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10th December 2006, 12:17 PM
kesa woh silsila tha kehnay ko faslaa tha
anjaan chahaton ka benaam silsilaa tha
kab hum ne ye socha tha kab hum ne yun chaha tha
kehnay ko pyar hai per haqeeqat main mehaz gila tha
ik khuwahishon ki basti, umeedon ka qafila tha
aankhon main jugnoouon sa haseen ujalaa tha
woh konsi thi manzil, woh konsa nishaan tha
jis ki talash main dil yun mara mara phira tha
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin
ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin
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10th December 2006, 01:05 PM
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kesa woh silsila tha kehnay ko faslaa tha
anjaan chahaton ka benaam silsilaa tha
kab hum ne ye socha tha kab hum ne yun chaha tha
kehnay ko pyar hai per haqeeqat main mehaz gila tha
ik khuwahishon ki basti, umeedon ka qafila tha
aankhon main jugnoouon sa haseen ujalaa tha
woh konsi thi manzil, woh konsa nishaan tha
jis ki talash main dil yun mara mara phira tha
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koi to ho ij [mani ji] ko mera namksaar! kaise hain aap?
aapki si rachna behad sundar hai aur har sher apne aap sab halat bayan kar rahe hai
woh konsi thi manzil, woh konsa nishaan tha
jis ki talash main dil yun mara mara phira tha-- ye sher bahot pasand aaya
achha laga aapko padh ke guzarish haii bas yuhi aap hamea likhte rahiyenga , dilse nikli daad ko kubul kijiye
khus rahiye, apna khayal rakhiye
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10th December 2006, 08:31 PM
kab hum ne ye socha tha kab hum ne yun chaha tha
kehnay ko pyar hai per haqeeqat main mehaz gila tha
well said mani ji,acha likha aapne.yunhin likhti rahen.tc.
yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
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kesa woh silsila tha kehnay ko faslaa tha
anjaan chahaton ka benaam silsilaa tha
kab hum ne ye socha tha kab hum ne yun chaha tha
kehnay ko pyar hai per haqeeqat main mehaz gila tha
ik khuwahishon ki basti, umeedon ka qafila tha
aankhon main jugnoouon sa haseen ujalaa tha
woh konsi thi manzil, woh konsa nishaan tha
jis ki talash main dil yun mara mara phira tha
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Hello Magenta ji,
Bahut achaa likha hai apne mujhe bahut pasand aai aap yu hi likhte rahe, mujhe intezaar rahega....
is intezar ke saath
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koi to ho ij [mani ji] ko mera namksaar! kaise hain aap?
aapki si rachna behad sundar hai aur har sher apne aap sab halat bayan kar rahe hai
woh konsi thi manzil, woh konsa nishaan tha
jis ki talash main dil yun mara mara phira tha-- ye sher bahot pasand aaya
achha laga aapko padh ke guzarish haii bas yuhi aap hamea likhte rahiyenga , dilse nikli daad ko kubul kijiye
khus rahiye, apna khayal rakhiye
aapka dost
dhaval
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thank you so much dhaval bohat shukrya aap ka yahan aye aur pasand kia aap ka saath raha to zaroor likh paoongi aur behter
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kab hum ne ye socha tha kab hum ne yun chaha tha
kehnay ko pyar hai per haqeeqat main mehaz gila tha
well said mani ji,acha likha aapne.yunhin likhti rahen.tc.
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thankyou aap ne pasand kia aur himmat afzai ki is ke liye bohat bohat shukrya
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Hello Magenta ji,
Bahut achaa likha hai apne mujhe bahut pasand aai aap yu hi likhte rahe, mujhe intezaar rahega....
is intezar ke saath
Aapka Naya Dost Tariq (SHAAN)
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bohat shukrya tariq sahib aap ka aur aaap ka sath raha agay bhi likh paoongi thanks again
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
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thankyou so much janab bohat nawazish pasand kernay ke liye
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13th December 2006, 04:11 PM
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kesa woh silsila tha kehnay ko faslaa tha
anjaan chahaton ka benaam silsilaa tha
kab hum ne ye socha tha kab hum ne yun chaha tha
kehnay ko pyar hai per haqeeqat main mehaz gila tha
ik khuwahishon ki basti, umeedon ka qafila tha
aankhon main jugnoouon sa haseen ujalaa tha
woh konsi thi manzil, woh konsa nishaan tha
jis ki talash main dil yun mara mara phira tha
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mani ji ko raj ka salaam......aapka kalaam arha saach mein dil ko chhu gaya bhut dil se or ehsaason se bana hai yeh kalaam......seedha dil mein uttar gaya.....har share lajawaab....yu he likhti rehna.....take care.......raj......
