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10th March 2010, 10:32 AM
Apne Aap Ko Simtati Maa
Aulad Par Pyaar Lutati Maa
Apne Hi Jism Se
Aulad Ko Panpati Maa
Apne Muh Ka Niwala Nikal
Aulad Ko Khilati Maa
Har Lihaaz Ka Kaayedaa
Aulad Ko Padhati Maa
Zindagi Ke Aakhiri Daur Me
Kyon Apne Aap Ko Tanhaa Paati Maa
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye
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10th March 2010, 11:17 AM
Radhika jee:
namaste!
bahot hi gehrii baat keh dee aapne.. dil ko Chhu gayiiN aapki yeh koShiSh.. liKhate raheN aise hi..! daad!
KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
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*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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Bahut hi khoobsurat ehsaas....dhaval bhai ne ekdum sahi farmaya....
shubhkamanye......
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10th March 2010, 12:02 PM
radhika jee, aapke ehsaas bahut khoob lage....
i'si tarha likhte rahiye....
i's rachna ke liye reps++++++++
Zindagi Ke Aakhiri Daur Me Kyon
Apne Aap Ko Tanhaa Paati Maa
sorry shayad reps ke liye intzaar karna hoga...
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10th March 2010, 04:50 PM
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Apne Aap Ko Simtati Maa
Aulad Par Pyaar Lutati Maa
Apne Hi Jism Se
Aulad Ko Panpati Maa
Apne Muh Ka Niwala Nikal
Aulad Ko Khilati Maa
Har Lihaaz Ka Kaayedaa
Aulad Ko Padhati Maa
Zindagi Ke Aakhiri Daur Me
Kyon Apne Aap Ko Tanhaa Paati Maa
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radhika jee
radhe radhe
khoobsoorat ahsaas achha likha hai dil se daad
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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11th March 2010, 07:48 AM
Dil ko chhu jaane waale ehsaas pesh kiye hai aapne ......radhika .....Maa toh Maa hoti hai......Maa ke Marm ko bahut achhe se aapne ujaagar kiya hai.........achha laga padhkar ......yunhi likhte rahen...khush rahen...
Zindagi Ke Aakhiri Daur Me
Kyon Apne Aap Ko Tanhaa Paati Maa
tooo goood !
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
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11th March 2010, 10:59 AM
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Apne Aap Ko Simtati Maa
Aulad Par Pyaar Lutati Maa
Apne Hi Jism Se
Aulad Ko Panpati Maa
Apne Muh Ka Niwala Nikal
Aulad Ko Khilati Maa
Har Lihaaz Ka Kaayedaa
Aulad Ko Padhati Maa
Zindagi Ke Aakhiri Daur Me
Kyon Apne Aap Ko Tanhaa Paati Maa
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radhika jii
aapki is rachna main chupa dard main samajh sakta hoon, aur agar main ye kahoon ki ye dard sirf ek ladki samajh sakti hai to atishyokti na hogii......
bahhut khoob surat ehsas hain aapke, ek sms mujhe yaad aa gaya... wo main aapse share karna chahunga.........
maa,
jo bachpan main hamare dwara
toote foote shawdon ko sunkar
uska matlab samajh letii thii,
aur aaj jab hum jawan ho gaye hain
har ek shawd ko behtar dhang se bolte hain,
tab maa se kahte hain
" maa tum to kuch bhi nahi samajhtiN"
aapki rachna per merii dheron badhaaii"
Dilip
" Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab
Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai
mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya
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12th March 2010, 11:17 AM
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Radhika jee:
namaste!
bahot hi gehrii baat keh dee aapne.. dil ko Chhu gayiiN aapki yeh koShiSh.. liKhate raheN aise hi..! daad!
KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~ Dhaval
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12th March 2010, 02:43 PM
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Apne Aap Ko Simtati Maa
Aulad Par Pyaar Lutati Maa
Apne Hi Jism Se
Aulad Ko Panpati Maa
Apne Muh Ka Niwala Nikal
Aulad Ko Khilati Maa
Har Lihaaz Ka Kaayedaa
Aulad Ko Padhati Maa
Zindagi Ke Aakhiri Daur Me
Kyon Apne Aap Ko Tanhaa Paati Maa
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Hi Radhika,
Saadgi se ehsaasaat piroye hain aapne... achha laga aapko padhkar... Waakayi maa baap bacchon ke liye apni jaan luta dete hain aur hum bacche uska mol samajh nahin paate...
Likhti rahiye yun hi aur share karti rahiye...meri daad kubool kijiyega...
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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radhika jii
aapki is rachna main chupa dard main samajh sakta hoon, aur agar main ye kahoon ki ye dard sirf ek ladki samajh sakti hai to atishyokti na hogii......
bahhut khoob surat ehsas hain aapke, ek sms mujhe yaad aa gaya... wo main aapse share karna chahunga.........
maa,
jo bachpan main hamare dwara
toote foote shawdon ko sunkar
uska matlab samajh letii thii,
aur aaj jab hum jawan ho gaye hain
har ek shawd ko behtar dhang se bolte hain,
tab maa se kahte hain
" maa tum to kuch bhi nahi samajhtiN"
aapki rachna per merii dheron badhaaii"
Dilip
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Ji sarahana ka shukriya......................aapka reply mujhe bahut pasand aaya..............kash yeh ehsaas sab samajh paate........
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
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15th March 2010, 07:52 PM
Radhika ji,it is just exceptional,bilkul alag or kitna khoobsurat.......wow.....
dil se daad hazir hai.
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16th March 2010, 01:44 PM
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Radhika ji,it is just exceptional,bilkul alag or kitna khoobsurat.......wow.....
dil se daad hazir hai.
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ji thanks for appreciate....................
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
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17th March 2010, 12:09 PM
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Apne Aap Ko Simtati Maa
Aulad Par Pyaar Lutati Maa
Apne Hi Jism Se
Aulad Ko Panpati Maa
Apne Muh Ka Niwala Nikal
Aulad Ko Khilati Maa
Har Lihaaz Ka Kaayedaa
Aulad Ko Padhati Maa
Zindagi Ke Aakhiri Daur Me
Kyon Apne Aap Ko Tanhaa Paati Maa
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bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai radhika ji....
daad kabul keejiye....
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bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai radhika ji....
daad kabul keejiye....
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ji shukriya............................
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye
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23rd March 2010, 11:52 AM
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Bahut hi khoobsurat ehsaas....dhaval bhai ne ekdum sahi farmaya....
shubhkamanye......
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ji shukriya pasand karne ke liye..............................
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
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29th April 2010, 10:50 AM
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Hi Radhika,
Saadgi se ehsaasaat piroye hain aapne... achha laga aapko padhkar... Waakayi maa baap bacchon ke liye apni jaan luta dete hain aur hum bacche uska mol samajh nahin paate...
Likhti rahiye yun hi aur share karti rahiye...meri daad kubool kijiyega...
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ji shukriya pasand kerne ke liye................kaash bacche aisa na ker...........
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
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29th April 2010, 10:59 AM
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Apne Aap Ko Simtati Maa
Aulad Par Pyaar Lutati Maa
Apne Hi Jism Se
Aulad Ko Panpati Maa
Apne Muh Ka Niwala Nikal
Aulad Ko Khilati Maa
Har Lihaaz Ka Kaayedaa
Aulad Ko Padhati Maa
Zindagi Ke Aakhiri Daur Me
Kyon Apne Aap Ko Tanhaa Paati Maa
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its so touching ....
mujeh bhi ek bahut bahut school time mai likhi lines yaad aayee ... thodi si
Geeli lakdiyaaN, uspe de Thandi aanch
subah, raat ki paheliyaan bhujaati maa
maiN poochta tha jab taaroN ki ginti
din papa ke lout ane ke fir ginaati maa
bas itna hi yaad aaya toota foota . kabhi diary khoulnga to padhunga fir se
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29th April 2010, 01:12 PM
Bohat khoob Radhika jee...........dil choo lene wali peshkash
PS.: Ho sake to ek baar Panpati lafz ke bare me phir se chaan been kar le jaha tak main janta hu Panapta aur Panapti hi suna hai maine.
Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil
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29th April 2010, 03:09 PM
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Bohat khoob Radhika jee...........dil choo lene wali peshkash
PS.: Ho sake to ek baar Panpati lafz ke bare me phir se chaan been kar le jaha tak main janta hu Panapta aur Panapti hi suna hai maine.
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ji shukriya....
ji rahi panpati lafz ki baat, to her lafz suna ho ye zaruri nahi,kuch apni soch aur samaj per bhi nirbhar karta hai......
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye
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29th April 2010, 08:00 PM
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ji shukriya....
ji rahi panpati lafz ki baat, to her lafz suna ho ye zaruri nahi,kuch apni soch aur samaj per bhi nirbhar karta hai......
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Main aapse sunne ya sunane ki baat nahi kar raha hu, baat yaha sahi aur galat lafz ki ho rahi hai.
Agar koi kal apni soch se aam ko aama kehne lage to uski soch ko sahi nahi kaha jayega.
Maine pehle bhi ek baar aapke kisi kalam me aapki Islah karni chahi thi par aapke rookhe jawab ne mujhe bohat udaas kiya tha. Aaj phir aapne bilkool bina baat ko samjhe jawab diya hai.
Khair mujhe maaf kare galti meri hi hai jo maine aapki thread par haziri di, yaqeen maniye aainda aisi galti mujhse nahi hogi.
Allah aapki kalam ko aur shorat aur takat bakshe....AAMEEN
Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...
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30th April 2010, 12:25 AM
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ji shukriya....
ji rahi panpati lafz ki baat, to her lafz suna ho ye zaruri nahi,kuch apni soch aur samaj per bhi nirbhar karta hai......
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RADHIKA JI:.. plzz dont mind, per jahaaN tak maiN jaanti huuN, Is word ke sahi spelling .."Panapti" hi hai...
Ghayel ji sirf aapki madad kar rahe haiN, isme itna naraaz hone ki koi baat nahi hai..
Ab public forum hai, tou log islaah karenge hi,har kalaam ki sirf tareef nahi ki ja sakti, kabhi kabhi hum se ghaltiyaN bhi ho jati haiN, agar kisi ne hamari ghalti nikaali ho tou, isme embarass hone ya ghusaa hone ki kya baat hai, hasi khushi se bhi tou, apni ghalti maan li ja sakti hai,
Aap mere kayi kalamoN per dekhiye, kayi shayeroN ne kayi ghaltiyaN nikaali hai,Ghaltiyan sab se hoti hai...koi bhi perfect nahi hai..
Mera yeH msg sirf aapke liye nahi hai, sabhi members ke liye hai......Tareef ke saath saath apni ghaltiyaN sunne ke liye bhi tayyar rahiye,aur jo log aapki ghaltiyaN aapko bata rahe haiN,.. woh sirf aapki madad kar rahe haiN, taaki aap aur bhi acche likhe...
I hope meri yeh baat kisi ko buri nahi lagi ho..
Tc
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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Main aapse sunne ya sunane ki baat nahi kar raha hu, baat yaha sahi aur galat lafz ki ho rahi hai.
Agar koi kal apni soch se aam ko aama kehne lage to uski soch ko sahi nahi kaha jayega.
Maine pehle bhi ek baar aapke kisi kalam me aapki Islah karni chahi thi par aapke rookhe jawab ne mujhe bohat udaas kiya tha. Aaj phir aapne bilkool bina baat ko samjhe jawab diya hai.
Khair mujhe maaf kare galti meri hi hai jo maine aapki thread par haziri di, yaqeen maniye aainda aisi galti mujhse nahi hogi.
