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Thumbs up Kem aaje??? - 1st March 2007, 03:10 PM

Kem aaje Nadi ne saahil na madio;

Kem aaje dariya ne kinaro na madio;

Kem aaje pavan ne disha na madi;

Kem aaje rasta ne manjil na madi;

Kem aaje raat ne aajwadu na madiu;

Kem aaje akant ne shawas na madio;

Kem aaje vedana ne samvedana na madi;

Kem aaje mara vichar ne aachar naa madiya;

Ane;

Kem aaje mari aatama ne parmatma nai madiya?????


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TERE PYAR MEIN EK TUTA HUA KHWAB HU MEIN
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9th March 2007, 04:28 PM

namaste mitali jee

kem chho majama ne?

khub j saras kosish kari chhe tame

aamaj lakhta rehjo

khush raho

aapno mitra
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13th March 2007, 11:05 AM

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namaste mitali jee

kem chho majama ne?

khub j saras kosish kari chhe tame

aamaj lakhta rehjo

khush raho

aapno mitra
dhaval
Dhaval ji,

thank u so much..

mitali


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Teri yaad me jeeye jayenge haste haste,
Gilana hoga khabhi aapko humse,
KYUNKI
Aap ka har waada nibha jayenge haste haste.....

TERE PYAR MEIN EK TUTA HUA KHWAB HU MEIN
JO AAB KHABHI JUD NAHI PAYEGA...

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Hey Mitali dis one's too gud. Well m very much impressed by dis one. Well hu jimmy chu ane gujrati shayri's , gujrati ni prenena ne tame khoob saari rite nibhvi che. well done n keep goin on.
   
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21st March 2007, 06:16 PM

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Hey Mitali dis one's too gud. Well m very much impressed by dis one. Well hu jimmy chu ane gujrati shayri's , gujrati ni prenena ne tame khoob saari rite nibhvi che. well done n keep goin on.
Thank u jimmy ji...

mitali...


Tere har zakham seh jayenge haste haste,
Teri yaad me jeeye jayenge haste haste,
Gilana hoga khabhi aapko humse,
KYUNKI
Aap ka har waada nibha jayenge haste haste.....

TERE PYAR MEIN EK TUTA HUA KHWAB HU MEIN
JO AAB KHABHI JUD NAHI PAYEGA...

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21st March 2007, 06:58 PM

Bahuj sundar Mitali,


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23rd March 2007, 04:20 PM

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Bahuj sundar Mitali,
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Tere har zakham seh jayenge haste haste,
Teri yaad me jeeye jayenge haste haste,
Gilana hoga khabhi aapko humse,
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Aap ka har waada nibha jayenge haste haste.....

TERE PYAR MEIN EK TUTA HUA KHWAB HU MEIN
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30th March 2007, 03:23 PM

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Kem aaje Nadi ne saahil na madio;

Kem aaje dariya ne kinaro na madio;

Kem aaje pavan ne disha na madi;

Kem aaje rasta ne manjil na madi;

Kem aaje raat ne aajwadu na madiu;

Kem aaje akant ne shawas na madio;

Kem aaje vedana ne samvedana na madi;

Kem aaje mara vichar ne aachar naa madiya;

Ane;

Kem aaje mari aatama ne parmatma nai madiya?????
Hi! Mitali, this too gud.I am very much impressed by your kavita.Mane tamari aa kaviya gani pasand aavi! great, ane aam lakhya karo bas emj dua chhe!! tamne ok.well done n keep goin on.

EK UMMID: AFTAB
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30th March 2007, 04:28 PM

thank u Aftab ji..

mitali


Tere har zakham seh jayenge haste haste,
Teri yaad me jeeye jayenge haste haste,
Gilana hoga khabhi aapko humse,
KYUNKI
Aap ka har waada nibha jayenge haste haste.....

TERE PYAR MEIN EK TUTA HUA KHWAB HU MEIN
JO AAB KHABHI JUD NAHI PAYEGA...

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17th March 2008, 02:29 PM

khub j saras kosish kari chhe tame

aamaj lakhta rehjo
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