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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14th December 2006, 08:23 PM
kesa woh silsila tha kehnay ko faslaa tha
anjaan chahaton ka benaam silsilaa tha
Namaskar Mani ji
Aapki rachna ka title bahut khoobsurat hay.....rachna bhi utni hi khoobsurat hay......mere daad kabul kijeyega.....the starting sher is beautiful....ek baat kehna chahungi iss rachna ka ant(end) mughey theek nahin laga....the end is not quite clear....ek dost ki salaah hi samaghiyega.....yuun hi likhti rahiye
Take care
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mani ji ko raj ka salaam......aapka kalaam arha saach mein dil ko chhu gaya bhut dil se or ehsaason se bana hai yeh kalaam......seedha dil mein uttar gaya.....har share lajawaab....yu he likhti rehna.....take care.......raj......
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veer aap yahan aye mujhay bohat acha laga thank you so much app ne meri is koshish ko pasand kia aur meray ehsasaat ko samjha thanks a lot khush rahain rab rakha
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kesa woh silsila tha kehnay ko faslaa tha
anjaan chahaton ka benaam silsilaa tha
Namaskar Mani ji
Aapki rachna ka title bahut khoobsurat hay.....rachna bhi utni hi khoobsurat hay......mere daad kabul kijeyega.....the starting sher is beautiful....ek baat kehna chahungi iss rachna ka ant(end) mughey theek nahin laga....the end is not quite clear....ek dost ki salaah hi samaghiyega.....yuun hi likhti rahiye
Take care
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sakanya bohat bohat shukria aap yahan ayen aur apni qeemti raye se nawaza aap ne bilkul theek kaha hai is main mujhay bhi kami lagi thi main ise mazeed barrhana chahti thi lekin jab kuch na soojha to aesay hi rehnay dia actually jo sochain hoti hain unhain hi alfaz deti hoon main ....lekin akser sochain bohat be rabt hoti hain isi liye is ka saaf aser is shayri main nazar aya aap ko... main koshish keroongi apni frnd ki salah per amal keroon aur bohat shukrya ke aap ne itnay ghour se parrha aur mashwara bhi dia thank you dear
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15th December 2006, 12:55 PM
woh konsi thi manzil, woh konsa nishaan tha
jis ki talash main dil yun mara mara phira tha
such kaha apne.
bahut khub likha hai apne.
sakhi ki daad kubul karen.
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शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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15th December 2006, 02:25 PM
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kesa woh silsila tha kehnay ko faslaa tha
anjaan chahaton ka benaam silsilaa tha
kab hum ne ye socha tha kab hum ne yun chaha tha
kehnay ko pyar hai per haqeeqat main mehaz gila tha
ik khuwahishon ki basti, umeedon ka qafila tha
aankhon main jugnoouon sa haseen ujalaa tha
woh konsi thi manzil, woh konsa nishaan tha
jis ki talash main dil yun mara mara phira tha
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mani ji
aapki gazal padi bakai main kabile tarif sher likhe hai aapne
hamri daad kabool farmaiyega
shukriay
dilip
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Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai
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woh konsi thi manzil, woh konsa nishaan tha
jis ki talash main dil yun mara mara phira tha
such kaha apne.
bahut khub likha hai apne.
sakhi ki daad kubul karen.
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thank you so much sakhi aap ne pasand kia aur qeemti waqt dia reply ke liye thank you so much
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mani ji
aapki gazal padi bakai main kabile tarif sher likhe hai aapne
hamri daad kabool farmaiyega
shukriay
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hi dilip sahib kesay hain aap bohat shukrya aap ne meray likhay ko pasand kia duaan main yaad rakhiye ga thanks again
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Assalam-o-Alaykum Mani ji kesi hain aap ?
Aaj khuch pichli post dekh raha tha tab aapki is post par nazar padhi aur jesa tytle se lag raha tha gazal bhi bahut wese hi umda lagi yeh us time ki hai jab main SDC par nahi tha ek umda gazal par khaksaar ki daad kubool farmaiye
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kesa woh silsila tha kehnay ko faslaa tha
anjaan chahaton ka benaam silsilaa tha
kab hum ne ye socha tha kab hum ne yun chaha tha
kehnay ko pyar hai per haqeeqat main mehaz gila tha
ik khuwahishon ki basti, umeedon ka qafila tha
aankhon main jugnoouon sa haseen ujalaa tha
woh konsi thi manzil, woh konsa nishaan tha
jis ki talash main dil yun mara mara phira tha
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wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain.
Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif''
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7th October 2008, 12:51 PM
dil ki naadani samjhiye ya takdeer ka likha...pyar jisse hona hota hai usise hota hai...bus is raah me chalte chalte insan bahot kuch seh jata hai
hi..aapne bahot khubsurti se pyar k ehsaaso ko bayan kiya hai...aapki writing hume bahot achi lagi.... khaskar ye do line....
woh konsi thi manzil, woh konsa nishaan tha
jis ki talash main dil yun mara mara phira tha
aise hi likhte rahiye
take care
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7th October 2008, 04:16 PM
wow mani...................
bahut acchi ghazal likhi hain tumne dil se daad ..har ashar dil ko chu gaya...............
mausam..
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Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se
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Assalam-o-Alaykum Mani ji kesi hain aap ?
Aaj khuch pichli post dekh raha tha tab aapki is post par nazar padhi aur jesa tytle se lag raha tha gazal bhi bahut wese hi umda lagi yeh us time ki hai jab main SDC par nahi tha ek umda gazal par khaksaar ki daad kubool farmaiye
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walaikumasalam kashif ji main bilkul theeek hoon alhumdulillah umeed hai aap bhi ache honge .......aapka behad shukriya ise pasand kerne ka waqai bohat purani post nikal laye hain aap bohat bohat shukriya kashif ji aapki daad ser ankhon per
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
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dil ki naadani samjhiye ya takdeer ka likha...pyar jisse hona hota hai usise hota hai...bus is raah me chalte chalte insan bahot kuch seh jata hai
hi..aapne bahot khubsurti se pyar k ehsaaso ko bayan kiya hai...aapki writing hume bahot achi lagi.... khaskar ye do line....
woh konsi thi manzil, woh konsa nishaan tha
jis ki talash main dil yun mara mara phira tha
aise hi likhte rahiye
take care
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anu ji aapka behad shukriya aap ne parrha aur hosla afzai ki bohat nawazish
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
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wow mani...................
bahut acchi ghazal likhi hain tumne dil se daad ..har ashar dil ko chu gaya...............
mausam..
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thank u so much didi apki himat afzai ka behad shukriya
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Bahut khoob !
har sher soorat aur seerat se bharpoor lagaa !
thodii der se hi sahi !
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kesa woh silsila tha kehnay ko faslaa tha
anjaan chahaton ka benaam silsilaa tha
kab hum ne ye socha tha kab hum ne yun chaha tha
kehnay ko pyar hai per haqeeqat main mehaz gila tha
ik khuwahishon ki basti, umeedon ka qafila tha
aankhon main jugnoouon sa haseen ujalaa tha
woh konsi thi manzil, woh konsa nishaan tha
jis ki talash main dil yun mara mara phira tha
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Kuch saal pehle tum sa koi mujhe mila tha
Ji jaan se hamesha mujhko wo chahta tha
maine bhi dil se ki thi usse bahot mohabbat
phir bhi na jane kyon wo naraz ho gaya tha
jab hosh aya mujhko tab der ho chuki thi
mehboob tha jo mera mujhse bichad chuka tha...........................
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Bahut khoob !
har sher soorat aur seerat se bharpoor lagaa !
thodii der se hi sahi !
reps+++
daad Qabool ki jaaye !
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kshitiz ji aapka behad shukriya ke aap ne yahan apni nazr e karam fermaiye aur meri himmat barrhai aapka bohat bohat shukriya yunhi saath dijiyega
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
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Kuch saal pehle tum sa koi mujhe mila tha
Ji jaan se hamesha mujhko wo chahta tha
maine bhi dil se ki thi usse bahot mohabbat
phir bhi na jane kyon wo naraz ho gaya tha
jab hosh aya mujhko tab der ho chuki thi
mehboob tha jo mera mujhse bichad chuka tha...........................
