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[sweet_nashaa]

When you came into my life
I wanted you to stay
You walked out of my life
Taking my life away
On the verge of going insane
I waited for your return
I live with boundless pain
Still waiting for your return
You killed me with your gaze
And scarred my soul forever
How do I speak of my craze
My love for you will be forever
Your memories don’t go away
They hurt me so deep
If only you could forever stay
Because now it’s hard to sleep
I want you by my side
So you could feel my soul
It’ becoming hard to hide
The pain you gave my soul
I wait for that one day
The day we reunite
I have so much to say
When you’re in my sight
But until then I’ll wait
Someday you’ll feel it too
I can forever wait
To show how much I love you

[romana]

hi amrita ji

how r u very well written i i hope u keep on writting because ur poems are easy to understand and vety touchy and i hope ke aap ko aap ka pyaar zaroor mile

take care
bye

[heartbell]

WOW
Its just superb.
Main sochta tha mein akela hoon par diljale aur bhi hain.
I hope u get ur love . I know the heart just aches every moment craving for love of the loved one.
Goodbye for now
Gaurav

[guriya82]

what a great post i don't have word to describe that how much i liked it i will just say that it made me cry and remind me my condition that i wanted to forget
take care bbye
guriya

Originally posted by sweet_nashaa
When you came into my life
I wanted you to stay
You walked out of my life
Taking my life away
On the verge of going insane
I waited for your return
I live with boundless pain
Still waiting for your return
You killed me with your gaze
And scarred my soul forever
How do I speak of my craze
My love for you will be forever
Your memories don’t go away
They hurt me so deep
If only you could forever stay
Because now it’s hard to sleep
I want you by my side
So you could feel my soul
It’ becoming hard to hide
The pain you gave my soul
I wait for that one day
The day we reunite
I have so much to say
When you’re in my sight
But until then I’ll wait
Someday you’ll feel it too
I can forever wait
To show how much I love you

[sweet_nashaa]

hi romana ji
Thanx for liking my sher and thanx for your hope. It means a lot to me. I needed it too.

Thanx again

Amrita

[sweet_nashaa]

hi gaurav ji

hanji aap akele dil jale nahin. hum dono jaise aur bhi hain jo har pal kisi ki chahat mein jal rahe hain. And yes, my heart does crave for love, lekin ek woh hain jo samajhte hi nahin...aur humme samjhaana bhi nahin aata.
By the way...thanx for liking my poem. I really appreciate it.


Amrita

[sweet_nashaa]

guriya ji...
thanx for liking my poem. And sorry for reminding you of your forgotten condition. But the reality will always be that...love can never be forgotten. Kisi na kisi mod par koi na koi yaad zaroor bassi hain. Aur hum inse door jaa nahin sakte. Mohobbat bohoth khoobsurat hain magar kambakht dard bohoth dilaata hain. but then again love never comes without pain hain na...it's like a package deal.

I hope that your condition gets better...my hopes are with you.

Thanx again


Amrita