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Matlaa BanaayeN ... ! - 17th February 2011, 10:39 AM

DostoN !

Aadaab !!

Aaj Se Ek Naya Silsilaa Shuru KarteN Hai ... Shaayad Aaapko Pasand Aaye ... !

Is Khel Men Karnaa Yeh Hai Ki SDC Ka Koi Bhi Member Ek Qaafiya Aur Radeef Dega ... Next Member Uspar Matlaa Banaayega ... Yaad Rakhe ... Matlaa Khud Kaa Taiyaar Kiyaa Honaa Chaahiye ... Kisi Dusre Shayar Kaa Nahi ... !

Matlaa Banaakar Next Member Ke Liye Qaafiya Aur Radeef DeNaa Naa BhuleN ... ! Aise Hii Yeh Kram Aage BaDhtaa Rahega ... !



Jaise .........

Qaafiya ... Guzar
Radeef ... Jaayegii Tanhaa

Matlaa .......

Shaam Intezaar MeN Guzar Jaayegii Tanhaa
Aaj Phir Woh Laut Ke Ghar Jaayegii Tanhaa ...


Next .......

Qaafiya .... Bikhar
Radeef .... Jaayen




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Jaise .........

Qaafiya ... Guzar
Radeef ... Jaayegii Tanhaa

Matlaa .......

Shaam Intezaar MeN Guzar Jaayegii Tanhaa
Aaj Phir Woh Laut Ke Ghar Jaayegii Tanhaa ...


Next .......

Qaafiya .... Bikhar
Radeef .... Jaayen
matla :--

apne aap se kabhi yun bikhar jaayen
chalo aaine ke saamne sawar jaayen

next : --

qaafiya -- shumaari
radeef -- hogi

matla :--- ????


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matla :--

apne aap se kabhi yun bikhar jaayen
chalo aaine ke saamne sawar jaayen

next : --

qaafiya -- shumaari
radeef -- hogi

matla :--- ????
Matla .........

Jab Jab SarmaaidaaroN Ki Raai Shumaari Hogi
Shahar Bhar MeN MuflisoN Ki Awaaz Bhaari Hogi

Next ..........

Qaafiya ... zamaanaa
Radeef .... badal gayaa

Matla ..... ?




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Matla .........

Jab Jab SarmaaidaaroN Ki Raai Shumaari Hogi
Shahar Bhar MeN MuflisoN Ki Awaaz Bhaari Hogi

Next ..........

Qaafiya ... zamaanaa
Radeef .... badal gayaa

Matla ..... ?
matla :

chalte chalte zindagi ke safar meN zamaanaa badal gayaa
phir kuch aisaa huaa ke khud meraa chehraa badal gayaa

Next :

Qaafiya : payaam
Radeef : hotii hai

Matla : ?


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matla :

chalte chalte zindagi ke safar meN zamaanaa badal gayaa
phir kuch aisaa huaa ke khud meraa chehraa badal gayaa

Next :

Qaafiya : payaam
Radeef : hotii hai

Matla : ?
kya nazar milke payaam hotii hai
yaa khud se hii ham-kalaam hotii hai

next

qafiya -- Dhalte
radeef -- hii

matla --- ????



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kya nazar milke payaam hotii hai
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radeef -- hii

matla --- ????
Lo Aa Gaii Aandhi Shaam Dhalte Hii
Bujh Gayaa Khayal Chiraagh Jalte Hii

Next ...

Qaafiya ... kyaa
Radeef ... karte

Matlaa ... ?




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Lo Aa Gaii Aandhi Shaam Dhalte Hii
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Next ...

Qaafiya ... kyaa
Radeef ... karte

Matlaa ... ?
ab intezaar karte toh aur kyaa karte
saath unke le masrufiyat Chalaa Karte

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radeef -- hotaa

matla ???


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radeef -- hotaa

matla ???
agar tumse naa dil aashnaa hotaa
kahaan intezaar men mazaa hotaa

Next :

qafiya : Khariidaar
radeef : ho gaye

matla : ??????



