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3 shers jo dil ke kareeb...........
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Thumbs up 3 shers jo dil ke kareeb........... - 8th October 2002, 10:54 AM

1) phool khilna chahta hai
kalii khilne nahii detii
dil milna chahta hai
kismat milne nahii detii

2) aandhii aati hai
toofan chale jaate hai
yaadein reh jaati hai
insan chale jaate hai

3) waada to kar lete hai
nibhaata hai koi koi
laga kar aag seene main
bujhaana bhool jaate hai


i will be thankfull to all of u who read my shers and give me reply
thanx
jasleen


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8th October 2002, 06:00 PM

Hi

Those three shers of yours are very nice and very true...so full of pain.


laga kar aag seene main
bujhaana bhool jaate hai...very nice.


yaadein reh jaati hai
insan chale jaate hai...excellent!

Keep writing

Amrita


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bravo
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Thumbs up bravo - 29th December 2002, 06:39 PM

hi jasleen,
u write very well....................................dun have much words to describe what u write.........

neways keep writing......


dilse.................... sidh
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some times memories can hurt
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some times memories can hurt - 30th December 2002, 03:54 AM

Khoob aati hai jab bhi aati hai,
Yaad teri bahot sataati hai,
Dhoop main,chaanw main, ghataao.n mai.n,
Teri soorat ubhar ke aati hai

Raat bhar neend hi naa aaye to ,
Ashq aankhon main chhal chhalaaye to,
Kyaa hua hai bataaiye kaise,
Yaad koi bahot hi aaye to


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