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Post Kahiye-kahiye, suniye-suniye, kuch apni kehte jaayiye - 11th November 2011, 11:27 PM

Kahiye-kahiye, suniye-suniye, kuch apni kehte jaayiye
Mehfil-e-Dil se guzarte huve, kuch meri sunte jaayiye

Aankh kahe ashq se tum meri palkon mein na aana..
Khwab kahe naye sokh se, kuch mujhe bunte jaayiye

Gupchup gupchup, hasin kali phool se muskura ke kahe
Aap sa mehakna Eei Yaar, kuch humei sikhate jaayiye

Madhur madhur chaandni kahe nazer pher le chakor..
Chaand par hakk mera hei aap, kuch aur dekhte jaayiye

Sargam ke suur sang khal khal behti vakt ki nadiyaan..
Yaad kahe dil-e-tamanna se, kuch humsa behte jaayiye

Badli saawan se kahe, teri barkha se nache saara jag
Bhige shehar ki inayat ye, kuch humpe barasate jaayiye

Taraste naino ko jaane kis jhalak ka hei intezaar abh
Aas kahe aayeene se, Hum sa kuch saath lete jaayiye

Tanhaai ki kaali dhoop baahein felaaye bulati hei aksar
Sabdo ki reit kahe Eei Ritu, kuch humse ulajhte jaayiye

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Really fantastic...! Kya ghazal bani aapse...!

HazaaroN daad qabuul kareiN, Ritu Ji...!

Duaaon ke saath





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12th November 2011, 06:27 AM

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Kahiye-kahiye, suniye-suniye, kuch apni kehte jaayiye
Mehfil-e-Dil se guzarte huve, kuch meri sunte jaayiye

Aankh kahe ashq se tum meri palkon mein na aana..
Khwab kahe naye sokh se, kuch mujhe bunte jaayiye

Gupchup gupchup, hasin kali phool se muskura ke kahe
Aap sa mehakna Eei Yaar, kuch humei sikhate jaayiye

Madhur madhur chaandni kahe nazer pher le chakor..
Chaand par hakk mera hei aap, kuch aur dekhte jaayiye

Sargam ke suur sang khal khal behti vakt ki nadiyaan..
Yaad kahe dil-e-tamanna se, kuch humsa behte jaayiye

Badli saawan se kahe, teri barkha se nache saara jag
Bhige shehar ki inayat ye, kuch humpe barasate jaayiye

Taraste naino ko jaane kis jhalak ka hei intezaar abh
Aas kahe aayeene se, Hum sa kuch saath lete jaayiye

Tanhaai ki kaali dhoop baahein felaaye bulati hei aksar
Sabdo ki reit kahe Eei Ritu, kuch humse ulajhte jaayiye

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Bohat khoob Ritu ji!!.............




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Thanks Amanush Ji & Zainy ji... Glad u liked it!


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Kahiye-kahiye, suniye-suniye, kuch apni kehte jaayiye
Mehfil-e-Dil se guzarte huve, kuch meri sunte jaayiye

Aankh kahe ashq se tum meri palkon mein na aana..
Khwab kahe naye sokh se, kuch mujhe bunte jaayiye

Gupchup gupchup, hasin kali phool se muskura ke kahe
Aap sa mehakna Eei Yaar, kuch humei sikhate jaayiye

Madhur madhur chaandni kahe nazer pher le chakor..
Chaand par hakk mera hei aap, kuch aur dekhte jaayiye

Sargam ke suur sang khal khal behti vakt ki nadiyaan..
Yaad kahe dil-e-tamanna se, kuch humsa behte jaayiye

Badli saawan se kahe, teri barkha se nache saara jag
Bhige shehar ki inayat ye, kuch humpe barasate jaayiye

Taraste naino ko jaane kis jhalak ka hei intezaar abh
Aas kahe aayeene se, Hum sa kuch saath lete jaayiye

Tanhaai ki kaali dhoop baahein felaaye bulati hei aksar
Sabdo ki reit kahe Eei Ritu, kuch humse ulajhte jaayiye

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12th November 2011, 09:11 PM

Thanks Vikas ji, Glad to read ur comments... and happy to see you too!


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Kahiye-kahiye, suniye-suniye, kuch apni kehte jaayiye
Mehfil-e-Dil se guzarte huve, kuch meri sunte jaayiye

Aankh kahe ashq se tum meri palkon mein na aana..
Khwab kahe naye sokh se, kuch mujhe bunte jaayiye

Gupchup gupchup, hasin kali phool se muskura ke kahe
Aap sa mehakna Eei Yaar, kuch humei sikhate jaayiye

Madhur madhur chaandni kahe nazer pher le chakor..
Chaand par hakk mera hei aap, kuch aur dekhte jaayiye

Sargam ke suur sang khal khal behti vakt ki nadiyaan..
Yaad kahe dil-e-tamanna se, kuch humsa behte jaayiye

Badli saawan se kahe, teri barkha se nache saara jag
Bhige shehar ki inayat ye, kuch humpe barasate jaayiye

Taraste naino ko jaane kis jhalak ka hei intezaar abh
Aas kahe aayeene se, Hum sa kuch saath lete jaayiye

Tanhaai ki kaali dhoop baahein felaaye bulati hei aksar
Sabdo ki reit kahe Eei Ritu, kuch humse ulajhte jaayiye

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Written On 11th Nov 2011 11:00 PM Thursday
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Kahiye-kahiye, suniye-suniye, kuch apni kehte jaayiye
Mehfil-e-Dil se guzarte huve, kuch meri sunte jaayiye

Aankh kahe ashq se tum meri palkon mein na aana..
Khwab kahe naye sokh se, kuch mujhe bunte jaayiye

Gupchup gupchup, hasin kali phool se muskura ke kahe
Aap sa mehakna Eei Yaar, kuch humei sikhate jaayiye

Madhur madhur chaandni kahe nazer pher le chakor..
Chaand par hakk mera hei aap, kuch aur dekhte jaayiye

Sargam ke suur sang khal khal behti vakt ki nadiyaan..
Yaad kahe dil-e-tamanna se, kuch humsa behte jaayiye

Badli saawan se kahe, teri barkha se nache saara jag
Bhige shehar ki inayat ye, kuch humpe barasate jaayiye

Taraste naino ko jaane kis jhalak ka hei intezaar abh
Aas kahe aayeene se, Hum sa kuch saath lete jaayiye

Tanhaai ki kaali dhoop baahein felaaye bulati hei aksar
Sabdo ki reit kahe Eei Ritu, kuch humse ulajhte jaayiye

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Written On 11th Nov 2011 11:00 PM Thursday
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vry well written ...........................


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