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Kab, kaha aur kaise? - 4th June 2013, 08:55 PM
phir iccha huye
kuch utar du
kore kagaj me
kuch naye ehsaas ko
naye andaaj me
zindagi ke kuch
aur pahluo ko
samet lu
in panno me
naye asmaan ke
nayi uchayee ko
mahsus ker lu
jo baar baar
unchuye rah jate hai
kuch gujarte badlo se
jinke pani ne mujhe bhigo rakha hai
sukhna chahti hun
naye kirno se
per.....
kab, kaha aur kaise??

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5th June 2013, 11:08 PM
very nice richa........................


एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
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6th June 2013, 03:18 PM
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phir iccha huye
kuch utar du
kore kagaj me
kuch naye ehsaas ko
naye andaaj me
zindagi ke kuch
aur pahluo ko
samet lu
in panno me
naye asmaan ke
nayi uchayee ko
mahsus ker lu
jo baar baar
unchuye rah jate hai
kuch gujarte badlo se
jinke pani ne mujhe bhigo rakha hai
sukhna chahti hun
naye kirno se
per.....
kab, kaha aur kaise??


Waah ji waah Richaa ji kya kamaal kar diyaa aapne... sach maniye aapki kavitaa bahot andar tak utar gayee aur hame behad pasand aai hai...... likhti raheN...... khush raheN.

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7th June 2013, 12:05 PM
thanks aru ji, sharma_ashu ji and sameer'shaad' ji.......

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11th June 2013, 02:18 AM
Itni jaankari to nahi rakhta mai kyonki khud naya hu bas itna kahunga aapne bahut khub likha hai aapke zazbaat alfaazon me nazar aa rahe hain.. very nice keep it up

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11th June 2013, 09:18 AM
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phir iccha huye
kuch utar du
kore kagaj me
kuch naye ehsaas ko
naye andaaj me
zindagi ke kuch
aur pahluo ko
samet lu
in panno me
naye asmaan ke
nayi uchayee ko
mahsus ker lu
jo baar baar
unchuye rah jate hai
kuch gujarte badlo se
jinke pani ne mujhe bhigo rakha hai
sukhna chahti hun
naye kirno se
per.....
kab, kaha aur kaise??
Bahut khubsurat ehsaas Richa ji....!! Aise hi likhti rahiye...!!

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15th June 2013, 07:59 AM
thank u so much arjun ji..and kavita ji sure..thanks a lot..

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