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Besabab mere khawabon pe koii pehara de gaya
Main bhi hun saath tumhare itna ishara de gaya

Isharon isharon mein ek ishara nyara de gaya
Pyar na diya per koyin ahsaas pyara de gaya

Badi hi apnaiyat aur muhobbat se mila koyiN
Talatum e ishq mein fase dil ko sahara de gaya

Dil kya jaan bhi soup di thi humne jinke naam
Ek din aaya woh hum ko hi dil humara de gaya

Muhobbat mein mile ghav kabhi Bharte nahi
Anjane mein koi dil ko zakham gehara de gaya

Na bikharon toot ker muhobbat hi nahi sab kuch
Kehkar koi jine ki aas is dil ko dobara de gaya

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11th July 2009, 06:03 AM
Aadab Khwaish ji...

Kisi ke jaane ka gham na kao tum yun Kwahish
Safar uska utna hi tha jo saath tumhara de gaya

Ye ashaar dil ko chuu gaye... Bohot khoob.. Likhte rahe..

Duaon ki guzarish...

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Sameer ji .......bahut khub ........acha likha hai aapne ....kabhi aapki nazm mohabbat ke zakhmo ko hara karti hai....kabhi mohabbat mai sahara banti hai..... kabhi jeeni ki aas de jaati hai......nice creation....

mujhe aapke ye teen sher bahut ache lage.............

Muhobbat mein mile ghav kabhi Bharte nahi
Anjane mein koi dil ko zakham gehara de gaya

Na bikharon toot ker muhobbat hi nahi sab kuch
Kehkar koi jine ki aas is dil ko dobara de gaya

Kisi ke jaane ka gham na kao tum yun Kwahish
Safar uska utna hi tha jo saath tumhara de gaya




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...

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11th July 2009, 04:27 PM
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Aadab Khwaish ji...

Kisi ke jaane ka gham na kao tum yun Kwahish
Safar uska utna hi tha jo saath tumhara de gaya

Ye ashaar dil ko chuu gaye... Bohot khoob.. Likhte rahe..

Duaon ki guzarish...

Abrar...
Thanks Abrar Bhai......

Thanks for appriciate my work...
Aage bhi aapka saath bana rahe itni dua...

Khush rahiye khuda hafez..
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11th July 2009, 04:33 PM
'Kisi ke jaane ka gham na kao tum yun Kwahish
Safar uska utna hi tha jo saath tumhara de gaya'

ye sher ik alag class me hai..........bahut acche....wah

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Bohat khoob Khwaish saheb, aapka kalam padhte padhte kuch likh bhaita hu....

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Apna samajh ke humko, kya kuch woh de gaya....

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12th July 2009, 07:46 PM
ap wakai me kamal hai..........kya khoob likha hai.


jo kahte hai khud ko tanha,ake jara dekh le iss taraf bhi.........
teri hi galli hai jalim,tera hi hai saher bhi.

wo mohbbat thi gum,gum-e-mohobbat mai mohobbat mai tha,
ki ab to sukr mana mujh jese maikhano ka........
   
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Sameer ji .......bahut khub ........acha likha hai aapne ....kabhi aapki nazm mohabbat ke zakhmo ko hara karti hai....kabhi mohabbat mai sahara banti hai..... kabhi jeeni ki aas de jaati hai......nice creation....

mujhe aapke ye teen sher bahut ache lage.............

Muhobbat mein mile ghav kabhi Bharte nahi
Anjane mein koi dil ko zakham gehara de gaya

Na bikharon toot ker muhobbat hi nahi sab kuch
Kehkar koi jine ki aas is dil ko dobara de gaya

Kisi ke jaane ka gham na kao tum yun Kwahish
Safar uska utna hi tha jo saath tumhara de gaya
Shukriya Naresh Jii...

Hounsla afzai ka behad shukra guzar hun.....
Aapka saath milta rahe to likhate rahenge...

Yeh to dil ke bharam hai bus kagaz per utar diye.....

Khush rahiye...
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13th July 2009, 10:58 PM
bahot achhi Ghazal hai Sameer jee,
saare aashar dil ke kareeb rahe ......maqtaa to lajawab hai jee


Kisi ke jaane ka gham na kao tum yun Kwahish
Safar uska utna hi tha jo saath tumhara de gaya

daad kabul kijiye


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Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai

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ye sher ik alag class me hai..........bahut acche....wah

regards
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Behad khush hui ke aapko maqta pasan aaya.......
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18th July 2009, 07:13 AM
Sameer jii

kaise hain aap?

