyari betiya.n..…..
Baaji ... betiyoN ke liye yeh ehsaas waqai hii bohat khaas haiN...
dil ko chuu lene walay ..... pur-soz o dil-doz....
khush rahen..
salamat rahen...
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HSN bhai....bahut bahut shukriya...mere ehsaas pasand karne ke liye...duaon ke liye alag se shukriya
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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19th December 2015, 04:01 PM
di...aap meri taraf se apni beti ko janmdin ki dher saro shubhkamnayein..dena..aapko bhi bahut mubarak ho.ishwar uska jeevan sada khushiyon se bhara rakhe...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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