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pyar ki manzil -
22nd March 2003, 11:44 AM
adab dosto.................... hmmmmmm bahot samay ke ba.ad kuch pesh kar raha hu
"manzil to wahi hai...... musafir badal gaye hai rahein(ways) to wahi hai...... humsafar badal gaye hai kaisi lagi dosto................. will write something very soon  ;-) |
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22nd March 2003, 11:52 AM
sach meiN sidh saahab, bahot dehrii ke baad mehfil meiN aaye ho.
is baar bhi aapne bahot khoob likha hai  isko maine do tareeqe se paDa hai - one, in a humorous way, and the other in a painful way.. nonetheless, you've written very nicely.. aage bhi intezaar rahe ga, aman "je tu akhiiyaaN de saamne naii rehnaa, te bibba saada dil moD de..!" kya karooN? aisa hi hooN maiN.. |
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Hi -
22nd March 2003, 06:51 PM
sidh..jee waah kyaa bat hai...ashaa karta hu ki ap aise nahi honge jo kadam kadam par humsafhar badala karte hai
 ...Halaki mumbai ki fiza kuch aisee hee hai...badi khubsurtiya hai hai yaha ki fizaoo mai Ek rahee |
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thks -
25th March 2003, 10:18 AM
shukriya
amanji..........thks for ur cmments......... rahee ji ...... iska mumbai se kya jagah se koi wasta nahi hota aur most probably jisne sacha pyar kiya hai woh kabhi humsafar nahi badalta par shayad waqt saath nahi deta......kismat rahe badal deti hai..........if u understand this 4 lines with gr8 pain u 'll come to know what am trying to say thru this lines neways thks tkhs for replying guys.....shukriya amanji .... ;-) |
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hi -
26th March 2003, 11:06 AM
hi amanji
hmmm ek ba.at kehna bhul gaya maine isse painful way mein likha hai ....humourous way mein nahi phir milege..... ;-) |
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26th March 2003, 03:04 PM
sidh......... hi how r u...apne sahi kaha ke fiza se koyee fharkh nahi padta hai woh tau insaan insaan ke upar hain...aor bada achha likha hai apne...good...log kehate hai naa..hum insaano ke bas mai kya hota hai..kuch likha hai shayad ap pasand aaye..
Jindagee kyaa hai jine ki adakari Roz naye roop mai dhalte rahiye Jalimoo ki duniya mai jallad ban rahiye Ansoo ki duniya mai sailaab ban bahiye....SaNjj |
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hi sanjooooo -
27th March 2003, 09:52 AM
sanjooji ji
thks a lot................aapne bhi bahot accha likha hai.... ;-) |
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hi -
27th March 2003, 05:51 PM
hi sidh
in shot sentence i could only say its short and sweet aap bhut acha likhte hoon keep writing bye |
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27th May 2007, 05:44 PM
dosto adaab phirse mulakat hogi jaldd hi !!
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frnd 4 ever |
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frnd 4 ever -
28th May 2007, 03:17 PM
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Aadab sidh ji kaise hain aap? bohot hi achha khayal......ek mukammal aur behtarin pesh kash k liye, dil se nikli daad kabul kijiye. ALLAH apko aur tarakki de,AAMIN hamesha khush rahiye. Aap apna khayal rakhiye. ALLAH HAFIZ ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ Sweet HASSONI, ( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi ) ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
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8th July 2007, 07:31 AM
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