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Post laut kar aati nahi... - 22nd November 2014, 01:12 AM
Lakh chaho magar laut kar aati nahi
Fir dubara zindgi ,rukh modkar aati nhi.

rang bageeche ke soone hain sabhi..
Titli ithlati koi gar ,phoolon par aati nahi.

aasmaan pe chaand bhi aaj poora hai magar..
Kyon bhala Chandni ,dar pe mere aati nhi.

Khwaab aate hain ghadi bhar jo aankh lage..
Toot jaye jo kabhi to ,neend fir aati nahi.

Chehre tamam dekhe teri ankhon me magar..
ek meri surat hi ,mujhko nazar aati nahi

din guzar jata hai tere intzaar me..
Tujhse milna ho vo ,shaam hi aati nhi

Sari baatein tujhpe hi khatm hoti hain meri..
Jo zikra tera na ho to ,koi baat bhi aati nahi.

Teri khwahish rahi umra bhar mujhko sanam..
Tujhko paane ki ,koi surat nazar aati nhi.


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22nd November 2014, 06:24 PM
khoobsurat panktiyon se sajee ek khobsurat peshkash madhu saahiba....

bahot acchaa likha hai aapne, padh kar bahot sukoon milaa hai.... likhtii rahen..

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Chehre tamam dekhe teri ankhon me magar..
ek meri surat hi ,mujhko nazar aati nahi
din guzar jata hai tere intzaar me..
Tujhse milna ho vo ,shaam hi aati nhi*

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Bahut khub likha aapne..bade khubsurat andaj mein aapne ise pesh kiya hai..
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[QUOTE=sameer'shaad';472029]khoobsurat panktiyon se sajee ek khobsurat peshkash madhu saahiba....

bahot acchaa likha hai aapne, padh kar bahot sukoon milaa hai....

Hausla afzai ka bahut bahut shukriya shaad ji...yoon hi sath dete rahein..
khush rahein.


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Bohot khoobsurat gazal kahi aapne.....
Waaaahh........waaaaahhhh..... behad gehre ehsaas hai aur badi safai se pesh kiya aapne.

Dheeeroo daad

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Lakh chaho magar laut kar aati nahi
Fir dubara zindgi ,rukh modkar aati nhi.

rang bageeche ke soone hain sabhi..
Titli ithlati koi gar ,phoolon par aati nahi.

aasmaan pe chaand bhi aaj poora hai magar..
Kyon bhala Chandni ,dar pe mere aati nhi.

Khwaab aate hain ghadi bhar jo aankh lage..
Toot jaye jo kabhi to ,neend fir aati nahi.

Chehre tamam dekhe teri ankhon me magar..
ek meri surat hi ,mujhko nazar aati nahi

din guzar jata hai tere intzaar me..
Tujhse milna ho vo ,shaam hi aati nhi

Sari baatein tujhpe hi khatm hoti hain meri..
Jo zikra tera na ho to ,koi baat bhi aati nahi.

Teri khwahish rahi umra bhar mujhko sanam..
Tujhko paane ki ,koi surat nazar aati nhi.


Dear madhu..........bahut khoobsurat ehsaas...hame accha lga aapko padna.

god bless u

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6th December 2014, 05:07 PM
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Lakh chaho magar laut kar aati nahi
Fir dubara zindgi ,rukh modkar aati nhi.

rang bageeche ke soone hain sabhi..
Titli ithlati koi gar ,phoolon par aati nahi.

aasmaan pe chaand bhi aaj poora hai magar..
Kyon bhala Chandni ,dar pe mere aati nhi.

Khwaab aate hain ghadi bhar jo aankh lage..
Toot jaye jo kabhi to ,neend fir aati nahi.

Chehre tamam dekhe teri ankhon me magar..
ek meri surat hi ,mujhko nazar aati nahi

din guzar jata hai tere intzaar me..
Tujhse milna ho vo ,shaam hi aati nhi

Sari baatein tujhpe hi khatm hoti hain meri..
Jo zikra tera na ho to ,koi baat bhi aati nahi.

