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all in all a very good attempt...loved d flow...tk cr..god bless u

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purvi ji

kaise hainaap? aapko mohabaat per likhte hue aacha laga ....

ehsaas aur unko pesh karne ka andaaz dil ko chu gaya hain


yu hi likhte rahye

takke good care

milte hain
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mai.N ek dum badhiya hoon dost... kahiye aap ke kya haal hai????

aap ko meri yeh koshish pasand aayi yeh mere liye badi khushi ki baat hai....

aage bhi yunhi apna saath dete rahiyega

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YaaraaN-e-bazm ko mera adaab!

DostoN, Chand roz pahle Mohd' Rafi Sahab ka gaya huwa ek gana sunaa tha "Theheriye hosh mein aa loon to chale jayiyega". Yeh mere pasandida gano mein se hai... Use sun ne ke baad socha ke kyun na aisi koi ghazal likhi jaaye..... aur fir apni soch aur kalam ke saath se yeh ghazal likhi.........

toh leejiye, pesh kar rahi hoon maiN phir ek nayii ghazal ...gaur farmaaiyega ..





Haal-e-dil apna suna loon to chale jaana
Tumko humraaz bana loon to chale jaana

Kab talak chupaa .unga apni Ulfaat tumse
ikraar –e-mohabat jo kar loon to chale jaana


Sharm-o-haya se rukh par jaise bikhri zulfe.N
Un.ko rukh par mei.N saja loon to chale jaana


Tere Husn par fidaa hai yahan deewane kayi.
Tum ko Nazaro.N mein chupa loon to chale jaana


Jaam bahot peeye teri qaatil nazaro.N se mei.Ne
ek jaam tuje hootho.N se pila loon to chale jaana


Ek muddat se pyaasa hoo.N mein teri chahat ka
Tuj ko ek bar seene se laga loon to chale jaana


Tum mujh ko hi chaaho aur duniya bhulaa do
Jaadu yeh ishq ka chalaa loon to chale jaanaa


Tum ko dil me.n basaa kar likhi hai yeh “Ghazal”
Dhire se usko gun-gunaa loon to chale jaana
waah waah
bas yehi hee nikalta hai ise padne ke baad... Bahut hee sundar ehsaas hain aapke...
Nice work.



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main iss khusurat ceration ki kaha se taarif shuru karu...bas itna keh sakta hu....bahut khubsurat Ghazal hai aapki...daad kabul farmaaye.....
Nareshjee,

Meri is koshish ko pasand karne aur uski taarif karne ke liye aap ki tah-e-dil se shukra guzaar hoon..

aise hee saath dete rahiyega


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waah waah
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Nice work.
AAP ka bahot bahot shukriya Arvindjee,

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YaaraaN-e-bazm ko mera adaab!

DostoN, Chand roz pahle Mohd' Rafi Sahab ka gaya huwa ek gana sunaa tha "Theheriye hosh mein aa loon to chale jayiyega". Yeh mere pasandida gano mein se hai... Use sun ne ke baad socha ke kyun na aisi koi ghazal likhi jaaye..... aur fir apni soch aur kalam ke saath se yeh ghazal likhi.........

toh leejiye, pesh kar rahi hoon maiN phir ek nayii ghazal ...gaur farmaaiyega ..





Haal-e-dil apna suna loon to chale jaana
Tumko humraaz bana loon to chale jaana

Kab talak chupaa .unga apni Ulfaat tumse
ikraar –e-mohabat jo kar loon to chale jaana


Sharm-o-haya se rukh par jaise bikhri zulfe.N
Un.ko rukh par mei.N saja loon to chale jaana


Tere Husn par fidaa hai yahan deewane kayi.
Tum ko Nazaro.N mein chupa loon to chale jaana


Jaam bahot peeye teri qaatil nazaro.N se mei.Ne
ek jaam tuje hootho.N se pila loon to chale jaana


Ek muddat se pyaasa hoo.N mein teri chahat ka
Tuj ko ek bar seene se laga loon to chale jaana


Tum mujh ko hi chaaho aur duniya bhulaa do
Jaadu yeh ishq ka chalaa loon to chale jaanaa


Tum ko dil me.n basaa kar likhi hai yeh “Ghazal”
Dhire se usko gun-gunaa loon to chale jaana


waah kya baat hai Purvi ji...... na jaane ye gustaakhi mujh se kaise huii ki aapki itni khoobsurat ghazal meri aankhon se ojhal rahi.... aaj padhaa to dil jhoom uthaa.... bahut hi badhiya ghazal hai... likhti rahen, salaamat rahen...

Shaad........


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Waah!!Bahut khoob radeef nibhaya hai purvi ji...ehsaas bahut pyare...
Padhkar bahut lutf aaya......

Daad qubool kariye..... likhte rahein.



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waah kya baat hai Purvi ji...... na jaane ye gustaakhi mujh se kaise huii ki aapki itni khoobsurat ghazal meri aankhon se ojhal rahi.... aaj padhaa to dil jhoom uthaa.... bahut hi badhiya ghazal hai... likhti rahen, salaamat rahen...

Shaad........
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AAdaab....

meri chhoti si koshish aap ko pasanad aayi.. yeh mere liye khushi ki baat hai...

aage bhi saath dete raheN.. Khush RaheN

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Mashallah bahut khoob soorat ghazal kahi hai poorvi jee
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Waah!!Bahut khoob radeef nibhaya hai purvi ji...ehsaas bahut pyare...
Padhkar bahut lutf aaya......

Daad qubool kariye..... likhte rahein.
Madhu Ji

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Mashallah bahut khoob soorat ghazal kahi hai poorvi jee
jitni daad di jaaye kam hai
likhti rahiye


Radhe Radhe IshQ Ji

Kaise hai aap..?? Ummeed krti hoon khairiyat se honge..

Aap ne meri koshish ko padha aur sarhaaya us ke liye aap ki tah -e-dil se shukra guzaar hoon..


Puraane dosto ka saath wapas mil raha hai.. yakin maaniye .. behad khushi ho rahi hai.. aage bhi saath dete rahiyega

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