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Bilakhti kahaniyoN ka SACH....! -
7th April 2006, 01:28 AM
Adaab phir se ...
har kahaNi apne maiN rakhti kayi raaz hai... dard sabke alag alag sabke alag sur sabke alag saaz hai,,, par koi dekhe kaise kisi ke jahaaN maiN .. ghum hai har koi apne toot-te aamaan maiN ... dekh ke ye sab kabhi to aaNsouN baheNge... do bol kisi ko apne pan ke kaheNge ... par sehmi yahaN sabki aawaaz hai ... sach har kahani apne maiN rakhti kayi raaz hai ...
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Cheekhte panno, bilakhti kahaniyoN ka sach..
Dhundhli lakeeroN mitTi nishaaniyoN ka sach…
Beeti zindgi waqt se pehle,waqt ki hi maar se…
Gali yadoN ki, bachpan ki nadaaniyoN ka sach
Bik chuke zameer yahaN, insaaN ki baat kya…
Ghulam taaqateN, Kursi ki DalaaliyoN ka sach…
Mehfooz kahaN izzat ghar ki gharon se Nikal…
Tadapti ruh liye phirti, luti jawaaniyoN ka sach…
Mohabbat ki suni raaheN, soona ‘saccha_pyar’…
Na samjha sake koi, badhti betabiyoN ka sach…
Aur
Tamasha hai lakhoN ke liye bikharte armaaN..
Kharidaar jism ke, Bikti deewaaniyoN ka sach…
Cheekhte panno, bilakhti kahaniyoN ka sach..
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Kunal Gautam :- 07-04-2006
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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Re: Bilakhti kahaniyoN ka SACH....! -
7th April 2006, 10:57 AM
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Originally posted by sacccha_pyar
Adaab phir se ...
har kahaNi apne maiN rakhti kayi raaz hai... dard sabke alag alag sabke alag sur sabke alag saaz hai,,, par koi dekhe kaise kisi ke jahaaN maiN .. ghum hai har koi apne toot-te aamaan maiN ... dekh ke ye sab kabhi to aaNsouN baheNge... do bol kisi ko apne pan ke kaheNge ... par sehmi yahaN sabki aawaaz hai ... sach har kahani apne maiN rakhti kayi raaz hai ...
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Cheekhte panno, bilakhti kahaniyoN ka sach..
Dhundhli lakeeroN mitTi nishaaniyoN ka sach…
Beeti zindgi waqt se pehle,waqt ki hi maar se…
Gali yadoN ki, bachpan ki nadaaniyoN ka sach
Bik chuke zameer yahaN, insaaN ki baat kya…
Ghulam taaqateN, Kursi ki DalaaliyoN ka sach…
Mehfooz kahaN izzat ghar ki gharon se Nikal…
Tadapti ruh liye phirti, luti jawaaniyoN ka sach…
Mohabbat ki suni raaheN, soona ‘saccha_pyar’…
Na samjha sake koi, badhti betabiyoN ka sach…
Aur
Tamasha hai lakhoN ke liye bikharte armaaN..
Kharidaar jism ke, Bikti deewaaniyoN ka sach…
Cheekhte panno, bilakhti kahaniyoN ka sach..
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Kunal Gautam :- 07-04-2006
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Kunal Ji
Aapke shirshak ne akarshit kar mujhe in pantiyon ko parhne ka avsar diya. Isse likhney ke liye mera dhanyavaad sweekaar karein. Bahaut accha laga aapko parhkar.
"Bik chuke zameer yahaN, insaaN ki baat kya…
Ghulam taaqateN, Kursi ki DalaaliyoN ka sach…"
Yeh sach mein hee sach hai.
aapka
vipin
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7th April 2006, 12:44 PM
kunal ji
zindgia ka sach likha hai sab kuch bilakhata hai yaha zameer se lekar kahani tak ,
achha laga jaankar ki ek sach ko aur aage laaye hain aap bhaut
achha likha hai aapne
shrdh
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hallluuuuaaa -
7th April 2006, 09:10 PM
sach main bahut acccha likha hain tune kunnnneeee
tera
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Re: Re: Bilakhti kahaniyoN ka SACH....! -
8th April 2006, 04:16 PM
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Originally posted by Vipinbox
Kunal Ji
Aapke shirshak ne akarshit kar mujhe in pantiyon ko parhne ka avsar diya. Isse likhney ke liye mera dhanyavaad sweekaar karein. Bahaut accha laga aapko parhkar.