Teri khwahish rahi umra bhar mujhko sanam..
Tujhko paane ki ,koi surat nazar aati nhi.
Madhu ji bhut khubsurat ehsaas or ek achi kavita likhi aapne meri daad hazir hai...Raj..

un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
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Good One Madhu............

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Teri khwahish rahi umra bhar mujhko sanam..
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Tujhse milna ho vo ,shaam hi aati nhi*

Wah..madhuji...
Bahut khub likha aapne..bade khubsurat andaj mein aapne ise pesh kiya hai..
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Chehre tamam dekhe teri ankhon mein magar
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wah ! kya baat hai..
Bohot umdaa Madhu ji. Bohot gehra ehsaas.. Andaaz-e-bayaan bhi bohot khoob.. Yunhi naye naye kalaam lekar mehfil ko rounaq bakhshti rahiyega.

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Waaaahh........waaaaahhhh..... behad gehre ehsaas hai aur badi safai se pesh kiya aapne.

Dheeeroo daad

Apka apna

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rang bageeche ke soone hain sabhi..
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Dear madhu..........bahut khoobsurat ehsaas...hame accha lga aapko padna.

god bless u
Bahut shukriya dii....
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Apna khyaal rakhein...
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Lakh chaho magar laut kar aati nahi
Fir dubara zindgi ,rukh modkar aati nhi.

rang bageeche ke soone hain sabhi..
Titli ithlati koi gar ,phoolon par aati nahi.

aasmaan pe chaand bhi aaj poora hai magar..
Kyon bhala Chandni ,dar pe mere aati nhi.

Khwaab aate hain ghadi bhar jo aankh lage..
Toot jaye jo kabhi to ,neend fir aati nahi.

Chehre tamam dekhe teri ankhon me magar..
ek meri surat hi ,mujhko nazar aati nahi

din guzar jata hai tere intzaar me..
Tujhse milna ho vo ,shaam hi aati nhi

Sari baatein tujhpe hi khatm hoti hain meri..
Jo zikra tera na ho to ,koi baat bhi aati nahi.

Teri khwahish rahi umra bhar mujhko sanam..
Tujhko paane ki ,koi surat nazar aati nhi.


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Madhu ji,

Pehli baar aapki poetry pe reply kar rahe hain...sach bataye to I have read all your beautiful composition. I have loved every single one of them. I cant even pick out which one I liked the best. Just want to say that you write extremely well and I love reading all your poetry. I guess the reason someone loves kuch likha hua kyonki they can relate themselves one way or the other.

Another reason I love your poems cuz the words are so simple that anyone or everyone can understand them.

Please keep writing...its a pleasure to read you.

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Madhu ji,

Pehli baar aapki poetry pe reply kar rahe hain...sach bataye to I have read all your beautiful composition. I have loved every single one of them. I cant even pick out which one I liked the best. Just want to say that you write extremely well and I love reading all your poetry. I guess the reason someone loves kuch likha hua kyonki they can relate themselves one way or the other.

Another reason I love your poems cuz the words are so simple that anyone or everyone can understand them.

Please keep writing...its a pleasure to read you.

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bazm me aapko dekhkar bahut khushi ho rahi hai mujhe...purane members me se agar koi mujhe padhta hai aur pasand karta hai to alag hee khushi milti hai..aapki meharbani ka bahut shukriya jo aap vaqt nikal kar mujhe padhte hain..aur aapne reply kiya bahut achcha laga....aage bhi aapke reply ka intzaar rahega mujhe...

Aate rahiye.....
salamat rahein..


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aaj is kachchi pakki si kavita pe nazar padi...kitna sara pyaar diya hai ap sab ne meri koshish ko aur main sabka shukriya karna bhi bhool gayi....muaf kariyega.....

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dhaval jibehad shukriya...

thank you di...

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thank u so much sarika....

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