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hum chhod chuke hai kab ke tujh ko... - 18th January 2003, 12:13 AM

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hum chhod chuke hai kab ke tujh ko,
yug beet gaya jaise dekhe hue tujh ko,
sach baat jo pochiye to yeh hai
ke aab tak na nikal sakhe dil se tujh ko!


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Re: hum chhod chuke hai kab ke tujh ko... - 18th January 2003, 10:26 AM

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one more....


hum chhod chuke hai kab ke tujh ko,
yug beet gaya jaise dekhe hue tujh ko,
sach baat jo pochiye to yeh hai
ke aab tak na nikal sakhe dil se tujh ko!
HI, Meena
i m Pinky. Bahut accha likha hai apne.KEEP WRITING.


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18th January 2003, 03:16 PM

thanx pinky! mujhe kushi hui aap ko yeh sher pasand aya...


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hi - 18th January 2003, 05:42 PM

hi meena,

aap n bohot accha likha hai,bilkul dil pe laga

KEEP ON WRITING

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