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agar tumse naa dil aashnaa hotaa
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radeef : ho gaye

matla : ??????


ilm na tha ki ek hum hi ghum ke Khariidaar ho gaye
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ilm na tha ki ek hum hi ghum ke Khariidaar ho gaye
tere didaar ki chah main sadiyo ke intezaar ho gaye


Next :

Qafiya: Khwaab
radeef: hi rehna

Matla: ???????
Jab Tak Sawar Ke Anaa Khwaab Hi Rehna
Humare Saamne Tum Laajawaab Hi Rehna

Next .......

Qaafiya ... Silsilaa
Radeef .... Rakhnaa

Matlaa ... ??????




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Next .......

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Matlaa ... ??????
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Bhagwan hi nahi ab dil bhi patthar hai,
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radeef ... karna.
na barbaad karna na aabaad karna
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mujhe qaid se yaro aazaad karna

na barbaad karna na aabaad karna
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qafiya ...zindagi
radeef...ko


Aur ab najaane kis moud par le jaani hain Zindagi ko
tuhi bata khuda kaise mitau mohabbat ki tishnagi ko


Qafiyaa.............Aaina
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Qafiyaa.............Aaina
Radeef..............Badal do
Tum Fareb Kaa Aainaa Badal Do
Warq Har Ek Jeene Kaa Badal Do

Next ....

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radeef ..... chalegi

Matlaa ... ???




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Matlaa ... ???

yuhi gar dil-o-dimaag me har pal takraar chalegi
Toh kashtii-e-zindagi tab tak mazdhaar chalegi

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yuhi gar dil-o-dimaag me har pal takraar chalegi
Toh kashtii-e-zindagi tab tak mazdhaar chalegi

Qafiyaa......... Hasiin
radeef .......... Dhokha he
Jismani husn ek hasiin dhokha hai,
Iska aasman, iski zamiin dhokha hai.

Qaafiya: Tohmat
Radiif: KyuN ho

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HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
-Anand Narayan Mulla.

वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत,
हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है.
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23rd February 2011, 09:20 AM

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Jismani husn ek hasiin dhokha hai,
Iska aasman, iski zamiin dhokha hai.

Qaafiya: Tohmat
Radiif: KyuN ho

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mohabbat par yeh tohmat kyon ho
zamaane ke dar se be-morabbat kyon ho


Qaafiya : nami
Radiif : reh jayegi

matlaa ???????


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23rd February 2011, 09:53 AM

Kuch na Bachega bas Aankhon me Nami rah jaaegi,
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23rd February 2011, 04:46 PM

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Kuch na Bachega bas Aankhon me Nami rah jaaegi,
Zindgi me sab hoke bhi ek teri kami rah jaaegi...


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Qaafiya.. Muhabbat
Radeef ... kyon karoon.
Badalte mausamoN se mohabbat kyuN karuuN,
Na rahe kaayam akide pe, unki sohbat kyuuN karuuN?


Qaafiya - Kaynaat

Radeef - Mein rahey

Matlaa ???



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HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
-Anand Narayan Mulla.

वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत,
हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है.
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23rd February 2011, 05:30 PM

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Badalte mausamoN se mohabbat kyuN karuuN,
Na rahe kaayam akide pe, unki sohbat kyuuN karuuN?


Qaafiya - Kaynaat

Radeef - Mein rahey

Matlaa ???

wah naadaaan sahab...babhut khoob

Justaju hai ab kise kaaynaat me rahe
Mere aaine bhi ye tahqiqaat me rahe

qafiya...dard
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wah naadaaan sahab...babhut khoob

Justaju hai ab kise kaaynaat me rahe
Mere aaine bhi ye tahqiqaat me rahe

qafiya...dard
radeef... kya hua

Shukriya Zidd saheb,

KyuN hai chaNd zard, kya huaa?
kuch zakhmoN mein utha dard, kya huaa?

Qaafiya - rehamat

Radeef - nahi hai




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HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
-Anand Narayan Mulla.

वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत,
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wah naadaaan sahab...babhut khoob

Justaju hai ab kise kaaynaat me rahe
Mere aaine bhi ye tahqiqaat me rahe

qafiya...dard
radeef... kya hua
Uske Hijr kaa Dard Kyaa Huaa
Qatra-e-Ashq Sard Kyaa Huaa

next ......

qafiya...Salaam
radeef... Ke Baad

Matlaa ??????




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Shukriya Zidd saheb,

KyuN hai chaNd zard, kya huaa?
kuch zakhmoN mein utha dard, kya huaa?

Qaafiya - rehamat

Radeef - nahi hai


muhabbat nahi koi rahmat nahi hai
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Uske Hijr kaa Dard Kyaa Huaa
Qatra-e-Ashq Sard Kyaa Huaa

next ......

qafiya...Salaam
radeef... Ke Baad

Matlaa ??????
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chalo milenge tumse ab qatl e aam ke baad

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qafiya...Salaam
radeef... Ke Baad

Matlaa ??????
Dulhan banaunga shaadi ke ehtimaam ke baad
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DuaeN dete haiN jo log har salaam ke baad
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Zurur milte haiN unse hum apne kaam ke baad
Bahut Khoob .. Fezan Sahab ! .....

Par Matlaa Banaakar Next Member Ke Liye Qaafiya Aur Radeef DeNaa Naa BhuleN ... !



Next ........

qafiya ..... Khataa
radeef .... Ho Gaii

Matlaa ?????????




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Bahut Khoob .. Fezan Sahab ! .....

Par Matlaa Banaakar Next Member Ke Liye Qaafiya Aur Radeef DeNaa Naa BhuleN ... !



Next ........

qafiya ..... Khataa
radeef .... Ho Gaii

Matlaa ?????????
teri zulf men qaid hone ki khataa ho gaii
Ishk-e-jurm ki khoobsurat sazaa ho gaii

qafiya : bewafaa
radeef : pahle se tha

matlaa ??


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Hai kyaa haraz ke tu bewafaa pahle se thaa,
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kaafiya.. gulaab
radeef... kar do.
Veeraane Mausam Ko Gulaab Kar Do
Aake Andhere MeN Maahtaab Kar Do

next .....

qaafiya ...... muhaal
radeef ....... kar diyaa

matlaa ??




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kaafiya.. gulaab
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pata nai kyu nareshji ,aaj kal hazal ke matle jyada nikal rahe hai
haa,agar aap ye kanuun banaye is thread par ki mai 8 baje ke baad na aauu to mere matlo se bach sakte hai....

Pal me sharab kar do pal me gulaab kar do
Acche bhale ka tum to khana kharaab kardo !!

pal me sharab kar do pal me gulaab kar do
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pata nai kyu nareshji ,aaj kal hazal ke matle jyada nikal rahe hai
haa,agar aap ye kanuun banaye is thread par ki mai 8 baje ke baad na aauu to mere matlo se bach sakte hai....

Pal me sharab kar do pal me gulaab kar do
Acche bhale ka tum to khana kharaab kardo !!

pal me sharab kar do pal me gulaab kar do
meri bhi aashiki ka kuch to hisaab kar do !!
hahahahaha ......... bahut khooooooooob ...... Janaab !

Zidd Ji ...... aap yunhi badastoor aate rahen aur matle banaane ka mausam banaaye rakhe ..... kyonki mujhse toh itni jaldi ban nahi rahe ... mujhe tasalli hai hai zidd sahab hai .............




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


---Naresh Mehra----

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Aakar aage, meri bebasee par sawaal kar diya.



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qaafiya... badnaam
radeeef... naa karo
Jisse mile tasalli aisa kaam na karo
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Zidd bhai.. next qaafiya and radeef....???????????


Shaad...
   
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Zidd bhai.. next qaafiya nad radeef....???????????
sorry bhai...bhool gaya...

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sorry bhai...bhool gaya...

qafiya...andaaz
radeef... reh gaya
Wo bahot badle magar dil dukhaane ka andaaz reh gaya,
Maine bhi par kataae ishq ke, zouqe-parwaaz reh gaya.

qafiyaa.. guzarne

radeef.... ke baad..


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