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shukriya aapka ke aapne parrha aur aapki shayri bhi achi lagi thanks
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
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kesa woh silsila tha kehnay ko faslaa tha
anjaan chahaton ka benaam silsilaa tha
kab hum ne ye socha tha kab hum ne yun chaha tha
kehnay ko pyar hai per haqeeqat main mehaz gila tha
ik khuwahishon ki basti, umeedon ka qafila tha
aankhon main jugnoouon sa haseen ujalaa tha
woh konsi thi manzil, woh konsa nishaan tha
jis ki talash main dil yun mara mara phira tha
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Aadab mani ji,
kaise hai aap?
mani ji m miss u,really
or aapke games b
mani ji aap to ek mukammal shaks hai,,
or yakinan aapke likhe har ashaar me aapke ehsaas ayan ho hi jate hain,
aaj b aapko padhakr wahi khushi mili,,jo hamesha se mehsus hoti thi,
allah aapko khush rakhe,apna khayal rakhiye
allah hafiz
Apki dost
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and ever and ever!
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23rd October 2008, 10:39 AM
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kesa woh silsila tha kehnay ko faslaa tha
anjaan chahaton ka benaam silsilaa tha
kab hum ne ye socha tha kab hum ne yun chaha tha
kehnay ko pyar hai per haqeeqat main mehaz gila tha
ik khuwahishon ki basti, umeedon ka qafila tha
aankhon main jugnoouon sa haseen ujalaa tha
woh konsi thi manzil, woh konsa nishaan tha
jis ki talash main dil yun mara mara phira tha
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bahut achha likha hai. likhte rahe.
raj
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27th October 2008, 04:05 PM
mani ji..apki is khoobsoorat khayal ke liye dil se tareef kabool karey!
swati...............some words about tears in!
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20th November 2008, 12:18 AM
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Aadab mani ji,
kaise hai aap?
mani ji m miss u,really
or aapke games b
mani ji aap to ek mukammal shaks hai,,
or yakinan aapke likhe har ashaar me aapke ehsaas ayan ho hi jate hain,
aaj b aapko padhakr wahi khushi mili,,jo hamesha se mehsus hoti thi,
allah aapko khush rakhe,apna khayal rakhiye
allah hafiz
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soni ji kesi hain aap ab to aap dikhti hi nahi hain hum bhi aapko bohat miss kerte hain sdc per pasand kerne ka shukriya soni ji aur jahan tak mukamal insaan ki baat hai to duniya main koi bhi shaks perfect nahi hai apna bohat khayal rakhiyega aur aati raha karain khush rahain
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin
ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin
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20th November 2008, 12:20 AM
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bahut achha likha hai. likhte rahe.
raj
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bohat shukriya raj ji aapki hosla afzai ke liye
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin
ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin
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20th November 2008, 12:28 AM
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mani ji..apki is khoobsoorat khayal ke liye dil se tareef kabool karey!
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sawati ji aapka behad shukriya ke aapne ise parrha aur meri himmat afzai ki
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin
ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin
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22nd November 2008, 01:52 PM
kesa woh silsila tha kehnay ko faslaa tha
anjaan chahaton ka benaam silsilaa tha
khoobsurat ehsaas hain mani ji.....likhti rahiye..
zainy
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22nd November 2008, 05:37 PM
assalam walekum,
appki har ek shayri bhot hi achi lagi kahaska
ik khuwahishon ki basti, umeedon ka qafila tha
aankhon main jugnoouon sa haseen ujalaa tha
woh konsi thi manzil, woh konsa nishaan tha
jis ki talash main dil yun mara mara phira tha
ye to bahot hi ache lage
likhte rahiye
Allah hafiz
koi pyaar chahe to koi jahan chahe,
koi doulat chahe to koi shaan chahe,
hum to jindagi ke sataye huwe hai,
‘Eliyas’ to khudase do gaaz zameen aur kafan chahe
- ELIYAS SHAIKH
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27th November 2008, 12:31 AM
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kesa woh silsila tha kehnay ko faslaa tha
anjaan chahaton ka benaam silsilaa tha
khoobsurat ehsaas hain mani ji.....likhti rahiye..
zainy
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zainy ji behad shukriya pasand kerne ka
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin
ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin
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27th November 2008, 12:34 AM
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assalam walekum,
appki har ek shayri bhot hi achi lagi kahaska
ik khuwahishon ki basti, umeedon ka qafila tha
aankhon main jugnoouon sa haseen ujalaa tha
woh konsi thi manzil, woh konsa nishaan tha
jis ki talash main dil yun mara mara phira tha
ye to bahot hi ache lage
likhte rahiye
Allah hafiz
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walaikumasalam eliyas ji bohat shukriya is hosla afzai ke liye
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin
ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin
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