Janumanu Jee! ..(vikas Jee)
Jaisa ki aap Ne likha hai Ki aaP ko IsmeiN BahuT Galti Milii hai To Aap us par Roshni Daaley kyoki .. Diya Jee Ne Maafi bhi Maagi hai isliye Aap ko Batana Behtar Tareeke se Batana Chahiye ki kya galti huyi hai!!! har Cheez ko saaf kare ...
Jis se diya sahiba ko pata Chale ki unne Kaha Galti kii hai .. usse unko aage Likhte samay ek Acchi Ray mil JayeeGi ... Aap dono ne sirf kami nikali hai par usko bataya nahin ki kamii kaha Hai! ????
IntzaaR raheGa! aaP ke! Reply ka! ...... MeiN Ye Link! MujeeB jee Aur Janumanu Jee Ko pM bhi karuuGa aur chahuga Ki Roshni daaley!
Kyoki Yeha har Member Shayar nahiN hai! Bahut Koshish karne ke Baad hi Kuch Likh Pate hai!! aur aaP dono Accha Likhte hai! is liye Roshni Daaley Ki kaha Galti huyi hai!
kyoki Mujhe bhi kahi galti nazar nahiN aayi mujhe bhi Kuch shikhne Ka mukha MileeGa![/quote]
amrit shahab ......
jaisa ki humen likha.. aapne padh liya ..
par humne ye aapko nahi likha .........
yaha par jo bhi likhta hai.. woh shayer hai ya nahi iska khulasa karke nahi likhta hai...
haan jo bhi likhta hai nuks ke sath likhta hai .........
mai bhi bahut galti karta hun ....
isme galti hai.. aur isliye nahi batayee .. ki inko bahut bataay ja chuka tha ..
aur ye khud pooch sakti hai.. is baat ka yakeen hai hume ........
humne inko padha hai....ek likhne wale aur padhne wale ka rista hota hai.. woh humme hai..
so maien padhne wale ki haisyat se inko kaha ... aur sirf itna likhne se koe dishearted koe niraash nahi hota .... sirf ek ghazal mai galti karne se aappe..
har ghazal mai galti ho ye sabit nahi hota............
aapko sme galti nahi lagi.... aapki soch
mujeh lagi meri soch ....
maien aapko nahi kaha kuch
aapko bhi nahi kahna chahiye ....
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khair ..........
apna apna takeeka hai sabka ...