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khilte nahi banjar me phool -
16th April 2005, 06:01 PM
adab dosto,
humne humare life ke kuch ehsaas pesh kiye hai.....its based on mah life...hope so u'll like it ......do comment.....
"aap mile ho hume kuch is tarah,
khila ho banjar me phool jis tarah...
bhatak rahe the zindagi ke andheron me kahi
kya pata kaha se ayi ek masoom si kali...
ghabraya man phir ek baar
na hoga humse pyar,aye mere dil mere yaar
pata nahi kyu !
sajaye sapne humne phir ek baar,
kiya kismat pe bharosa phir ek baar...
modna na mu(face) aye naseeb is baar
pherna na ruk aye hawa is baar...
manga hai kuch rubse humne aakhri baar
na karna inkaar aye khuda is baar...
thama hai haath kisine ,bin kiye ikraar
shayad ankhon se hi kiya hai unhone izhaar.......
samajkar ise pyar hum joomne lage
sare sapne jaise such hone lage......
par kismat ko na tha shayad yeh manjoor,
the kuch woh,aur kuch hum majboor......
sare sapne ho gaye choor,
rehna hoga ab hume ek-duje se door......
dil ko hai na yeh 'sach' kubool,
par sach hai yeh"khilte nahi banjar me phool"........
dilse........................sidh
dilse.................... sidh
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16th April 2005, 06:14 PM
............par aapne to itna acha likha hai, ki padh kar aisa nahi lagta ki banzar me phul nahi khilte. ........ bahut hi umda likha hai. really its too good.
vikash.
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hi -
16th April 2005, 07:23 PM
shukriya vikas saab ..... bus dil se nikli baat ko ashqo se sawara hai........
dilse.................... sidh
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Re: khilte nahi banjar me phool -
16th April 2005, 07:39 PM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by sidh
[B]adab dosto,
humne humare life ke kuch ehsaas pesh kiye hai.....its based on mah life...hope so u'll like it ......do comment.....
"aap mile ho hume kuch is tarah,
khila ho banjar me phool jis tarah...
bhatak rahe the zindagi ke andheron me kahi
kya pata kaha se ayi ek masoom si kali...
ghabraya man phir ek baar
na hoga humse pyar,aye mere dil mere yaar
pata nahi kyu !
sajaye sapne humne phir ek baar,
kiya kismat pe bharosa phir ek baar...
modna na mu(face) aye naseeb is baar
pherna na ruk aye hawa is baar...
manga hai kuch rubse humne aakhri baar
na karna inkaar aye khuda is baar...
thama hai haath kisine ,bin kiye ikraar
shayad ankhon se hi kiya hai unhone izhaar.......
samajkar ise pyar hum joomne lage
sare sapne jaise such hone lage......
par kismat ko na tha shayad yeh manjoor,
the kuch woh,aur kuch hum majboor......
sare sapne ho gaye choor,
rehna hoga ab hume ek-duje se door......
dil ko hai na yeh 'sach' kubool,
par sach hai yeh"khilte nahi banjar me phool"........
wow sidh its really very awesome sach mein baar baar padke bhi jee nahi bhar raha buhut achi feelings hai apki really very very nice work and awesome wording itni badi baad itni kam baat mein kehna aasaan nahi dost lakin apne ye kar dikhaya daad kabool kijeyega.
unforgetable simran
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unforgetable simran
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Ju PaL mIlE uSs PaL kO jEe lO
sHaYaD kAl Ho Na Ho......
love is seeing yourself in someone's
eyes and finding yourself in somebody's heart!!!!!(*-*)
(¨`·.·´¨) Always
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling!
`·.¸.·´
ITS STATE OF MIND.....
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17th April 2005, 09:44 AM
Hi Sidh Ji,
Again, a really very luvly piece of work that i thoroughly enjoyed reading. Do keep posting more so.
Luvs,
Salim
If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul
Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you.
We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly
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18th April 2005, 05:51 PM
hi sidh....
daad deni hogi ............. kya khub sawara hai.......... banzar me bhi phul khilte hai, koi aapse sikhe. aur fir ho bhi kyu na.......!!!!!!! , jis baag ka baagwan aap jaise ho, us baag ko to mahekna hi hai,,,,,,,, umeed hai aage bhi isi tarah saare chaman me apni inhi khubsurat panktiyo se khusbu failate rahenge...............
take care.
vikash.
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adaab dosto -
20th April 2005, 05:57 PM
shukriya dosto......simran vikas aur sabhi ko jinone ise padha aur pasand kiya .... umeed hai isi tarah se likta rahooga
dilse.................... sidh
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salim ji ke liye -
20th April 2005, 05:58 PM
salam salim saab aap ka naam zikar karna bhul gaya tha umeed hai apka dil isi tarah khush karta rahu ga
dilse.................... sidh
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28th April 2005, 05:46 AM
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dilse.................... sidh
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4th May 2005, 07:10 PM
mehfil mein phir hazir hoge break ke baad
dilse.................... sidh
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6th May 2005, 12:17 AM
sidh
i shud say gr8 work
i really liked it
sonal
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6th May 2005, 05:56 AM
shukriya
dilse.................... sidh
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10th September 2006, 04:32 PM
addab dosto phir hazir hua hu mehfil mein appki......
jald hi muklakat hogi
dilse.................... sidh
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