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26th February 2003, 06:23 AM
yaad aaya mujhe kooee
chup chup ke mai rooee
tere bina mera dil na lage
mehfil koi mehfil na lage
raat raat bhar mai na sooee
chup chup kar mai rooee
dekhon jahan dikhe too hi too
too hi mere dil kee aarzoo
rehti hoon khoee-khoee
chup chup ke mai rooee
Zeba likti rahegi.........
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26th February 2003, 11:44 AM
Wah.. Jahan tak main samajhta huun..yeh Choti bahar ki Ghazal hai aur aisi Ghazalein kam hi padne ko milti hai.
Par ke Achha Laga
Ghayalparwana
kyon zindagi ki raah mein akele chalta hai dost
chal waha chal jahan tere jaise aur bhi hai...
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ghayal ji -
26th February 2003, 10:01 PM
ghayal ji yeh choti beher kya cheez hai,meri samajh mai nahi aaya.
zeba
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aww -
27th February 2003, 01:59 AM
aww zeba ji aapke jasbaat kaafi khoobsurat hai.....acha likha hai aapne....behad pasand aya aapka andaaz
luv priya
Akhihaan milaake chan'na paavi na Judayi Vey .......
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Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi!
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22nd July 2003, 07:45 PM
luvpriya ji,
bohot bhot shkriya aap ko yeh gazal itni pasand aai.aur sorry aap ka reply mei ne itni der kiya.
zeba
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23rd July 2003, 12:17 AM
bohat khoob zeba
achcha aur mukhtalif sa laga aap ka yeh kalam
khoobsoorat magar saada aur masoom andaaz mein jazbaat ka izhaar waqaee bohat asar karta hai jaisa andaaz aap ne is kalam mein apnaya hai.
mein dua go hoon aap isi tarah behter se behter likhti rahen gee aur ham aap ko sarahte rahen ge.
wishing you all the best
musharrafhusain
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24th July 2003, 05:51 PM
namasteee.. zeba..ji..
wah bahut khoob likha hai apne... wakai mein ..... bahut hi . .. umda .. likha hai apne..
aise hi lihte rahiyega.
bye and take care.
Lamha Lamha...saSein Khatam hoo rai hai...
Zindagi Maut ke pehlu mein soo rai hai...
Us bewafa se na pucho meri maut ki wajah...
Woh to bus zamane ko dikhane ke liye roo rai hai...
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29th July 2003, 07:05 AM
musharraf ji aur tanhaai ji,
aap dono ka tahe dil se shukriya is gazal ko padhne aur isko itna pasand karne ke liye.jab tak aap jaise log mujhe jawaab dete rahege is form par mai likhti rahoongi.
thanks a lot dear friends.
zeba
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29th July 2003, 01:19 PM
salam zeba
kase hain ap
bahi hamesha ki tara aik bar phir ap kay kalam na bohat mutaser kia
or sunain ap kay song writing kease ja rahe ha
or ap na singing shuro ki kay nahe
anas
do sache bol ,ek pyar bhuri muskan,thora pyar
kuch ziada mang lia keya hum ne,aa dostoo
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15th September 2003, 12:24 AM
Anas ji,
song writing kuch din se band hai,zindagi ki ajab kashmakash me hooon.khair mujhe khushi hai ke aap logon ko yeh mukhtasar si gazal acchi lagi.
zeba
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15th September 2003, 01:28 AM
zeba dost,
der se padhhi maine yah par khush hu k padhhi to sahi........
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15th September 2003, 01:30 AM
Zeba jee,
Aaj phir hamne kisi ke dil ko padhne ka mauka paya. Sach me dil se nikli aawaz bahut powerful hoti hei.
Its absolutely classic.
लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!
lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein
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awwwwwww -
16th September 2003, 03:33 AM
awwww zzeba ji bahut gehra kaha hai aapne ki
yaad aaya mujhe kooee
chup chup ke mai rooee
tere bina mera dil na lage
mehfil koi mehfil na lage
bahut pasand aya likhtey rahiye ummed hai tanhayi kuch kam hogi dost
Priya
Akhihaan milaake chan'na paavi na Judayi Vey .......
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Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi!
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16th September 2003, 08:43 AM
Zeba Ji,
Mujhe to pure puri yeh ghazal/shayri hi pasand aayi...bas lajawab hai...aur kya kahu mein...par jo bhi hai woh bilkul such lagta hai..humen bhi...bohat khubh....
luv,
tulsika!~
*¤*.¸¸.·´¨`» T u L s I k A «´¨`·.¸¸.*¤*
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17th July 2005, 11:27 PM
Meena ji, dard ji, luv priya ji, aur lover girl ji,
aap sab logon ka bhi behad shukriya meri is nacheez gazal ko padhne ke liye.
aaj mauka mila kaafi din baad aap sab logon ko shukriya kehne ka.
thanks
zeba
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