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khawahishon ki sahar - 24th July 2008, 09:59 AM
Anajan si ye duniya meri ajana sa shahar
Kaun rah jaun main, jane kaisa ye safar

Bhool ke sabko ,chal to diye hain hum
Le jayengi kanha ye rahe, kisko ye khabar

Jane kanha veerano main khoyi hui manzil
Kashmakash ye kaise karun tujhe main hasil

Meelon door samndar,nazar nahin ata sahil
Chaalte chale hum ,khud se ho gaye juda

Kis mod mil jaye tu hume ae khuda ye bata
Udasi le aati hai har sham mere ghar,

Tanhaiyon ke dere hain ,har taraf,
Hai intezar is dil ko beintahasa ,is kadar
Jane kab aaye wo khwaishon ki sahar.
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24th July 2008, 06:33 PM
accha likha he aapne,likhte rahen

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Anajan si ye duniya meri ajana sa shahar
Kaun rah jaun main, jane kaisa ye safar

Bhool ke sabko ,chal to diye hain hum
Le jayengi kanha ye rahe, kisko ye khabar

Jane kanha veerano main khoyi hui manzil
Kashmakash ye kaise karun tujhe main hasil

Meelon door samndar,nazar nahin ata sahil
Chaalte chale hum ,khud se ho gaye juda

Kis mod mil jaye tu hume ae khuda ye bata
Udasi le aati hai har sham mere ghar,

Tanhaiyon ke dere hain ,har taraf,
Hai intezar is dil ko beintahasa ,is kadar
Jane kab aaye wo khwaishon ki sahar.
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Vaishali ji Behad ache ahsaas haiN is ghazal meiN ,

mager ghazal ke as'ool sahi na ban paaey , matla aur pehle shair maiN jo Qaafia istemaal kiya appne woh phir 4th sher main istemal kiya phir last meiN ... dermiyan main thoda sa problem raha ...

insaan khata ka putla(dummy) hai ghalti mujse bhi ho sakti hai , app nazer-e-saani zaroor kijiye ga

dil se daad kabool kijiye ...

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