"Bik chuke zameer yahaN, insaaN ki baat kya…
Ghulam taaqateN, Kursi ki DalaaliyoN ka sach…"
Yeh sach mein hee sach hai.
aapka
vipin
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Shukriya Vipin Bhai
Aaj pehli baar aapko apni post pe paaya hai .. bohat accha laga dekh kar .. aur dhanyawaad ki zaroorat nahi .. ye samaaj humaara apna hai .. kranti bhi humeN hi karni hai .. kabhi khud ke liye .. kabhi auroN ke liye ..
aapko accha laga shukragujaar huN aapka .. aapka sath milta rahega umeed hai
Kunal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
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8th April 2006, 06:43 PM
janab kunaal sahab aadaab kaise hain aap ummeed hai khush honge janab jab se aap ki ye nazm padhi hai dil ke samundar me kai saare bhawar ek saath umadne lage hain lag raha hai ki kahin aur aa gaya hoon.sach me bahot hi gahraai se pesh kiya hai jo ki kabile tareef hai.ummeed hai aage bhi aise aashraas padhne ko milte rahenge.apna khayal rakhna
aapka shaad
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9th April 2006, 11:19 AM
Beeti zindgi waqt se pehle,waqt ki hi maar se…
Gali yadoN ki, bachpan ki nadaaniyoN ka sach
Hello My sweet brother
Kaise ho kunal....aaj tumhari jeevan ki sachai par likhi yeh rachna bahut achi lagi....mere daad kabul karna
Apna khyal rakhna
Di
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10th April 2006, 06:47 PM
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Originally posted by shrdh
kunal ji
zindgia ka sach likha hai sab kuch bilakhata hai yaha zameer se lekar kahani tak ,
achha laga jaankar ki ek sach ko aur aage laaye hain aap bhaut
achha likha hai aapne
shrdh
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Shrdha..
Shukriya aane ke liye aur apni amulya rai dene ke liye
Kunal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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Re: hallluuuuaaa -
12th April 2006, 01:58 PM
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Originally posted by cutemunda_2005
sach main bahut acccha likha hain tune kunnnneeee
tera
jigri
monti
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tu aaya mujhe accha laga
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14th April 2006, 07:00 PM
Mere Bhai Kunnu.............
ek kaabil-e-taarif nazm..........har ek misra bahut gehraai se bhara hua..........wah........luti jawaanion ka sach............bahut khoob....
dhoondta hai har insaan jawaani ki hawas........
kaun jaane, loota hai koi ishq-e-dauraan mein...........
tumhara apna...........
**(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)**
*·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·*
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inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si.....
aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae......
AMAN RAHI
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15th April 2006, 06:42 AM
Adab arz hai,
aap ki yeh kavita dil ko chu gayi.
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sach -
15th April 2006, 06:59 AM
achha laga ye sach tumhara bahut achha bana hai
Anil
mere ashar ko mahoob samjh ke chhoomte the jo
kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai
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15th April 2006, 09:16 PM
par guru kya humne kabhi socha hai ki in sabka zimmedar kaun hai????
bas yunhi likhte rahiye bahut dino baad aapko samaaj par likhte dekha ahcha laga.waise iski flow banane me to bahut maza aaya hoga guru.kyun??
aapka CHOTA
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17th April 2006, 03:38 PM
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janab kunaal sahab aadaab kaise hain aap ummeed hai khush honge janab jab se aap ki ye nazm padhi hai dil ke samundar me kai saare bhawar ek saath umadne lage hain lag raha hai ki kahin aur aa gaya hoon.sach me bahot hi gahraai se pesh kiya hai jo ki kabile tareef hai.ummeed hai aage bhi aise aashraas padhne ko milte rahenge.apna khayal rakhna
aapka shaad
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Khushi ka humse waise koi naata to nahi .. par jab aap jaise log humeN kuch tareef de jate hai .. sile ye hoNt bhhi muskura hi lete hai .. khair aap aaye aapko acchi lagi ye rachna mujhe khushi hai ...
aap yuN hi sath dete rahiyega
aapka apna
kunal
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26th April 2006, 08:34 PM
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Beeti zindgi waqt se pehle,waqt ki hi maar se…
Gali yadoN ki, bachpan ki nadaaniyoN ka sach
Hello My sweet brother
Kaise ho kunal....aaj tumhari jeevan ki sachai par likhi yeh rachna bahut achi lagi....mere daad kabul karna
Apna khyal rakhna
Di
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SHukriya aane ke liye .. par kya kareN sach hazam nahi hota
Kunal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
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26th April 2006, 08:35 PM
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Mere Bhai Kunnu.............
ek kaabil-e-taarif nazm..........har ek misra bahut gehraai se bhara hua..........wah........luti jawaanion ka sach............bahut khoob....
dhoondta hai har insaan jawaani ki hawas........
kaun jaane, loota hai koi ishq-e-dauraan mein...........
tumhara apna...........