Ghazal bahut pasand aayii... eshaas bhi bahut pasand aayi ...

likhte rahye .. aur mehfil ko sajaate rahye

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18th July 2009, 11:03 AM
Nice ghazal Khwahish,

this one was excellent

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18th July 2009, 11:18 AM
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Besabab mere khawabon pe koii pehara de gaya
Main bhi hun saath tumhare itna ishara de gaya

Isharon isharon mein ek ishara nyara de gaya
Pyar na diya per koyin ahsaas pyara de gaya

Badi hi apnaiyat aur muhobbat se mila koyiN
Talatum e ishq mein fase dil ko sahara de gaya

Dil kya jaan bhi soup di thi humne jinke naam
Ek din aaya woh hum ko hi dil humara de gaya

Muhobbat mein mile ghav kabhi Bharte nahi
Anjane mein koi dil ko zakham gehara de gaya

Na bikharon toot ker muhobbat hi nahi sab kuch
Kehkar koi jine ki aas is dil ko dobara de gaya

Kisi ke jaane ka gham na kao tum yun Kwahish
Safar uska utna hi tha jo saath tumhara de gaya

Bhai Kwahish ji ..bahot khoob likha hai aapne...saare aashaar dil fareb lage... khas kar ye do sher

Dil kya jaan bhi soup di thi humne jinke naam
Ek din aaya woh hum ko hi dil humara de gaya


Kisi ke jaane ka gham na kao tum yun Kwahish
Safar uska utna hi tha jo saath tumhara de gaya

likhte rahiye

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dil ko rulane ki taqat rakhti hai apki yeh gazhal, sameer bhai jaan, apne toh is gazal me kamal hi kar diya, ham jaise dil-jalon ke liye toh yeh gazal quran me likhi kisi aayat se kam nahi hai, jisko padke ghadi do ghadi ke liye, sukun ka ehsaas hota hai, aur lafzon ke zariye, kisi aur ki bewafai, dard ke shakal me bahar nikal jaati hai................
daad kubool kijiye, one of the best gazhals i have ever read on SDC...........
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Besabab mere khawabon pe koii pehara de gaya
Main bhi hun saath tumhare itna ishara de gaya

Isharon isharon mein ek ishara nyara de gaya
Pyar na diya per koyin ahsaas pyara de gaya

Badi hi apnaiyat aur muhobbat se mila koyiN
Talatum e ishq mein fase dil ko sahara de gaya

Dil kya jaan bhi soup di thi humne jinke naam
Ek din aaya woh hum ko hi dil humara de gaya

Muhobbat mein mile ghav kabhi Bharte nahi
Anjane mein koi dil ko zakham gehara de gaya

Na bikharon toot ker muhobbat hi nahi sab kuch
Kehkar koi jine ki aas is dil ko dobara de gaya

Kisi ke jaane ka gham na kao tum yun Kwahish
Safar uska utna hi tha jo saath tumhara de gaya


Nalin

Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
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Bohat khoob Khwaish saheb, aapka kalam padhte padhte kuch likh bhaita hu....

Tohmate Badnamiya Ruswaieeya Tanhaieeya
Apna samajh ke humko, kya kuch woh de gaya....

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Shukriya sajid Bhai......

Aapko mera kalam pasand aaya dil se shukra guzar huN...
Aur aapka sher bhi kafi achcha laga....

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Besabab mere khawabon pe koii pehara de gaya
Main bhi hun saath tumhare itna ishara de gaya

Isharon isharon mein ek ishara nyara de gaya
Pyar na diya per koyin ahsaas pyara de gaya

Badi hi apnaiyat aur muhobbat se mila koyiN
Talatum e ishq mein fase dil ko sahara de gaya

Dil kya jaan bhi soup di thi humne jinke naam
Ek din aaya woh hum ko hi dil humara de gaya

Muhobbat mein mile ghav kabhi Bharte nahi
Anjane mein koi dil ko zakham gehara de gaya

Na bikharon toot ker muhobbat hi nahi sab kuch
Kehkar koi jine ki aas is dil ko dobara de gaya

Kisi ke jaane ka gham na kao tum yun Kwahish
Safar uska utna hi tha jo saath tumhara de gaya
Bahut Khoob....Masha Allah bahut achcha likha hai aapne...
Aise hi likhte rahiye...
Duyaon ke saath.....

Mohabbat ki raahon mein chalna sambhal ke
Yahan jo bhi aaya...gaya haath mal ke..!

Log kehte hain Sher kehta hun .
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ap wakai me kamal hai..........kya khoob likha hai.


jo kahte hai khud ko tanha,ake jara dekh le iss taraf bhi.........
teri hi galli hai jalim,tera hi hai saher bhi.
Shukriya Rakesh Jii,

Yeh to aapki nazar hai ke aapko humari adna si koshish kamal lagi hai..
Itni jyada tarif ke hum haqdar nahi hai...

Aate rahiye aur aage bhi apni rai se nawazte rahiye..

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