Allah aapki kalam ko aur shorat aur takat bakshe....AAMEEN
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ghayel sahab aadaab...........
bhai ..apne islah kari bahut nek kaam kiya....magar writer se khayaal ke tabadle ka haq kyu cheente hoi( bhale hi vo galat ho)????
yaha writer se jyada to aap roothe hue nazar aa rahe hai.n
aur ye sab baat ...ki mai ab apke post par nahi aunga vagaira....naye writer ko bahut nuksaan pahuchaati hai.... ainda aisi galti nahi hogi- ye sab likhna koi dhamki se kam nahi........meri nazar me...
ab shayar hai--har ek shayar ka kuch na kuch to kahi dheela hota hi hai( saying by kshitiz sahab)....nahi maani apni galti publicly to nahi sahi...apne apna kaam kar diya--ab agee bad jaiye bina kuch bole
mujhe yakeen hai writer ko aapne help kar diya--phir agee kya baat??
aur ek baat.........ye
Allah aapki kalam ko aur shorat aur takat bakshe....AAMEEN
ye kya kambal me lapetke danda chala rahe ho kya?
regards
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30th April 2010, 11:53 AM
Ghayel saheb , I totally agree with Zidd saheb,....Aapne apna kaam kar diya, ....ab aagey waala maane na maane uski marzi, isme naraaz hone waali koi baat nahi lagi mujhe,..
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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30th April 2010, 12:21 PM
lagta hai Zidd ji aur zainy ji ne aajkal k gaane nahi sune
Kar 'chiggy wiggy' mere sang soniya...
Ye 'chiggy wiggy' kya hota hai
'Ramaiyya watta waiyya ' a very old and famous song...
Waise bhasha hoti kya hai... ?
Ek zariya, apni feelings express karne ka... Aur jaha tak 'panpati' ka sawal hai... Ye lafz us jagah fit ho raha hai aur dimag walo ko samajh b aa raha hai k writer kehna kya chahta hai...
Par 'chiggy wiggy' meri samajh se bahar hai waise depend karta hai samjhne wale k upar k wo 'chiggy wiggy' ka kya matlab nikale...
Maslan.. Dinner, lunch, coffee, tea, dance, masti etc. Etc.
Khair... Apne ko kya...
Jo mann me aaya keh diya...
Kisi ko bura laga to sorry aur achha laga to reps add kar dena
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30th April 2010, 12:35 PM
amaa yaar ..appe to zabardasti mujhe ghaseeT liya.....
maine to koi aitraz nahi dikhaya 'panpati' par(halanki galat to hai)
phir mujhe kyu sekha rahe ho...miyaa???
waise byr the way....kishor kumar ka
'idlayi idlayi idlayi uuu'
iska matlab bhi apke hisaab se kuch bhi ho sakta hai
jaise panipati,senapati,ya banaarsi paan ka pati
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30th April 2010, 12:58 PM
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amaa yaar .. appe to zabardasti mujhe ghaseeT liya.....
maine to koi aitraz nahi dikhaya 'panpati' par(halanki galat to hai)
phir mujhe kyu sekha rahe ho...miyaa???
waise 'byr' the way....kishor kumar ka
'idlayi idlayi idlayi uuu'
iska matlab bhi apke hisaab se kuch bhi ho sakta hai
jaise panipati,senapati,ya banaarsi paan ka pati
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waise 'amaa' kya hota hai
Aur sir ji... Mai kaun sikahne wala... Mai to khud abhi tak ye soch raha hu k aakhir akshay kumar karna kya chahta tha
Btw mai kehna to sajid ji ko chah raha tha par galti se aapka naam type ho gaya... sorry
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Baaki diyaaN gallaN chaddo, Dil saaf hona chahida ....
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30th April 2010, 04:26 PM
Yeh aag kab bhujhegi sajid shayar ji..........
Thanks for supporting, zidd saheb,Buland shayar ji,aur vikas ji.........................
Radhika
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Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
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30th April 2010, 04:29 PM
hmmmm
radhikaji...apka lafz 'panpati' sahi hai.....
subah mai bhi wahi mistake kar gaya jo sabne kiya
apka kasur sirf spelling mistake ka hai....ab apka qafiye ke syatem par gaur kiya to dimag chalaa
apka qafiya syatem hai luTaati,paati..padhaati ....and so on
ap bus ek 'a' add karna bhul gayi
panpaana ...panpaati ( pan/paa/naa-ti)...mere hisaab se jayaz lagta hai...