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Shukriya aapka bhi .. ki aapne apne vyast samay maiN se ye anmol waqt mujhe diya .. shukra guzaar huN aapka
aapka apna
Kunal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
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26th April 2006, 08:36 PM
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Adab arz hai,
aap ki yeh kavita dil ko chu gayi.
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Kab se chahi thi ye hasrat dil ne ..
aaj aapko dekha to sukoon aa gaya ...
shukriya
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KunaaL (Sifar).........
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Re: sach -
26th April 2006, 08:37 PM
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Originally posted by masoomshayer
achha laga ye sach tumhara bahut achha bana hai
Anil
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aap aaye to sahi
Kunal
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26th April 2006, 08:39 PM
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par guru kya humne kabhi socha hai ki in sabka zimmedar kaun hai????
bas yunhi likhte rahiye bahut dino baad aapko samaaj par likhte dekha ahcha laga.waise iski flow banane me to bahut maza aaya hoga guru.kyun??
aapka CHOTA
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Shukriya chote
par lagta hi nahi yahaN sochne ka waqt kisi ke pas hai bhi ... maiN to khush huN jo waqt beet jaye wo sona ...
Kunal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
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27th April 2006, 11:03 AM
sachcha pyaar
aap ki soach, aap ke khayalaat, aap ki tehreer aap ki zehni vus-at ki akkaas hai.
bohat gehri aur bohat talkh baat ko aap ne bohat sahel aur achchay paraye mein bayaan kiyaa hai.
dua go hoon aap ki kaamiyaabiyon ke liye, aap ki khushiyon ke liye.
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27th April 2006, 11:22 AM
nice dude
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27th April 2006, 11:43 AM
aapne bahut sach likha hai,
lagta hai har shabd dil se nikla aur aapke hath unhe kagaz,aur phir computer par sajate gaye
khuda,rab,god
aapko apka pyar,aapki khushi de aur aapka
sapna pura kare.
yeh aapke liye
;-
khud ko kar itna buland ki, himalaya ki choti par pahuche
aur khuda khud tumse puchhe,beta ab utroge kaise.
Pyar ke jaam ko aise na piya
ke adha piya aur adha chod diya
Dost ye pyar he pyar
nhi koi vim baar ki
jara sa lagaya aur ho gaya
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2nd May 2006, 07:51 PM
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Originally posted by musharrafhusain
sachcha pyaar
aap ki soach, aap ke khayalaat, aap ki tehreer aap ki zehni vus-at ki akkaas hai.
bohat gehri aur bohat talkh baat ko aap ne bohat sahel aur achchay paraye mein bayaan kiyaa hai.
dua go hoon aap ki kaamiyaabiyon ke liye, aap ki khushiyon ke liye.
musharrafhusain
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Mushi bhai ...
Aap aaye yahi kaafi hai mere lie aapki duaoN ke liye teh dil se shukraguzaar huN maiN ...
aap apna khayal behad behtari se rakhiyega
kunal
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2nd May 2006, 07:53 PM
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nice dude
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Shukriya Dost...
Aapka apna
Kunal
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Re: real -
2nd May 2006, 07:54 PM
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Originally posted by NIKITA(NICKY)
aapne bahut sach likha hai,
lagta hai har shabd dil se nikla aur aapke hath unhe kagaz,aur phir computer par sajate gaye
khuda,rab,god
aapko apka pyar,aapki khushi de aur aapka
sapna pura kare.
yeh aapke liye
;-
khud ko kar itna buland ki, himalaya ki choti par pahuche
aur khuda khud tumse puchhe,beta ab utroge kaise.
Pyar ke jaam ko aise na piya
ke adha piya aur adha chod diya
Dost ye pyar he pyar
nhi koi vim baar ki
jara sa lagaya aur ho gaya
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Shukriya Nikita
aur mujhe accha laga tumhara way of reply ... kuch pal ke liye hi shai haNshi to aayi ...
apna khayal rakhna
kunal
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