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30th April 2010, 05:08 PM
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itna sarcastic kyu bhai???
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30th April 2010, 05:34 PM
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hmmmm
radhikaji...apka lafz 'panpati' sahi hai.....
subah mai bhi wahi mistake kar gaya jo sabne kiya
apka kasur sirf spelling mistake ka hai....ab apka qafiye ke syatem par gaur kiya to dimag chalaa
apka qafiya syatem hai luTaati,paati..padhaati ....and so on
ap bus ek 'a' add karna bhul gayi
panpaana ...panpaati ( pan/paa/naa-ti)...mere hisaab se jayaz lagta hai...
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Ji .. Zidd Saheb......aapne ek dam sahi jawaab diya sabko....sabki bolti band kar di...
Thanks
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Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye
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30th April 2010, 05:51 PM
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Ji .. Zidd Saheb......aapne ek dam sahi jawaab diya sabko....sabki bolti band kar di...
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Jiska darr tha wahi hua............aur sahi kaha Radhika Jee aapne sach me hamari bolti bandh rahe to behtar hai.
Aapka jo dil kare aap likhe aapko haq hai ab chahe woh panpati ho ya naaspati.
Meri batein agar kisi ki naraazgi ka sabab bani ho mujhe maaf kar dijiyega.
Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...
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30th April 2010, 06:07 PM
The verse is perfect...!
Apne Hi Jism Se
Aulad Ko Panpati Maa
Meaning : from her own body she matures (grows ) her offspring...!
And the whole poetry is awesome...!
Daad kabuul kijiyegaa...!
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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30th April 2010, 08:08 PM
radhika jee
radhe radhe
radhika jee app badi hi lucky hai jo itne bade bade shayar aapke thread par aaye aur apni apni rai pesh kari hamesha learned persons ke beech chhidi bahas ek naye hal ko janm deti hai aur aisa hi yahan hua
isme haar jeet maan apmaan kuchh nahi hai ek swasth bahas ho yahi parivaar me ekta ka niyam hai na ki kisi ko neecha dikhaane ke liye ya support karne ke liye jabab me namrata ho tabhi parivaar ek jut rah sakta hai doosre ke adhikaar aur apni jimmedaari ka ahsaas hi parivaar ko chalaane me madad gaar hota hai
SDC hamaara parivaar hai aur isme sabhi ek jut rahen yahi meri kaamna hai.
sajid bhai, zainyjee, zidd saheb, buland jee vikas jee sabhi ne achhi tarah apne vichaar vyakt kiye hain sabhi ka shukriya.
bas mera bhav yahi hai ki yahan sab apne vichaar to rakhen par namrata ke saath
SDC parivaar apni ekta aur akhandta ek saath bulandiyon ko chhuye yahi kaamna hai
Aapka Apna Ishk
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30th April 2010, 08:22 PM
Radhika Jee AadaaB!
bahut hi achchi aur sahin koshish rahi aapki mujhe aapki yeh kalaam bahut
pasand aayi...... Dil se daad kabool kijiye......
Hmmmmm aur yahan kafi kuch ho gaya ek word jisko galat karaar
diya jaa raha hai jo ki mere khayaal se ekdum sahiN hai.....
Janab sajid sahab Panapti aur panpati ke alag alag mayne hai.......
Kisine apni galat rai kya de dii uske saath aur bhi galat rai wale judh jate hai
Panapti ke mayne hia ..... (badna)
aur panpaati ke mayne hai.... (badhawa dena)
Khair main koi words ka expert nahi huN per jo samjh mein aaya samjha diya aur kah diya...
Wel Radhika jee....... Aapke jawab mein bhi ek galati hai ke aapne bada
tikha sa jawab diya.. agar aap mayne saaf kar deti to shyaad itna hungama nahi hota...... Aksar log galat hi samjhte hai.... apni apni soch hia ...
Don't take it seriously....... kahna aur sunna chalta rahta hai..
aap likhati rhaiye,
Khush rhiaye,
Khuda hafez......
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